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	The bell on the Black Tower rang, signalling daybreak. It announced the beginning of Mephius’ founding anniversary. Since last night, stands and stalls had been busily readied, and their abundant variety of banners and signs coloured the town. A single step into the streets was enough to be wrapped in the savoury aroma of grilled meat and fish, and the sweet, fragrant smell of cake and candy. Casks of wine were served all throughout town, and glasses were raised in toast early as the rising sun. The children tightly grasped the spending money their parents had handed them for this once in a year event and ran about through town, troubled as to how to spend their money, and the girls, having dressed up for this very day, walked through the streets while spreading their gorgeous smiles.		The bell on the Black Tower rang, signalling daybreak. It announced the beginning of Mephius’ founding anniversary. Since last night, stands and stalls had been busily readied, and their abundant variety of banners and signs coloured the town. A single step into the streets was enough to be wrapped in the savoury aroma of grilled meat and fish, and the sweet, fragrant smell of cake and candy. Casks of wine were served all throughout town, and glasses were raised in toast early as the rising sun. The children tightly grasped the spending money their parents had handed them for this once in a year event and ran about through town, troubled as to how to spend their money, and the girls, having dressed up for this very day, walked through the streets while spreading their gorgeous smiles.

	The ten-year war with Garbera had come to an end. Unlike the miserly atmosphere that visited the festival until the most recent years, this year held a wealthy assortment of international programmes. Travellers from abroad were also seen in great numbers. Portraits of the soon-to-be bride, the Garberan princess Vileena, were decorated with garlands. giving off a peaceful atmosphere.		The ten-year war with Garbera had come to an end. Unlike the miserly atmosphere that visited the festival until the most recent years, this year held a wealthy assortment of international programmes. Travellers from abroad were also seen in great numbers. Portraits of the soon-to-be bride, the Garberan princess Vileena, were decorated with garlands, giving off a peaceful atmosphere.

	At noon, an extensive military parade began. The soldiers, clad in armour decorated with precious stones and flowers, marched heroically as they hoisted their glimmering swords and spears up high. Leading them was the man who had taken the seat of the hero Clovis the previous year. The man, saddled on a white horse and proudly wearing a golden helmet, was a gladiator that did not hold the title of a slave<ref>Person that freely becomes a gladiator, as opposed to sword-slaves who are forced to become gladiators(e.g. for committing a crime)</ref>. He had participated in the deadly arena only to ward off starvation for his family, but through last year’s championship had been officially employed as a Mephius soldier and currently worked as a corporal directly under Odyne Lorgo.		At noon, an extensive military parade began. The soldiers, clad in armour decorated with precious stones and flowers, marched heroically as they hoisted their glimmering swords and spears up high. Leading them was the man who had taken the seat of the hero Clovis the previous year. The man, saddled on a white horse and proudly wearing a golden helmet, was a gladiator that did not hold the title of a slave<ref>Person that freely becomes a gladiator, as opposed to sword-slaves who are forced to become gladiators(e.g. for committing a crime)</ref>. He had participated in the deadly arena only to ward off starvation for his family, but through last year’s championship had been officially employed as a Mephius soldier and currently worked as a corporal directly under Odyne Lorgo.
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	Orba immediately ordered Dinn to relay a message to the Imperial Guards’ living quarters. Several minutes later, his own personal guards lined up in the room. All of them were his acquaintances, but donning his guise as Prince Gil, he handed down his orders.		Orba immediately ordered Dinn to relay a message to the Imperial Guards’ living quarters. Several minutes later, his own personal guards lined up in the room. All of them were his acquaintances, but donning his guise as Prince Gil, he handed down his orders.
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	Orba immediately ordered Dinn to relay a message to the Imperial Guards’ living quarters. Several minutes later, his own personal guards lined up in the room. All of them were his acquaintances, but donning his guise as Prince Gil, he handed down his orders.		Orba immediately ordered Dinn to relay a message to the Imperial Guards’ living quarters. Several minutes later, his own personal guards lined up in the room. All of them were his acquaintances, but donning his guise as Prince Gil, he handed down his orders.
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	Orba stared fixedly at Noue’s eyes. He was truly fit to be a civil servant, and did not look to be one who would personally wield a sword. With these thoughts, Orba’s interest in him faded.		Orba stared fixedly at Noue’s eyes. He was truly fit to be a civil servant, and did not look to be one who would personally wield a sword. With these thoughts, Orba’s interest in him faded.

