Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Epilogue - Revision history

Rxls: Undo revision 535580 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:33:45Z

Undo revision 535580 by Masterupc (talk)

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	It was not Rinslet's room this time.		It was not Rinslet's room this time.

	There were large bookcases and shelves of medicine~~. This~~ should be the health center of the academy.		There were large bookcases and shelves of medicine; this should be the health center of the academy.

	It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.		It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.
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	To have a blank period of three-years is too much for an elementalist.		To have a blank period of three-years is too much for an elementalist.

	Kamito was about to slowly get up from ~~bed...~~		Kamito was about to slowly get up from bed—

	"Kamito, you woke up?"		"Kamito, you woke up?"
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	Then something wiggled inside the bed sheets.		Then something wiggled inside the bed sheets.

	"~~...What~~!"		"—What!"

	Kamito quickly pulled up the sheets.		Kamito quickly pulled up the sheets.
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	"Because I am your contracted spirit."		"Because I am your contracted spirit."

	"..."		"......"

	There's no use. She is not the type you could communicate with easily.		There's no use. She is not the type you could communicate with easily.
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	Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.		Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.

	Just at that time. Tramp, suddenly the door opened.		Just at that time. Tramp- suddenly the door opened.

	"Kamito, have you woken ~~up...?~~"		"Kamito, have you woken up—"

	Claire stiffened as she came inside the room.		Claire stiffened as she came inside the room.
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	"No, I am Kamito's contracted spirit. To protect him is my duty."		"No, I am Kamito's contracted spirit. To protect him is my duty."

	"Sword... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my slave spirit, so you as his contracted spirit, are in my possession as well."		"Sword ... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my slave spirit, so you as his contracted spirit, are in my possession as well."

	"Kamito, is it true?"		"Kamito, is it true?"

	"Well... No... See..."		"Well ... No... See..."

	As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.		As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.
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	"Milady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"		"Milady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"

	"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't ~~mean...~~"		"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't mean—"

	"...Eh? Rinslet and Carol, what are you doing here?"		"...Eh? Rinslet and Carol, what are you doing here?"
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	[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]
	"I... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the Sylphid Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"		"I ... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the Sylphid Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"

	The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.		The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.

	Then, all witnessed Est on the bed at the same time.		Then- all witnessed Est on the bed at the same time.

	"What!" "Oops!" "What on earth..."		"What!" "Oops!" "What on earth..."
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...		<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...

	Ellis conjured up Ray Hawk. Rinslet called out Ice Longbow.		Ellis conjured up Ray Hawk; Rinslet called out Ice Longbow.

	Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.		Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.
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	Claire waved her flame whip and smiled.		Claire waved her flame whip and smiled.

	"Wait... This is a mistake~~...~~ oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"		"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"

	The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.

	The grand feast for ~~elementalists, Blade~~ Dance, would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists—Blade Dance would be held in two months.

	FIN		FIN

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>
	</noinclude>

Masterupc: punctuation

2018-02-24T00:35:47Z

punctuation

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	It was not Rinslet's room this time.		It was not Rinslet's room this time.

	There were large bookcases and shelves of medicine~~; this~~ should be the health center of the academy.		There were large bookcases and shelves of medicine. This should be the health center of the academy.

	It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.		It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.
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	To have a blank period of three-years is too much for an elementalist.		To have a blank period of three-years is too much for an elementalist.

	Kamito was about to slowly get up from ~~bed—~~		Kamito was about to slowly get up from bed...

	"Kamito, you woke up?"		"Kamito, you woke up?"
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	Then something wiggled inside the bed sheets.		Then something wiggled inside the bed sheets.

	"~~—What~~!"		"...What!"

	Kamito quickly pulled up the sheets.		Kamito quickly pulled up the sheets.
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	"Because I am your contracted spirit."		"Because I am your contracted spirit."

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	There's no use. She is not the type you could communicate with easily.		There's no use. She is not the type you could communicate with easily.
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	Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.		Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.

	Just at that time. Tramp- suddenly the door opened.		Just at that time. Tramp, suddenly the door opened.

	"Kamito, have you woken ~~up—~~"		"Kamito, have you woken up...?"

	Claire stiffened as she came inside the room.		Claire stiffened as she came inside the room.
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	"No, I am Kamito's contracted spirit. To protect him is my duty."		"No, I am Kamito's contracted spirit. To protect him is my duty."

	"Sword ... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my slave spirit, so you as his contracted spirit, are in my possession as well."		"Sword... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my slave spirit, so you as his contracted spirit, are in my possession as well."

	"Kamito, is it true?"		"Kamito, is it true?"

	"Well ... No... See..."		"Well... No... See..."

	As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.		As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.
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	"Milady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"		"Milady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"

	"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't ~~mean—~~"		"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't mean..."

	"...Eh? Rinslet and Carol, what are you doing here?"		"...Eh? Rinslet and Carol, what are you doing here?"
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	[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]
	"I ... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the Sylphid Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"		"I... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the Sylphid Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"

	The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.		The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.

	Then- all witnessed Est on the bed at the same time.		Then, all witnessed Est on the bed at the same time.

