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	==Chapter 3 : Shelfa, Departure from Galfort Castle==		==Chapter 3 : Shelfa, Departure from Galfort Castle==
	Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.		Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.

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	"Understood..."		"Understood..."

	''Is he really putting so much importance on that man...? ''His disgruntlement caused him to forget his fear of King Leygur for a moment.		''Is he really putting so much importance on that man...?'' His disgruntlement caused him to forget his fear of King Leygur for a moment.

	"You Majesty, certainly Rain has been gifted with talent. But he is only a commoner. Is he really a presence to focus so exclusively on?"		"You Majesty, certainly Rain has been gifted with talent. But he is only a commoner. Is he really a presence to focus so exclusively on?"
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	Yes, that Rain locked himself in his room since returning, and hardly ever came out. When he did, it was only to grab something to eat, or drink some alcohol, which really got on her nerves.		Yes, that Rain locked himself in his room since returning, and hardly ever came out. When he did, it was only to grab something to eat, or drink some alcohol, which really got on her nerves.

	''Now isn't the time for that! ''It's a bit twisted, but Yuri was getting impatient at Rain for not raising his hand against Zarmine already.		''Now isn't the time for that!'' It's a bit twisted, but Yuri was getting impatient at Rain for not raising his hand against Zarmine already.

	It seemed Xenoa thought the same way, and the looks she threw at him grew more agitated every day. It was only a matter of time before she lost it.		It seemed Xenoa thought the same way, and the looks she threw at him grew more agitated every day. It was only a matter of time before she lost it.
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	The problem was with the second half.		The problem was with the second half.

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			''Incidentally, Rain.''

	I have no idea how you came to make acquaintance with the princess, but if this battle should end in a loss, her life will be at risk.		''I have no idea how you came to make acquaintance with the princess, but if this battle should end in a loss, her life will be at risk.''

	Since it seems you two are close, I want you to lend your strength to protect the Princess for me.		''Since it seems you two are close, I want you to lend your strength to protect the Princess for me.''

	One more thing......I have no intention of saying anything about your relationship, but think of your position and age, and don't do anything rash (you know what I mean). Okay?		''One more thing......I have no intention of saying anything about your relationship, but think of your position and age, and don't do anything rash (you know what I mean). Okay?''

	That's all.		''That's all.''

	"What do mean 'that's all'?"		"What do mean 'that's all'?"
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	Yuri opened her mouth wide as she spoke.		Yuri opened her mouth wide as she spoke.

	''Guess so...''		''Guess so...'' Rain seemed to say with his chest puffed out wickedly. At that moment...

	~~Rain seemed~~ to ~~say with his chest puffed out wickedly. At that moment..~~.		Near the center of the room light started to flicker, beginning to take on a form.

	~~Near the center of the room light started to flicker, beginning to take on a form.~~ "Magic Vision?" Yuri asked.		"Magic Vision?" Yuri asked.

	Rain didn't get a chance to respond as the light solidified, taking the shape of a man with sharp eyes.		Rain didn't get a chance to respond as the light solidified, taking the shape of a man with sharp eyes.
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	"Rain......why are you here?"		"Rain......why are you here?"

	"Right. I'm a centurion. In the last battle I did a few things and would you believe it, little one? In return I get invited to a ball. Jeez, if they're going to do all that, they might as well raise my status a little, right? I can't go along with them."		"Right. I'm a centurion. In the last battle I did a few things and would you believe it, little one? In return I get invited to a ball. Jeez, if they're going to do all that, they might as well raise my status a little, right? I can't go along with them."

	"Oh, so then you slipped out and ended up coming here?"		"Oh, so then you slipped out and ended up coming here?"

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	☆――☆――☆		☆――☆――☆

	It was hard to believe three years had already passed since then. She could still remember it as though it were only yesterday. This same place, that day.		It was hard to believe three years had already passed since then.

			She could still remember it as though it were only yesterday.

			This same place, that day.

	At noon they ate the bread Rain had brought with him, and he stayed with her until evening.		At noon they ate the bread Rain had brought with him, and he stayed with her until evening.
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	Looking at Rain's sunny smile, with only him occasionally gently rubbing her head, there was nothing else she could wish for.		Looking at Rain's sunny smile, with only him occasionally gently rubbing her head, there was nothing else she could wish for.

	Whenever she would jump, those black eyes always watched over her deeply and intently. When she would fall over from playing, that large, warm hand held out to her.		Whenever she would jump, those black eyes always watched over her deeply and intently.

