OreShura: Volume 6 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Rxls at 19:36, 11 March 2019

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	==~~Chapter~~ 3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem==		==#3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem==

Timo: /* Chapter 3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem */

2015-03-03T13:28:27Z

Chapter 3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem

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	Masuzu asked in a small voice.		Masuzu asked in a small voice.

	"Basically no, the meat and potato stew I ~~did~~ just now also turned out as a failure."		"Basically no, the meat and potato stew I made just now also turned out as a failure."

	The "Chihuahua special creative meat and potato stew" with tomato, no matter the color or the taste, is <i>unforgettable</i>.		The "Chihuahua special creative meat and potato stew" with tomato, no matter the color or the taste, is <i>unforgettable</i>.
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	"That's why <i>it IS</i> instant food."		"That's why <i>it IS</i> instant food."

	However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?		However great you proclaim it to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?

	"Sorry for the wait─!"		"Sorry for the wait─!"
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	There, I patted Chiwa's shoulder. I don't want things to become more troublesome. Even like this, as long as there is no tragedy from cooking failure, it's already enough.		There, I patted Chiwa's shoulder. I don't want things to become more troublesome. Even like this, as long as there is no tragedy from cooking failure, it's already enough.

	Taking of the lead and saying ｢itadakimasu｣, I started eating the noodles.		Taking the lead and saying ｢itadakimasu｣, I started eating the noodles.

	"…...this cup, it's tasteless."		"…...this cup, it's tasteless."
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	"…...yes."		"…...yes."

	"Instant food or whatever is not bad, but I still feel ~~like~~ homemade food is still better, right?"		"Instant food or whatever is not bad, but I still feel that homemade food is still better, right?"

	"…... It's as you say."		"…... It's as you say."
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	The three of us made tea and drank together peacefully after dinner.		The three of us made tea and drank together peacefully after dinner.

	"It feels like it's been a long time, since only the three of us ~~were~~ together."		"It feels like it's been a long time, since only the three of us are together."

	Sipping the hot green tea and staring at us, Chiwa nodded.		Sipping the hot green tea and staring at us, Chiwa nodded.
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	The three of us went to the storage room in the garden, and took out an old cardboard box.		The three of us went to the storage room in the garden, and took out an old cardboard box.

	The things that attracted me a lot until last year, sealed away heavily with masking tape. No signs of me wanting to unseal it. This is something that I would kill myself over if it gets spread.		The things that attracted me a lot until last year, sealed away heavily with masking tape. No signs of me wanting to unseal it. This is something that I would kill myself over if it gets spread out.

	“Are we really doing this?”		“Are we really doing this?”

OhHaiThar at 23:30, 26 October 2014

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	“Aahhh”		“Aahhh”

	I had a period where I did wear a ~~“fashion~~ bandage” like Hime.		I had a period where I did wear a “fashionable bandage” like Hime.

	But, it sure is hard to bandage with one person. So like Hime I simply bandaged it up, and it fell off.		But, it sure is hard to bandage with one person. So like Hime I simply bandaged it up, and it fell off.

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2014-08-16T12:56:41Z

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OhHaiThar: /* Chapter 3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem */

2014-07-21T09:12:29Z

Chapter 3: It's Obviously a Cooking Contest and it's still Mayhem

Wwwww at 17:00, 23 May 2014

2014-05-23T17:00:55Z

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	"And it only needs three minutes. The better ones only take one minute <i>chin</i>! Isn't that great?"		"And it only needs three minutes. The better ones only take one minute <i>chin</i>! Isn't that great?"

	"That's why <i>it's</i> instant food."		"That's why <i>it IS</i> instant food."

	However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?"		However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?"

Wwwww: Minor fixes

2014-05-23T16:20:48Z

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	"And it only needs three minutes. The better ones only take one minute <i>chin</i>! Isn't that great?"		"And it only needs three minutes. The better ones only take one minute <i>chin</i>! Isn't that great?"

	"That's why <i>it is</i> instant food."		"That's why <i>it's</i> instant food."

	However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?"		However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?"
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	Honestly the carrot and potatoes doesn't look too nice, but the taste is more important.		Honestly the carrot and potatoes doesn't look too nice, but the taste is more important.

	Picking up the potato with my chopsticks, I ~~blowed~~ it for a while and placed it in my mouth.		Picking up the potato with my chopsticks, I blew it for a while and placed it in my mouth.

	......ooh.		......ooh.
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	"Can you even call those ingredients!?"		"Can you even call those ingredients!?"

	"Boiling hot water and a cup noodles."		"Boiling hot water and a cup of noodles."

	"You only described it with more details!"		"You only described it with more details!"
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	"…...yes."		"…...yes."

	"Instant food or what is not bad, but I still feel like homemade food is ~~till~~ better, right?"		"Instant food or what is not bad, but I still feel like homemade food is still better, right?"

	"…... It's as you say."		"…... It's as you say."
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	Tch. What was that.		Tch. What was that.

	Can't you let me see that cute pouting face some ~~more~~ more?		Can't you let me see that cute pouting face some more?


