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172.69.54.144: /* Chapter 1 - Amakusa Kanade's Bitter Daily Life */

2020-02-09T08:53:06Z

Chapter 1 - Amakusa Kanade's Bitter Daily Life

Shiroi Hane at 01:16, 24 August 2017

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	"No, Chocolate isn't chocolate."		"No, Chocolate isn't chocolate."

	"Ah, I'm not? Then... How about a French sounding Chocolat.<ref>her name switched from a 'Cho' spelling to 'Sho'. Normally they use 'Cho' for regular chocolate and 'Sho' when taking it from the French term for 'hot chocolate'. チョコレート (~~Chokoraato~~) vs ショコラ (~~Shokote~~). </ref>"		"Ah, I'm not? Then... How about a French sounding Chocolat.<ref>her name switched from a 'Cho' spelling to 'Sho'. Normally they use 'Cho' for regular chocolate and 'Sho' when taking it from the French term for 'hot chocolate'. チョコレート (Chokoreeto) vs ショコラ (Shokora). </ref>"

	I don't know which side of being intelligent she's on but when I think of Chocolat I think of a dog. The provisional name stuck though.		I don't know which side of being intelligent she's on but when I think of Chocolat I think of a dog. The provisional name stuck though.

Shiroi Hane: Inconsistent spelling (へいざえもん)

2017-08-24T01:11:30Z

Inconsistent spelling (へいざえもん)

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	No, you did that beautiful bridge and your head didn't touch the ground.		No, you did that beautiful bridge and your head didn't touch the ground.

	"Oh well, I'll remember before too long. I'm the ~~Heizamon~~ of calmness."		"Oh well, I'll remember before too long. I'm the Heizaemon of calmness."

	Heizaemon of calm<ref>reference to The Peony Latern a Edo-era story about a man who survived a poisoned by his second wife and her lover. He often flew into mad rages where he didn't recognize his daughter.</ref>... No one uses that expression these days, especially an openly foreign girl... Saying that was extremely incongruous.		Heizaemon of calm<ref>reference to The Peony Latern a Edo-era story about a man who survived a poisoned by his second wife and her lover. He often flew into mad rages where he didn't recognize his daughter.</ref>... No one uses that expression these days, especially an openly foreign girl... Saying that was extremely incongruous.

Shiroi Hane: Inconsistent spelling (furigana confirms だいこ)

2017-08-24T01:02:08Z

Inconsistent spelling (furigana confirms だいこ)

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	"Geh..."		"Geh..."

	When I looked up, there she stood. Gondou ~~Daigo~~ (49), a housewife living nearby whose weight exceeds three digits<ref>Kilograms, so 220lbs+.</ref>. Seeing her body was like taking a punch to the gut.		When I looked up, there she stood. Gondou Daiko (49), a housewife living nearby whose weight exceeds three digits<ref>Kilograms, so 220lbs+.</ref>. Seeing her body was like taking a punch to the gut.

	"Kanade-chan, are you on your way to school now?"		"Kanade-chan, are you on your way to school now?"

104.133.8.86: /* Chapter 1 - Amakusa Kanade's Bitter Daily Life */

2017-07-26T18:34:33Z

Chapter 1 - Amakusa Kanade's Bitter Daily Life

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	Apparently, I look exactly like her ex-husband when he was young. What kind of useless miracle is that?		Apparently, I look exactly like her ex-husband when he was young. What kind of useless miracle is that?

	Due to a reason like that, every day my virtue is in danger. Using school as an excuse, I attempted to ~~left~~ quickly.		Due to a reason like that, every day my virtue is in danger. Using school as an excuse, I attempted to leave quickly.

	"Th-thank you, but I'm running late."		"Th-thank you, but I'm running late."
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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Rxls at 17:21, 10 May 2017

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	"It's God."		"It's God."

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	"........................Yes?"		"........................Yes?"

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MXL at 01:08, 24 July 2015

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	"What are you doing to the wife of the president of UOG?!"		"What are you doing to the wife of the president of UOG?!"

	Yuuouji's mother was a former idol 20 years ago. The other idols of the time were all childishly cute but she gave off an intellectual air and ran as a star for a while. She retired to marry the darling of the business world, Yuuouji Ouma, and changed her media ~~appearances~~. I see her often delivering the news as a commentator.		Yuuouji's mother was a former idol 20 years ago. The other idols of the time were all childishly cute, but she gave off an intellectual air and ran as a star for a while. She retired to marry the darling of the business world, Yuuouji Ouma, and changed her media appearance. I see her often delivering the news as a commentator.

	In a word, she was cool. That said, to experiment on her parents, Yuuouji is shameless~~...~~...It's unbelievable that Yuuouji Ouka came from Yuuouji Kyouka.		In a word, she was cool. That said, to experiment on her parents, Yuuouji is shameless... It's unbelievable that Yuuouji Ouka came from Yuuouji Kyouka.

