OreShura: Volume 5 Chapter 1 - Revision history

66.102.6.139: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2015-05-18T15:35:27Z

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	"Ah—! Harusaki-senpai!"		"Ah—! Harusaki-senpai!"

	"~~Isn~~ this senpai the legendary person who helped the club?"		"Is this senpai the legendary person who helped the club?"

	"I've always wanted to meet you! I'm really honored!"		"I've always wanted to meet you! I'm really honored!"

66.102.6.157: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2015-05-18T15:30:14Z

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	"Ah—! Harusaki-senpai!"		"Ah—! Harusaki-senpai!"

	"Is this ~~senapi~~ the legendary person who helped the club?"		"Isn this senpai the legendary person who helped the club?"

	"I've always wanted to meet you! I'm really honored!"		"I've always wanted to meet you! I'm really honored!"

AJS90 at 16:41, 14 August 2014

2014-08-14T16:41:46Z

OhHaiThar: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2014-06-28T09:29:08Z

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	"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, ｢I'm going to confehsuyu!｣, you've already improved a lot.		"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, ｢I'm going to confehsuyu!｣, you've already improved a lot.
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	When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red.		When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red.
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	"Just then! That was just the speakers in my stomach!"		"Just then! That was just the speakers in my stomach!"
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	"…you…"		"…you…"

OhHaiThar: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2014-06-28T09:21:34Z

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	"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, ｢I'm going to confehsuyu!｣, you've already improved a lot.		"Think about it. Up until now, you've been practicing confessions during club activities, right? Compared to that time when your tongue slipped and said, ｢I'm going to confehsuyu!｣, you've already improved a lot.
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	When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red.		When I finished speaking, Chiwa's face turned an even brighter red.

OhHaiThar: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2014-06-28T09:03:23Z

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	"Isn't it the same now?"		"Isn't it the same now?"

	When I asked this, Kaoru replied very clearly:		When I asked this, Kaoru replied very clearly,

	<b>"Well, Eita has a girlfriend now?"</b>		<b>"Well, Eita has a girlfriend now?"</b>
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	"Sorry, thanks for all your trouble."		"Sorry, thanks for all your trouble."

	Really—Kaoru laughed and spoke:		Really—Kaoru laughed and spoke,

	<b>"Eita's really made me suffer many things, so you should listen to my ideas occasionally, okay? Oh right, after second semester, my—kyaaa!"</b>		<b>"Eita's really made me suffer many things, so you should listen to my ideas occasionally, okay? Oh right, after second semester, my—kyaaa!"</b>
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	"Huh!?"		"Huh!?"

	Damn. I thought that would help comfort her, but it turns out I stepped on a ~~landmind~~.		Damn. I thought that would help comfort her, but it turns out I stepped on a landmine.

	"Ei-kun you idiot! Idiot! Go die!"		"Ei-kun you idiot! Idiot! Go die!"
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	The attack power of the statement far exceeded that of the previous one, and it surprised me.		The attack power of the statement far exceeded that of the previous one, and it surprised me.

	In cooking class during home economics, Chiwa once negligibly tossed a tomato into beef stew saying, ｢this is so boring｣. The Chiwa who had this kind of ~~world-~~view actually wanted to cook?!		In cooking class during home economics, Chiwa once negligibly tossed a tomato into beef stew saying, ｢this is so boring｣. The Chiwa who had this kind of worldly view actually wanted to cook?!
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	Chiwa was crowded with barely any room to breath. Incredible praises like ｢this person｣, ｢legendary｣, ｢honored｣ continued to appear.		Chiwa was crowded with barely any room to breath. Incredible praises like ｢this person｣, ｢legendary｣, ｢honored｣ continued to appear.

	A first-year with long braided hair spoke excitedly:		A first-year with long braided hair spoke excitedly,

	"I started playing softball because I admired Chiwa-senpai so much!"		"I started playing softball because I admired Chiwa-senpai so much!"
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	He wasn't wearing Hane middle school's uniform. Instead, he was wearing a blazer from from the most prestigious private school in the district.		He wasn't wearing Hane middle school's uniform. Instead, he was wearing a blazer from from the most prestigious private school in the district.

	I felt his face looked kind of familiar. When he noticed me, he spoke:		I felt his face looked kind of familiar. When he noticed me, he spoke,

	"Hey! Is that you, Kidou?"		"Hey! Is that you, Kidou?"
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	"Yup, a guy."		"Yup, a guy."

