Rakuin no Monshou:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

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	Romus quickly tossed the meat. However, it landed directly in front of the cage. Romus approached no further, trying his best in an attempt to kick it in.		Romus quickly tossed the meat. However, it landed directly in front of the cage. Romus approached no further, trying his best in an attempt to kick it in.

	Gawrr, the dragon roared, as it violently rammed its head against the cage. ~~Romus~~ fell backwards and frantically tried to scurry away. The Baian stuck its long tongue through the gap and slipped the food into its mouth.		Gawrr, the dragon roared, as it violently rammed its head against the cage. Baton fell backwards and frantically tried to scurry away. The Baian stuck its long tongue through the gap and slipped the food into its mouth.

	"You...!"		"You...!"

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	Romus quickly tossed the meat. However, it landed directly in front of the cage. Romus approached no further, trying his best in an attempt to kick it in.		Romus quickly tossed the meat. However, it landed directly in front of the cage. Romus approached no further, trying his best in an attempt to kick it in.

	Gawrr, the dragon roared, as it violently rammed its head against the cage. ~~Baton~~ fell backwards and frantically tried to scurry away. The Baian stuck its long tongue through the gap and slipped the food into its mouth.		Gawrr, the dragon roared, as it violently rammed its head against the cage. Romus fell backwards and frantically tried to scurry away. The Baian stuck its long tongue through the gap and slipped the food into its mouth.

	"You...!"		"You...!"

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	When the battle at Zaim Fortress had ended, Fedom accidentally let slip that no one else knew of the fact the prince had been substituted for a body double. On that account, Fedom might be the only one involved in this plan he set up. If that were to be true, even Orba—who was beside death's door during his two years as a sword-slave—couldn't possibly have shaken off that overwhelmingly chilling sensation..		When the battle at Zaim Fortress had ended, Fedom accidentally let slip that no one else knew of the fact the prince had been substituted for a body double. On that account, Fedom might be the only one involved in this plan he set up. If that were to be true, even Orba—who was beside death's door during his two years as a sword-slave—couldn't possibly have shaken off that overwhelmingly chilling sensation..

	No one else knowing would imply that Fedom was deceiving all of the Mephians, himself excluded. Orba also, under no condition, could allow himself to rest. This was a matter his life ~~hanged~~ on.		No one else knowing would imply that Fedom was deceiving all of the Mephians, himself excluded. Orba also, under no condition, could allow himself to rest. This was a matter his life counted on.

	"Mephius' founding festival is approaching. It is a festival that gathers the whole country together. If you do not make an appearance here, things will take a bad turn. Just how long will Fedom-sama..."		"Mephius' founding festival is approaching. It is a festival that gathers the whole country together. If you do not make an appearance here, things will take a bad turn. Just how long will Fedom-sama..."

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	"Because Fedom-sama is not aware of the current situation here, he's convinced that he settled everything with the words ‘Refuse the meetings,’ but he really needs to put himself in the shoes of the one refusing. Everyone had finally started to see the prince in a new light after his first campaign, and now this happens," Dinn grumbled his complaints, but suddenly faltered.		"Because Fedom-sama is not aware of the current situation here, he's convinced that he settled everything with the words ‘Refuse the meetings,’ but he really needs to put himself in the shoes of the one refusing. Everyone had finally started to see the prince in a new light after his first campaign, and now this happens," Dinn grumbled his complaints, but suddenly faltered.

	"Are you a ''fool''?" Orba interrupted. "If I'm still struck with horror from my first campaign they’ll wonder what that heroic prince was doing when the battle took place, and then they’ll find he didn’t abide by the decree to go into battle, only to be shaking in his boots."		"Are you a ''fool''?" Orba interrupted. "If I'm still struck with horror from my first campaign, they’ll wonder what that heroic prince was doing when the battle took place, and then they’ll find he didn’t abide by the decree to go into battle, only to be shaking in his boots."

	"W-Would you like to go for a stroll?"		"W-Would you like to go for a stroll?"

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	Naturally, within that month, Orba built up his knowledge, and mastered manners. He was forced to endlessly repeat these activities. Unable to search for his mother, brother, and Alice's whereabouts, he spent his time on meaningless extravagance that only served to test his patience to its limits.		Naturally, within that month, Orba built up his knowledge, and mastered manners. He was forced to endlessly repeat these activities. Unable to search for his mother, brother, and Alice's whereabouts, he spent his time on meaningless extravagance that only served to test his patience to its limits.