	The cancellation that puzzles Yuuouji, doesn't seem to be from the name 『Abazuren Z』 alone. If such a drug circulates in Japanese society, it ~~will~~ collapse.		The cancellation that puzzles Yuuouji doesn't seem to be from the name 『Abazuren Z』 alone. If such a drug circulates in Japanese society, it'll collapse.

	I ~~take~~ control of myself and ~~look~~ at the other projects.		I took control of myself and looked at the other projects.

	Giving off a strong presence in the corner is what ~~looks~~ like a small printer. In the center of the machine is a bunch of rectangular paper.		Giving off a strong presence in the corner was what looked like a small printer. In the center of the machine was a bunch of rectangular paper.

	"Yuuouji, what's this?"		"Yuuouji, what's this?"

	"Ah, its a toy for small children 『Money Maker』. You play with it and make money."		"Ah, its a toy for small children: 『Money Maker』. You play with it and make money."

	Indeed, on the surface of the printed paper is a large animated cartoon character drawn in the center 『Bill』.		Indeed, on the surface of the printed paper is a large animated cartoon character drawn in the center, 『Bill』.

	I picked up a few and flipped through them.		I picked up a few and flipped through them.

	"Ah, its not very elaborate...~~... eh~~? The real thing is mixed in?"		"Ah, its not very elaborate... Eh? The real thing is mixed in?"

	One piece in there ~~is not~~ clearly ~~a fake~~ no matter how you ~~look~~ at it. Yukichi-sensei<ref>Fukuzawa Yukichi is on the 10000 yen bill and is regarded as one of the founders of modern Japan.</ref>'s face was peering intently from it.		One piece in there was clearly real, no matter how you looked at it. Yukichi-sensei<ref>Fukuzawa Yukichi is on the 10000 yen bill and is regarded as one of the founders of modern Japan.</ref>'s face was peering intently from it.

	"Nahaha, this is an amazingly good machine~~, when~~ I tried an experiment it came out just like the genuine item."		"Nahaha, this is an amazingly good machine. When I tried an experiment it came out just like the genuine item."

	"That would be a scandal!?"		"That would be a scandal!"

	It's completely ~~out,~~ out!		It's completely out!

	"Geez, this looks a little more of an honest thing...~~...it~~ looks like 『Life Candy』."		"Geez, this looks a little more of an honest thing... It looks like 『Life Candy』."

	Life Candy, UOG's confectionery brand, 『Yuuouji』~~, its a long running product~~. Each, ~~theme/『～Chapter』~~, has one package with three pieces, and several variations exist.		Life Candy is a long-running product of UOG's confectionery brand, 『Yuuouji』. Each unit, called a 『Chapter』, has one package with three pieces, and several flavor variations and themes exist.

	For example ~~it is like this.~~		For example:

	『Love Chapter: Unrequited Love ~~flavor~~, Confession ~~flavor~~, Falling in ~~love flavor.』~~		『Love Chapter: Unrequited Love, Confession, Falling in Love』

	A sour taste to symbolize the sorrow, an extra hot taste that expresses the throbbing heart, and a sweet like a burning heart. The ~~configuration~~ of the ~~taste is~~ all over the place but good materials and a low price had made it another hot selling product and taken half the popularity of 『Animal Candy』 away.		The first piece would have a sour taste to symbolize the sorrow, the second piece would have an extra-hot taste that expresses the throbbing heart, and the third would be sweet like a burning heart. The themes of the candy are all over the place, but good materials and a low price had made it another hot-selling product and have taken half the popularity of 『Animal Candy』 away.

	"No, when this was also rejected I grieved."		"No, when this was also rejected I grieved."
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	Yuuouji picked some up and handed them out.		Yuuouji picked some up and handed them out.

	『Chapter of the Lady Killer : ~~The unfortunately~~ I ~~cheated~~ on ~~two people flavor~~, ~~The unfortunate both know flavor~~, ~~The unfortunate~~ I ~~was stabbed flavor』~~		『Chapter of the Lady Killer: Unfortunately I Cheated on Two People, Unfortunately They Both Know, Unfortunately I Was Stabbed』

	"You said the last part so cutely! I was forced to laugh!"		"You said the last part so cutely! I was forced to laugh!"

	『Chapter of Middle ~~level manager~~: ~~The flavor of stomache pain~~ from ~~dealing~~ with ~~above~~ and ~~below~~, ~~The restructuring flavor~~, ~~The flavor of dying~~ a ~~dog~~'s ~~death~~ on the ~~roadside~~ at ~~50.』~~		『Chapter of the Middle Level Manager: Pain from Dealing with Above and Below, Being Laid Off, Dying a Dog's Death on the Roadside at 50』

	"It's too sad!"		"It's too sad!"