	Inui for some reason pushed out his chest and happily spoke:		Inui for some reason pushed out his chest and happily spoke,

	"My relationship with him after starting high school in the kendo club was really good. Although the gender barrier is a problem—there's nothing I can do since I love him!"		"My relationship with him after starting high school in the kendo club was really good. Although the gender barrier is a problem—there's nothing I can do since I love him!"
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	The place that Inui took me to was the kendo dojo located behind the school.		The place that Inui took me to was the kendo dojo located behind the school.

	On the floor that had been wiped sparkling clean, kendo club members wearing protective equipment ~~spared at~~ each other. It looked like they were actually in the middle of practice.		On the floor that had been wiped sparkling clean, kendo club members wearing protective equipment sparred each other. It looked like they were actually in the middle of practice.

	In our middle school years, this was a place that Chiwa and I often stopped by at on the way home. For a person born booksy like me, the hot blooded enthusiasm here was difficult to bear. Since the ceiling was rather high, the dojo didn't actually get swamped with heat, but just looking at them made my back start sweating.		In our middle school years, this was a place that Chiwa and I often stopped by at on the way home. For a person born booksy like me, the hot blooded enthusiasm here was difficult to bear. Since the ceiling was rather high, the dojo didn't actually get swamped with heat, but just looking at them made my back start sweating.
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	"Sorry, I didn't notice."		"Sorry, I didn't notice."

	Inui lightly raised his hand:		Inui lightly raised his hand,

	"We happened to bump into each other earlier, and I brought him over."		"We happened to bump into each other earlier, and I brought him over."
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	"Maiden's Club?"		"Maiden's Club?"

	Chiwa explained it to the confused Inui who had his head tilted:		Chiwa explained it to the confused Inui who had his head tilted,

	"It's a new team that I joined at Hane high school. I have a new goal just like winning kendo nationals. Now it's club activities with a dream of becoming beautiful."		"It's a new team that I joined at Hane high school. I have a new goal just like winning kendo nationals. Now it's club activities with a dream of becoming beautiful."
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	In order to not disturb their practice, I sat down in the corner of the dojo.		In order to not disturb their practice, I sat down in the corner of the dojo.

	Chiwa stared at my face for a little while, and then:		Chiwa stared at my face for a little while, and then,

	"—Hey, you're using only your hands to wave the sword again! When you make strikes, pay attention to your footwork!"		"—Hey, you're using only your hands to wave the sword again! When you make strikes, pay attention to your footwork!"
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	"That's why I can't return your feelings. At least, I can't in these three years of high school."		"That's why I can't return your feelings. At least, I can't in these three years of high school."

	Chiwa's face had an incomprehensible look as she looked up to me:		Chiwa's face had an incomprehensible look as she looked up to me,

	"You're only going to date Natsukawa for three years?"		"You're only going to date Natsukawa for three years?"
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	Chiwa chuckled.		Chiwa chuckled.

	Everything will turn out alright, you could say. Though there was still a very very long road to travel before I could be liberated from mayhem.		Everything will turn out alright you could say. Though there was still a very very long road to travel before I could be liberated from mayhem.

	"Since that's the case, then I also have something to say."		"Since that's the case, then I also have something to say."
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	"D-don't worry yourself over being dependent or not dependent! Anyone can eat dinner at my place, so don't think too much about it!"		"D-don't worry yourself over being dependent or not dependent! Anyone can eat dinner at my place, so don't think too much about it!"

	Chiwa whispered in a low voice:		Chiwa whispered in a low voice,

	"Ei-kun, could you be very lonely?"		"Ei-kun, could you be very lonely?"

177.229.253.1: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2014-06-13T06:11:42Z

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	"I never considered Ei-kun's conflicting feelings, so I must have made things difficult for you, right? I made a huge amount of trouble for you, so I'm really sorry! Ah—why I am I like this? It was the same during my confession. My heart was thumping like crazy, and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to express myself clearly. Just when I thought I'd finally be able to say it, ~~Natsuzawa~~ suddenly appeared with something that didn't make sense, and after that it turned into a mess! I don't even remember what I said! I'm sorry!"		"I never considered Ei-kun's conflicting feelings, so I must have made things difficult for you, right? I made a huge amount of trouble for you, so I'm really sorry! Ah—why I am I like this? It was the same during my confession. My heart was thumping like crazy, and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to express myself clearly. Just when I thought I'd finally be able to say it, Natsukawa suddenly appeared with something that didn't make sense, and after that it turned into a mess! I don't even remember what I said! I'm sorry!"

