SGBEG:Volume 1 Act 0 - Revision history

Okabe Zero-Link at 05:40, 9 August 2022

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	“Like I said, stop adding ~~Deina~~ to the end of my name!” At the same moment I cried this, I sat up, coming back to my senses.		“Like I said, stop adding "tina" to the end of my name!” At the same moment I cried this, I sat up, coming back to my senses.

	“Oh dear, why am I crying like this? That bastard. Give me back what I deserve for my making my chest ache!”		“Oh dear, why am I crying like this? That bastard. Give me back what I deserve for my making my chest ache!”
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	Right.		Right.

	I returned to Japan for work and not for a holiday. I came here as a researcher for the ~~Victor Qondria~~ University (in America) since ATF asked me to give a talk on time machines, which, in some sense, found the wrong person. Who the heck had the idea that a neuroscience researcher would also understand the physics stretching to time machines? It was as absurd a proposition as finding a chef for welding steel bars at a construction site. Nevertheless, ATF might only be wanting a layman to give the talk. Put in another way, this was a job of using my own stretch of knowledge to explain time machines. They believe in the importance of flexibility and exchange of constructing knowledge and proposing theories. If I put it this way, it was easier to understand why they would choose a neuroscience researcher to take the job. But this didn’t mean it would convince me, who was already terribly busy in the laboratory, to cross the Pacific Ocean and give some meaningless talk, let alone be interested.		I returned to Japan for work and not for a holiday. I came here as a researcher for the Viktor Chondria University (in America) since ATF asked me to give a talk on time machines, which, in some sense, found the wrong person. Who the heck had the idea that a neuroscience researcher would also understand the physics stretching to time machines? It was as absurd a proposition as finding a chef for welding steel bars at a construction site. Nevertheless, ATF might only be wanting a layman to give the talk. Put in another way, this was a job of using my own stretch of knowledge to explain time machines. They believe in the importance of flexibility and exchange of constructing knowledge and proposing theories. If I put it this way, it was easier to understand why they would choose a neuroscience researcher to take the job. But this didn’t mean it would convince me, who was already terribly busy in the laboratory, to cross the Pacific Ocean and give some meaningless talk, let alone be interested.

	At first, the research laboratory wanted to reject the offer, but when they remembered I had never returned to Japan after going to America for studying, they changed their stance.		At first, the research laboratory wanted to reject the offer, but when they remembered I had never returned to Japan after going to America for studying, they changed their stance.
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	It was blisteringly hot. There were no remarks other than this. With this in mind, I headed to Yushima, which was on the right hand side of Tokyo Medical and Dental University. Going a bit right, you could see the Yushima Seidou; going a bit left, you could see the entrance to the Kandamyoujin shrine. On seeing the green entrance sign, I suddenly remembered a senior who wanted a charm here.		It was blisteringly hot. There were no remarks other than this. With this in mind, I headed to Yushima, which was on the right hand side of Tokyo Medical and Dental University. Going a bit right, you could see the Yushima Seidou; going a bit left, you could see the entrance to the Kandamyoujin shrine. On seeing the green entrance sign, I suddenly remembered a senior who wanted a charm here.

	“You’re a neuroscience researcher at ~~Victor Qondria~~ University, yet you believe in gods. How strange, my senior.”		“You’re a neuroscience researcher at Viktor Chondria University, yet you believe in gods. How strange, my senior.”

	That senior said there were a lot of gods similar to Shiva being worshiped in Japan. Shiva was the god of destruction and creation in India. Kandamyoujin was another one. There was also a god of wealth and Acalanatha. All of them were given to him by one of his acquaintances living in Japan. Of course, in America, there were a lot of people with their beliefs not in conflict with science or even in integration. That senior was one of these people. Science was an act of more in-depth searching of the world created by our Lord than a simple desire of wanting to know. This thought in America’s culture was not rare.		That senior said there were a lot of gods similar to Shiva being worshiped in Japan. Shiva was the god of destruction and creation in India. Kandamyoujin was another one. There was also a god of wealth and Acalanatha. All of them were given to him by one of his acquaintances living in Japan. Of course, in America, there were a lot of people with their beliefs not in conflict with science or even in integration. That senior was one of these people. Science was an act of more in-depth searching of the world created by our Lord than a simple desire of wanting to know. This thought in America’s culture was not rare.
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	Frantically, I apologised to the person I knocked into.		Frantically, I apologised to the person I knocked into.