	『Chapter of the Postmortem: ~~The flavor of taking~~ a ~~bright memory~~ into the ~~next world~~, ~~The flavor of a futile effort~~, ~~The flavor of a one~~-way ~~ticket~~ to ~~hell.』~~		『Chapter of the Postmortem: Taking a Bright Memory into the Next World, Futile Effort, A One-way Ticket to Hell』

	"Who would buy that!"		"Who would buy that?!"

	『Chapter of the NEET: ~~The really~~? ~~flavor~~, My ~~old age flavor~~, What ~~will happen~~? ~~flavor~~ 』		『Chapter of the NEET: Really?, My Old Age, What Will Happen?』

	"~~I noticed~~!"		"You'll make people cry!"

	『Chapter of If ~~you win you get another~~: The flavor of wondering if I'll win, The I missed? flavor, You are an idiot if this is seen』		『Chapter of If You Win You Get Another: The flavor of wondering if I'll win, The I missed? flavor, You are an idiot if this is seen』

	"What are you doing to the idiot?!"		"What are you doing to the idiot?!"

MXL: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-23T22:39:44Z

Part 2

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	"What day of the week is it today?"		"What day of the week is it today?"

	"Monday. Does that please you maggot jerk?"		"Monday. Does that please you, maggot jerk?"

	"Don't you know I'm trying to change your topic?!"		"Don't you know I'm trying to change your topic?!"
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	『Ouka... Do you want a little sister?』."		『Ouka... Do you want a little sister?』."

	"What are you doing to the wife of the president of UOG?"		"What are you doing to the wife of the president of UOG?!"

	Yuuouji's mother was a former idol 20 years ago. The other idols of the time were all childishly cute but she gave off an intellectual air and ran as a star for a while. She retired to marry the darling of the business world, Yuuouji Ouma, and changed her media appearances. I see her often delivering the news as a commentator.		Yuuouji's mother was a former idol 20 years ago. The other idols of the time were all childishly cute but she gave off an intellectual air and ran as a star for a while. She retired to marry the darling of the business world, Yuuouji Ouma, and changed her media appearances. I see her often delivering the news as a commentator.

MXL: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-23T22:21:02Z

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2015-07-22T19:27:15Z

Part 2

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	Explaining a gag that didn't work... Such a strong personality.		Explaining a gag that didn't work... Such a strong personality.

	"Then, ~~George~~ who was deprived of a turn for this, where should he put his anger!?"		"Then George, who was deprived of a turn for this; where should he put his anger?!"

	"Who is that?"		"Who is that?!"

	This Yukihira Furano~~, though~~ she should be a cool person, jokes around in a way that raises the tension~~, she~~		This Yukihira Furano... Though she should be a cool person, she jokes around in a way that raises the tension. She
	just can't be a normal character.		just can't be a normal character.

	"Roughly what are you thinking about Amakusa? You have the face of someone about to go attack a little girl at any moment."		"Roughly what are you thinking about, Amakusa? You have the face of someone about to go attack a little girl at any moment."

	"What in the hell kind of face is ~~that~~?"		"What the hell kind of face is thaaaat?!"

	"Or, the the face of villager at the entrance of the village of endlessly repeating 『The Starting Village』."		"Or, the the face of villager at the entrance of the village endlessly repeating 『The Starting Village』."

	"No, there is nothing in common with those two pieces."		"No, there is nothing in common with those two pieces..."

	"Or, the the face of villager at the entrance of the village who is endlessly repeating 『Huh......~~huh......you~~ want to look at little girls?』."		"Or, the the face of villager at the entrance of the village who is endlessly repeating 『Huh... Huh... You want to look at little girls?』."

	"Don't force the two together!"		"Don't force the two together!"

	~~...~~...It's useless. You only get exhausted dealing with someone like her. I abandoned the conversation and started to go around her...		...It's useless. You can only get exhausted dealing with someone like her. I abandoned the conversation and started to go around her...


	[CHOOSE ① "Hey, your breasts<ref>Oppai was used which is kind of a ~~kids~~ word meaning breasts or boobies.</ref>, let me touch your breasts" ② "Hey, my breasts, touch my breasts."]		[CHOOSE ① "Hey, your breasts<ref>Oppai was used, which is kind of a kid's word meaning breasts or boobies.</ref>, let me touch your breasts" ② "Hey, my breasts, touch my breasts."]


	~~...~~...Yeah, this is strange. This is strange right?		...Yeah, this is strange. This is strange, right?

	People usually would resist such a choice at any price if compelled. At the start I also resisted~~...~~...at ~~first~~. When ~~absolute choice~~ first appeared I tried to avoid picking either...~~...~~pain strikes your brain. I can't do it anymore.		People usually would resist such a choice at any price if compelled. At the start I also resisted... at the start. When Absolute Choice first appeared, I tried to avoid picking either choice... As a result, excruciating pain strikes your brain. I can't do it anymore.

