Ousama Game:Volume 1 Command 7 - Revision history

Cyvro at 16:39, 12 October 2017

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	Please rest in peace, Akira.		Please rest in peace, Akira.

	Akira, Kana, Daisuke… I will carry on ~~all~~ your ~~fate with my shoulder~~.		Akira, Kana, Daisuke… I will carry on your will.

	<!----The original translate is ‘I will shoulder Akira, Kana, and Daisuke’s fate.’, but I choose to change the translation a bit to		<!----The original translate is ‘I will shoulder Akira, Kana, and Daisuke’s fate.’, but I choose to change the translation a bit to

Cyvro at 05:40, 3 February 2014

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	Chiemi takes her mobile phone.		Chiemi takes her mobile phone.

	“I haven’t ~~seen~~ my phone for a while. Because I don’t have time ~~for it~~.”		“I haven’t opened my phone for a while. Because I don’t have time to.”

	“The message comes every single day, it makes me ~~really~~ sick.”		“The message comes every single day, it really makes me sick.”

	I saw the phone while praying that the King’s order won't arrive.		I saw the phone while praying that the King’s order won't arrive.

Cyvro at 03:57, 28 October 2013

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Cyvro at 01:59, 27 October 2013

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Cyvro at 01:56, 27 October 2013

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	I thought with my arms folded.		I thought with my arms folded.

	“Is the latter half of this game a test between friends? Moreover, there is ~~moderator to sentence this~~ to friends?” <!-- no clue what this means-->		“Is the latter half of this game a test between friends? Moreover, there is no rule to stop sentencing friends.” <!-- no clue what this means-->

	“It seems so. If the paper is pulled one by one till the 97th piece, then the punishment is decided if next person pulled 2		“It seems so. If the paper is pulled one by one till the 97th piece, then the punishment is decided if next person pulled 2
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	“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of the tension during Naoya's popularity contest, I’m getting very tired.		“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of the tension during Naoya's popularity contest, I’m getting very tired.

	I feel a bit lightheaded.”		I feel a bit lightheaded.”

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	“How ecchi all of you!”		“How ecchi all of you!”

	“Okay, enough! Let’s go to sleep already!! I’m ~~tired to death~~ here!!”		“Okay, enough! Let’s go to sleep already!! I’m exhausted here!!”

	We all ~~sleep~~ for the night.		Then we all slept for the night.

	You must ~~not do death~~ sentence to your friend. And if we don’t desperately wish for help to come, we will get ~~punishment game~~.		You must sentence your friend to death. And if we don’t desperately wish for help to come, we will get punished.

	But I’m forgetting the important thing. The grudges that some classmates have during the ~~acts~~. It is the worst thing developed in		But I’m forgetting the important thing. The grudges that some classmates have during the game. It is the worst thing that has developed in this game.
	this game.



	-Next ~~day~~ morning-		-Next morning-

	The outside is clear and the weather is fine. The sun light is ~~coming dazzling~~ through the window.		The outside is clear and the weather is fine. The dazzling sun light is shining through the window.

	Chiemi ~~has awaken earlier than~~ the alarm clock.		Chiemi had awoken before the alarm clock.

	“Aaah—What a fine weather! ~~In day~~ like this I really want to play outside”		“Aaah—What fine weather! It is days like this I really want to play outside”

	~~Looked~~ at me who ~~sleep~~ really comfortably by side, she kissed me.		Looking at me who was sleeping really comfortably by her side, she kissed me.

	“What a cute sleeping face! ~~So you~~ absolutely must not be defeated! If Nobuaki ~~is gone~~, I…….”		“What a cute sleeping face! You absolutely must not be defeated! If Nobuaki dies, I…….”

	I turn over and ~~talk~~ in sleep.		I turn over and talked in my sleep.

	“Really unusual~”		“Really unusual~”
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	Buki!		Buki!

	The sound of Chiemi ~~lost~~ temper.		The sound of Chiemi losing her temper.


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	Bachii!		Bachii!

	The sound ~~from~~ one being slapped really hard.		The sound of one being slapped really hard.



	I ~~flew and wake up under the bed~~.		I jerked awake.

	“IT HURTS~! ~~Why I am suddenly ended here~~!”		“IT HURTS~! What happened?!”

	“Just because!”		“Just because!”

	~~The~~ hand mark left in the cheek ~~slapped~~.		A hand mark was left on the slapped cheek.

	“GIMME A BREAK! THERE SHOULD BE A REASON FOR THIS!”		“GIMME A BREAK! THERE SHOULD BE A REASON FOR THIS!”

	“Think it yourself”		“Think of it yourself”

	Chiemi left the room angrily after saying that.		Chiemi left the room angrily after saying that.
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	“????”		“????”

	~~Wh,what~~ on earth?!		What on earth?!

	Seeing the clock, the time is still too early to wake up, but I decide to see Naoya to ask about it.		Seeing the clock, the time is still too early to wake up, but I decide to see Naoya to ask about it.

Cyvro at 03:18, 24 October 2013

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	==Command 7==		==Command 7==
	~~“Must not~~ forget…. The King’s ~~mail~~ is ~~surely received by~~ today ~~too~~. One after another.”		“Don't forget…. The King’s order is being sent today. One after another.”

	Chiemi takes her mobile phone.		Chiemi takes her mobile phone.

	“I haven’t seen ~~the mobile~~ for a while. Because I don’t have time for ~~that~~.”		“I haven’t seen my phone for a while. Because I don’t have time for it.”

	“The message comes every single day, it makes me really sick.”		“The message comes every single day, it makes me really sick.”

	I saw the ~~mobile~~ phone while praying that the King’s ~~mail did not~~ arrive.		I saw the phone while praying that the King’s order won't arrive.

