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Nscorz: /* Prologue */

2015-10-13T17:10:01Z

Prologue

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	Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.		Lautreamont Knight Country; people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.

	To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.		To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.

	Sandwiched between the two major powers; a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.		Sandwiched between the two major powers: a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.

	Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.		Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.

	Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.		Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons –- an academy for Dragon Breeders.


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Platypi4E4: /* Prologue */ Proposed rework of the Prologue (see note)

2015-08-24T17:33:59Z

Prologue: Proposed rework of the Prologue (see note)

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	Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.		Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.

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			Lautreamont Knight Country, also called 'the country of Dragon Breeders', was sandwiched between two major powers.

			To the north lay the Zepharos Empire and to its south lay the Chevron Kingdom.

			Despite its small size and a population numbering less than five million, it possessed a special academy: the An'Sullivan Dragon Riding Academy.

			This Academy educated and guided teenage boys and girls to form contracts with dragons. Specifically however, it was an academy for Dragon Breeders. * -->

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Frenzy85: nonessential explanations sandwiched between commas

2014-06-28T22:05:46Z

nonessential explanations sandwiched between commas

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	To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.		To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.

	Sandwiched between the two major powers, a small country with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.		Sandwiched between the two major powers; a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.

	Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.		Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.

TJYYEO at 13:32, 16 April 2014

2014-04-16T13:32:16Z

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			==Prologue==
	Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.		Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.

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Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.

To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.

Sandwiched between the two major powers, a small country with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.

Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.

Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.

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