Phenomeno:Case 02 - Revision history

Pakkit at 20:32, 26 June 2024

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	I rolled over and fell asleep at some point.		I rolled over and fell asleep at some point.



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	I was in a white, foggy world.		I was in a white, foggy world.
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	Said Yoishi, whose tired eyes twinkling slightly.		Said Yoishi, whose tired eyes twinkling slightly.


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	Eventually, she spoke those cold words, turned her back to me, and left.		Eventually, she spoke those cold words, turned her back to me, and left.

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	I know.		I know.
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	... Hey.		... Hey.

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	Yoishi's eyes rolled up and she lost consciousness.		Yoishi's eyes rolled up and she lost consciousness.

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	"Are you alright?"		"Are you alright?"
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	With my face turned away, I nodded repeatedly.		With my face turned away, I nodded repeatedly.

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	After that, my body felt lighter day by day.		After that, my body felt lighter day by day.

Pakkit at 17:52, 21 February 2024

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	I cleared my throat and said what I came to say.		I cleared my throat and said what I came to say.

	"I don't know what you did, but my body feels lighter and I stopped seeing weird people, too. And Krishna-san took care of that notebook. In any case, you saved me quite a bit. Thanks."		"I don't know what you did, but my body feels lighter and I stopped seeing weird people too. And Krishna-san took care of that notebook. In any case, you saved me quite a bit. Thanks."

	I bowed my head.		I bowed my head.
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	I was almost about to ask, but this time I restrained myself. Krishna-san said I had no capacity to learn, but that wasn't true. Even I had room to grow. There are areas in this world where it was impossible for me to go to. I learned that the hard way this time. So I restrained myself, and saw her off as she walked away.		I was almost about to ask, but this time I restrained myself. Krishna-san said I had no capacity to learn, but that wasn't true. Even I had room to grow. There are areas in this world where it was impossible for me to go to. I learned that the hard way this time. So I restrained myself, and saw her off as she walked away.

	However, ~~after~~ a few meters, she seemed to remember something, and ~~she~~ turned around.		However, a few meters ahead of me, she seemed to remember something, and turned around.

	She came back ~~close~~ to me, put her face close to mine and whispered softly in my ear.		She came back next to me, put her face close to mine and whispered softly in my ear.

	"You shouldn't look at websites related to that abandoned hospital for a while."		"You shouldn't look at websites related to that abandoned hospital for a while."
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	I was drawn in from the beginning. The writing was chilling and the description of the gradual disintegration of her personality was terrific. The somewhat twisted backdrop felt very real, and the horror stories she spoke of, the real ones that made you feel uncomfortable, every part of the writing was overflowing with that odd sense of discomfort. Yoishi was able to write like this? I was surprised, but at the same time, I was extremely curious about the ending.		I was drawn in from the beginning. The writing was chilling and the description of the gradual disintegration of her personality was terrific. The somewhat twisted backdrop felt very real, and the horror stories she spoke of, the real ones that made you feel uncomfortable, every part of the writing was overflowing with that odd sense of discomfort. Yoishi was able to write like this? I was surprised, but at the same time, I was extremely curious about the ending.

	In the library, as the sun set, I found myself clutching my cell phone close to me as I read, entranced by the story. The gradual usage of hiragana, as if to depict the crumbling mind, was terrifying. It was like Algernon. I held my breath and followed the letters with my eyes ~~while thinking~~ this. I read on, not caring for the chills I was getting. And finally, when the girl is led by fate down to the basement of the hospital once more —		In the library, as the sun set, I found myself clutching my cell phone close to me as I read, entranced by the story. The gradual usage of hiragana, as if to depict the crumbling mind, was terrifying. It was like Algernon. I held my breath and followed the letters with my eyes as I thought this. I read on, not caring for the chills I was getting. And finally, when the girl was led by fate down to the basement of the hospital once more —

	Suddenly, the screen of my cell phone was covered.		Suddenly, the screen of my cell phone was covered.

Pakkit at 19:27, 25 March 2023

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	And those were the most terrifying set of words I'd heard in the past few days.		And those were the most terrifying set of words I'd heard in the past few days.

Pakkit at 18:01, 25 March 2023

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	And those were the most terrifying set of words I'd heard in the past few days.		And those were the most terrifying set of words I'd heard in the past few days.

Pakkit at 17:59, 25 March 2023

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Ax1m at 21:13, 30 June 2022

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	She said naturally.		She said naturally.

	"I want to get a shimenawa<ref>https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shimenawa ~~A rope used for ritual purification in the Shinto religion~~</ref> there."		"I want to get a shimenawa<ref>A rope used for ritual purification in the Shinto religion. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shimenawa</ref> there."

	—Shimenawa? Get one?		—Shimenawa? Get one?

Ax1m at 21:11, 30 June 2022

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	When I was holding onto the strap, I saw it just a bit away.		When I was holding onto the strap, I saw it just a bit away.

	A man wearing a kamishimo<ref>https://www.japanese-wiki-corpus.org/culture/Kamishimo.html</ref>, like you'd see in a historical drama. The color was faded, and he stood there. He wore a white hakama to go with the stained blue, which made him stand out, yet no one so much as glanced at him. Of course, cosplay was all the rage these days, so I looked away. However, when the bus arrived at a stop and I looked in that direction again, he was gone. I thought he had merely gotten off. Then I looked outside, and almost fainted. For some reason, he was standing on top of a building next to the main street. He was nonchalantly walking on top of the fencing on the roofs of buildings.		A man wearing a kamishimo<ref>Kamishimo (old ceremonial dress) is a kind of formal kimono (traditional Japanese clothes) for men. https://www.japanese-wiki-corpus.org/culture/Kamishimo.html</ref>, like you'd see in a historical drama. The color was faded, and he stood there. He wore a white hakama to go with the stained blue, which made him stand out, yet no one so much as glanced at him. Of course, cosplay was all the rage these days, so I looked away. However, when the bus arrived at a stop and I looked in that direction again, he was gone. I thought he had merely gotten off. Then I looked outside, and almost fainted. For some reason, he was standing on top of a building next to the main street. He was nonchalantly walking on top of the fencing on the roofs of buildings.

	And then, during a lecture:		And then, during a lecture:

Ax1m at 21:09, 30 June 2022

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	Beyond the dark, tree-lined path to the shrine was the light for the main building.		Beyond the dark, tree-lined path to the shrine was the light for the main building.

	I slid the bicycle into the narrow parking area, and Yoishi jumped off. She ran under the arch to a big gingko<ref>Ginkgo biloba, commonly known as ginkgo or gingko (/ˈɡɪŋkoʊ, ˈɡɪŋkɡoʊ/ GINK-oh, -⁠goh) also known as the maidenhair tree, is a species of tree native to China.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ginkgo_biloba</ref> tree beside the main building. I parked the bicycle, ran to her, and quickly looked around.		I slid the bicycle into the narrow parking area, and Yoishi jumped off. She ran under the arch to a big gingko<ref>Ginkgo biloba, commonly known as ginkgo or gingko (/ˈɡɪŋkoʊ, ˈɡɪŋkɡoʊ/ GINK-oh, -⁠goh) also known as the maidenhair tree, is a species of tree native to China. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ginkgo_biloba</ref> tree beside the main building. I parked the bicycle, ran to her, and quickly looked around.

	"Are you sure you should do that?"		"Are you sure you should do that?"

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