	[Incoming Mail : 1]		[Incoming Mail : 1]

	“Haaah...” I ~~took a big sigh~~.		“Haaah...” I sighed deeply.

	~~“Afterall,~~ it still ~~arrived~~! ~~Damn”~~		“In the end it still came! Damn!”

	“Is he a stalker?”		“Is he a stalker?”
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	“I don’t want to see it, but I still have to see it.”		“I don’t want to see it, but I still have to see it.”

	~~“Haaah…”and~~ with a big sigh she ~~counts~~ to three, then ~~take~~ a look ~~for~~ the mail.		“Haaah…” and with a big sigh she counted to three, then took a look at the mail.

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	This is King’s game ~~for~~ all members ~~who~~ participate. Please follow it within 24 hours because King’s order is absolute.		This is King’s game in which all members must participate. Please follow the order within 24 hours because King’s order is absolute.

	※ ~~Any abstention is not acceptable~~.		※ You cannot quite the game.

	Order 6		Order 6

	All Boys ~~member~~		All Boys

	This is the game. Each person may take 1 to 3 papers out of 100 papers in order ~~with~~ the attendance number. And the person who		This is the game. Each person may take 1 to 3 papers out of 100 papers in order to the attendance number. And the person who
	~~pulled~~ the 100th piece is then punished. In addition, if the game is not played, all the boys will get ~~punishment~~. Please enjoy the		pulls the 100th piece is then punished. In addition, if the game is not played, all the boys will get punished. Please enjoy the
	game.		game.

	※ The punishment given this time is heart attack.		※ The punishment given this time is death by heart attack.

	-END-		-END-
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	I ~~calls~~ Naoya to show him the content of the mail.		I call Naoya to show him the content of the mail.

	“The game ~~this time~~? Is it ~~the~~ time to play the King’s game already?”		“The game? Is it time to play the King’s game already?”

	~~“I want to~~ see. The punishment is written this time. ~~Die from heart’s~~ attack?”		“Let me see. The punishment is written this time. Death by heart attack?”

	~~“Aaaah, perhaps...”~~		“Yea”

	“The King seems to enjoys it.”		“The King seems to enjoys it.”

	We were ~~speaking carefreely this time~~.		We were joking around.

	“Enjoy what~~, tell~~ me.”		“Enjoy what? Tell me.”

	“I don’t know”		“I don’t know”

	I thought ~~that~~ with arms folded.		I thought with my arms folded.

	“Is the latter half of this game ~~asking for one friend’s life pattern~~? Moreover, there is moderator to sentence this to friends?”		“Is the latter half of this game a test between friends? Moreover, there is moderator to sentence this to friends?” <!-- no clue what this means-->

	“It seems so. If the paper is pulled one by one ~~piece~~ till the 97th piece, then the punishment is decided if next person pulled 2		“It seems so. If the paper is pulled one by one till the 97th piece, then the punishment is decided if next person pulled 2
	pieces because only the 100th piece remains for the following person. Either way, ~~I ask you~~ to ~~go and~~ help that person!”		pieces because only the 100th piece remains for the following person. Either way, we should try to help that person!”

	“The lowest......Even the King should ~~have~~ think... playing with ~~person’s~~ life”		“The lowest......Even the King should think twice... playing with someones life”

	Even ~~that~~ we ~~should think~~ seriously about the game this time, Chiemi ~~seems~~ to ~~talk comfortably~~.		Even though we were thinking seriously about the game this time, Chiemi seemed to be relaxed when she spoke.

	“It says that the girl members ~~should not~~ participate this time.”		“It says that the girl members won't participate this time.”

	“How envious”		“How envious”
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	We look at Chiemi enviously.		We look at Chiemi enviously.

	“But because the number of boys are 14, isn’t the probability of facing the punishment is considerably low? Around 1/14 only?!”		“But because the number of boys are 14, isn’t the probability of facing the punishment is considerably low? Around 1/14 only...?!”

	“Don’t you see ~~the problem~~ in your words?!”		“Don’t you see what's wrong in your words?!”

	I was ~~retorted~~ by Naoya and Chiemi at the same time.		I was inturrupted by Naoya and Chiemi at the same time.

	<!--“retorted” in here mean“tsukkomi”-ed. I translate it as this “tsukkomi” word usually translated as retorted in manga.-->		<!--“retorted” in here mean“tsukkomi”-ed. I translate it as this “tsukkomi” word usually translated as retorted in manga.-->

	“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of ~~Naoya’s matter and~~ tension during ~~the~~ popularity contest, I’m ~~becoming~~ very tired.		“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of the tension during Naoya's popularity contest, I’m getting very tired.

	I feel a bit lightheaded.”		I feel a bit lightheaded.”

	I ~~yawn~~ while ~~straightening the~~ back.		I yawned while stretching my back.

	~~“You’re~~ certainly very tired and sleepy. Let’s rest for now…”		“You certainly look very tired and sleepy. Let’s rest for now…”

	“Naoya too should stay in my house for today.”		“Naoya too should stay in my house for today.”
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	“Thank you”		“Thank you”

	We all ~~prepare~~ to go to sleep.		We all prepared to go to sleep.

	Me and Chiemi stay in one room, while Naoya ~~stays~~ in another room.		Me and Chiemi stay in one room, while Naoya stayed in another room.

	“You won’t feel lonely tonight〜”		“You won’t feel lonely tonight〜”

Cyvro at 02:59, 24 October 2013

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	I was retorted by Naoya and Chiemi at the same time.		I was retorted by Naoya and Chiemi at the same time.

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	“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of Naoya’s matter and tension during the popularity contest, I’m becoming very tired.		“Sorry……maybe we should rest for now? Because of Naoya’s matter and tension during the popularity contest, I’m becoming very tired.

Cyvro at 02:59, 24 October 2013

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