	"Because Fedom-sama is not aware of the current situation here, he's convinced that he settled everything with the words ~~"Refuse~~ the meetings," but he really needs to put himself in the shoes of the one refusing. Everyone had finally started to see the prince in a new light after his first campaign, and now this happens," Dinn grumbled his complaints, but suddenly faltered.		"Because Fedom-sama is not aware of the current situation here, he's convinced that he settled everything with the words ‘Refuse the meetings,’ but he really needs to put himself in the shoes of the one refusing. Everyone had finally started to see the prince in a new light after his first campaign, and now this happens," Dinn grumbled his complaints, but suddenly faltered.

	"Are you a ''fool''?" Orba interrupted. "If I'm still struck with horror from my first campaign. they’ll wonder what that heroic prince was doing when the battle took place, and then they’ll find he didn’t abide by the decree to go into battle, only to be shaking in his boots."		"Are you a ''fool''?" Orba interrupted. "If I'm still struck with horror from my first campaign they’ll wonder what that heroic prince was doing when the battle took place, and then they’ll find he didn’t abide by the decree to go into battle, only to be shaking in his boots."

	"W-Would you like to go for a stroll?"		"W-Would you like to go for a stroll?"

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	''That damned Zaat, curses! Making a face as if he knows everything. He plans to test me, eh?''		''That damned Zaat, curses! Making a face as if he knows everything. He plans to test me, eh?''

	To start with, Fedom never held any good will towards Zaat. There were plenty of competent intellectuals around, but for Fedom's knowledge alone, many a powerful men had clearly come to him for favours. In the case of the peace talks, after unfastening a historical document, "That country's precedent was so and so", "According to former traditions, this and that should be done," he one by one brought out old information that left the others rather dumbfounded.		To start with, Fedom never held any good will towards Zaat. There were plenty of competent intellectuals around, but for Fedom's knowledge alone, many of powerful men had clearly come to him for favours. In the case of the peace talks, after unfastening a historical document, "That country's precedent was so and so", "According to former traditions, this and that should be done," he one by one brought out old information that left the others rather dumbfounded.

	''To be treated as a coward of all things!''		''To be treated as a coward of all things!''
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	Theresia immediately began selecting clothes that would charm the impotent soon-to-be husband.		Theresia immediately began selecting clothes that would charm the impotent soon-to-be husband.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===
	"What do you think of His Highness Gil?"		"What do you think of His Highness Gil?"

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	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===
	Upon finding that Kaiser had been imprisoned, Fedom Aulin jumped up. Kaiser Islan was a noble who once served as a member of the Imperial council.		Upon finding that Kaiser had been imprisoned, Fedom Aulin jumped up. Kaiser Islan was a noble who once served as a member of the Imperial council.

	One week earlier. In a morning council, Mephius' emperor, Guhl Mephius, proposed the relocation of the Dragon God shrine accompanied by a large-scale reconstruction. The shrine, built 200 years ago to worship the Dragon God, ~~would be placed~~ in the basement under the imperial capital Solon's renowned Black Tower. It would be moved towards to the vicinity of the palace, and made into a marvellous structure.		One week earlier. In a morning council, Mephius' emperor, Guhl Mephius, proposed the relocation of the Dragon God shrine accompanied by a large-scale reconstruction. The shrine, built 200 years ago to worship the Dragon God, has always been in the basement under the imperial capital Solon's renowned Black Tower. It would now be moved towards the vicinity of the palace, and made into a marvellous structure.

	Of the sudden comments, some of the nobles graciously offered flattery, but Kaiser alone had directly expressed his feelings of opposition. The amount of gold and people required made it far from precedent. Now was the time to fix the relations between Mephius, Garbera, and Ende, though of course, the circumstances weren't ones that provided for the highest of prospects. To start with, in the festivals dedicated to the Dragon God that were already held several times a year, practically none of the people even showed up; in other words it had become a thing of the past.		Of the sudden comments, some of the nobles graciously offered flattery, but Kaiser alone had directly expressed his feelings of opposition. The amount of gold and people required made it far from precedent. Now was the time to fix the relations between Mephius, Garbera, and Ende, though of course, the circumstances weren't ones that provided for the highest of prospects. To start with, in the festivals dedicated to the Dragon God that were already held several times a year, practically none of the people even showed up; in other words it had become a thing of the past.

