Saijaku Muhai no Bahamut:Volume 6 Episode 4 - Revision history

Masterupc: /* Part 8 */

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	~~“This…is~~ the Dungeon?”		“This...is the Dungeon?”

	As his body moved past the door, Lux could not help whispering as ~~his~~ witnessed the incredible interior.		As his body moved past the door, Lux could not help whispering as he witnessed the incredible interior.

	Although the ~~Academy’s~~ lectures and pre-mission meeting described what he needed to know, it was still a view beyond his imagination.		Although the Academy's lectures and pre-mission meeting described what he needed to know, it was still a view beyond his imagination.

	~~“What’s~~ up? Is this your first time entering a Ruin?”		“What's up? Is this your first time entering a Ruin?”

	~~“…its~~ very spectacular.”		“...it's very spectacular.”

	In response to Coral, Lux could not say any other words to describe his impression.		In response to Coral, Lux could not say any other words to describe his impression.
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	However, those were his real feelings.		However, those were his real feelings.

	In ~~Lux’s~~ mind, the Dungeon was supposed to appear as caves.		In Lux's mind, the Dungeon was supposed to appear as caves.

	With cold, dark, inorganic rocks channeling through them.		With cold, dark, inorganic rocks channeling through them.
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	Rather than a cave, it was more like a courtyard with walls surrounding it on every side.		Rather than a cave, it was more like a courtyard with walls surrounding it on every side.

	“Here in the middle is the exit to the outside world. There are also places like this far away from where we are with a lake and other scenery, ~~isn’t~~ it interesting?”		“Here in the middle is the exit to the outside world. There are also places like this far away from where we are with a lake and other scenery, isn't it interesting?”

	As Lux curiously looked around, Coral gave his explanation.		As Lux curiously looked around, Coral gave his explanation.
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	As they approached, the other female students would stop to look in adungeonment.		As they approached, the other female students would stop to look in adungeonment.

	“Oh, honor student-sama! Our task is to suppress Abyss here yeah? ~~Don’t~~ treat it like a picnic.”		“Oh, honor student-sama! Our task is to suppress Abyss here yeah? Don't treat it like a picnic.”

	“Greifer is still the same! Our mission should last just a few hours, yet you still get nervous. Or is it that you just want to finish quickly and get back to Princess Milmiette?”		“Greifer is still the same! Our mission should last just a few hours, yet you still get nervous. Or is it that you just want to finish quickly and get back to Princess Milmiette?”
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	Lux looked at the two with a wry smile as a thought crossed his mind.		Lux looked at the two with a wry smile as a thought crossed his mind.

	“So ~~now…how~~ many levels are we going to raid?”		“So now... how many levels are we going to raid?”

	“According to the records the exploration has only reached until level four. The area looks spacious, but ~~it’s~~ actually quite complicated. After we pass three levels, the amount of powerful Abyss and harsh environment will ~~increase…”~~		“According to the records the exploration has only reached until level four. The area looks spacious, but it's actually quite complicated. After we pass three levels, the amount of powerful Abyss and harsh environment will increase...”

	“I see.”		“I see.”

	Listening to ~~Coral’s~~ answer, Lux breathed a sigh of relief.		Listening to Coral's answer, Lux breathed a sigh of relief.

	It seemed that in this Ruin, the existence of Automaton that was called Gear Leader ~~hadn’t~~ been confirmed.		It seemed that in this Ruin, the existence of Automaton that was called Gear Leader hadn't been confirmed.

	Without that Hayes who was called as Lord, the possibility that something happened in Ruin must be low.		Without that Hayes who was called as Lord, the possibility that something happened in Ruin must be low.

	“Shall we begin? Although there are only a few Abyss here, ~~don’t~~ let your guard down and take them one by one!”		“Shall we begin? Although there are only a few Abyss here, don't let your guard down and take them one by one!”

	Lux nodded to ~~Coral’s~~ words, then they too began the Abyss extermination.		Lux nodded to Coral's words, then they too began the Abyss extermination.

	Far in the darkness, a scream could be heard.		Far in the darkness, a scream could be heard.

	“That sound, ~~its~~ Hind huh.”		“That sound, it's Hind huh.”

	“Even though this creature looks like a deer, it is very ferocious. Be very careful!”		“Even though this creature looks like a deer, it is very ferocious. Be very careful!”

	Lux listened to Greifer and ~~Coral’s~~ instructions as he drew his weapon.		Lux listened to Greifer and Coral's instructions as he drew his weapon.

	The suppression mission began with this team that was formed for the first time.		The suppression mission began with this team that was formed for the first time.



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	“Eh……? Looking closesly, could you be……Coral?		“Eh……? Looking closesly, could you be……Coral?

	~~image~~		[[File:Saijaku V6 14.jpg\|thumb\|right]]

	“Oh, ah, um……that’s me. I’m also a boy, so there’s no problem here. Come in.”		“Oh, ah, um……that’s me. I’m also a boy, so there’s no problem here. Come in.”
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	Feeling like their consciousness was separting from the body, the three of them entered the Dungeon.		Feeling like their consciousness was separting from the body, the three of them entered the Dungeon.



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	“──Fuh. I was just giving him a bit of nice memory in my own way as my feeling of gratitude. No, though it’s not a mistake that I’m pleased with him.”		“──Fuh. I was just giving him a bit of nice memory in my own way as my feeling of gratitude. No, though it’s not a mistake that I’m pleased with him.”

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	“Is that really true～…… ? Sharis, even though she has been putting act as a big sis but she is actually pure, so she is unexpectedly weak against straight advance though~, ……and she like younger one too.”		“Is that really true～…… ? Sharis, even though she has been putting act as a big sis but she is actually pure, so she is unexpectedly weak against straight advance though~, ……and she like younger one too.”

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	“Yes, I think that’s quite bold of Sharis. ……In fact, you like Lux-san, correct?”		“Yes, I think that’s quite bold of Sharis. ……In fact, you like Lux-san, correct?”

	“──Fuh. I was just giving him a bit of nice memory in my ~~onw~~ way as my feeling of gratitude. No, though it’s not a mistake that I’m pleased with him.”		“──Fuh. I was just giving him a bit of nice memory in my own way as my feeling of gratitude. No, though it’s not a mistake that I’m pleased with him.”

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	The three of them stepped forth toward the passage of Drag-Ride hangar that was borrowed from Ruin’s Gear		The three of them stepped forth toward the passage of Drag-Ride hangar that was borrowed from Ruin’s Gear



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	Zwei nodded in agreement to that before he immediately cut off the Dragon Voice’s communication.		Zwei nodded in agreement to that before he immediately cut off the Dragon Voice’s communication.

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	“……That was a tiresome battle. Good grief.”		“……That was a tiresome battle. Good grief.”

IcePhantom at 10:19, 23 January 2018

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	==Episode 4: Second Ruin 『Maze』(Dungeon)==		==Episode 4 – Second Ruin 『Maze』(Dungeon)==

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2018-01-23T10:18:15Z

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	There was an emergency call. Almost all the officers as well as the officer cadet who were the examinees of Class Promotion Exam were gathered on the Canopy at the upper part of Ruin’s Gear’s center.		There was an emergency call. Almost all the officers as well as the officer cadet who were the examinees of Class Promotion Exam were gathered on the Canopy at the upper part of Ruin’s Gear’s center.

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