Rain:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	"A, ah......"		"A, ah......"

	Falling deeper into fear, Giles pulled back on the ~~rains~~ hard.		Falling deeper into fear, Giles pulled back on the reins hard.

	His mount, not used to such treatment, bucked, tossing its rider off. "Ahhh!"		His mount, not used to such treatment, bucked, tossing its rider off. "Ahhh!"

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	==Chapter 2: Ralphus’s Battle==		[[Image:Rain_v1_c2.jpg\|thumb]]
			==Chapter 2 : Ralphus’s Battle==
	The drizzle that had been falling since midnight finally lifted around noon. It was a great relief. After all, with winter around the corner, you didn't want the water freezing over.		The drizzle that had been falling since midnight finally lifted around noon. It was a great relief. After all, with winter around the corner, you didn't want the water freezing over.

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Chapter 2: Ralphus’s Battle

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	It would seem they could only wait for the mist to clear.		It would seem they could only wait for the mist to clear.

	''――You've gotten in a blow. But Rain, you can't ~~run~~ if all you do is run. In the end, we will still be the victors.''		''――You've gotten in a blow. But Rain, you can't win if all you do is run. In the end, we will still be the victors.''

	Atop his horse Luminas folded his arms across his chest, waiting for the mist to lift.		Atop his horse Luminas folded his arms across his chest, waiting for the mist to lift.

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	Garblake interrupted Luminas' musings. "Is there anything bothering you?"		Garblake interrupted Luminas' musings. "Is there anything bothering you?"

	"Well...... Nothing much, just that companion of Ralphus, Rain has me a little worried.		"Well...... Nothing much, just that companion of Ralphus, Rain has me a little worried."

	" Luminas explained his concerns.		Luminas explained his concerns.

	"――In other words, it's possible that guy might try something."		"――In other words, it's possible that guy might try something."

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	Just like a sharp blade, the enemy force sliced into Gilles's ranks. Gilles's men were not prepared for such a frontal assault.		Just like a sharp blade, the enemy force sliced into Gilles's ranks. Gilles's men were not prepared for such a frontal assault.

	Apart from knowing they had betrayed their allies, there was an unshakeable fear of Ralphus himself. After all, Ralphus's bravery and feats on the battlefield were highly ~~renown~~ throughout Sunkwoll.		Apart from knowing they had betrayed their allies, there was an unshakeable fear of Ralphus himself. After all, Ralphus's bravery and feats on the battlefield were highly renowned throughout Sunkwoll.

	Giles was no exception. He was a man with a high level of self-confidence, but even so he had never once thought he could defeat Ralphus.		Giles was no exception. He was a man with a high level of self-confidence, but even so he had never once thought he could defeat Ralphus.

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	Gwen laughed deeply, in a manner that caused his throat to vibrate wildly.		Gwen laughed deeply, in a manner that caused his throat to vibrate wildly.

	"Now just hold on one second. This isn't a time to be laughing, Gwen Same goes for you, Nigel I'm begging you, please go back to our homeland. If you leave now, there should still be time."		"Now just hold on one second. This isn't a time to be laughing, Gwen. Same goes for you, Nigel. I'm begging you, please go back to our homeland. If you leave now, there should still be time."

	"Can't we just drop it already, General. The guys that don't want to die are already running away, and the ones following the same fate as the Lord General, won't listen no matter what you say."		"Can't we just drop it already, General. The guys that don't want to die are already running away, and the ones following the same fate as the Lord General, won't listen no matter what you say."

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	"Regrettably, this battle is already decided. I see no reason for us to join the fight at this stage.		"Regrettably, this battle is already decided. I see no reason for us to join the fight at this stage.

	"Silently, the men took in what Ralphus was saying.		Silently, the men took in what Ralphus was saying.

	"As fast as your mounts will carry you, run back to your homes in Sunkwoll! There is no longer any reason for you to heed my commands. Everyone, return to your country!"		"As fast as your mounts will carry you, run back to your homes in Sunkwoll! There is no longer any reason for you to heed my commands. Everyone, return to your country!"

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	Gwen said sarcastically, turning his gaze to his companions. He didn't seem to believe even an inch of that explanation.		Gwen said sarcastically, turning his gaze to his companions. He didn't seem to believe even an inch of that explanation.

	"But he most definitely has something up his sleeve. But you really seem to be doubting him, Gwen Just as he says, that guy really is a genius For some reason, Rain doesn't seem to believe his own words though..."		"But he most definitely has something up his sleeve. But you really seem to be doubting him, Gwen. Just as he says, that guy really is a genius. For some reason, Rain doesn't seem to believe his own words though..."

	"D, don't joke about something like that!"		"D, don't joke about something like that!"

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	"Come on, let's rest over there. I'll go with you!"		"Come on, let's rest over there. I'll go with you!"

	"--Alright, Gwen"		"--Alright, Gwen."

