Rakuin no Monshou:Volume12 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	Meanwhile, Orba’s body was still lying in the grass on the ground. Pashir was kneeling beside him and the Mephian soldiers formed a circle around them.		Meanwhile, Orba’s body was still lying in the grass on the ground. Pashir was kneeling beside him and the Mephian soldiers formed a circle around them.

	The Dairan soldiers had, by then, already found what was apparently the ~~snipper~~ who had taken aim at the prince. However, he had already died. He had apparently fired a desperate shot just before his flame of life had burned out. The bullet had missed however, immediately afterwards, there had been another soldier who had attempted to cut down the crown prince, but Gil had dealt with him himself.		The Dairan soldiers had, by then, already found what was apparently the sniper who had taken aim at the prince. However, he had already died. He had apparently fired a desperate shot just before his flame of life had burned out. The bullet had missed however, immediately afterwards, there had been another soldier who had attempted to cut down the crown prince, but Gil had dealt with him himself.

	On Kayness’ orders, they had thoroughly searched the surroundings to check that there were no other enemies lying hidden.		On Kayness’ orders, they had thoroughly searched the surroundings to check that there were no other enemies lying hidden.
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	It was not yet dawn.		It was not yet dawn.


	=== Part 2 ===		=== Part 2 ===

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	The next second, a spray of fresh blood drenched the surroundings and the dragons who were hit by it, driven to crave more flesh, and more blood, rushed to attack the Mephian soldiers…		The next second, a spray of fresh blood drenched the surroundings and the dragons who were hit by it, driven to crave more flesh, and more blood, rushed to attack the Mephian soldiers…

	– was what supposed to happen.		– was what was supposed to happen.

	In that instant, however, it was Tahī herself who was struck hard and staggered back.		In that instant, however, it was Tahī herself who was struck hard and staggered back.

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	The next second, a spray of fresh blood drenched the surroundings and the dragons who were hit by it, driven to crave more flesh, and more blood, rushed to attack the Mephian soldiers…		The next second, a spray of fresh blood drenched the surroundings and the dragons who were hit by it, driven to crave more flesh, and more blood, rushed to attack the Mephian soldiers…

	– was what ~~was~~ supposed to happen.		– was what supposed to happen.

	In that instant, however, it was Tahī herself who was struck hard and staggered back.		In that instant, however, it was Tahī herself who was struck hard and staggered back.

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	Orba could do nothing to stop them.		Orba could do nothing to stop them.

	~~It felt as though the sorcerer who had crawled inside him was groping through his memories and letting them all out.~~

	It felt as though the sorcerer who had crawled inside him was groping through his memories and letting them all out.		It felt as though the sorcerer who had crawled inside him was groping through his memories and letting them all out.

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