Rakuin no Monshou:Volume5 Chapter2 - Revision history

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Part 3

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	"That's a really specific story. A dragon's "voice", hmm? If it's the people from the Barbaroi village, that kind of thing seems possible."		"That's a really specific story. A dragon's "voice", hmm? If it's the people from the Barbaroi village, that kind of thing seems possible."

	"Barbaroi<ref>The term Stan uses is バルバロイ which can either be translated as an unusual way of saying barbarian or as "Berber". To keep the sense that they are viewed both as ~~barbarians~~ and as a specific set of people, the word is being kept as "Barbaroi".</ref>?"		"Barbaroi<ref>The term Stan uses is バルバロイ which can either be translated as an unusual way of saying barbarian or as "Berber". To keep the sense that they are viewed both as barbarian and strange as well as a specific set of people, the word is being kept as "Barbaroi".</ref>?"

	''Yes'', nodded Stan and continued,		''Yes'', nodded Stan and continued,

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Chapter 2: Phantoms

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	"Indeed?" Greygun spat on one of his fingers then used it to smooth his moustache. "Those damn Taúlians still put on airs as the rightful descendants of Zer Tauran, but will their mouldy old pride be of any use to them in battle? I'll be sure to watch on."		"Indeed?" Greygun spat on one of his fingers then used it to smooth his moustache. "Those damn Taúlians still put on airs as the rightful descendants of Zer Tauran, but will their mouldy old pride be of any use to them in battle? I'll be sure to watch on."




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Part 3

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	"Are you saying that he played the parts of both Orba and Gil?"		"Are you saying that he played the parts of both Orba and Gil?"

	With that, he refused to listen to anymore. Shique had also half given up.		With that, he refused to listen anymore. Shique had also half given up.

	"If you don't believe it, fine. But don't go telling anyone else."		"If you don't believe it, fine. But don't go telling anyone else."
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	"Orba," said Shique who seemed to have realised his mood. "I know how you feel; this region's climate and features are just too different from Mephius that it's tough in and of itself. Oh well, once we've had our fill of work here, we can always go somewhere else. How about the coastal countries next time? Have you ever seen the sea, Orba?"		"Orba," said Shique who seemed to have realised his mood. "I know how you feel; this region's climate and features are just too different from Mephius that it's tough in and of itself. Oh well, once we've had our fill of work here, we can always go somewhere else. How about the coastal countries next time? Have you ever seen the sea, Orba?"

	"You~~'re~~ sure take things at your ease." He had intended to feign curtness but couldn't help but smile wryly.		"You sure take things at your ease." He had intended to feign curtness but couldn't help but smile wryly.

	The dining hall was filled to the brim with mercenaries of all origins and ages. But Mephians were rare as Taúlia and Mephius had not had diplomatic relations for over a hundred years. If you went back to the time of Zer Tauran when the city-states currently scattered throughout the west had been united under a single flag, then it was close to two hundred years. During that time, there had been innumerable fights. Things were fine since this was a gathering of mercenaries, but if this had been a hall used by regular soldiers, the circumstances for Orba and the others would have somewhat different. Even if Governor-General Ax Bazgan had suddenly decided in favour of reconciliation with Mephius, it was not so easy to break the chains of fights and hatred that had accumulated between both countries over the long years.		The dining hall was filled to the brim with mercenaries of all origins and ages. But Mephians were rare as Taúlia and Mephius had not had diplomatic relations for over a hundred years. If you went back to the time of Zer Tauran when the city-states currently scattered throughout the west had been united under a single flag, then it was close to two hundred years. During that time, there had been innumerable fights. Things were fine since this was a gathering of mercenaries, but if this had been a hall used by regular soldiers, the circumstances for Orba and the others would have somewhat different. Even if Governor-General Ax Bazgan had suddenly decided in favour of reconciliation with Mephius, it was not so easy to break the chains of fights and hatred that had accumulated between both countries over the long years.
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	It could be said that Orba had lived only for revenge against Oubary.		It could be said that Orba had lived only for revenge against Oubary.

	When he had lived on the streets by banding together with hoodlums, when he had been degraded to the status of gladiator and had been forced ~~to live next~~ to live next to death, and when he was suddenly made the crown prince's body double because their appearances were exactly alike.		When he had lived on the streets by banding together with hoodlums, when he had been degraded to the status of gladiator and had been forced to live next to death, and when he was suddenly made the crown prince's body double because their appearances were exactly alike.

	The black blood that flowed within him, the lines of his muscles that had changed beyond recognition in six years, the opponents he had gone through one by one; all had been solely for the sake of destroying Oubary. In a sense – although he himself would never accept it – those six years had shone. Although dark and repulsive, made of the viscous blood he was so drenched in that he could no longer tell if it was his or that of other people, they had shone.		The black blood that flowed within him, the lines of his muscles that had changed beyond recognition in six years, the opponents he had gone through one by one; all had been solely for the sake of destroying Oubary. In a sense – although he himself would never accept it – those six years had shone. Although dark and repulsive, made of the viscous blood he was so drenched in that he could no longer tell if it was his or that of other people, they had shone.
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	Like the dream he had imagined in his childhood of becoming successful through nothing but his sword... Although that was a plan for the future, Orba didn't feel any more cheerful.		Like the dream he had imagined in his childhood of becoming successful through nothing but his sword... Although that was a plan for the future, Orba didn't feel any more cheerful.

	"You're a thoroughly strange guy." ~~Said~~ Gilliam.		"You're a thoroughly strange guy." said Gilliam.