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	"W-what are you going to do? If it's money you really want, I'll be sure to later..."		"W-what are you going to do? If it's money you really want, I'll be sure to later..."

	"We don't need your loose change, ~~Cadmus~~ boy. With this many hostages, they wouldn't mind if we demanded even more money, right?"		"We don't need your loose change, Cadmos boy. With this many hostages, they wouldn't mind if we demanded even more money, right?"

	Ineli once again gave another shrill scream; one of the thugs had laid his hands on her dress.		Ineli once again gave another shrill scream; one of the thugs had laid his hands on her dress.
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	There was no doubt Vileena would once again become a threat in Orba's continued battle to fake his current position. Of course, because this was Orba, he had failed to notice even the slightest that Vileena Owell's dress was more daring than usual.		There was no doubt Vileena would once again become a threat in Orba's continued battle to fake his current position. Of course, because this was Orba, he had failed to notice even the slightest that Vileena Owell's dress was more daring than usual.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	"What do you mean?" Ineli tilted her head.		"What do you mean?" Ineli tilted her head.

	"You already know what I'm talking about," the one speaking said with a pout. He was Baton ~~Cadmus~~.		"You already know what I'm talking about," the one speaking said with a pout. He was Baton Cadmos.

	"Even now I still can't believe it. For ''that'' crown prince Gil to achieve merits on his first campaign."		"Even now I still can't believe it. For ''that'' crown prince Gil to achieve merits on his first campaign."

	Saddled on their horses on the top of a hill, the youths waiting for Prince Gil neared their twenties and were all sons coming from families of distinguished nobles. Even though this was true, none of them held the right of the eldest son to succeed their family. Baton too, was the third son of the ~~Cadmus~~ House and had already turned 19, but spent everyday roaming about doing nothing.		Saddled on their horses on the top of a hill, the youths waiting for Prince Gil neared their twenties and were all sons coming from families of distinguished nobles. Even though this was true, none of them held the right of the eldest son to succeed their family. Baton too, was the third son of the Cadmos House and had already turned 19, but spent everyday roaming about doing nothing.

	The boys nodded in unison.		The boys nodded in unison.
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	"It'll be fine. No one's going to get hurt. I just want to see how things play out. Will that prince who bravely took part in the battlefield maintain his composure or not when entangled with your neighbourhood thug."		"It'll be fine. No one's going to get hurt. I just want to see how things play out. Will that prince who bravely took part in the battlefield maintain his composure or not when entangled with your neighbourhood thug."

	"I guess," Ineli purposely opened her mouth in the shape of a zero.<ref>You could also think 本当 in Japanese or the word "whole"</ref> "Really, you have such a ''great'' personality, ~~Cadmus-sama~~!"		"I guess," Ineli purposely opened her mouth in the shape of a zero.<ref>You could also think 本当 in Japanese or the word "whole"</ref> "Really, you have such a ''great'' personality, Lord Cadmos!"

	"Shh! Here they come."		"Shh! Here they come."
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	"That won't do. If the prince had not received an invitation, then even we wouldn't be forced to meet with that boorish Rogue," The one who elatedly stuck out his tongue was Troa Hergei. The young boy stuck his head out from under the mounted horse, leaving it as something to be pitied.		"That won't do. If the prince had not received an invitation, then even we wouldn't be forced to meet with that boorish Rogue," The one who elatedly stuck out his tongue was Troa Hergei. The young boy stuck his head out from under the mounted horse, leaving it as something to be pitied.

	In a bored tone, Baton ~~Cadmus~~ began, "What? Rogue's place again?		In a bored tone, Baton Cadmos began, "What? Rogue's place again?

	"That's right. Have you always had such a close relationship with him?"		"That's right. Have you always had such a close relationship with him?"
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	"Well isn't this a sight for sore eyes."		"Well isn't this a sight for sore eyes."

	The joke came as Baton ~~Cadmus~~ revealed himself. Romus, ashamed of his crying, quickly stood up and wiped his eyes. Baton approached in long strides and stopped in front of Hou Ran.		The joke came as Baton Cadmos revealed himself. Romus, ashamed of his crying, quickly stood up and wiped his eyes. Baton approached in long strides and stopped in front of Hou Ran.