	After saying everything with one breath, Chiwa again lowered her head. Her entire face was red.		After saying everything with one breath, Chiwa again lowered her head. Her entire face was red.
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	Chiwa listened and shook her head.		Chiwa listened and shook her head.

	"Not Hane High. The Middle School. There's something I want to do ~~that~~ Hane Middle School."		"Not Hane High. The Middle School. There's something I want to do at Hane Middle School."

	This Hane Middle School was the middle school Chiwa and I both graduated from. Hanenoyama Middle School, in other words.		This Hane Middle School was the middle school Chiwa and I both graduated from. Hanenoyama Middle School, in other words.

	To me, that place was ~~burried~~ with the black history of the time when I had eighth-grade syndrome, so I didn't really want to go near there, but—		To me, that place was buried with the black history of the time when I had eighth-grade syndrome, so I didn't really want to go near there, but—

	"Please. If you ~~doesn~~'t come, Ei-kun, there's no point."		"Please. If you don't come, Ei-kun, there's no point."

	If she said it like that, then I couldn't refuse.		If she said it like that, then I couldn't refuse.

Cloudii at 02:47, 24 March 2014

2014-03-24T02:47:53Z

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	Although our summer club trip already ended, there were two weeks left of summer vacation.		Although our summer club trip already ended, there were two weeks left of summer vacation.
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	Trying to guess if it was Masuzu or Chiwa, I took a look at my phone—		Trying to guess if it was Masuzu or Chiwa, I took a look at my phone—
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	"Kaaaaaaoruuuuuuuuuu——————! I love you the most!"		"Kaaaaaaoruuuuuuuuuu——————! I love you the most!"

	<b>"Hyaa!?"</b>		<b>"Hyaa!?"</b>


	The warped sound of my best friend's voice came from the other side of the phone.		The warped sound of my best friend's voice came from the other side of the phone.
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	"What do you mean by 'finally'?"		"What do you mean by 'finally'?"
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	<b>"'Finally' just means finally. I've known that Chihuahua's liked you for a while."</b>		<b>"'Finally' just means finally. I've known that Chihuahua's liked you for a while."</b>
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	<b>"Well, Eita has a girlfriend now?"</b>		<b>"Well, Eita has a girlfriend now?"</b>

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	"Yeah..."		"Yeah..."

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	Kaoru's voice from the bathroom suddenly became soft.		Kaoru's voice from the bathroom suddenly became soft.
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	<b>"Actually, I have a good plan. Do you want to hear?"</b>		<b>"Actually, I have a good plan. Do you want to hear?"</b>
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	<b>"Dump Natsukawa-san and Chihuahua, and come date me. Like that, both of them will give up, right!?"</b>		<b>"Dump Natsukawa-san and Chihuahua, and come date me. Like that, both of them will give up, right!?"</b>
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	Kaoru's energetic voice seemed to say, <i>｢What do you think? It's a great idea, right?!｣</i>		Kaoru's energetic voice seemed to say, <i>｢What do you think? It's a great idea, right?!｣</i>
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	<b>"Alright. Just take it as a joke. If we're talking about my personal desires, I hope you'll pick Chihuahua, because I don't want to see her crying expression."</b>		<b>"Alright. Just take it as a joke. If we're talking about my personal desires, I hope you'll pick Chihuahua, because I don't want to see her crying expression."</b>
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	"Mh..."		"Mh..."
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	<b>"Honestly! Why'd you come in, Dad!? ...I said I didn't faint, and I was talking on the phone! That being said, cover up your front you pervert!"</b>		<b>"Honestly! Why'd you come in, Dad!? ...I said I didn't faint, and I was talking on the phone! That being said, cover up your front you pervert!"</b>
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	I guess it was an argument between father and son.		I guess it was an argument between father and son.
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	Why would she... have those kinds of feelings...?		Why would she... have those kinds of feelings...?

			....


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	"Ei-kun, wake up! Ei-kun—"		"Ei-kun, wake up! Ei-kun—"


