OreShura: Volume 6 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Rxls at 19:36, 11 March 2019

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	==~~Chapter~~ 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem==		==#2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem==
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Firephinx: /* Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem */

2017-07-01T14:45:08Z

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	Virgin turned bad, Natsukawa Masuzu.		Virgin turned bad, Natsukawa Masuzu.

	~~Never~~ thought that the school's number one beauty would be like this~~, the~~ boys ~~of the~~ school ~~must~~ have ~~been unable to~~ imagined this.		I never thought that the school's number one beauty would be like this. The other boys at school certainly would never have imagined this either.

	“Stop blabbering, let me monyomonyo! If not I can do it here!”		“Stop blabbering, let me monyomonyo! If not I can do it here!”

Holdini: /* Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem */

2015-12-29T03:46:30Z

Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem

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	Even if that was the case, Hime was still too cold.		Even if that was the case, Hime was still too cold.

	This “Villager A” setting I created to become hated was now being used in a way that felt a bit painful.		This “Villager A” setting I created to become hated, was now being used in a way that felt a bit painful.


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	“Maybe……”		“Maybe……”

	I wiped off the sweat and sighed, ahhh I can stop worrying. I believe that if that past I almost forgotten gets exposed I will be sick on bed for ten days.		I wiped off the sweat and sighed, ahhh I can stop worrying. I believe that if that past I almost forgotten gets exposed I will be sick in bed for ten days.

	“Ahh! Speaking of school festival, when Ei-kun was in second year of his middle school—”		“Ahh! Speaking of school festival, when Ei-kun was in second year of his middle school—”
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	How dangerous! Not only the notebook, a living evidence is here!		How dangerous! Not only the notebook, a living evidence is here!

	“You guys, what are you rambling about ~~from~~ just now? We can’t even talk calmly now.”		“You guys, what are you rambling about just now? We can’t even talk calmly now.”

	Fuyuumi pouted and complained, looks like she wants to continue to lecture Hime.		Fuyuumi pouted and complained, looks like she wants to continue to lecture Hime.
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	Good, now how will you react?		Good, now how will you react?

	If it was the old me, I would’ve said “Ugh! Everybody run! You will be hurled ~~into the~~ out of control ‘Dragonic Aura’! Please get away from me…while I still have a humane heart!” or something like that, and then say “Everybody……thank you……for accompanying me until now!” and leave the classroom with a bitter smile. Of course, the next day I would come to school as if nothing happened.		If it was the old me, I would’ve said “Ugh! Everybody run! You will be hurled out of control ‘Dragonic Aura’! Please get away from me…while I still have a humane heart!” or something like that, and then say: “Everybody……thank you……for accompanying me until now!” and leave the classroom with a bitter smile. Of course, the next day I would come to school as if nothing happened.

	As I was to see how Hime would react, she clumsily tied the bandage again.		As I was to see how Hime would react, she clumsily tied the bandage again.
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	Chiwa took the bandage off, and bandaged it with experienced hands.		Chiwa took the bandage off, and bandaged it with experienced hands.

	“Thanks to you, it is over without ~~and~~ bloodshed; thanks for your help.”		“Thanks to you, it is over without the bloodshed; thanks for your help.”

	“You’re welcome~”		“You’re welcome~”
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	I can see Hime’s body twitching.		I can see Hime’s body twitching.

	But her expression didn’t change, and her voice ~~remain~~ cold.		But her expression didn’t change, and her voice remained cold.

	“Because of this, I can’t be together with you. If my battle with the Wyverns gets too bloody, this club will also be hit by misfortune, it would be better if I am not here.”		“Because of this, I can’t be together with you. If my battle with the Wyverns gets too bloody, this club will also be hit by misfortune, it would be better if I am not here.”
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	Hime didn’t answer Masuzu, but instead stood up.		Hime didn’t answer Masuzu, but instead stood up.

	“Don’t cry for me when I lose. But, please remember, that Genocide ~~Blood~~ Red every night!”		“Don’t cry for me when I lose. But, please remember, that Genocide Bleeds Red every night!”

	It probably means “temporarily stopping club activities”.		It probably means “temporarily stopping club activities”.

AJS90 at 11:29, 16 August 2014

2014-08-16T11:29:06Z

OhHaiThar: /* Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem */

2014-08-09T04:16:08Z

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	“I don’t talk much to her, although I do greet her.”		“I don’t talk much to her, although I do greet her.”