	The first thing I noticed was the white lab coat this person was wearing. Was he a researcher? Was he here to ~~participatein~~ my father’s conference?		The first thing I noticed was the white lab coat this person was wearing. Was he a researcher? Was he here to participate in my father’s conference?

	As I mistook him for someone understanding my father’s researches, I looked at this person’s face. Then, my brain stopped working.		As I mistook him for someone understanding my father’s researches, I looked at this person’s face. Then, my brain stopped working.

	He was someone in his early twenties, an ~~east-asian~~ with tousled hair. His face was stunned, as if he saw something, his complexion dejected, seemingly out of breath.		He was someone in his early twenties, an East Asian with tousled hair. His face was stunned, as if he saw something, his complexion dejected, seemingly out of breath.

	With this tense face, he mumbled, “Kurisu.”		With this tense face, he mumbled, “Kurisu.”
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	At a loss, I could only sob.		At a loss, I could only sob.

	I could see,through the corners of my eye, vague with tears, the lab-coat-wearing man picking up the knife my father had dropped.		I could see, through the corners of my eye, vague with tears, the lab-coat-wearing man picking up the knife my father had dropped.

	What?		What?
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	The first feeling I had could be depicted by the ~~colour‘white’~~.		The first feeling I had could be depicted by the colour ‘white’.

	It was a subtle feeling to express a feeling using a colour.		It was a subtle feeling to express a feeling using a colour.
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	The dim colour blocked my ability to think. Please. It’s scary.		The dim colour blocked my ability to think. Please. It’s scary.

	~~“Kurisu…Kurisu~~!”		“Kurisu… Kurisu!”

	He kept on calling my name.		He kept on calling my name.

Okabe Zero-Link: Change to be consistent to the official Steins;Gate termunology. Sorry, I change without permission

2022-08-09T05:33:29Z

Change to be consistent to the official Steins;Gate termunology. Sorry, I change without permission

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	“Why is my chest aching with such pain...” Closing my eyes, I said to myself, pressing on my aching chest.		“Why is my chest aching with such pain...” Closing my eyes, I said to myself, pressing on my aching chest.

	The man in front of me called again: ~~Kurisute~~.		The man in front of me called again: Christi...

	“Hey. Isn’t this my name?”		“Hey. Isn’t this my name?”
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	I opened my eyes. The man should be calling my name. Still, why wasn’t the shape of his mouth changing?		I opened my eyes. The man should be calling my name. Still, why wasn’t the shape of his mouth changing?

	~~Kurisudeina~~!		Christina!

	At the instant I read the words his lips were making, a non-suppressible feeling thrashed into me, and under its effects, I cried, unwillingly, “Like I said, stop adding ~~Deina~~ to the end of my name!”		At the instant I read the words his lips were making, a non-suppressible feeling thrashed into me, and under its effects, I cried, unwillingly, “Like I said, stop adding "tina" to the end of my name!”

Axyraandas: /* The 0th Act: Turning Point: Reverse */ There are a lot of things that I could fix, but changing it may sacrifice meaning for clarity, so I didn't.

2014-05-17T20:46:20Z

The 0th Act: Turning Point: Reverse: There are a lot of things that I could fix, but changing it may sacrifice meaning for clarity, so I didn't.

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Pudding321: stop passing the text over an american spellchecker

2014-01-04T12:16:55Z

stop passing the text over an american spellchecker

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Ruckkus at 21:35, 24 December 2013

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Pudding321 at 01:07, 31 May 2013

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	“Could it be a spy from the organisation?”		“Could it be a spy from the organisation?”

	~~“the~~ organisation?”		“The organisation?”

	What was he talking about?		What was he talking about?

	My mind was blank. The question ~~hitting~~ me off track messed up thinking ability.		My mind was blank. The question, having hit me off track, messed up my thinking ability.

	“What? I only have something to ask you...”		“What? I only have something to ask you...”
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	“I have no obligation to answer you!”		“I have no obligation to answer you!”

	I was interrupted before I finished. My fury was ~~enlightened~~ again, ~~apporaching~~ him, who had took out his phone out to contact someone~~, step by ste~~.		I was interrupted before I finished. My fury was ignited again, intensifying, now directed at him, who had took out his phone out to contact someone.

	“Whom are you talking to?”		“Whom are you talking to?”
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	He hadn’t been talking to anyone since the start.		He hadn’t been talking to anyone since the start.