	More noteworthy was the gift Garbera presented to the prince, consisting of three of Garbera’s airships, that caught his interest. He was already in the middle of organizing an airship squadron from the few capable in the Imperial Guards. The airship itself had fighting potential, but above all, held great value in being used as a messenger in a battlefield. He gratefully welcomed the gift, which he had hoped to get his hands as soon as possible.		More noteworthy was the gift Garbera presented to the prince, consisting of three of Garbera’s airships, that caught his interest. He was already in the middle of organizing an airship squadron from the few capable in the Imperial Guards. The airship itself had fighting potential, but above all, held great value in being used as a messenger in a battlefield. He gratefully welcomed the gift, which he had hoped to get his hands on as soon as possible.

	After that, Noue also expressed his salutations toward Princess Vileena. They were acquainted. The Salzantes House was one of Garbera’s distinguished families. Moreover, Noue was recognized for his wisdom.		After that, Noue also expressed his salutations toward Princess Vileena. They were acquainted. The Salzantes House was one of Garbera’s distinguished families. Moreover, Noue was recognized for his wisdom.

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	The ten-year war with Garbera had also come to an end. Unlike the miserly atmosphere that welcomed the festival up to the past year, this year held a wealthy assortment of international programmes, and travellers from foreign countries were also seen in great numbers. Portraits of upcoming betrothal of the Garberan Princess Vileena to Mephius and garlands decorated the town, producing a peaceful atmosphere.		The ten-year war with Garbera had also come to an end. Unlike the miserly atmosphere that welcomed the festival up to the past year, this year held a wealthy assortment of international programmes, and travellers from foreign countries were also seen in great numbers. Portraits of upcoming betrothal of the Garberan Princess Vileena to Mephius and garlands decorated the town, producing a peaceful atmosphere.

	At noon, an extensive military parade began. The soldiers, clad in armour decorated with precious stones and flowers, marched heroically as they hoisted their glimmering swords and spears up high. Leading them was the man who had taken the seat of the hero Clovis the previous year. The man, saddled on a white horse and proudly wearing a golden helmet, was a gladiator that did not hold the title of a slave<ref>Person that freely becomes a gladiator, as opposed to sword-slaves who are forced to become gladiators(e.g. for committing a crime)</ref>. He had participated in the deadly arena only to ward off starvation for his family, but through last year’s championship had been officially employed as a Mephius soldier, and currently worked as ~~one of the ten military commanders~~ directly under Odyne Lorgo.		At noon, an extensive military parade began. The soldiers, clad in armour decorated with precious stones and flowers, marched heroically as they hoisted their glimmering swords and spears up high. Leading them was the man who had taken the seat of the hero Clovis the previous year. The man, saddled on a white horse and proudly wearing a golden helmet, was a gladiator that did not hold the title of a slave<ref>Person that freely becomes a gladiator, as opposed to sword-slaves who are forced to become gladiators(e.g. for committing a crime)</ref>. He had participated in the deadly arena only to ward off starvation for his family, but through last year’s championship had been officially employed as a Mephius soldier, and currently worked as a corporal directly under Odyne Lorgo.

	On the final day of the festival, a naval review alongside a parade employing air carriers would take place to the people’s enjoyment. But for now, they would anticipate the event in the near future.		On the final day of the festival, a naval review alongside a parade employing air carriers would take place to the people’s enjoyment. But for now, they would anticipate the event in the near future.
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	Oubary led the black-armoured party that burned down Orba’s village. Because it had happened six to seven years ago, there was no telling how many soldiers remained behind in the same position. A considerable amount should have died in the war with Garbera. Even so, there was a high likelihood that there was someone who knew of what happened at that time. To go investigate the happening and report back to Orba was what War had been commanded to do.		Oubary led the black-armoured party that burned down Orba’s village. Because it had happened six to seven years ago, there was no telling how many soldiers remained behind in the same position. A considerable amount should have died in the war with Garbera. Even so, there was a high likelihood that there was someone who knew of what happened at that time. To go investigate the happening and report back to Orba was what War had been commanded to do.

	“There is a man who goes by the name of Bane and has maintained ~~a position~~ as ~~one of his hundred officers~~ for the past six years. Bane has long served the general, but one of Bane's subordinates, somehow dissatisfied with this treatment, voiced his complaints in a cheap tavern I often go to. On one occasion, when he was drunk, I exchanged cups of wine with him so as to become better acquainted. I may not look it, but I make a good listener. I listened to his complaints without a single look of displeasure or reluctance and left a rather favourable impression. I've yet to meet him beyond that once, but before long I will be able to pry into more personal matters. Oh, and also, I’m certain Bane was present at Apta Fortress. I am positive that was what I heard.”		“There is a man who goes by the name of Bane and has maintained his rank as captain for the past six years. Bane has long served the general, but one of Bane's subordinates, somehow dissatisfied with this treatment, voiced his complaints in a cheap tavern I often go to. On one occasion, when he was drunk, I exchanged cups of wine with him so as to become better acquainted. I may not look it, but I make a good listener. I listened to his complaints without a single look of displeasure or reluctance and left a rather favourable impression. I've yet to meet him beyond that once, but before long I will be able to pry into more personal matters. Oh, and also, I’m certain Bane was present at Apta Fortress. I am positive that was what I heard.”

