Rakuin no Monshou:Volume4 Chapter7 - Revision history

Renuac: /* Part 4 */

2016-10-26T10:15:44Z

Part 4

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	He was remembering how Gil, who affected being so cool-headed that it was provoking, had become flustered the moment he had started talking about his sister Vileena.		He was remembering how Gil, who affected being so cool-headed that it was provoking, had become flustered the moment he had started talking about his sister Vileena.

	It had only been for a short while, but after having been in contact with Gil, Zenon had considered him to be a man who didn't have the slightest affinity with his younger sister. He was puzzled therefore by ~~the give-and-take that~~ had obviously taken place between the two of them at the Mephian imperial court that he himself couldn't visit.		It had only been for a short while, but after having been in contact with Gil, Zenon had considered him to be a man who didn't have the slightest affinity with his younger sister. He was puzzled therefore by what had obviously taken place between the two of them at the Mephian imperial court that he himself couldn't visit.

	"Gil Mephius, huh?" On the verge of entering Zaim fortress, Noue couldn't help but overhear what Zenon murmured. "He is still green. He is green but he will probably become a more troublesome man than Guhl sometime soon."		"Gil Mephius, huh?" On the verge of entering Zaim fortress, Noue couldn't help but overhear what Zenon murmured. "He is still green. He is green but he will probably become a more troublesome man than Guhl sometime soon."

Renuac: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-09T08:29:57Z

Part 4

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	As Gil smiled his figure half melted into the golden light, Vileena stared blankly for a moment then immediately puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.		As Gil smiled his figure half melted into the golden light, Vileena stared blankly for a moment then immediately puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.
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	"Honestly!"		"Honestly!"

Renuac: /* Chapter 7: Lost Kingdom */

2016-09-09T08:27:35Z

Chapter 7: Lost Kingdom

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	Because of the rain, the inside of the room was dim and gloomy, and the three people's faces were enveloped in shadows.		Because of the rain, the inside of the room was dim and gloomy, and the three people's faces were enveloped in shadows.

	"~~At any rate~~, both of you are extremely skilled," Gil said abruptly. "I heard the details of the battle from both of your soldiers earlier. For I who am inexperienced in leading an army to war, it was very educational."		"First thing first, both of you are extremely skilled," Gil said abruptly. "I heard the details of the battle from both of your soldiers earlier. For I who am inexperienced in leading an army to war, it was very educational."

	Zenon and Eric both looked stunned.		Zenon and Eric both looked stunned.
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	"You surely didn't call this meeting to tell us that." Eric said in a raspy, subdued voice. "Did you think that when Mephius arrived, my army would swear allegiance without resistance? We'll return to our camps and settle this right now."		"You surely didn't call this meeting to tell us that." Eric said in a raspy, subdued voice. "Did you think that when Mephius arrived, my army would swear allegiance without resistance? We'll return to our camps and settle this right now."

Renuac: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-08T17:46:03Z

Part 4

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	Was certainly what he wanted to say, but Gil kept his lips shut.		Was certainly what he wanted to say, but Gil kept his lips shut.

	Vileena blushed for no particular reason and ~~the~~ continued to gaze at the sky in silence.		Vileena blushed for no particular reason and they continued to gaze at the sky in silence.

	It was probably the first time since Vileena Owell had entered Mephius' territory that she and Gil had spent time peacefully together.		It was probably the first time since Vileena Owell had entered Mephius' territory that she and Gil had spent time peacefully together.

Renuac: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-08T17:43:15Z

Part 4

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	"But?"		"But?"

	"Don't forget one thing. Mephius' ~~prince~~ Gil is a 'liar'."		"Don't forget one thing. Mephius' Prince Gil is a 'liar'."

	As Gil smiled, his figure half melted into the golden light, Vileena stared blankly for a moment then immediately puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.		As Gil smiled his figure half melted into the golden light, Vileena stared blankly for a moment then immediately puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.

	"Honestly!"		"Honestly!"

Renuac: /* Part 3 */

2016-09-07T18:59:27Z

Part 3

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	"Save the prince of Mephius' face?" Eric's ever sombre expression darkened even further with the shadow of hatred. "What are you talking about? You have some nerve when your country puts no weight on its agreements!"		"Save the prince of Mephius' face?" Eric's ever sombre expression darkened even further with the shadow of hatred. "What are you talking about? You have some nerve when your country puts no weight on its agreements!"

	"Exactly right."		"Exactly right!"

	They both had different reasons for their indignation but because neither could voice them outright, there was a certain humour to the situation. Zenon wanted to reproach Gil for arriving late with reinforcements, but since those reinforcements were originally due to a personal promise between Gil and Noue, they weren't something formally agreed upon by the two countries. Because Zenon had also taken the attitude that they couldn't be counted on, he couldn't openly say anything now.		They both had different reasons for their indignation but because neither could voice them outright, there was a certain humour to the situation. Zenon wanted to reproach Gil for arriving late with reinforcements, but since those reinforcements were originally due to a personal promise between Gil and Noue, they weren't something formally agreed upon by the two countries. Because Zenon had also taken the attitude that they couldn't be counted on, he couldn't openly say anything now.
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	At that point, Zenon, his face calm, took a shot in revenge at the Mephian prince.		At that point, Zenon, his face calm, took a shot in revenge at the Mephian prince.

	"Prince Gil"		"Prince Gil."

	"What is it?"		"What is it?"
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	"Y-Yes" Looking over his shoulder, Gil blushed a little and nodded. "Both in Solon and at the time of the war with Taúlia, her brave actions were a great help."		"Y-Yes" Looking over his shoulder, Gil blushed a little and nodded. "Both in Solon and at the time of the war with Taúlia, her brave actions were a great help."

	"Ho," Zenon smile seemed to say that it stood to reason. "Certainly it being Vileena, she would show peerless heroism for the man who won her. But if you mishandle her, she'll murder you in your sleep."		"Ho," Zenon's smile seemed to say that it stood to reason. "Certainly it being Vileena, she would show peerless heroism for the man who won her. But if you mishandle her, she'll murder you in your sleep."

	"I ''get it'' already."		"I ''get it'' already."

Renuac: /* Chapter 7: Lost Kingdom */

2016-09-07T06:31:24Z

Chapter 7: Lost Kingdom

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	"Magnificent."		"Magnificent."

	When the series of battles finally came to an end, Eric threw down his smoking riffle while soothing his favourite horse.		When the series of battles finally came to an end, Eric threw down his smoking riffle while soothing his favourite horse. Before him, the dragon that he had just slaughtered was bleeding out. And in place of a groom, a man stood holding his horse's bit.

	Before him, the dragon that he had just slaughtered was bleeding out. And in place of a groom, a man stood holding his horse's bit.

	"With this, it should be mostly over."		"With this, it should be mostly over."
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	For a while now, Vileena Owell, observing Gil's profile, had been unable to decide whether or not to speak up. He had only just returned to Apta.		For a while now, Vileena Owell, observing Gil's profile, had been unable to decide whether or not to speak up.

	The princess had been summoned by him and had gone to the roof of the barracks. From there, they had an unbroken view of the progress on Apta's reconstruction. The mountain ridge burned golden and feathery clouds hung low across the sky's scarlet belly, as though swept there by a stroke of a paintbrush.		He had only just returned to Apta. The princess had been summoned by him and had gone to the roof of the barracks. From there, they had an unbroken view of the progress on Apta's reconstruction. The mountain ridge burned golden and feathery clouds hung low across the sky's scarlet belly, as though swept there by a stroke of a paintbrush.

	"In Apta..."		"In Apta..."

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2016-09-06T19:33:45Z

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