			When she would fall over from playing, that large, warm hand held out to her.

	Shelfa wished this time could continue forever.		Shelfa wished this time could continue forever.
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	Those words caused Shelfa to stand as still as ice.		Those words caused Shelfa to stand as still as ice.

	From tomorrow she would be alone again......that truth pushed cruelly at her heart. But that wasn't all. Shelfa had come to realize it.		From tomorrow she would be alone again......that truth pushed cruelly at her heart.

			But that wasn't all. Shelfa had come to realize it.

	That she had fallen in love with Rain.		That she had fallen in love with Rain.
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	She would need to pack clothes that would make movement easy.......with the exception of an outfit for her reunion with Rain.		She would need to pack clothes that would make movement easy.......with the exception of an outfit for her reunion with Rain.


	Returning to her private chambers, she prepared the basics before hurrying out into the corridor.		Returning to her private chambers, she prepared the basics before hurrying out into the corridor.
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	The two girls pressed close together exchanged a look.		The two girls pressed close together exchanged a look.

	Holding onto each other so, Liera's quivering passed on to Shelfa. Trying to comfort her, Shelfa gently patted her back.		Holding onto each other so, Liera's quivering passed on to Shelfa.

			Trying to comfort her, Shelfa gently patted her back.

	In reality, it was she who was frightened. But right now, she was determined.		In reality, it was she who was frightened. But right now, she was determined.
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	Just as Rain had done for her long ago, Shelfa extended her hand.		Just as Rain had done for her long ago, Shelfa extended her hand.


	A little while later, two soldiers guarding the gate saw Princess Shelfa.		A little while later, two soldiers guarding the gate saw Princess Shelfa.

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	===Chapter 3 : Shelfa, Departure from Galfort Castle===		==Chapter 3 : Shelfa, Departure from Galfort Castle==
	Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.		Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.

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	Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.		Because Zarmine's capital Riagull was located at an important center for a vast conjointment of highways that diverged all over the continent, it was a lively city with merchants always coming and going.

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	''I can't understand''....Yuri shook her head softly.		''I can't understand''....Yuri shook her head softly.

	No matter what Leni says, in this world there is always someone stronger. She, who had been in Zarmine had seen with her own ~~very~~ eyes those with impossible strength. Still vivid in her memory was the image of the long, silver-haired King.		No matter what Leni says, in this world there is always someone stronger. She, who had been in Zarmine had seen with her very own eyes those with impossible strength. Still vivid in her memory was the image of the long, silver-haired King.

	An uncountable number of criminals lined up at the execution grounds, and King Leygur who stood before them all.		An uncountable number of criminals lined up at the execution grounds, and King Leygur who stood before them all.
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	"Dunno."		"Dunno."

	Leni tilted his head sideways. He didn't have any bad intentions, but his face which said 'How should I know,' only served to make ~~upset~~ Yuri even more.		Leni tilted his head sideways. He didn't have any bad intentions, but his face which said 'How should I know,' only served to make Yuri even more upset.

	"According to the General, Chris is his companion, and what's more, a Pegasus, so it would be rude to tie her up. But, I wonder if a Pegasus really exists."		"According to the General, Chris is his companion, and what's more, a Pegasus, so it would be rude to tie her up. But, I wonder if a Pegasus really exists."
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	Yuri completely ignored the comment.		Yuri completely ignored the comment.



	At that moment, in the highest part of the castle, Rain was resting on the bed in his room. There was nothing special about the inside of his bedroom, and for the room belonging to the lord of the castle, it was quite modest. the bed was just average, nothing like the great four-posters with an awning the nobles favored so much.		At that moment, in the highest part of the castle, Rain was resting on the bed in his room. There was nothing special about the inside of his bedroom, and for the room belonging to the lord of the castle, it was quite modest. the bed was just average, nothing like the great four-posters with an awning the nobles favored so much.
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	"That time, I can't even begin to describe how much you looked after me."		"That time, I can't even begin to describe how much you looked after me."

	What a good-natured. guy.		What a good-natured guy.

	Thanks to that, it puts me through a lot of trouble.		Thanks to that, it puts me through a lot of trouble.
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	If he hadn't interrupted, this abuse seemed like it would continue for a while.		If he hadn't interrupted, this abuse seemed like it would continue for a while.