	I'm not joking~~, at~~ first the pain is only faint and dull, over time it feels like ~~the brain~~ is being ~~tightened inside, until it develops into an extreme pain~~. The skull ~~goes white~~ and the fluid in ~~your~~ brain ~~is scattering,~~ how else can I ~~represent~~ it? Even the woman with 1 scar on her face ~~couldn~~'t deal with it.		I'm not joking. At first the pain is only faint and dull, but over time it feels like my head is being slowly crushed by a steamroller. The skull begins to fracture and the fluid in my brain starts leaking; how else can I describe it? Even the woman with a scar on her face wouldn't be able to deal with it.

	In other words resistance is useless, impossible and a waste of effort.		In other words, resistance is useless, impossible, and a waste of effort.

	A man takes a ~~breathe~~. Dogs can't speak languages. And when an ~~absolute choice~~ appears, a choice is naturally ~~choosen~~.		A man takes a breath. Dogs can't speak languages. And when an Absolute Choice appears, a choice is naturally chosen.

	With that said.		With that being said...

	"Hey, my breasts, touch my breasts."		"Hey, my breasts, touch my breasts."

	The moment I ~~say~~ those lines, Yukihira's eyebrows ~~move~~ slightly.		The moment I said those lines, Yukihira's eyebrows moved slightly.

	"......~~Amakusa, you~~, just now, what!?"		"...Amakusa... You, just now, what?!"

	It's no wonder you ask that. It's a remark that anyone can hardly believe they heard right.		It's no wonder you'd ask that. It's a remark that anyone can hardly believe they heard right.

	"No, that is-"		"No, that is-"

	"Perhaps, you just asked me to touch your tits<ref>She replied back using パイオツ or ~~Paiotsu~~ which is more porn like/crude like ~~Tits~~.</ref>?"		"Perhaps, you just asked me to touch your tits<ref>She replied back using パイオツ or paiotsu, which is more porn like/crude, like 'tits' rather than 'boobs'.</ref>?"

	"~~...~~...Huh? Just now what?"		"...Huh? Just now, what?"

	I instinctively asked back, just now...~~... did~~ she say tits?"		I instinctively asked back, just now... Did she say tits?"

	"I would like to hear whether you said 『Please touch my tits』 or not."		"I would like to hear whether you said 『Please touch my tits』 or not."

	"No~~...~~...I said something similar except I didn't say tits."		"No... I said something similar, except I didn't say tits."

	"Tits weren't mentioned? ~~Its~~ funny, I'm sure I heard the word tits. Tits is a word that I'm absolutely sure I didn't hear wrongly~~...~~...Ah, is it shameful to have said tits and now you are trying to conceal it? Even though I don't think tits is a vulgar word. Starting with tits is~~...~~..."		"Tits weren't mentioned? It's funny; I'm sure I heard the word tits. Tits is a word that I'm absolutely sure I didn't hear wrongly... Ah, is it shameful to have said tits and now you are trying to conceal it? Even though I don't think tits is a vulgar word. Starting with tits is..."

	"You only want me to say tits!"		"You only want me to say tits!"
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	"That's not a reason!"		"That's not a reason!"

	"I'm getting scolded suddenly!?"		"I'm getting scolded suddenly?!"

	...~~...Around now~~ Yukihira, the weirdo, was good to ~~deal with~~. If this choice had appeared in front of other women it would be a big problem.		...At times like those Yukihira, the weirdo, was good to have around. If this choice had appeared in front of other women, it would be a big problem.

	Actually, last year's class was disastrous. In front of the girls many things were done and said that can't be ~~done~~...~~...no~~, I won't remember it because I ~~will~~ want to cry.		Actually, last year's class was disastrous. In front of the girls many things were done and said that can't be told... No, I won't remember it because I'll want to cry.

	Anyway, this ~~absolute choice~~ seems pleased to make me have the worst experiences.		Anyway, this Absolute Choice seems pleased to make me have the worst experiences.

	In terms of a ~~galgame~~, only the paths to bad endings were ~~choosen this~~ last year. I wasn't even able to taste the L of Love.		In terms of a galge, only the paths to bad endings were chosen last year. I wasn't even able to taste the L of Love.

	I don't want to be popular, I just want to talk to women (without frightening them or being despised by them)~~...~~...		I don't want to be popular, I just want to talk to women (without frightening them or being despised by them)...

	~~However today~~, there are a lot more ~~absolute choices~~ than ever, the choices are nasty too. I went to my seat quickly, it is better to be quiet.		Today, however, there are a lot more Absolute Choices than ever, and the choices are nasty too. I went to my seat quickly; it's better to be quiet.

	As I tried to pass quickly by Yukihira's side...		As I tried to pass quickly by Yukihira's side...