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	"Fuyuumi is also involved, it should be better if we do something about this."		"Fuyuumi is also involved, it should be better if we do something about this."

	"If this goes on, our 'maiden's club' will fall appart. …...actually, I have an idea on how to solve this, can you hear it out?"		"If this goes on, our 'maiden's club' will fall appart. …...actually, I have an idea on how to solve this, can you hear me out?"

	Masuzu made a “lend me a ear” gesture, so Chiwa and I leaned over with our foreheads touching.		Masuzu made a “lend me a ear” gesture, so Chiwa and I leaned over with our foreheads touching.
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	“It’s definitely a good idea, but will this go so well?”		“It’s definitely a good idea, but will this go so well?”

	“This, we have to see how Eita-kun performs.”		“This, we'll have to see how Eita-kun performs.”

	Masuzu looked around the living room.		Masuzu looked around the living room.

QusaTalma: Slightly awkward sentence style, changed to something more readable.

2014-04-28T08:54:18Z

Slightly awkward sentence style, changed to something more readable.

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	"Chiwa, what did you think of Hime's behavior today?"		"Chiwa, what did you think of Hime's behavior today?"

	"At the start I thought something angered her, or ~~to say~~......she was acting awkward? Or rather, as if she doing this because she's being bullied?"		"At the start I thought something angered her, or maybe......she was just acting awkward? Or rather, it's as if she doing this because she's being bullied?"

	"I see......"		"I see......"

QusaTalma: Grammar fix.

2014-04-28T08:50:28Z

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	"Me too, I wanted to discuss this with Ei-kun."		"Me too, I wanted to discuss this with Ei-kun."

	Looks like Chiwa also ~~think~~ we can't just not care about Hime.		Looks like Chiwa also thinks that we can't just not care about Hime.

	"Chiwa, what did you think of Hime's behavior today?"		"Chiwa, what did you think of Hime's behavior today?"

QusaTalma: Grammar fix.

2014-04-28T08:46:04Z

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	It's edible! It's really edible!		It's edible! It's really edible!

	Not too sticky or wet, completely the taste of meat! Although a bit bitter from being ~~over cooked~~, but it's ~~already~~ quite good. ~~Anyway~~ sometimes ~~I over cook~~ mine too.		Not too sticky or wet, completely the taste of meat! Although a bit bitter from being overcooked, but it's still quite good. I sometimes overcook mine too.

	"Um, it's good. Seconds please."		"Um, it's good. Seconds please."

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	While my childhood friend was making dinner, I simply waited together with my girlfriend.		While my childhood friend was making dinner, I simply waited together with my girlfriend.

	If I heard this during my middle school years, maybe I would say "I'm envious" or something. If I heard it this April I would say "Huh? So it's like that?" or something. And if I heard it last month, I would've say "You...are you leaving this world?" and my eyes ~~will widened~~ with fear as I say it.		If I heard this during my middle school years, maybe I would say,"I'm envious." or something. If I heard it this April I would say,"Huh? So it's like that?" or something. And if I heard it last month, I would've say,"You...are you leaving this world?" and my eyes would widen with fear as I say it.

	Such a rare and horrifying occurrence, goes on silently in my kitchen.		Such a rare and horrifying occurrence goes on silently in my kitchen.

	Firstly, Chiwa cooking is already very dangerous, and Masuzu is even joining in. What kind of quest is this. A battlefield where you don't know the requirements to clear<ref>Requirements given in quests in RPGs. Though you probably got it.</ref>, filled with buried landmines.		Firstly, Chiwa's cooking is already very dangerous, and Masuzu is even joining in. What kind of quest is this? A battlefield where you don't know the requirements to clear<ref>Requirements given in quests in RPGs. Though you probably got it.</ref>, filled with buried landmines.

	I was trembling on the corner of the sofa in my living room, Masuzu sat beside me reading Saeko-san's entertainment magazine, raising her head in a seemingly bored manner.		I was trembling on the corner of the sofa in my living room, Masuzu sat beside me reading Saeko-san's entertainment magazine, raising her head in a seemingly bored manner.
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	"That's why <i>it IS</i> instant food."		"That's why <i>it IS</i> instant food."

	However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?"		However great you proclaim to be I will only feel troubled. Also what is <i>chin</i>? Are you from the Showa period?

	"Sorry for the wait─!"		"Sorry for the wait─!"
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	"All right ♪"		"All right ♪"

	"Chiwa took my bowl happily, placing lots of meat and potato stew on it.		Chiwa took my bowl happily, placing lots of meat and potato stew on it.

	On the other side, Masuzu turned white. Also, putting the potato into her mouth to chew; she made a dull sound as she ate.		On the other side, Masuzu turned white. Also, putting the potato into her mouth to chew; she made a dull sound as she ate.
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	"Bu, but I can also do it! Something like cooking."		"Bu, but I can also do it! Something like cooking."

	"Is that so? Then is there any dish that it's your specialty?"		"Is that so? Then is there any dish that's your specialty?"

	"With the ingredients, I can do anything for you."		"With the ingredients, I can do anything for you."

