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Chapter 1 : Rain, Under House Arrest

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	Today, a meeting of the generals was being held.		Today, a meeting of the generals was being held.

	King Douglas sat in his throne, elevated above the civil servants and military officers spread out before him to the left and the right according to their respective wards.		King Douglas sat on his throne, elevated above the civil servants and military officers spread out before him to the left and the right according to their respective wards.

	A majority of them had blond hair and blue eyes…in other words they were the nobility.		A majority of them had blond hair and blue eyes…in other words they were the nobility.

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	==Chapter 1 : Rain, Under House Arrest==		==Chapter 1 : Rain, Under House Arrest==
	''The main fortress of Sunkwoll, Galfort Castle.''		''The main fortress of Sunkwoll, Galfort Castle.''

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	He glanced to the side at Ralphus, also with his head lowered, and winked, smiling brightly.		He glanced to the side at Ralphus, also with his head lowered, and winked, smiling brightly.

	No way, he hadn’t planned on things turning out this way, had he… It that was the case there was no helping him.		No way, he hadn’t planned on things turning out this way, had he… If that was the case there was no helping him.

	Ralphus could only give a pained smile.		Ralphus could only give a pained smile.
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	“I will show it to you special, because you are a friend of Rain’s.”		“I will show it to you special, because you are a friend of Rain’s.”

	~~This~~ coin I received from Rain, is my treasure.”		“This coin I received from Rain, is my treasure.”

	“It is an honor. It seems to be a very old item, yes? It doesn’t seem to be something of much value though.”		“It is an honor. It seems to be a very old item, yes? It doesn’t seem to be something of much value though.”

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	“Rain! I have bestowed upon you the title of a general even though you come from common blood! I even gave to you land of the highest qual…!”		“Rain! I have bestowed upon you the title of a general even though you come from common blood! I even gave to you land of the highest qual…!”

	In his anger the King ~~chocked~~ on his words. Alternately Rain’s response was light.		In his anger the King choked on his words. Alternately Rain’s response was light.

	“Yeah. I’m pretty thankful for that.”		“Yeah. I’m pretty thankful for that.”

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	I just can’t understand women after all. Ralphus thought to himself.		I just can’t understand women after all. Ralphus thought to himself.



	A faint whistling could be heard, riding on the wind.		A faint whistling could be heard, riding on the wind.
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	Oblivious to Yuri’s contemplations, Rain continued singing his song in a broken bell sort of voice, while riding atop his finely groomed white stallion.		Oblivious to Yuri’s contemplations, Rain continued singing his song in a broken bell sort of voice, while riding atop his finely groomed white stallion.

	He seemed to pay no heed to the fact that he was amidst shops in the very center of the merchants district of the capital city. He was completely ignoring the laughter, directed at him of the people walking along the main road. He might even be famous in a different meaning of the word.		He seemed to pay no heed to the fact that he was amidst shops in the very center of the merchants district of the capital city. He was completely ignoring the laughter, directed at him, of the people walking along the main road. He might even be famous in a different meaning of the word.

	Nevertheless, Yuri had no intention of getting involved with him, even for a fraction of a second.		Nevertheless, Yuri had no intention of getting involved with him, even for a fraction of a second.
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	As she was thinking this, Rain rode past a tavern, turning suddenly down a side street.		As she was thinking this, Rain rode past a tavern, turning suddenly down a side street.

	''Yet again ~~your~~ planning on something like that…!''		''Yet again you're planning on something like that…!''

	Closing the distance, Yuri hurriedly turned the corner after him.		Closing the distance, Yuri hurriedly turned the corner after him.
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	“I, impossible… such speed…”		“I, impossible… such speed…”

	“Of course, after all I am a ~~genius”~~		“Of course, after all I am a genius.”

	Rain said, pushing back his bangs with one hand. He really got on her nerves, but now was not the time for retorts.		Rain said, pushing back his bangs with one hand. He really got on her nerves, but now was not the time for retorts.
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	“H, how….?”		“H, how….?”

	“How did I know? Well you know, I’m just sorta sensitive to people’s presence, so something like tailing could never work, and besides, your movement is nothing like an ordinary ~~girls~~.”		“How did I know? Well you know, I’m just sorta sensitive to people’s presence, so something like tailing could never work, and besides, your movement is nothing like an ordinary girl's.”

	“Uuuu…”		“Uuuu…”
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	“……Excuse me.”		“……Excuse me.”

	“Right! ~~Your~~ in agreement then. Alright, then you’re treating till I drop!”		“Right! You're in agreement then. Alright, then you’re treating till I drop!”

	Yuri took in as much air as she could before she yelled with all her might,		Yuri took in as much air as she could before she yelled with all her might,
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	“……Hah?”		“……Hah?”

	“Like I said, house arrest. You know, the kind ~~were~~ I can’t leave my castle. So I guess it’s castle arrest, haha.”		“Like I said, house arrest. You know, the kind where I can’t leave my castle. So I guess it’s castle arrest, haha.”

	Rain told her, as though enjoying himself.		Rain told her, as though enjoying himself.
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	It must have been a coincidence, but Chris neighed, as though laughing at her.		It must have been a coincidence, but Chris neighed, as though laughing at her.



	Gradually, the scent of trees began mixing in with the chilling air.		Gradually, the scent of trees began mixing in with the chilling air.
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	“B, but…”		“B, but…”

	“Don’t ‘b, but’ me! ~~Sent~~ the groups back into the castle this instant!”		“Don’t ‘b, but’ me! Send the groups back into the castle this instant!”

	“Well, just a moment, General.”		“Well, just a moment, General.”

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	\| Back to [[Rain:Volume_1_Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Back to [[Rain:Volume_1_Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| Return to [[Rain\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Rain\|Main Page]]
	\| Go to [[Rain:Volume_1_Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Forward to [[Rain:Volume_1_Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]]
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	===Chapter 1 : Rain, Under House Arrest===		==Chapter 1 : Rain, Under House Arrest==
	''The main fortress of Sunkwoll, Galfort Castle.''		''The main fortress of Sunkwoll, Galfort Castle.''

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	“W, what?”		“W, what?”

	I am completely disgusted with you. As a Leading General, for you to have not only been put under		“I am completely disgusted with you. As a Leading General, for you to have not only been put under house arrest, but for it to have come because you voiced disagreement with the war!”

	house arrest, but for it to have come because you voiced disagreement with the war!”

	“No, it’s just I have my own plan is all.”		“No, it’s just I have my own plan is all.”