	"I'm in the middle of contemplating on extremely important issues right now! I've no time to play with you! If ~~your~~ going to come to me, make it when there is a matter of utter importance, or when you're wearing lace underwear!"		"I'm in the middle of contemplating on extremely important issues right now! I've no time to play with you! If you're going to come to me, make it when there is a matter of utter importance, or when you're wearing lace underwear!"

	"What'd you say――don't go to sleep!"		"What'd you say――don't go to sleep!"
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	Ready to fall back onto the sheets, Rain instead lifted his head and got up reluctantly.		Ready to fall back onto the sheets, Rain instead lifted his head and got up reluctantly.

	He sat on the side of his bed, and looked Yuri, standing aggressively.		He sat on the side of his bed, and looked at Yuri, standing aggressively.

	"Okay, so what is it. By the way, I knew from your presence, but what were you doing eavesdropping outside someone's room."		"Okay, so what is it. By the way, I knew from your presence, but what were you doing eavesdropping outside someone's room."
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	Yuri took a deep breath, blinking her light green eyes. With an unreadable expression, she looked back at Rain. He thought he could detect her pulse.		Yuri took a deep breath, blinking her light green eyes. With an unreadable expression, she looked back at Rain. He thought he could detect her pulse.

	"You're doing this for a living, even though you don't want to, right? This country is hard on its commoners after all. But if the reward is good enough, there's no reason for you to be on the enemies side, right?"		"You're doing this for a living, even though you don't want to, right? This country is hard on its commoners after all. But if the reward is good enough, there's no reason for you to be on the enemies' side, right?"

	"That's......I suppose so. It's not like I feel good about it all."		"That's......I suppose so. It's not like I feel good about it all."
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	"I only just turned thirteen."		"I only just turned thirteen."

	"I see, I see. It must be fate that we've met here. Let's get along, right little one?"		"I see, I see. It must be fate that we've met here. Let's get along, right, little one?"

	"Yes. Uhm...I agree."		"Yes. Uhm...I agree."
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	"What do you mean, 'you can eat with your pictures'...?"		"What do you mean, 'you can eat with your pictures'...?"

	"It means you can make a living. More importantly, have we met somewhere before? I don' think I could forget a face like yours though...?"		"It means you can make a living. More importantly, have we met somewhere before? I don't think I could forget a face like yours though...?"

	"Today is the first time we have met, Rain."		"Today is the first time we have met, Rain."
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	It was how she really felt.		It was how she really felt.

	She knew how her father only saw her as a tool for his convenience. When she is a little older she ~~would~~ become wife to a prince of some other country, just a tool.		She knew how her father only saw her as a tool for his convenience. When she is a little older she will become wife to a prince of some other country, just a tool.

	Nothing more. That was the reason she couldn't do as she pleased.		Nothing more. That was the reason she couldn't do as she pleased.
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	Shelfa looked at the coin admiringly. It wasn't as though magic had completely disappeared, but the current state couldn't even be compared with the that of the past.		Shelfa looked at the coin admiringly. It wasn't as though magic had completely disappeared, but the current state couldn't even be compared with the that of the past.

	It was very rare to come across any weapons imbued with semi-permanent magic, and even if there was one ~~it's~~ price would be astronomical.		It was very rare to come across any weapons imbued with semi-permanent magic, and even if there was one its price would be astronomical.

	"When I was traveling to the north of the continent, I found this in some ancient ruins.......It's true! I only have two but, I'll give this one to you."		"When I was traveling to the north of the continent, I found this in some ancient ruins.......It's true! I only have two but, I'll give this one to you."

	Putting great emphasis behind his words, Rain brought his hands around Shelfa's thin neck, and ~~attaching~~ the necklace for her.		Putting great emphasis behind his words, Rain brought his hands around Shelfa's thin neck, and attached the necklace for her.

	Finishing, Rain rested both his hands on her shoulders and peered into her eyes.		Finishing, Rain rested both his hands on her shoulders and peered into her eyes.
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	"I'll be leaving soon, little one. I will definitely keep my promise."		"I'll be leaving soon, little one. I will definitely keep my promise."

	"Those last words were unnecessary. After all, I trust in you, Rain. Today five years from now, I will be waiting here for you."		"Those last words were unnecessary. After all, I trust in you, Rain. Today, five years from now, I will be waiting here for you."

	Forcing herself to smile, Shelfa looked up at Rain.		Forcing herself to smile, Shelfa looked up at Rain.