	Giving a strained smile, Ralphus dismounted.		Giving a strained smile, Ralphus dismounted.
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	"I gotta agree with ya there. I've heard we've got about fifteen-thousand strong, but they've got forty to fifty-thousand just in their expedition force, right?"		"I gotta agree with ya there. I've heard we've got about fifteen-thousand strong, but they've got forty to fifty-thousand just in their expedition force, right?"

	"Yeah, according to the official reports that's how things stand. The commander...I believe his name was General Garblake "		"Yeah, according to the official reports that's how things stand. The commander...I believe his name was General Garblake."

	The aide was something like Luminas.		The aide was something like Luminas.
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	"He's someone who calls himself a genius every every ten steps you know?"		"He's someone who calls himself a genius every every ten steps you know?"

	"Gwen, you're exaggerating. Well, not that far off the mark, and the gist of what ~~your~~ saying isn't wrong. It's just, what he says and how he feels is a little different, is all I think."		"Gwen, you're exaggerating. Well, not that far off the mark, and the gist of what you're saying isn't wrong. It's just, what he says and how he feels is a little different, is all I think."

	"He hasn't told you anythin' specific, has he?"		"He hasn't told you anythin' specific, has he?"
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	Seemingly sucked into the nearly forty-thousand strong enemies, it was clear that Sunkwoll's defeat was imminent.		Seemingly sucked into the nearly forty-thousand strong enemies, it was clear that Sunkwoll's defeat was imminent.

	The herd of silver armor was being pushed back, ~~it's~~ numbers continuously dwindling.		The herd of silver armor was being pushed back, its numbers continuously dwindling.

	From what Ralphus could see, it also seemed that the five-thousand that had made up the King's regiment was already completely eliminated, and the one's fighting now were the remaining Generals and some men that had rallied around them. Even so, the remaining were no more than several thousand strong.		From what Ralphus could see, it also seemed that the five-thousand that had made up the King's regiment was already completely eliminated, and the one's fighting now were the remaining Generals and some men that had rallied around them. Even so, the remaining were no more than several thousand strong.
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	Only, there was no way Zarmine would just let them retreat at this point. If they had wanted to, it would already have come to pass.		Only, there was no way Zarmine would just let them retreat at this point. If they had wanted to, it would already have come to pass.

	"I know, Gwen"		"I know, Gwen."

	Calm enough to surprise himself, Ralphus turned to his men and spoke.		Calm enough to surprise himself, Ralphus turned to his men and spoke.
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	"I have decided this will be the place where I die. You need not worry about me, so the rest of you should hurry and return home."		"I have decided this will be the place where I die. You need not worry about me, so the rest of you should hurry and return home."

	Nigel said nothing, and only continued to stare at Ralphus. "What is it, Nigel"		Nigel said nothing, and only continued to stare at Ralphus. "What is it, Nigel?"

	"I can't say. After all you will just tell me to stop. Besides, I understand how you feel."		"I can't say. After all you will just tell me to stop. Besides, I understand how you feel."
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	Ralphus recovered his composure, and pointed to the depths of the great army to where their previous allies stood.		Ralphus recovered his composure, and pointed to the depths of the great army to where their previous allies stood.

	"If we're going to die anyway, we might as well have some revenge on the betrayers."		"If we're going to die anyway, we might as well have some revenge on the betrayers." <!-- "traitors"? -->


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	It's not that he had failed to see Ralphus arrive. It's just, he never thought Ralphus would join in the skirmish.		It's not that he had failed to see Ralphus arrive. It's just, he never thought Ralphus would join in the skirmish.

	When the battle was determined, and all that remained was to eliminate the remaining Sunkwoll forces, be Ralphus or anyone else, there was no way they would charge into the fight. Even if it was to show their allegiance to Sunkwoll, this was the time to retreat and rethink a new strategy.		When the battle was determined, and all that remained was to eliminate the remaining Sunkwoll forces, be it Ralphus or anyone else, there was no way they would charge into the fight. Even if it was to show their allegiance to Sunkwoll, this was the time to retreat and rethink a new strategy.

	――It was a huge miscalculation for Giles, who had lived his life from the viewpoint of a mercenary.		――It was a huge miscalculation for Giles, who had lived his life from the viewpoint of a mercenary.
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	In other words, because of him, one of Rain's trusted men would die.		In other words, because of him, one of Rain's trusted men would die.

	No, the problem wasn't just Gunther Out of all Ralphus's men, not one tried to leave.		No, the problem wasn't just Gunther. Out of all Ralphus's men, not one tried to leave.

	Even though Ralphus didn't want anyone to go down the same path.		Even though Ralphus didn't want anyone to go down the same path.
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	Ralphus's expression showed his confusion. Gunther said in a calm voice,		Ralphus's expression showed his confusion. Gunther said in a calm voice,

	"Rain has asked me to give this message. The problem in a brawl isn't the method. It' who is standing at the end."		"Rain has asked me to give this message. The problem in a brawl isn't the method. It's who is standing at the end."

	"That's all?"		"That's all?"