	~~“Sigh—“~~		Sigh
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	Greeting huh.		Greeting huh.
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	“That’s because we’re already self-absorbed, completely absorbed in that world. Ignoring the normal and peaceful daily lives, believing we, ourselves are the chosen warrior to fight alone! Burying the sorrow of not being understood by people to the deepest part of our hearts, battling with attackers from the other world! ‘Is that guy psycho?’ the more we get ridiculed, the more self-absorbed we get, ‘normal humans……it’s okay to not understand my sorrow……’ into the whirlpool of delusion! To escape this is very hard -ehhhh!?”		“That’s because we’re already self-absorbed, completely absorbed in that world. Ignoring the normal and peaceful daily lives, believing we, ourselves are the chosen warrior to fight alone! Burying the sorrow of not being understood by people to the deepest part of our hearts, battling with attackers from the other world! ‘Is that guy psycho?’ the more we get ridiculed, the more self-absorbed we get, ‘normal humans……it’s okay to not understand my sorrow……’ into the whirlpool of delusion! To escape this is very hard -ehhhh!?”
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	I stood up without noticing. The gaze from the customers nearby is piercing me again. Hey, waitress, don’t look at the sky with a “sigh—” look, get back to work.		I stood up without noticing. The gaze from the customers nearby is piercing me again. Hey, waitress, don’t look at the sky with a “sigh—” look, get back to work.

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2014-08-03T11:52:17Z

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	Hmm—this girl is really twisted.		Hmm—this girl is really twisted.

	If she said this, she probably told this by people before, insult in the face or talking bad behind her ~~bad~~. Because I’m a guy, getting		If she said this, she probably told this by people before, insult in the face or talking bad behind her back. Because I’m a guy, getting
	joked about having a “harem army～♪” is still passable; it seems pretty troublesome from a girl’s point of view.		joked about having a “harem army～♪” is still passable; it seems pretty troublesome from a girl’s point of view.

Rockmosis at 23:49, 22 July 2014

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	Chiwa ran over happily in an apron, and froze after seeing Masuzu.		Chiwa ran over happily in an apron, and froze after seeing Masuzu.

	Masuzu also ~~frozed~~ looking at Chiwa.		Masuzu also froze looking at Chiwa.

	Their gaze sandwiched me, clashing.		Their gaze sandwiched me, clashing.

OhHaiThar: /* Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem */

2014-07-14T07:32:36Z

Chapter 2: Eighth-Grade Syndrome is Critically Ill, but it's still Mayhem

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	Then she stared at me sharply.		Then she stared at me sharply.

	“The cause of all these is because Eita is too careless, you ~~was~~ the one who made me ~~said~~ fake boyfriend and such.”		“The cause of all these is because Eita is too careless, you're the one who made me say fake boyfriend and such.”

	“You still have the nerve to say that, you losing control is probably the root of it.”		“You still have the nerve to say that, you losing control is probably the root of it.”

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	“Even if you ask me…..we have only five members, isn’t there only a limited amount of things we can do?”		“Even if you ask me…..we have only five members, isn’t there only a limited amount of things we can do?”

	“True, we can do large scale activities.”		“True, we can't do large scale activities.”

	“How about asking Kaoru-kun for help?”		“How about asking Kaoru-kun for help?”
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	“Is this really what you think?”		“Is this really what you think?”

	Hime didn’t ~~answered~~ Masuzu, but instead stood up.		Hime didn’t answer Masuzu, but instead stood up.

	“Don’t cry for me when I lose. But, please remember, that Genocide Blood Red every night!”		“Don’t cry for me when I lose. But, please remember, that Genocide Blood Red every night!”

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	The test went rather well.		The test went rather well.

	Despite the incident from this morning, I still managed to focus with my full attention, so it felt my maturity improved. If this continued, I could still maintain my number one position in the grade.		Despite the incident from this morning, I still managed to focus with my full attention, so it felt like my maturity improved. If this continued, I could still maintain my number one position in the grade.

	My mission was finished anyway, so I decided to think about Hime’s matter.		My mission was finished anyway, so I decided to think about Hime’s matter.
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	They looked like they were having a normal conversation?		They looked like they were having a normal conversation?

	Both the boys and girls were saying Hime’s replies were interesting. I couldn't find any ~~the~~ sign of them bullying her or treating her as a joke. Everyone looked happy to me.		Both the boys and girls were saying Hime’s replies were interesting. I couldn't find any sign of them bullying her or treating her as a joke. Everyone looked happy to me.

	“But that bandage, can’t you buy it at a normal pharmacy?”		“But that bandage, can’t you buy it at a normal pharmacy?”
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	Ignoring the two of them, Masuzu stood in front of the whiteboard, looking as if she recovered from yesterday’s impact.		Ignoring the two of them, Masuzu stood in front of the whiteboard, looking as if she recovered from yesterday’s impact.

	But she never ~~look~~ into Hime’s eyes today.		But she never looked into Hime’s eyes today.

	Hime was also ignoring Masuzu, staring at the magical circle (drawn with a highlighter) on the back of her hand.		Hime was also ignoring Masuzu, staring at the magical circle (drawn with a highlighter) on the back of her hand.
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	Dammit, this woman sure knows how to talk. Isn’t she herself the leader of the Jien-otsu.		Dammit, this woman sure knows how to talk. Isn’t she herself the leader of the Jien-otsu.

