Rakuin no Monshou:Volume2 Chapter7 - Revision history

Darkoneko at 14:22, 28 September 2017

2017-09-28T14:22:55Z

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	“The air is my domain.”		“The air is my domain.”

	Even as she said this, Vileena continued to splendidly ~~dodged~~ the return fire. While Orba was assaulted countlessly by a chilling sensation, Vileena slipped past the enemy ships trying to spread out into a defensive formation and caught up right behind the air ship Zaat piloted.		Even as she said this, Vileena continued to splendidly dodge the return fire. While Orba was assaulted countlessly by a chilling sensation, Vileena slipped past the enemy ships trying to spread out into a defensive formation and caught up right behind the air ship Zaat piloted.

	''Impressive.''		''Impressive.''

Renuac: /* Part 2 */

2017-07-18T21:57:00Z

Part 2

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	“Zaat-sama!”		“Zaat-sama!”

	He saw another man at the stairs leading up from the hangar. The man’s name and face were unfamiliar to Orba, but he was an officer of the Blue ~~Archery~~ Division, Gary Lynwood.		He saw another man at the stairs leading up from the hangar. The man’s name and face were unfamiliar to Orba, but he was an officer of the Blue Bow Division, Gary Lynwood.

	It was unfortunate for them both that, at this time, Gary saw Zaat collapse as a sign of him being dead. He gave in to his anger and shot his gun. A bullet bounced off near Orba’s feet.		It was unfortunate for them both that, at this time, Gary saw Zaat collapse as a sign of him being dead. He gave in to his anger and shot his gun. A bullet bounced off near Orba’s feet.

94.67.180.140: /* Part 1 */

2017-06-02T17:41:27Z

Part 1

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	“Y-Your majesty...”		“Y-Your majesty...”

	The ~~Emporer~~ brushed aside the arm of Empress Melissa, who had tried to restrain him, and stood.		The Emperor brushed aside the arm of Empress Melissa, who had tried to restrain him, and stood.

	“Identify yourselves!” Guhl Mephius declared, his white beard trembling in rage. “On whose order is this? Do you fools understand who you’re pointing your guns at?!”		“Identify yourselves!” Guhl Mephius declared, his white beard trembling in rage. “On whose order is this? Do you fools understand who you’re pointing your guns at?!”

Vanant: Undo revision 349807 by Stratos (talk)

2014-04-30T06:28:33Z

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	''Impressive.''		''Impressive.''

	Orba was amazed at the princess’ ~~maneuvering~~ skills. She would make a promising airship instructor for the Imperial Guards.		Orba was amazed at the princess’ manoeuvring skills. She would make a promising airship instructor for the Imperial Guards.

	The garrison flagship came closer, blocking the sunlight and darkening the view in front of him. And with little pause, it lined up with Zaat’s ship and opened its hatch, where Zaat jumped in.		The garrison flagship came closer, blocking the sunlight and darkening the view in front of him. And with little pause, it lined up with Zaat’s ship and opened its hatch, where Zaat jumped in.

Stratos at 05:23, 30 April 2014

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	''Impressive.''		''Impressive.''

	Orba was amazed at the princess’ ~~manoeuvring~~ skills. She would make a promising airship instructor for the Imperial Guards.		Orba was amazed at the princess’ maneuvering skills. She would make a promising airship instructor for the Imperial Guards.

	The garrison flagship came closer, blocking the sunlight and darkening the view in front of him. And with little pause, it lined up with Zaat’s ship and opened its hatch, where Zaat jumped in.		The garrison flagship came closer, blocking the sunlight and darkening the view in front of him. And with little pause, it lined up with Zaat’s ship and opened its hatch, where Zaat jumped in.

190.80.117.66: /* Chapter 7: Empty Verdict */

2014-03-31T03:56:19Z

Chapter 7: Empty Verdict

190.80.117.66: /* Part 1 */

2014-03-31T03:33:34Z

Part 1

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Cthaeh: back to Colyne, whoops

2014-03-24T03:22:13Z

back to Colyne, whoops

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	“One to two hundred of our own troops revolted against Mephius. With a firm leash, they will surely become heroes that bring about victory for Mephius.”		“One to two hundred of our own troops revolted against Mephius. With a firm leash, they will surely become heroes that bring about victory for Mephius.”

	“What do you think, ~~Klein~~?”		“What do you think, Colyne?”

	The emperor asked his retainer, unable to hide his surprise at how his son managed to put a stop to the chain of disturbances.		The emperor asked his retainer, unable to hide his surprise at how his son managed to put a stop to the chain of disturbances.

	It was the same for ~~Klein~~ Isphan. However, he was a natural at reading his lord’s intentions, and this time as well, he replied in courtesy.		It was the same for Colyne Isphan. However, he was a natural at reading his lord’s intentions, and this time as well, he replied in courtesy.

	“......The prince has ability. I believe it is best to leave things to him.”		“......The prince has ability. I believe it is best to leave things to him.”
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	With that single conversation, emperor Guhl Mephius resolved his mind. As Gil’s reward, he would acknowledge the claim.		With that single conversation, emperor Guhl Mephius resolved his mind. As Gil’s reward, he would acknowledge the claim.