	And then this Masuzu-san stared Chiwa with some bloodshot eyes while talking big.		And then this Masuzu-san stared at Chiwa with some bloodshot eyes while talking big.

	Chiwa, with an blank face with a ｢Eh, that's great｣ look as she opened her eyes.		Chiwa, with a blank face with a ｢Eh, that's great｣ look as she opened her eyes.

	"Then, why don't you make something? There still are some potatoes and carrots."		"Then, why don't you make something? There still are some potatoes and carrots."
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	Thus, the suspect denied the charges.		Thus, the suspect denied the charges.

	Masuzu shouldn't know how to cook. During the trip she beautifully angered Fuyuumi with her skills, and always ~~eat~~ Weider in jelly, Calorie mate, the type of stuff that collar workers usually eat when they work overtime.		Masuzu shouldn't know how to cook. During the trip she beautifully angered Fuyuumi with her skills, and always ate Weider in jelly, Calorie mate, the type of stuff that collar workers usually eat when they work overtime.

	"Why do you want to say such provocative words, Chiwa?"		"Why do you want to say such provocative words, Chiwa?"
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	"Then, didn't this turned out a failure!?"		"Then, didn't this turned out a failure!?"

	I feel extremely exhausted. Since when did my girlfriend ~~become~~ like this? Where did that cool beautiful returnee woman ~~went~~?		I feel extremely exhausted. Since when did my girlfriend get like this? Where did that cool beautiful returnee woman go?

	Chiwa moved over to her with a serious face.		Chiwa moved over to her with a serious face.
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	I took the soup packet from the kitchen and poured it into the cup. Now I can eat this. Although I'm still full from the meat and potato stew.		I took the soup packet from the kitchen and poured it into the cup. Now I can eat this. Although I'm still full from the meat and potato stew.

	Masuzu looked dazed, and when she meet my eyes, she looked as if she said "I missed it!" and curled her lips, and shifted her gaze.		Masuzu looked dazed, and when she meet my eyes, she looked as if she said,"I missed it!" and curled her lips, and shifted her gaze.

	Tch. What was that.		Tch. What was that.
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	"Before Himecchi and Ai joined, it was only the three of us."		"Before Himecchi and Ai joined, it was only the three of us."

	Masuzu suddenly made ah "oh, I remember" face.		Masuzu suddenly made ah "Oh, I remember" face.

	"To be honest, I came here for the issue of Akishino-san."		"To be honest, I came here for the issue of Akishino-san."
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	I feel that I know said reason. Of course, it's not something I can't tell to Chiwa.		I feel that I know said reason. Of course, it's not something I can't tell to Chiwa.

	"Fuyuumi is also involved, it should be better if we do something about this."		"Fuyuumi is also involved; it should be better if we do something about this."

	"If this goes on, our 'maiden's club' will fall ~~appart~~. …...actually, I have an idea on how to solve this, can you hear me out?"		"If this goes on, our 'maiden's club' will fall apart. …...actually, I have an idea on how to solve this, can you hear me out?"

	Masuzu made a “lend me a ear” gesture, so Chiwa and I leaned over with our foreheads touching.		Masuzu made a “lend me an ear” gesture, so Chiwa and I leaned over with our foreheads touching.

	—I see.		—I see.

	“It’s definitely a good idea, but will this go so well?”		“It’s definitely a good idea, but will this go well?”

	~~“This~~, we'll have to see how Eita-kun performs.”		“Thus, we'll have to see how Eita-kun performs.”

	Masuzu looked around the living room.		Masuzu looked around the living room.
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	“Nah Chiwa, something must have happened between you two right?”		“Nah Chiwa, something must have happened between you two right?”

	“I said ~~there is~~ nothing! However, so it's that Natsukawa is really my rival. I absolutely don’t want to lose to her.”		“I said it's nothing! However, so it's that Natsukawa is really my rival. I absolutely don’t want to lose to her.”

	While saying this, Chiwa’s eyes were shining.		While saying this, Chiwa’s eyes were shining.
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	Since the founding of “Jien-otsu”, Natsukawa’s strategies always manage to fool Chiwa. But today Chiwa totally rolled over her.		Since the founding of “Jien-otsu”, Natsukawa’s strategies always manage to fool Chiwa. But today Chiwa totally rolled over her.

	“Even though I’m not Ai, ~~but~~ epic victoryyyyyy—! At these times I want to say this.”		“Even though I’m not Ai, epic victoryyyyyy—! At these times I want to say this.”

	Chiwa held up her fist, looking at the autumn sky. The firmly held hand is like a celebration of victory.		Chiwa held up her fist, looking at the autumn sky. The firmly held hand is like a celebration of victory.

	“Ei-kun, you ~~are~~ studying until quite late ~~right~~? I put the potato and meat stew in the refrigerator. Take it and eat if you’re hungry.”		“Ei-kun, you're studying until quite late? I put the potato and meat stew in the refrigerator. Take it and eat if you’re hungry.”

	“Thanks. I will.”		“Thanks. I will.”

	“It won't do if you just get instant, you know?”		“It won't do if you just get something instant, you know?”

	Chiwa said this by my ear, smiling.		Chiwa said this by my ear, smiling.