	“That’s because we’re already self-absorbed, completely absorbed in that world. Ignoring the normal and peaceful daily lives, believing we, ourselves are the chosen ~~warrior~~ to fight alone! Burying the sorrow of not being understood by people to the deepest part of our hearts, battling with attackers from the other world! ‘Is that guy psycho?’ the more we get ridiculed, the more self-absorbed we get, ‘normal humans……it’s okay to not understand my sorrow……’ into the whirlpool of delusion! To escape this is very hard -ehhhh!?”		“That’s because we’re already self-absorbed, completely absorbed in that world. Ignoring the normal and peaceful daily lives, believing we, ourselves are the chosen warriors to fight alone! Burying the sorrow of not being understood by people to the deepest part of our hearts, battling with attackers from the other world! ‘Is that guy psycho?’ the more we get ridiculed, the more self-absorbed we get, ‘normal humans……it’s okay to not understand my sorrow……’ into the whirlpool of delusion! To escape this is very hard -ehhhh!?”


	I stood up without noticing. The ~~gaze~~ from the customers nearby is piercing me again. Hey, waitress, don’t look at the sky with a “sigh—” look, get back to work.		I stood up without noticing. The gazes from the customers nearby were piercing me again. Hey, waitress, don’t look at the sky with a “sigh—” look, get back to work.

	I sat down while coughing.		I sat down while coughing.
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	“Akishino-san’s real side, does Eita knows about it?”		“Akishino-san’s real side, does Eita knows about it?”

	“No, so she must ~~became~~ a Chuunibyou patient because she likes manga and anime too much—“		“No, so she must become a Chuunibyou patient because she likes manga and anime too much—“

	“We can only say that is her interest, right? At least I never saw her real self.”		“We can only say that is her interest, right? At least I never saw her real self.”
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	Sorry, you're not wrong. Himeka-san, I am sorry.		Sorry, you're not wrong. Himeka-san, I am sorry.

	The customers who were still talking loudly until a while ago are all silent, some of them peeked at us from time to time. From their point of view we probably ~~looks~~ like “lovers who fighting due to jealousy”. This is unavoidable.		The customers who were still talking loudly until a while ago are all silent, some of them peeked at us from time to time. From their point of view we probably look like “lovers who are fighting due to jealousy”. This is unavoidable.

	Masuzu quickly stood up.		Masuzu quickly stood up.
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	“What?”		“What?”

	“I'm saying you're getting ahead of yourself, aren't you the same ~~with~~ the lovestruck brains we hate so much?”		“I'm saying you're getting ahead of yourself, aren't you the same as the lovestruck brains we hate so much?”

	Masuzu's eyes widened with a “regrettable” look.		Masuzu's eyes widened with a “regrettable” look.
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	“Stop joking, don't lump me together with those trash.”		“Stop joking, don't lump me together with those trash.”

	“It's the same, you saw how those people at the café ~~look~~ at us right? There are people who looked like they're criticizing us for publicly showing affection, won't we get seen as lovestruck brains too?”		“It's the same, you saw how those people at the café looked at us right? There are people who looked like they're criticizing us for publicly showing affection, won't we get seen as lovestruck brains too?”

	Masuzu's voice raised when she heard this.		Masuzu's voice raised when she heard this.
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	“I don't have any thoughts about you, even though I'm thinking 'This idiot! Closet pervert! Virgin turned bad!', my body just wants to monyomonyo, this is an undeniable truth.”		“I don't have any thoughts about you, even though I'm thinking 'This idiot! Closet pervert! Virgin turned bad!', my body just wants to monyomonyo, this is an undeniable truth.”

	“Your choice of words are subtle......wait, what did you just ~~said~~? Virgin turned bad?”		“Your choice of words are subtle......wait, what did you just say? Virgin turned bad?”

	“Isn't it nice? Anyway you want to be a virgin for the rest of your life right? So I will also be a virgin throughout my life, and only needs monyomonyo, so it's fair between us right?”		“Isn't it nice? Anyway you want to be a virgin for the rest of your life right? So I will also be a virgin throughout my life, and only needs monyomonyo, so it's fair between us right?”
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	Virgin turned bad, Natsukawa Masuzu.		Virgin turned bad, Natsukawa Masuzu.

	Never thought that the school's number one beauty would be like this, the boys of the school must have be unable to imagined this.		Never thought that the school's number one beauty would be like this, the boys of the school must have been unable to imagined this.

	“Stop blabbering, let me monyomonyo! If not I can do it here!”		“Stop blabbering, let me monyomonyo! If not I can do it here!”
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	I grabbed Masuzu's shoulder and turned her to the right.		I grabbed Masuzu's shoulder and turned her to the right.

	“What happened to you? I didn't even ~~got~~ my shoes off.”		“What happened to you? I didn't even get my shoes off.”

	“Okay, tomorrow! We'll talk tomorrow! So let's call it an end here for today! Okay!?”		“Okay, tomorrow! We'll talk tomorrow! So let's call it an end here for today! Okay!?”