Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume11 Chapter9 - Revision history

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Zzhk: Undo revision 278385 by 99.19.93.10 (talk)

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Undo revision 278385 by 99.19.93.10 (talk)

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	The muffled Mireille was dragged off to somewhere unknown.		The muffled Mireille was dragged off to somewhere unknown.

	~~"..."~~

	"...Milla has become quite a capable maid."		"...Milla has become quite a capable maid."

	Kamito ~~exclaimed after~~ a while.		Kamito nodded for a while, greatly impressed.

	"Say, where's Carol?"		"Say, where's Carol?"

99.19.93.10: /* Part 3 */

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Part 3

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	The muffled Mireille was dragged off to somewhere unknown.		The muffled Mireille was dragged off to somewhere unknown.

			"..."

	"...Milla has become quite a capable maid."		"...Milla has become quite a capable maid."

	Kamito exclaimed ~~for~~ a while.		Kamito exclaimed after a while.

	"Say, where's Carol?"		"Say, where's Carol?"

Royaloyalz at 11:49, 11 August 2013

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	The young noblewomen were chattering nonstop as they watched Kamito from afar.		The young noblewomen were chattering nonstop as they watched Kamito from afar.

	The members of winning team were the guests of honor. Being the center of attention could not be helped—		The members of the winning team were the guests of honor. Being the center of attention could not be helped—

	"L-Let's go, Kamito."		"L-Let's go, Kamito."
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	"I don't have a partner. Let's dance?"		"I don't have a partner. Let's dance?"

	"You're pretty cute when you don't speak. I'm sure you could find a couple partners—"		"You're pretty cute when you don't speak. I'm sure you could find a couple of partners—"

	"There's no one I want to dance with, idiot. B-But... I-If it's you, I guess it's fine."		"There's no one I want to dance with, idiot. B-But... I-If it's you, I guess it's fine."

Zzhk: /* Chapter 9 - The Last Night */

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Chapter 9 - The Last Night

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Evening. Having changed into a suit, Kamito was attending the victory celebration party held at the ~~great shrine~~.		Evening. Having changed into a suit, Kamito was attending the victory celebration party held at the Grand Shrine.

	Gathered in the spacious hall were nobles from the various countries, enthusiastically conversing about the «Blade Dance».		Gathered in the spacious hall were nobles from the various countries, enthusiastically conversing about the «Blade Dance».
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	As though guided by the pain on his left hand—		As though guided by the pain on his left hand—

	Kamito walked over to the terrace outside the ~~great shrine~~.		Kamito walked over to the terrace outside the Grand Shrine.

	The cold air of the night brushed against his face softly.		The cold air of the night brushed against his face softly.
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	"Is it okay for you to appear in this kind of place?"		"Is it okay for you to appear in this kind of place?"

	The «Sacred Spirit Knights» led by Luminaris were inside the ~~great shrine~~. Since they were targeting Restia, appearing here might be dangerous.		The «Sacred Spirit Knights» led by Luminaris were inside the Grand Shrine. Since they were targeting Restia, appearing here might be dangerous.

	"No problem. The Holy Kingdom of Lugia cannot make their move in a densely crowded place like here."		"No problem. The Holy Kingdom of Lugia cannot make their move in a densely crowded place like here."

Zzhk at 19:13, 10 August 2013

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	"Kamito is my master."		"Kamito is my master."

	Est hugged his arm tightly. Her petite and cute chest pressed against ~~him~~ arm.		Est hugged his arm tightly. Her petite and cute chest pressed against his arm.

	"...Wah!"		"...Wah!"

	"Oh dear, Miss Sacred Sword, you should be the one to leave Kamito, right?"		"Oh dear, Miss Sacred Sword, you should be the one to leave Kamito instead, right?"

	This time, Restia pulled Kamito to her side, squeezing his arm between her cleavage.		This time, Restia pulled Kamito to her side, squeezing his arm between her cleavage.

Zzhk at 14:17, 10 August 2013

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	Kamito remembered that it was a swimsuit that could be worn as underwear as well—		Kamito remembered that it was a swimsuit that could be worn as underwear as well—

	...Inexplicably, as soon as he became aware that she was wearing a swimsuit under the dress, all sorts of strange ~~images appeared in his mind~~.		...Inexplicably, as soon as he became aware that she was wearing a swimsuit under the dress, he began to imagine all sorts of strange things.

	"W-Why are you staring at my body! Pervert, what a pervert!"		"W-Why are you staring at my body! Pervert, what a pervert!"
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	Claire shrugged.		Claire shrugged.