	Besides, his phone was turned off originally. When I stated this, the man’s expression wavered largely, and then he suddenly cracked up.		Besides, his phone was turned off originally. When I stated this in front of him, the man’s expression wavered largely, and then he suddenly cracked up.

	“Wahahaha. Let me tell you exclusively. The power source of the phone will be cut off whenever anyone except me touches it. It’s a special phone for my special mission! Hmph, Hmphh. Wahahaha.”		“Wahahaha. Let me tell you exclusively. The power source of the phone will be cut off whenever anyone except me touches it. It’s a special phone for my special mission! Hmph, Hmphh. Wahahaha.”
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	At the instant I heard his mixed laughing sounds, the rising fire rose in my heart fell below the melting point; it was now that I knew my anger would drastically drop after rising to such a high level.		At the instant I heard his mixed laughing sounds, the rising fire rose in my heart fell below the melting point; it was now that I knew my anger would drastically drop after rising to such a high level.

	“Oh, so you ~~was~~ talking to yourself.”		“Oh, so you were talking to yourself.”

	My words were pointy—suitable, indeed. The man ceased his laughing, perhaps because sensing my anger or some other reason.		My words were pointy—suitable, indeed. The man ceased his laughing, perhaps because of sensing my anger or some other reason.

	Then, I said, “Let’s cut to the chase: what did you want to say me just then?”		Then, I said, “Let’s cut to the chase: what did you want to say me just then?”

	I looked straightly into his eyes, having the intention to look through every act. Even if this man could veil his surface, he couldn’t veil his brain or those evoked by his neurones. Then, as a neuroscience researcher, I was able to read these neural behaviour—the eyes, in particular. The eyes would tell more truth than any word would.		I looked straightly into his eyes, having the intention to look through every act. Even if this man could veil his surface, he couldn’t veil his brain or those evoked by his neurones. Then, as a neuroscience researcher, I was able to read these neural behaviour—the eyes, in particular. The eyes would tell more truth than any spoken word would.

	“About fifteen minutes earlier. You had something to say to me and looked desperate.”		“About fifteen minutes earlier. You had something to say to me and looked desperate.”

Teh Ping at 12:56, 12 May 2013

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	==The 0th Act: Turning Point: Reverse==		==The 0th Act: Turning Point: Reverse==

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	Numbers were dancing around in front of me. Codes fell copiously like rain. Behind the pitch black background, numerous flashy numbers were dancing around.		Numbers were dancing around in front of me. Codes fell copiously like rain. Behind the pitch black background, numerous flashy numbers were dancing around.

Pudding321 at 14:24, 11 May 2013

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	“Kurisu…!”		“Kurisu…!”

	It was the last sound~~, I perceive,~~ I heard.		It was, I perceived, the last sound I heard.

	My consciousness left me after that.		My consciousness left me after that.

Pudding321: typo

2013-05-11T13:50:53Z

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	I went to the staff pathway before anyone had come out.\		I went to the staff pathway before anyone had come out.

	Avoiding the stacked, disarrayed boxes, I stopped near the staff resting room, leaning on the wall and regulating my breathing patterns.		Avoiding the stacked, disarrayed boxes, I stopped near the staff resting room, leaning on the wall and regulating my breathing patterns.
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	My father would come here soon.		My father would come here soon.

	What should I say? How’s these seven years? I wanted to see you for a long ~~itme~~? Or…		What should I say? How’s these seven years? I wanted to see you for a long time? Or…

	I felt my heart danced to some high spirits naturally.		I felt my heart danced to some high spirits naturally.

	No matter what, I first had to tell him about the research papers: he would ~~bound to~~ be happy…		No matter what, I first had to tell him about the research papers: he would definitely be happy…

	For this research paper was the beginning of restarting the relation between my father and I, I opened the envelope to check the papers again. At this time, I felt someone was walking through the staff pathway.		For this research paper was the beginning of restarting the relation between my father and I, I opened the envelope to check the papers again. At this time, I felt someone was walking through the staff pathway.

	It was a man with his mouth mumbling, his footsteps crude while walking.		It was a man with his mouth mumbling, his footsteps crude while walking. He was wearing a deep brown jacket, a black suit, and hair belonging to a forty-year-old man. Right, he was my father.
	He was wearing a deep brown jacket, a black suit, and hair belonging to a forty-year-old man. Right, he was my father.

	Although I decided to greet him first, I felt some dangerous ambiance around him. I backed up a bit.		Although I decided to greet him first, I felt some dangerous ambiance around him. I backed up a bit.

Pudding321 at 10:06, 11 May 2013

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