	"What?"		"What?"

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	After the three Mephians had hurriedly left, Esmena clung to one of her maids and wept loudly. While tightly hugging her shoulders, the ladies' maids exchanged glances,		After the three Mephians had hurriedly left, Esmena clung to one of her maids and wept loudly. While tightly hugging her shoulders, the ladies' maids exchanged glances,

	''At last,		''At last,''

	At last, she is crying''.		''At last, she is crying''.

	During the time Esmena had secluded herself in her room, she had sat alone without crying, nor of course without laughing. Not eating properly, barely moving within the room, she had seemed to become part of the furniture. Since Esmena always lavished her smiles on everyone without discrimination, when its mistress' heart appeared to have died, it felt as though the room itself had lost its liveliness and had been cast under an ominous shadow, and it had been heart-breaking for the ladies' maids who looked after her.		During the time Esmena had secluded herself in her room, she had sat alone without crying, nor of course without laughing. Not eating properly, barely moving within the room, she had seemed to become part of the furniture. Since Esmena always lavished her smiles on everyone without discrimination, when its mistress' heart appeared to have died, it felt as though the room itself had lost its liveliness and had been cast under an ominous shadow, and it had been heart-breaking for the ladies' maids who looked after her.

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Chapter 2: Phantoms

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	"Well..."		"Well..."
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	"Well, nothing! From back when we were gladiators, I could never understand what you were thinking. But now it's different from when we were gladiators, we're companions who'll fight shoulder to shoulder. If you were a bit more cooperative..."		"Well, nothing! From back when we were gladiators, I could never understand what you were thinking. But now it's different from when we were gladiators, we're companions who'll fight shoulder to shoulder. If you were a bit more cooperative..."
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	"I know. He did not go about like a great hero with many feats of arms to his name but was a kind person with a somewhat bashful smile. I too received kind words from him."		"I know. He did not go about like a great hero with many feats of arms to his name but was a kind person with a somewhat bashful smile. I too received kind words from him."
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	She was about to nod smilingly when Esmena's expression suddenly clouded over. She lowered her eyes which had been so full of life a moment ago and her shoulders drooped dejectedly. Her long hair hung down on either side of her face and she looked for all the world like a puppet who had lost its strings.		She was about to nod smilingly when Esmena's expression suddenly clouded over. She lowered her eyes which had been so full of life a moment ago and her shoulders drooped dejectedly. Her long hair hung down on either side of her face and she looked for all the world like a puppet who had lost its strings.

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Chapter 2: Phantom

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	==Chapter 2: ~~Phantom~~==		==Chapter 2: Phantoms==

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	At the opposite of Stan whose curiosity had been aroused, Orba turned away, having apparently lost interest.		At the opposite of Stan whose curiosity had been aroused, Orba turned away, having apparently lost interest.
	"That's a really specific story. A dragon's "voice", hmm? If it's the people from the ~~Barbarian~~ village, that kind of thing seems possible."		"That's a really specific story. A dragon's "voice", hmm? If it's the people from the Barbaroi village, that kind of thing seems possible."

	"~~Barbarian~~?"		"Barbaroi<ref>The term Stan uses is バルバロイ which can either be translated as an unusual way of saying barbarian or as "Berber". To keep the sense that they are viewed both as barbarians and as a specific set of people, the word is being kept as "Barbaroi".</ref>?"

	''Yes'', nodded Stan and continued,		''Yes'', nodded Stan and continued,
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	"There's also that theory that the Ryuujin tribe is the degenerated form of the Dragon Gods."		"There's also that theory that the Ryuujin tribe is the degenerated form of the Dragon Gods."

	"Oh? I'll leave that kind of complicated discussion to scholars but in any case, those original inhabitants lost the war with humanity and disappeared, but it seems that they settled down in that ~~Barbarian~~ village."		"Oh? I'll leave that kind of complicated discussion to scholars but in any case, those original inhabitants lost the war with humanity and disappeared, but it seems that they settled down in that Barbaroi village."

	"There are many adventurers and explorers wandering around looking for survivors of the Ryuujin Tribe. So there should be plenty of people who have come to hear about that legend. It's hard to believe that it's never been found up until now."		"There are many adventurers and explorers wandering around looking for survivors of the Ryuujin Tribe. So there should be plenty of people who have come to hear about that legend. It's hard to believe that it's never been found up until now."
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	Orba was by no means superstitious but for some reason the wind that gently brushed against his skin felt unsettling.		Orba was by no means superstitious but for some reason the wind that gently brushed against his skin felt unsettling.

	"That reminds me, it's just a legend but I have a feeling there were beings known as Dragon Priestesses among the ~~Barbarians~~. But I don't know if they're the same as the people who can hear a dragon's "voice" that you were talking about."		"That reminds me, it's just a legend but I have a feeling there were beings known as Dragon Priestesses among the Barbaroi. But I don't know if they're the same as the people who can hear a dragon's "voice" that you were talking about."

	"I see."		"I see."

	After that, Stan talked about how a river that took its source in Lake Kurán had become the water of life for the people of Helio. For them as Zerdians, receiving that blessing from the sacred land of Kurán was a form of pride.		After that, Stan talked about how a river that took its source in Lake Kurán had become the water of life for the people of Helio. For them as Zerdians, receiving that blessing from the sacred land of Kurán was a form of pride.

	While listening to the various legends, Orba glanced around his surroundings.		While listening to the various legends, Orba glanced around his surroundings.