	However, it was only this time that ~~the~~ Guhl made a show of generosity as emperor. Since what happened with Zaat, the emperor began to act more and more self-righteous. As if he had forgotten Kaiser’s opposition towards the relocation of the Dragon Shrine, he now raised the issue of the establishment of the shrine, and in little to no time at all, began its construction. As the emperor’s advisors, it was decided the group of elders would dwell within the shrine, and the emperor, instead making use of Zaat’s rebellion, had strengthened his political powers.		However, it was only this time that Guhl made a show of generosity as emperor. Since what happened with Zaat, the emperor began to act more and more self-righteous. As if he had forgotten Kaiser’s opposition towards the relocation of the Dragon Shrine, he now raised the issue of the establishment of the shrine, and in little to no time at all, began its construction. As the emperor’s advisors, it was decided the group of elders would dwell within the shrine, and the emperor, instead making use of Zaat’s rebellion, had strengthened his political powers.

	''That makes me the one who helped him accomplish that'', Orba thought.		''That makes me the one who helped him accomplish that'', Orba thought.

Detalz: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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	And while this wasn’t yet confirmed, one other subject had become the topic of gossip within the palace.		And while this wasn’t yet confirmed, one other subject had become the topic of gossip within the palace.

	A team of Imperial Court doctors had been seen frequenting the women’s chambers. Rumours that this might signify ~~Melissa’s stemming from this spread~~.		A team of Imperial Court doctors had been seen frequenting the women’s chambers. Rumours spread that this might signify Melissa conceiving a child.

	And without taking notice of the emotions running through Orba’s mind, the emperor spoke further.		And without taking notice of the emotions running through Orba’s mind, the emperor spoke further.

Hiro Hayase: /* Part 3 */

2014-03-18T08:59:57Z

Part 3

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	While he held his head in a bow, he felt a rage simmer through his chest. Flowing within the flood running through his body, the most primitive of instincts—his desire to do battle—had been lit.		While he held his head in a bow, he felt a rage simmer through his chest. Flowing within the flood running through his body, the most primitive of instincts—his desire to do battle—had been lit.

	''I get it now. The threat isn’t only limited Ax and the sword-slaves.''		''I get it now. The threat isn’t only limited to Ax and the sword-slaves.''

	A battle with a slim chance of victory.		A battle with a slim chance of victory.

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	“Gathered ladies and gentlemen, I am sorry to say that there is something I must inform you of in the midst of this crisis; and for that I beg your forgiveness. However, I am convinced that this is something that would tickle the interest of all you ladies and gentlemen. For of the mastermind who staged this rebellion, and who would hold such misgivings—I shall try to provide those answers to you.”		“Gathered ladies and gentlemen, I am sorry to say that there is something I must inform you of in the midst of this crisis; and for that I beg your forgiveness. However, I am convinced that this is something that would tickle the interest of all you ladies and gentlemen. For of the mastermind who staged this rebellion, and who would hold such misgivings—I shall try to provide those answers to you.”

	“What?!”		“What?!” Zaat shouted, as dumbfounded as everyone else.

	Zaat shouted, as dumbfounded as everyone else.

	Finally, Vileena alone noticed the slave's true identity: the clean cut, a charming gaze, a thin nose bridge and such good looks that it was no surprise that he would be mistaken for a woman-		Finally, Vileena alone noticed the slave's true identity: the clean cut, a charming gaze, a thin nose bridge and such good looks that it was no surprise that he would be mistaken for a woman-
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	“Do you not understand? Just now, I was in the middle of presenting that to you fair ladies and fine gentlemen.”		“Do you not understand? Just now, I was in the middle of presenting that to you fair ladies and fine gentlemen.”

	Despite having been found out as a man, Shique flashed a bewitching smile. “Ah,” Rogue and Simon both responded, dumbstruck. With the dagger still pressed against Zaat’s neck, he used the noble as a shield and turned to face the soldiers.		Despite having been found out as a man, Shique flashed a bewitching smile. “Ah,” Rogue and Simon both responded, dumbstruck.

			With the dagger still pressed against Zaat’s neck, he used the noble as a shield and turned to face the soldiers.

	“It is as you see. Now, what will you do, Mr. Soldiers-who-just-landed-from-the-sky? Why haven’t you lot taken a single step for some time now? Do you worry for Zaat-dono’s life? Why is it that amongst His Imperial Majesty and the mass majority of the statesmen you’ve restrained within your sights, he alone is not among them?”		“It is as you see. Now, what will you do, Mr. Soldiers-who-just-landed-from-the-sky? Why haven’t you lot taken a single step for some time now? Do you worry for Zaat-dono’s life? Why is it that amongst His Imperial Majesty and the mass majority of the statesmen you’ve restrained within your sights, he alone is not among them?”

	It was as Shique mentioned. As the soldiers faces were all covered, their expressions were unreadable, but it was clear from their behaviour that they were trembling.		It was as Shique had mentioned. As the soldiers faces were all covered, their expressions were unreadable, but it was clear from their behaviour that they were trembling.