	Just when I was about to guess who it was, Chiwa's face appeared in front of my eyes.		Just when I was about to guess who it was, Chiwa's face appeared in front of my eyes.
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	"…O-oh."		"…O-oh."
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	"I never considered Ei-kun's conflicting feelings, so I must have made things difficult for you, right? I made a huge amount of trouble for you, so I'm really sorry! Ah—why I am I like this? It was the same during my confession. My heart was thumping like crazy, and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to express myself clearly. Just when I thought I'd finally be able to say it, Natsuzawa suddenly appeared with something that didn't make sense, and after that it turned into a mess! I don't even remember what I said! I'm sorry!"		"I never considered Ei-kun's conflicting feelings, so I must have made things difficult for you, right? I made a huge amount of trouble for you, so I'm really sorry! Ah—why I am I like this? It was the same during my confession. My heart was thumping like crazy, and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to express myself clearly. Just when I thought I'd finally be able to say it, Natsuzawa suddenly appeared with something that didn't make sense, and after that it turned into a mess! I don't even remember what I said! I'm sorry!"
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	This time, the person bowing their head was me. Damn. Why did I have such bad luck?		This time, the person bowing their head was me. Damn. Why did I have such bad luck?
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	Just then, a soft thing touched my forehead.		Just then, a soft thing touched my forehead.
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	Just half a day ago, my lips had experienced it.		Just half a day ago, my lips had experienced it.


	"Just kidding. Actually, I love you the most."		"Just kidding. Actually, I love you the most."


	The area around Chiwa's eyes was slightly moist, and she smiled slightly.		The area around Chiwa's eyes was slightly moist, and she smiled slightly.
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	"I've only looked at you as my childhood friend, so even if you say you like me, I honestly can't understand you very well."		"I've only looked at you as my childhood friend, so even if you say you like me, I honestly can't understand you very well."
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	"Mh. I understand that very well."		"Mh. I understand that very well."

Cloudii: /* #1: Chiwa, a Nine Year Portion of Love */

2014-02-27T15:20:49Z

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	I heard the splashing sounds of legs agitating the water through the phone.		I heard the splashing sounds of legs agitating the water through the phone.

	<b>"So why do you just spin a pencil and decide—?"</b>		<b>"So why don't you just spin a pencil and decide—?"</b>

	"Hey, you've suddenly become really trivial!"		"Hey, you've suddenly become really trivial!"

Cloudii at 23:17, 23 February 2014

2014-02-23T23:17:43Z

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	Although our summer club trip already ended, there were two weeks left of summer vacation.		Although our summer club trip already ended, there were two weeks left of summer vacation.

	''The intersession break for cram school is also ending this week, so next week I'll have to start to studying seriously again when the latter session of classes begin.''		''The intersession break for cram school is also ending this week, so next week I'll have to start studying seriously again when the latter session of classes begin.''

	I told myself this, but my frame of mind actually wasn't relaxed at all.		I told myself this, but my frame of mind actually wasn't relaxed at all.

	After being confessed by Chiwa and assaulted by mayhem, my head was still throbbing, and my thoughts were a mess. I felt light-headed just from walking, as if I wasn't standing my own feet.		After being confessed to by Chiwa and assaulted by mayhem, my head was still throbbing, and my thoughts were a mess. I felt light-headed just from walking, as if I wasn't standing on my own feet.

	By the time I got home and closed the front door, I was practically about to fall over.		By the time I got home and closed the front door, I was practically about to fall over.
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	"I-I'm finally alone...!"		"I-I'm finally alone...!"

	After taking a huge gulp of tap water from the kitchen, I wearily laid down on sofa in the living room. Smelling home after being away for three days made me feel nostalgic and relaxed. It made me want to take a nap.		After taking a huge gulp of tap water from the kitchen, I wearily laid down on the sofa in the living room. Smelling my home after being away for three days made me feel nostalgic and relaxed. It made me want to take a nap.

	By the time I realized it, it was already about four o'clock in the evening.		By the time I realized it, it was already about four o'clock in the evening.

	It was about time to make dinner. I needed to make two portions of rice, two portions of vegetables, so the two of us could eat together. Like usual, I'd share dinner with my childhood friend.		It was about time to make dinner. I needed to make two portions of rice, and two portions of vegetables, so the two of us could eat together. Like usual, I'd share dinner with my childhood friend.

	...but with everything that's been going on, will Chiwa still come to eat?		...but with everything that's been going on, will Chiwa still come to eat?
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	If you went back to the very beginning, the root of all the mayhem started from there.		If you went back to the very beginning, the root of all the mayhem started from there.

	Furthermore, my relationship ~~was~~ Masuzu was only fake, so this honestly was just one thing following another. All the strings were tangled together, and it had reached an irreparable extent.		Furthermore, my relationship with Masuzu was only fake, so this honestly was just one thing following another. All the strings were tangled together, and it had reached an irreparable extent.

	<b>"Eita, it seems like you're in a tight spot."</b>		<b>"Eita, it seems like you're in a tight spot."</b>
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	Chiwa spoke while nodding and smiling.		Chiwa spoke while nodding and smiling.

