Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 2 Prologue - Revision history

Foggy glasses: Minor grammar changes.

2018-09-21T08:52:37Z

Minor grammar changes.

Raptor980: /* Prologue */

2016-10-06T23:55:54Z

Prologue

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	Rebecca also started clapping along.		Rebecca also started clapping along.

	Driven by the two… The sound of ~~applauses~~ slowly spread to every corner of the venue.		Driven by the two… The sound of applause slowly spread to every corner of the venue.

	Ash looked around the hall. His best friends, Raymond and Max, were smiling at him while clapping and cheering.		Ash looked around the hall. His best friends, Raymond and Max, were smiling at him while clapping and cheering.
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	Rebecca vividly described to the students the actual scenes of the 'Pal Party'.		Rebecca vividly described to the students the actual scenes of the 'Pal Party'.

	"... At that time, I felt as if someone had confessed to me. By the way, my fellow students, even though Silvia looks like an old ~~fogy~~, in fact she has one or two men to her liking-"		"... At that time, I felt as if someone had confessed to me. By the way, my fellow students, even though Silvia looks like an old fogey, in fact she has one or two men to her liking-"

	"President! That’s enough!"		"President! That’s enough!"

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2015-08-26T00:57:23Z

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Yoyoyo5678: Removing sentences that someone added by himself + editing

2014-04-26T09:45:16Z

Removing sentences that someone added by himself + editing

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2014-04-26T05:24:23Z

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	Rebecca also started clapping along.		Rebecca also started clapping along.

	Driven by ~~both applauds…~~ The sound of ~~applause~~ slowly spread to every corner of the venue.		Driven by the two… The sound of applauses slowly spread to every corner of the venue.

	Ash looked around the hall. His best friends, Raymond and Max, were smiling at him while clapping and cheering.		Ash looked around the hall. His best friends, Raymond and Max, were smiling at him while clapping and cheering.

117.0.169.107: /* Part 1 */

2014-04-26T05:19:37Z

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	After seeing Ash laughing out of the blue. Silvia looked at him in surprise.		After seeing Ash laughing out of the blue. Silvia looked at him in surprise.

	"So even Her Royal Highness can be nervous. Ah... then it is quite okay for ordinary people like me to feel nervous. After knowing about this, I suddenly feel relieved. Thank you!" Ash beamed.		"So even Her Royal Highness can be nervous. Ah... then it is quite okay for ordinary people like me to feel nervous too. After knowing about this, I suddenly feel relieved. Thank you!" Ash beamed.

	"I- It's nothing, there's no need to thank me, for something so small."		"I- It's nothing, there's no need to thank me, for something so small."

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2014-04-26T04:45:10Z

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	"What's so great about that..." Silva admited abashedly.		"What's so great about that..." Silva admited abashedly.

	Perhaps because she wasn't accustomed to being praised, Silvia blushed~~. Because of her~~ embarrassment ~~she~~ looked down at the ground. After a while her swollen face suddenly stiffened, and she snappily asked Ash:		Perhaps because she wasn't accustomed to being praised, Silvia blushed in embarrassment and looked down at the ground. After a while her swollen face suddenly stiffened, and she snappily asked Ash:

	"That's none of your concern! Why don't you mind your own business! You're going up on the stage next. Are you sure you'll be all right?"		"That's none of your concern! Why don't you mind your own business! You're going up on the stage next. Are you sure you'll be all right?"

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2014-04-26T04:41:20Z

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	After Silvia solemnly answered she took a step forward from the stage's side curtain.		After Silvia solemnly answered she took a step forward from the stage's side curtain.

	"Blue Ice Princess" ~~Rebecca~~ declared proudly.		"Blue Ice Princess" Silvia declared proudly.

	Just like the impression given through that name, Silvia's blue eyes were as cold as ice with bright blond hair that embellished her white beauty.		Just like the impression given through that name, Silvia's blue eyes were as cold as ice with bright blond hair that embellished her white beauty.

Aoi uchuu: English phrases mostly. Words and grammar too.

2014-02-08T02:07:49Z

English phrases mostly. Words and grammar too.

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Krytyk: Princess-sama sticks our like a sore thumb, princess is an english title that carries more respectability then japanese "hime" used in original, it does not need a second honorific, makes it look awful.

2013-11-23T06:14:33Z

Princess-sama sticks our like a sore thumb, princess is an english title that carries more respectability then japanese "hime" used in original, it does not need a second honorific, makes it look awful.

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	Ash pretend to turn his head around casually and found out that Silvia is staring directly at him.		Ash pretend to turn his head around casually and found out that Silvia is staring directly at him.

	"...Princess~~-sama~~?"		"...Princess?"

	Silvia, who held her fist towards her chest, forcefully nodded.		Silvia, who held her fist towards her chest, forcefully nodded.

	''- To think Princess~~-sama~~ would actually cheer for me ...!''		''- To think Princess would actually cheer for me ...!''

	Even though it was a small action, Ash suddenly felt a lot more at ease.		Even though it was a small action, Ash suddenly felt a lot more at ease.
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	A loud clapping sound could be heard by Ash.		A loud clapping sound could be heard by Ash.

	"Princess~~-sama~~ ...?"		"Princess ...?"

	That's right. Silvia, standing on the stage side curtain, took the lead by starting to applaud.		That's right. Silvia, standing on the stage side curtain, took the lead by starting to applaud.
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	In just a moment, Silvia immediately resumed the usually chilly attitude. However, Ash decided to take it as a praise.		In just a moment, Silvia immediately resumed the usually chilly attitude. However, Ash decided to take it as a praise.

	"It's all thanks to you, Princess~~-sama~~... Is Eco not present yet?"		"It's all thanks to you, Princess... Is Eco not present yet?"

	Ash's pal, Eco, has yet to show up, which made him worry.		Ash's pal, Eco, has yet to show up, which made him worry.