	"You say you were in an all-male slave detention camp? Just what were you doing there? Did you help the men relieve them of their boredom?"		"You say you were in an all-male slave detention camp? Just what were you doing there? Did you help the men relieve them of their boredom?"

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	"Prince."		"Prince."

	The one who leaned his body forward was Gowen. He poured tea into Orba's now empty cup. His ~~eyes~~ eyes stared into Orba’s, urging him not to be so emotional. Orba drew back his chin and gave a nod.		The one who leaned his body forward was Gowen. He poured tea into Orba's now empty cup. His eyes stared into Orba’s, urging him not to be so emotional. Orba drew back his chin and gave a nod.

	Turning to face Ineli, "You will soon," he said hoping to smooth things out.		Turning to face Ineli, "You will soon," he said hoping to smooth things out.
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	"But assuming you do meet him, he's really not an interesting person. He also has no proper etiquette. All he'll do is leave you with an unpleasant experience."		"But assuming you do meet him, he's really not an interesting person. He also has no proper etiquette. All he'll do is leave you with an unpleasant experience."

	"Well, that's acceptable. I'm rather lenient with that. I don't expect the different people of this world to adopt a similar behaviour. You can't chat in the same language with your dragon after years of tending to its needs, can you?”		"Well, that's acceptable; I'm rather lenient with that. I don't expect the different people of this world to adopt a similar behaviour. You can't chat in the same language with your dragon after years of tending to its needs, can you?”

	Orba made an effort to prevent his feelings of discomfort from showing on his face. The incident with Hou Ran suddenly weighed on his mind. He thought it was about time the girl who told him of the dragon’s ‘voice’ suddenly intruded into their conversation, but she was no where to be found.		Orba made an effort to prevent his feelings of discomfort from showing on his face. The incident with Hou Ran suddenly weighed on his mind. He thought it was about time the girl who told him of the dragon’s ‘voice’ suddenly intruded into their conversation, but she was no where to be found.
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	"Really."		"Really."

	"A woman like you that stinks of dragon dung once in a while isn't bad at all. Even if you're a part of the Imperial Guards, you must be bored, right? You should work in my mansion. I'll make it a ''good'' experience. Way better than those crude sword slaves or uselessly large dragons could ever give you."		"A woman like you that stinks of dragon dung once in a while isn't bad at all. Even if you're a part of the Imperial Guards, you must be bored, right? You should work in my mansion. I'll make it a 'good' experience. Way better than those crude sword slaves or uselessly large dragons could ever give you."

	Hou Ran was about to say something, when she suddenly glanced over. Leaning against the wall over Baton's shoulders was Orba, staring straight at her. In response, Ran faced the young noble, her lips creviced to reveal a stunning smile.		Hou Ran was about to say something, when she suddenly glanced over. Leaning against the wall over Baton's shoulders was Orba, staring straight at her. In response, Ran faced the young noble, her lips creviced to reveal a stunning smile.
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	It was exactly as she said, but Orba never imagined it would make her this mad. In a way, he understood less about a girl's feelings than of the dragons' 'voice'.		It was exactly as she said, but Orba never imagined it would make her this mad. In a way, he understood less about a girl's feelings than of the dragons' 'voice'.

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===
	Dinn used the time while the prince had gone out to thoroughly clean up the room. Doing so alone would have been too heavy a labour, so he spoke with the grand chamberlain and acquired help from several others. It wasn't unusual for several people to be tasked to look after a member of the imperial family. The one who arranged for Dinn alone to be entrusted with the duty was none other than Fedom, for fear that Orba's true colours would be brought to light. The official reason was because the hot-tempered prince could trust no other chamberlain except Dinn.		Dinn used the time while the prince had gone out to thoroughly clean up the room. Doing so alone would have been too heavy a labour, so he spoke with the grand chamberlain and acquired help from several others. It wasn't unusual for several people to be tasked to look after a member of the imperial family. The one who arranged for Dinn alone to be entrusted with the duty was none other than Fedom, for fear that Orba's true colours would be brought to light. The official reason was because the hot-tempered prince could trust no other chamberlain except Dinn.