	And at this time, on the other side of the arena below, a riot was occurring.		And at this time, on the other side of the arena below, a riot was occurring.
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	“This makes it a stalemate now, doesn’t it?”		“This makes it a stalemate now, doesn’t it?”

	“I-I don’t know what you mean. Unhand me, slave. How long will the likes of you continue to touch me?! The likes of you are much more suspect to be the mastermind.”		“I-I don’t know what you mean. Unhand me, slave! How long will the likes of you continue to touch me?! The likes of you are much more suspect to be the mastermind.”

	“You’re contradicting yourself, Zaat-dono. There’s no way the likes of a slave could be the mastermind. Why do you think they haven’t moved for the longest time now? Come, feel free to shoot the both of us together.”		“You’re contradicting yourself, Zaat-dono. There’s no way the likes of a slave could be the mastermind. Why do you think they haven’t moved for the longest time now? Come, feel free to shoot the both of us together.”
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	“Damned fool. You said you were an Imperial Guard, I believe? All the more reason that there’s no way you can sit back and let him be killed, can you? That blundering idiot of a crown prince that was caught by the slaves, that is!”		“Damned fool. You said you were an Imperial Guard, I believe? All the more reason that there’s no way you can sit back and let him be killed, can you? That blundering idiot of a crown prince that was caught by the slaves, that is!”

	Prince Gil ~~was~~ still captured by the slaves in the arena~~. It~~ was natural this would prevent Shique from moving recklessly.		With Prince Gil still captured by the slaves in the arena, it was only natural that this would prevent Shique from moving recklessly.

	Everyone’s attention turned to the arena, as Zaat chortled.		Everyone’s attention turned to the arena, as Zaat chortled.
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	“So he says, my prince,” he called out.		“So he says, my prince,” he called out.

	At that point, Zaat’s eyes came across an unimaginable sight. The rope that should have bound the prince’s hands ~~had~~ easily ~~come~~ off and dropped to his feet. The prince walked forward to him. None of the slaves tried to stop him.		At that point, Zaat’s eyes came across an unimaginable sight. The rope that should have tightly bound the prince’s hands easily slipped off and dropped to his feet. The prince walked forward towards him. None of the slaves tried to stop him.

	“You bastard.”		“You bastard.”

	He only saw Pashir tightly ~~clench~~ his teeth. No, the slaves ~~sent~~ glares filled with animosity and hatred towards the prince, even if they had not moved a single step.		The only reaction he saw was that of Pashir tightly clenching his teeth. No, the slaves were sending glares filled with animosity and hatred towards the prince, even if they had not moved a single step.

	Gil—Orba, ~~while~~ aware of this, felt bitter.		Gil—Orba, aware of this, felt bitter.

	His ~~having been~~ taken hostage by the sword slaves ~~was~~ a ploy from the start. Naturally, the one to order this was Orba himself. Orba had taken the young slave girl of the detention camp loved by all the slaves, Mira, hostage in order to confront them.		His being taken hostage by the sword slaves had been a ploy from the start. Naturally, the one to order this was Orba himself. Orba had taken the young slave girl of the detention camp loved by all the slaves, Mira, hostage in order to confront them.

	His blood had run cold when he had been discovered together with Kain, but even the strong-armed Pashir had been unable to fight back with Mira being used a shield. He had Kain thrust his gun at the young girl, made mention that he had ‘heard the entire plan from Orba’, and contained the slaves’ movements. With their plan exposed by the imperials, their resolution to fight to the death crumbled. The slaves collapsed on their knees in despair.		His blood had run cold when he had been discovered together with Kain, but even the strong-armed Pashir had been unable to fight back with Mira being used a shield. He had Kain thrust his gun at the young girl, made mention that he had ‘heard the entire plan from Orba’, and contained the slaves’ movements. With their plan exposed by the imperials, their resolution to fight to the death crumbled. The slaves collapsed on their knees in despair.
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	“Of course. You were the one who told me about the plan. Then that also makes you the one who hid the fact you were conspiring with that noble from us. You planned to have us walk to our deaths and make use of that, didn’t you?!”		“Of course. You were the one who told me about the plan. Then that also makes you the one who hid the fact you were conspiring with that noble from us. You planned to have us walk to our deaths and make use of that, didn’t you?!”

	The man looked up at Orba, his eyes on fire, when suddenly he spurt out blood from his mouth. His body convulsed, twice, thrice, and shortly after, he died. He had swallowed poison. The snipers the imperial guards had captured also met the same fate at ~~this time~~.		The man looked up at Orba, his eyes on fire, when suddenly he spurt out blood from his mouth. His body convulsed, twice, thrice, and shortly after, he died. He had swallowed poison. The snipers the imperial guards had captured also met the same fate at that moment.

	In this instant, like a cornered beast, Zaat made his final act of resistance. As Shique was distracted by the ongoings in the arena, Zaat suddenly pushed him off, pulled the hand of the nearby Ineli, and used her as a shield.		In this instant, like a cornered beast, Zaat made his final act of resistance. As Shique was distracted by the ongoings in the arena, Zaat suddenly pushed him off, pulled the hand of the nearby Ineli, and used her as a shield.