	Fianna had gone over ~~as the team's representative~~ to ~~mingle with~~ the ~~gathered~~ Ordesia Empire's nobles and VIPs.		Fianna had gone over to where the Ordesia Empire's nobles and VIPs were gathered in order to greet them as the team's representative.

	This was supposed to be the job of the team leader, Claire, but there were many nobles who viewed her with disdain as the «Calamity Queen»'s sister. Hence, the imperial family's Fianna went in her stead.		This was supposed to be the job of the team leader, Claire, but there were many nobles who viewed her with disdain as the «Calamity Queen»'s sister. Hence, the imperial family's Fianna went in her stead.

80.223.220.209 at 14:07, 10 August 2013

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Evening. ~~Changed~~ into a suit, Kamito was attending the victory celebration party held at the great shrine.		Evening. Having changed into a suit, Kamito was attending the victory celebration party held at the great shrine.

	Gathered in the spacious hall were nobles from the various countries, enthusiastically conversing about the «Blade Dance».		Gathered in the spacious hall were nobles from the various countries, enthusiastically conversing about the «Blade Dance».
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	The young noblewomen were chattering nonstop as they watched Kamito from afar.		The young noblewomen were chattering nonstop as they watched Kamito from afar.

	The winning team ~~was~~ the guests of honor. Being the center of attention could not be helped—		The members of winning team were the guests of honor. Being the center of attention could not be helped—

	"L-Let's go, Kamito."		"L-Let's go, Kamito."
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	(...Damn she's really cute when she's not talking.)		(...Damn she's really cute when she's not talking.)

	Kamito blushed, turning his gaze away from boldly open neckline.		Kamito blushed, turning his gaze away from the boldly open neckline.

	The «Blade Dance» participants had all gathered to the center of the great hall.		The «Blade Dance» participants had all gathered to the center of the great hall.
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	Kamito remembered that it was a swimsuit that could be worn as underwear as well—		Kamito remembered that it was a swimsuit that could be worn as underwear as well—

	...Inexplicably, as soon as he became aware that she was wearing a swimsuit under the dress, all sorts of strange ~~imaginings~~ appeared in his mind.		...Inexplicably, as soon as he became aware that she was wearing a swimsuit under the dress, all sorts of strange images appeared in his mind.

	"W-Why are you staring at my body! Pervert, what a pervert!"		"W-Why are you staring at my body! Pervert, what a pervert!"
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	Claire shrugged.		Claire shrugged.

	Fianna had gone over as the team's representative to mingle with the Ordesia Empire's nobles and VIPs ~~were gathered~~.		Fianna had gone over as the team's representative to mingle with the gathered Ordesia Empire's nobles and VIPs.

	This was supposed to be the job of the team leader, Claire, but there were many nobles who viewed her with disdain as the «Calamity Queen»'s sister. Hence, the imperial family's Fianna went in her stead.		This was supposed to be the job of the team leader, Claire, but there were many nobles who viewed her with disdain as the «Calamity Queen»'s sister. Hence, the imperial family's Fianna went in her stead.

	The one tasked with this responsibility, Fianna was dressed in a extravagant dress sewn with silver threads.		The one tasked with this responsibility, Fianna was dressed in an extravagant dress sewn with silver threads.

	She had a silver bracelet on her slender arm. On her head was a gemmed tiara.		She had a silver bracelet on her slender arm. On her head was a gemmed tiara.
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	As expected of a daughter from a noble family. Her dance steps were quite flawless.		As expected of a daughter from a noble family. Her dance steps were quite flawless.

	Through intimate skin contact, sensations of body ~~warm~~ and a feminine body's suppleness were transmitted.		Through intimate skin contact, sensations of body warmth and a feminine body's suppleness were transmitted.

	Kamito found it difficult not to feel conscious of it.		Kamito found it difficult not to feel conscious of it.
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	Claire whispered by his ear.		Claire whispered by his ear.

	"That matter... I have already committed my decision."		"That matter... I have already committed to my decision."

	"...Is that so?"		"...Is that so?"

Zzhk at 10:33, 10 August 2013

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	Claire whispered by his ear.		Claire whispered by his ear.

	"That matter... I have already ~~resolved~~ my ~~self~~."		"That matter... I have already committed my decision."

	"...Is that so?"		"...Is that so?"

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	At this moment—		At this moment—

	"Kamito, listen to me—		"Kamito, listen to me—"

	Claire whispered by his ear.		Claire whispered by his ear.

	"That matter... I have already resolved me self."		"That matter... I have already resolved my self."

	"...Is that so?"		"...Is that so?"