	''Looking good.''		''Looking good.''

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	As Orba muttered to himself, he thought back. If it were Tarkas speaking, he would say “Orba was a gladiator that didn’t give me my money’s worth!” His forte was the longsword. He never lost a one-on-one match. But it was a fact that his fighting style was ‘plain’.		As Orba muttered to himself, he thought back. If it were Tarkas speaking, he would say “Orba was a gladiator that didn’t give me my money’s worth!” His forte was the longsword. He never lost a one-on-one match. But it was a fact that his fighting style was ‘plain’.

	It had been Tarkas’ dream to participate in the festival and get first place, but Orba held no interest in it. He wanted the festival in Solon to quickly start and receive it, and it was because Orba thought this way, that he didn’t understand the way the world ran. <!~~—unsure~~-->		It had been Tarkas’ dream to participate in the festival and get first place, but Orba held no interest in it. He wanted the festival in Solon to quickly start and receive it, and it was because Orba thought this way, that he didn’t understand the way the world ran. <!--unsure-->

	Though, of course, he would do so not as the gladiator Orba, but as the crown prince Gil. Instead of going out into the gladiator games, he had a number of other duties to perform.		Though, of course, he would do so not as the gladiator Orba, but as the crown prince Gil. Instead of going out into the gladiator games, he had a number of other duties to perform.

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	The Imperial Guard delegates who had come along, Shique and Gowen, had no choice but to smile wryly.		The Imperial Guard delegates who had come along, Shique and Gowen, had no choice but to smile wryly.

	“His highness his first campaign in stride,” Shique said shrugging his shoulders. “But when it comes to love, he is like that naïve boy before his first campaign.”		“His highness accomplished his first campaign in stride,” Shique said shrugging his shoulders. “But when it comes to love, he is like that naïve boy before his first campaign.”

	“Even those old-timers would lose face when conducting themselves as such. At least this much is to be expected of our prince.”		“Even those old-timers would lose face when conducting themselves as such. At least this much is to be expected of our prince.”
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	Oubary led the black-armoured party that burned down Orba’s village. Because it had happened six to seven years ago, there was no telling how many soldiers remained behind in the same position. A considerable amount should have died in the war with Garbera. Even so, there was a high likelihood that there was someone who knew of what happened at that time. To go investigate the happening and report back to Orba was what War had been commanded to do.		Oubary led the black-armoured party that burned down Orba’s village. Because it had happened six to seven years ago, there was no telling how many soldiers remained behind in the same position. A considerable amount should have died in the war with Garbera. Even so, there was a high likelihood that there was someone who knew of what happened at that time. To go investigate the happening and report back to Orba was what War had been commanded to do.

	“There is a man who goes by the name of Bane and has maintained a position as one of his hundred officers for the past six years. Bane has long served the general, ~~and~~ one of ~~his~~ subordinates, somehow dissatisfied with this treatment voiced his complaints in a cheap tavern I often go to. On one occasion, when he was drunk, I exchanged cups of wine with him so as to become better acquainted. I may not look it, but I make a good listener. I listened to his complaints without a single look of displeasure or reluctance and left a rather favourable impression. I've yet to meet him beyond that once, but before long I will be able to pry into more personal matters. Oh, and also, I’m certain Bane was present at Apta Fortress. I am positive that was what I heard.”		“There is a man who goes by the name of Bane and has maintained a position as one of his hundred officers for the past six years. Bane has long served the general, but one of Bane's subordinates, somehow dissatisfied with this treatment, voiced his complaints in a cheap tavern I often go to. On one occasion, when he was drunk, I exchanged cups of wine with him so as to become better acquainted. I may not look it, but I make a good listener. I listened to his complaints without a single look of displeasure or reluctance and left a rather favourable impression. I've yet to meet him beyond that once, but before long I will be able to pry into more personal matters. Oh, and also, I’m certain Bane was present at Apta Fortress. I am positive that was what I heard.”

	''Looking good.''		''Looking good.''

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