Phenomeno:Case 07 - Revision history

Pakkit at 10:27, 20 June 2024

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	I became a member of the literature club soon after that.		I became a member of the literature club soon after that.
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	It was because the high school girl known as Ayana Takamura stood face to face with the world beyond.		It was because the high school girl known as Ayana Takamura stood face to face with the world beyond.

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	“There are things that come out of the living, things that have been scraped off and float around. Most of them vanish with the disappearance of the body, but there are a few that wander around in this world even after the body’s disappearance. You may not be aware of it, but the lights you see probably contain things that are no longer alive. And they’re very sensitive to being seen, to being perceived. In other words, it’s as if you're walking alone in the endless darkness with a seven-colored electronic billboard on your back.”		“There are things that come out of the living, things that have been scraped off and float around. Most of them vanish with the disappearance of the body, but there are a few that wander around in this world even after the body’s disappearance. You may not be aware of it, but the lights you see probably contain things that are no longer alive. And they’re very sensitive to being seen, to being perceived. In other words, it’s as if you're walking alone in the endless darkness with a seven-colored electronic billboard on your back.”
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	--Is what I thought, at the time.		--Is what I thought, at the time.

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	During the early days of summer, Senpai remained absent for a few days from school.		During the early days of summer, Senpai remained absent for a few days from school.
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	“Forget what I said, what I did to you, my face, my voice, my scent, everything. Forget it all, and don't come back here again.”		“Forget what I said, what I did to you, my face, my voice, my scent, everything. Forget it all, and don't come back here again.”

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	Soon afterwards… Senpai disappeared.		Soon afterwards… Senpai disappeared.
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	Under the setting sun, I rushed away from the school without looking back.		Under the setting sun, I rushed away from the school without looking back.

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	Under a clear, blue sky—		Under a clear, blue sky—
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	I heard my voice mixed in with the sobs, as if it were someone else’s. In the midst of the blurred and crumbling scene -- Senpai was still smiling gently.		I heard my voice mixed in with the sobs, as if it were someone else’s. In the midst of the blurred and crumbling scene -- Senpai was still smiling gently.

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	“It’s already…. been five years since then.”		“It’s already…. been five years since then.”

Pakkit at 16:25, 29 March 2024

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	Within them were red, white, blue, purple, and countless other colors; Since I was little, I think I distinguished people by the colors that entwined them, rather than their ~~face~~, their clothes or their height. My mother was this color, my friend Chi-chan from kindergarten was this color, this color belonged to the man from the grocery store, that color belonged to the neighborhood kid who would bully me, and so on. I used to think that everyone was like that, and my carefree feelings led me to think that their colors were beautiful, but it wasn't until I was in the first grade of elementary school that I realized that I was the only one who identified people by their colors. I stupidly ended up talking about those lights to my classmate, and they shouted, "Shiina-chan, you're so creepy!" I got so startled that I stopped talking about it after that.		Within them were red, white, blue, purple, and countless other colors; Since I was little, I think I distinguished people by the colors that entwined them, rather than their faces, their clothes or their height. My mother was this color, my friend Chi-chan from kindergarten was this color, this color belonged to the man from the grocery store, that color belonged to the neighborhood kid who would bully me, and so on. I used to think that everyone was like that, and my carefree feelings led me to think that their colors were beautiful, but it wasn't until I was in the first grade of elementary school that I realized that I was the only one who identified people by their colors. I stupidly ended up talking about those lights to my classmate, and they shouted, "Shiina-chan, you're so creepy!" I got so startled that I stopped talking about it after that.

	I asked my parents for advice, and they took me to an ophthalmologist. However, no abnormalities were detected in my eyes. I could see inorganic things with ease. But all living things were accompanied by some kind of light. In junior high school, the aura ended up becoming more and more prominent, and I suffered like a neurotic. I saw a psychiatrist as well, and had a neurosurgical examination. None of the results were abnormal, and none of the doctors could understand my suffering. From that time on, I gradually began to distance myself from my friends, becoming a girl who read books alone in the corner of the classroom. In this world full of light, books alone were my silent companions. They were able to give my heart peace and calmness. Perhaps it was because I continued to read in the dark, which had become such a stronghold of my heart, that my eyesight began to deteriorate. It got to the point where I couldn't even see the words on the chalkboard unless I wore glasses, and I thought that if I did that, I might not have to suffer from the auras of people that only I could see. I didn't want to wear glasses, but I still hoped that my eyesight would just about disappear.		I asked my parents for advice, and they took me to an ophthalmologist. However, no abnormalities were detected in my eyes. I could see inorganic things with ease. But all living things were accompanied by some kind of light. In junior high school, the aura ended up becoming more and more prominent, and I suffered like a neurotic. I saw a psychiatrist as well, and had a neurosurgical examination. None of the results were abnormal, and none of the doctors could understand my suffering. From that time on, I gradually began to distance myself from my friends, becoming a girl who read books alone in the corner of the classroom. In this world full of light, books alone were my silent companions. They were able to give my heart peace and calmness. Perhaps it was because I continued to read in the dark, which had become such a stronghold of my heart, that my eyesight began to deteriorate. It got to the point where I couldn't even see the words on the chalkboard unless I wore glasses, and I thought that if I did that, I might not have to suffer from the auras of people that only I could see. I didn't want to wear glasses, but I still hoped that my eyesight would just about disappear.

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Pakkit at 14:47, 24 April 2023

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Pakkit at 02:12, 23 March 2023

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	--Many people close to Takamura-senpai have died.		--Many people close to Takamura-senpai have died.

	Such a rumor began to be whispered in secret. Of course, it was about Senpai -- the super high school student. There were still many who sympathized with her, and it was a small-scale rumor, so it took a long time for it to reach my ears since I didn’t have a wide circle of friends.		Such a rumor began to be whispered in secret. Of course, it was about Senpai -- the super high school student. There were still many who sympathized with her, and it was a small-scale rumor, so it took a long time for it to reach my ears, since I didn’t have a wide circle of friends.

	And then, on a certain day—		And then, on a certain day—

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Pakkit at 17:00, 2 August 2022

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Pakkit at 17:00, 2 August 2022

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Pakkit at 23:45, 30 September 2021

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	Without showing any mercy, and with glee spun in her words, Yoishi continued.		Without showing any mercy, and with glee spun in her words, Yoishi continued.

	“That of course, includes the person who uttered those words, Ayana Takamura. And right now, everything is going exactly how she wished.”		“That of course, includes the person who uttered those words, Ayana Takamura herself. And right now, everything is going exactly how she wished.”

	Somewhere far away, I heard someone’s laughter.		Somewhere far away, I heard someone’s laughter.

	A laughter filled with delight ~~resounded~~, indicating that everything was going according to their plan.		A laughter filled with delight echoed, indicating that everything was going according to their plan.

	The laughter kept ringing in my ears; I shook my head, as if to drive it away. But the black fog that engulfed my vision grew thicker and thicker.		The laughter kept ringing in my ears; I shook my head, as if to drive it away. But the black fog that engulfed my vision grew thicker and thicker.