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	"You should show a little more of that knowledge towards me," Ax grimaced. "Once I find a better strategist, I'll pull out that tongue of yours and throw you out of Taúlia."		"You should show a little more of that knowledge towards me," Ax grimaced. "Once I find a better strategist, I'll pull out that tongue of yours and throw you out of Taúlia."

	Leaving the Yunion with a dragon~~-groom~~ and once Ax had changed his clothes, they went towards Taúlia Castle. Although it was called a castle and had a moat dug around it, its appearance was more that of a manor. While eating a simple meal in the ground-floor hall that faced the courtyard, Ax received various reports from his vassals. Afterwards, he brought Ravan to his own chambers.		Leaving the Yunion with a dragon handler, and once Ax had changed his clothes, they went towards Taúlia Castle. Although it was called a castle and had a moat dug around it, its appearance was more that of a manor. While eating a simple meal in the ground-floor hall that faced the courtyard, Ax received various reports from his vassals. Afterwards, he brought Ravan to his own chambers.

	"Well then," Ax broached the topic in an offhand sort of tone. "Isn't it about time that Taúlia sent a delegation with condolences over Prince Gil?"		"Well then," Ax broached the topic in an offhand sort of tone. "Isn't it about time that Taúlia sent a delegation with condolences over Prince Gil?"

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	"Or else there is also the rumour that it may have been the emperor himself who incited the rebellion," said Fedom Aulin within one of the castle rooms. After glancing upwards at the other six people present as though seeking their reaction, he continued, "One point of view has it that even the internal disputes that arose within the governing family thirty years ago were originally one of the emperor's schemes. As we can see from his erecting a shrine to the Dragon God faith, Emperor Guhl is obsessed with ancient conventions. He was no doubt willing to do whatever it took to regain Seirin Valley during his own reign."		"Or else there is also the rumour that it may have been the emperor himself who incited the rebellion," said Fedom Aulin within one of the castle rooms. After glancing upwards at the other six people present as though seeking their reaction, he continued, "One point of view has it that even the internal disputes that arose within the governing family thirty years ago were originally one of the emperor's schemes. As we can see from his erecting a shrine to the Dragon God faith, Emperor Guhl is obsessed with ancient conventions. He was no doubt willing to do whatever it took to regain Seirin Valley during his own reign."

	Fedom paused ~~on purpose~~ at this point,		Fedom deliberately paused at this point,

	"Could that be it?"		"Could that be it?"

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	Therefore, was this not "Perfect"?		Therefore, was this not "Perfect"?

	Guhl had immediately organised troops and had dispatched Oubary Bilan to subdue the revolt ~~in Kilro~~.		Guhl had immediately organised troops and had dispatched Oubary Bilan to subdue the revolt.

	And thus not so long ago, Isphan York had been appointed as the new lord of Kilro. He was one of Mephius' twelve generals.		And thus, not so long ago, Isphan York had been appointed as the new domain-lord of Kilro. He was one of Mephius' twelve generals.

	"Or else there is also the rumour that it may have been the emperor himself who incited the rebellion," said Fedom Aulin within one of the castle rooms. After glancing upwards at the other six people present as though seeking their reaction, he continued, "One point of view has it that even the internal disputes that arose within the governing family thirty years ago were originally one of the emperor's schemes. As we can see from his erecting a shrine to the Dragon God faith, Emperor Guhl is obsessed with ancient conventions. He was no doubt willing to do whatever it took to regain Seirin Valley during his own reign."		"Or else there is also the rumour that it may have been the emperor himself who incited the rebellion," said Fedom Aulin within one of the castle rooms. After glancing upwards at the other six people present as though seeking their reaction, he continued, "One point of view has it that even the internal disputes that arose within the governing family thirty years ago were originally one of the emperor's schemes. As we can see from his erecting a shrine to the Dragon God faith, Emperor Guhl is obsessed with ancient conventions. He was no doubt willing to do whatever it took to regain Seirin Valley during his own reign."

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	Kilro was about two hundred kilometres southeast of Mephius' capital, Solon. When he had been informed that the lord of Kilro had been ~~hung~~ by the neck during the slave uprising that had occurred there, Mephius' Emperor Guhl had said in a murmur,		Kilro was about two hundred kilometres southeast of Mephius' capital, Solon. When he had been informed that the lord of Kilro had been hanged by the neck during the slave uprising that had occurred there, Mephius' Emperor Guhl had said in a murmur,

	"Perfect."		"Perfect."

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	"But what about the alliance with Garbera? At present, there are no other suitable young men within the imperial family."		"But what about the alliance with Garbera? At present, there are no other suitable young men within the imperial family."

	"Garbera's Prince ~~Zeno~~ is unwed. Isn't it possible a new alliance will be forged through a marriage to Princess Ineli?"		"Garbera's Prince Zenon is unwed. Isn't it possible a new alliance will be forged through a marriage to Princess Ineli?"

	"No, it seems that Taúlia has been sounding her out."		"No, it seems that Taúlia has been sounding her out."

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	They were a strange pair. Incidentally, they had one other companion but as this was the giant who was towering over the other applicants in the line, Duncan had from the outset decided that he would be one of the replacements candidates. Listening to them, they had been gladiators in Mephius.		They were a strange pair. Incidentally, they had one other companion but as this was the giant who was towering over the other applicants in the line, Duncan had from the outset decided that he would be one of the replacements candidates. Listening to them, they had been gladiators in Mephius.
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	''Ho. Should gladiators be standing on the same footing as Tauran soldiers?''		''Ho. Should gladiators be standing on the same footing as Tauran soldiers?''

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	They were a strange pair. Incidentally, they had one other companion but as this was the giant who was towering over the other applicants in the line, Duncan had from the outset decided that he would be one of the replacements candidates. Listening to them, they had been gladiators in Mephius.		They were a strange pair. Incidentally, they had one other companion but as this was the giant who was towering over the other applicants in the line, Duncan had from the outset decided that he would be one of the replacements candidates. Listening to them, they had been gladiators in Mephius.
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	''Ho. Should gladiators be standing on the same footing as Tauran soldiers?''		''Ho. Should gladiators be standing on the same footing as Tauran soldiers?''

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	Reflexively turning around, the mercenaries saw Adelber go in for the finishing blow, only for his sword to pass straight over Orba's head. Having suddenly gotten in close to his opponent, he brought the pommel of his sword against Adelber's nose.		Reflexively turning around, the mercenaries saw Adelber go in for the finishing blow, only for his sword to pass straight over Orba's head. Having suddenly gotten in close to his opponent, he brought the pommel of his sword against Adelber's nose.

	Blood spurting copiously, Adelber fell back. His legs twitched convulsively but there was no sign of ~~his~~ getting back up.		Blood spurting copiously, Adelber fell back. His legs twitched convulsively but there was no sign of him getting back up.

	"M-Match over!" Duncan yelled, surprise and joy half mingled in his voice.		"M-Match over!" Duncan yelled, surprise and joy half mingled in his voice.

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	"Waving around a piece of wood is boring. A real weapon is best if you want to judge whether a guy is usable in an actual fight."		"Waving around a piece of wood is boring. A real weapon is best if you want to judge whether a guy is usable in an actual fight."

	Duncan was disconcerted and glanced briefly at Orba, who nodded with an air of saying No problem.		Duncan was disconcerted and glanced briefly at Orba, who nodded with an air of saying ''No problem''.

	In the end, each held a Taúlian longsword. The sun was getting higher and higher.		In the end, each held a Taúlian longsword. The sun was getting higher and higher.