	"What don't have I to do? Are you not hungry?"		"What don't I have to do? Are you not hungry?"

	"I wasn't talking about that. I actually came to apologize about things that happened today."		"I wasn't talking about that. I actually came to apologize about things that happened today."

	Chiwa deeply bowed, very serious about the matter.		Chiwa deeply bowed, being very serious about the matter.

	"I'm sorry for making a scene in front of Ei-kun!"		"I'm sorry for making a scene in front of Ei-kun!"
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	"Mh. I understand that very well."		"Mh. I understand that very well."

	Chiwa nodded her head, not caring even the slightest degree. It was just like Kaoru had said.		Chiwa nodded her head, not caring even to the slightest degree. It was just like Kaoru had said.

	"Even so, I still love Ei-kun, and I think Ei-kun is the best. This isn't love towards a childhood friend. It's love towards a boy… is that not okay?"		"Even so, I still love Ei-kun, and I think Ei-kun is the best. This isn't love towards a childhood friend. It's love towards a boy… is that not okay?"
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	"That's obvious."		"That's obvious."

	Since we arranged to meet at place five seconds away from my front door, it was impossible for me to be late unless I overslept.		Since we arranged to meet at a place five seconds away from my front door, it was impossible for me to be late unless I overslept.

	"Do you want to walk to school?"		"Do you want to walk to school?"
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	Chihuahua had the expression of someone extremely experienced with this… no, you'll definitely become tired of it!		Chihuahua had the expression of someone extremely experienced with this… no, you'll definitely become tired of it!

	We passed the number four convenience store at the crossroads, and cut across ~~the~~ the residential area through the alley. Even though there was only enough space for one car to pass through, one could shave a minute off the time needed to get to school by passing through here. During times we'd be late to class, you could say this minute made either life or death. In either case, this was a very important route for both of us back then.		We passed the number four convenience store at the crossroads, and cut across the residential area through the alley. Even though there was only enough space for one car to pass through, one could shave a minute off the time needed to get to school by passing through here. During times we'd be late to class, you could say this minute made either life or death. In either case, this was a very important route for both of us back then.

	"We haven't gone through here in a long while."		"We haven't gone through here in a long while."
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	A red truck just opposite of us turned right from the intersection into this tiny alley. The back of the truck was loaded with a mountain of wood, and it drew close to us as its low engine rumbled.		A red truck just opposite of us turned right from the intersection into this tiny alley. The back of the truck was loaded with a mountain of wood, and it drew close to us as its low engine rumbled.

	I gave a fright, and looked at Chiwa was walking to the left of me.		I gave a fright, and looked at Chiwa who was walking to the left of me.

	Chiwa's face had turned white, and she was frozen in her steps as she stared at the truck. Her knees trembled slightly, and she clutched at the corner of my shirt hem.		Chiwa's face had turned white, and she was frozen in her steps as she stared at the truck. Her knees trembled slightly, and she clutched at the corner of my shirt hem.
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	I really hated myself for only being able to say such rushed and choppy consolations.		I really hated myself for only being able to say such rushed and choppy consolations.

	Last year in June, Chiwa got in a traffic accident with a truck, so she couldn't practice kendo anymore. Yeah, it just happened ~~to be~~ to be a red truck around that size. In the past, if she saw any kind of truck on the road, her legs would weaken, so right now you could say it was even an improvement.		Last year in June, Chiwa got in a traffic accident with a truck, so she couldn't practice kendo anymore. Yeah, it just happened to be a red truck around that size. In the past, if she saw any kind of truck on the road, her legs would weaken, so right now you could say it was even an improvement.

	But she couldn't forget about it entirely.		But she couldn't forget about it entirely.
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	"Oh, it's this late already?"		"Oh, it's this late already?"

	Inui looked at his watched at patted my shoulder.		Inui looked at his watched and patted my shoulder.

	"It's about time to get going, Kidou."		"It's about time to get going, Kidou."
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	"It must have been since May, right? I kept being asked to become a coach. This year you guys received no less than twenty new members, so it was really difficult to manage them all, so you asked me to come help whenever at I had free time. I was really worried about what I should do—"		"It must have been since May, right? I kept being asked to become a coach. This year you guys received no less than twenty new members, so it was really difficult to manage them all, so you asked me to come help whenever at I had free time. I was really worried about what I should do—"

	"It looks like you're pretty happy, no matter I look at you."		"It looks like you're pretty happy, no matter how I look at you."

	I said after she spoke. Chiwa nodded widely.		I said after she spoke. Chiwa nodded widely.