	"What!" "Oops!" "What on earth..."		"What!" "Oops!" "What on earth..."
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...		<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...

	Ellis conjured up Ray Hawk; Rinslet called out Ice Longbow.		Ellis conjured up Ray Hawk. Rinslet called out Ice Longbow.

	Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.		Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.
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	Claire waved her flame whip and smiled.		Claire waved her flame whip and smiled.

	"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"		"Wait... This is a mistake... oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"

	The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.

	The grand feast for ~~elementalists—Blade~~ Dance would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists, Blade Dance, would be held in two months.

	FIN		FIN

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}
			</noinclude>

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-21T17:47:54Z

reformatting + consistency

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	A burning flame whip appeared in Claire's hand.		A burning flame whip appeared in Claire's hand.

	"You are in the way, ~~Sword Spirit~~. I am going to turn this guy into charcoal cinders. Please move aside!"		"You are in the way, sword spirit. I am going to turn this guy into charcoal cinders. Please move aside!"

	"No, I am Kamito's ~~contract~~ spirit. To protect him is my duty."		"No, I am Kamito's contracted spirit. To protect him is my duty."

	"Sword ... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my ~~Slave Spirit~~, so you as his ~~contract~~ spirit, are in my possession as well."		"Sword ... sword spirit, listen! Kamito... Kamito is my slave spirit, so you as his contracted spirit, are in my possession as well."

	"Kamito, is it true?"		"Kamito, is it true?"

Cthaeh: mdash formatting only

2014-11-23T18:48:26Z

mdash formatting only

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:48, 23 November 2014
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	The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.

	The grand feast for ~~elementalists— Blade~~ Dance would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists—Blade Dance would be held in two months.

	FIN		FIN

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>

Cthaeh at 18:03, 23 November 2014

2014-11-23T18:03:47Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:03, 23 November 2014
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	It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.		It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.

	After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a ~~Blade Dance~~ in such a state.		After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a blade dance in such a state.

	(Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.)		(Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.)
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	[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:STnBD V01 260.jpg\|thumb]]
	"I ... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the ~~Sylpid~~ Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"		"I ... I'm just here to express our gratitude to Kamito on behalf of the Sylphid Knights. There is absolutely no other meaning!"

	The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.		The three princesses opened the door as they had their conversation.
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...		<nowiki></nowiki>Googogogog...

	Ellis conjured up ~~«Ray Hawk»~~; Rinslet called out ~~«Ice Longbow»~~.		Ellis conjured up Ray Hawk; Rinslet called out Ice Longbow.

	Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.		Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.
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	The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.

	The grand feast for elementalists— ~~«Blade Dance»~~ would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists— Blade Dance would be held in two months.

	FIN		FIN

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter8\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Afterword}}</noinclude>

Zzhk: Undo revision 254508 by 95.65.31.83 (talk) why are you removing details?

2013-05-27T05:14:07Z

Undo revision 254508 by 95.65.31.83 (talk) why are you removing details?

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	"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"		"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"

	The flame whip mercilessly lashed down.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down on Kamito's head.

	The grand feast for elementalists— «Blade Dance» would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists— «Blade Dance» would be held in two months.

95.65.31.83: /* Epilogue */

2013-05-27T04:00:28Z

Epilogue

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	"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"		"Wait... This is a mistake- oh wa ah ah ah ah ah ah!"

	~~At the top of Kamito's head, the~~ flame whip mercilessly lashed down.		The flame whip mercilessly lashed down.

	The grand feast for elementalists— «Blade Dance» would be held in two months.		The grand feast for elementalists— «Blade Dance» would be held in two months.

Rewqas: /* Epilogue */

2013-05-07T05:26:46Z

Epilogue

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	It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.		It looked like he couldn't shoulder the burden of elemental waffe and passed out, again.

	After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a ~~blade dance~~ in such a state.		After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a Blade Dance in such a state.

	(Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.)		(Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.)
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	Kamito smiled bitterly at the wrist wrapped in bandages.		Kamito smiled bitterly at the wrist wrapped in bandages.

	To have a blank period of three-years is too much for a elementalist.		To have a blank period of three-years is too much for an elementalist.

	Kamito was about to slowly get up from bed—		Kamito was about to slowly get up from bed—
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	As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.		As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.

	"~~My lady~~ if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"		"Milady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"

	"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't mean—"		"Being the first or not, for me, doesn't mean—"

Royaloyalz: Minor edits

2013-02-27T08:09:42Z

Minor edits

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	"Kamito, you woke up?"		"Kamito, you woke up?"

	A voice ~~can~~ be heard from somewhere.		A voice could be heard from somewhere.

	Looking around, he couldn't see anyone.		Looking around, he couldn't see anyone.
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	"......"		"......"

	There's no use. She is not the type to communicate with easily.		There's no use. She is not the type you could communicate with easily.

	Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.		Kamito held his head that started aching little by little.
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	"This is not how it looks..."		"This is not how it looks..."

	But with a naked girl only in knee-socks on top of him, whatever explanations given were ~~to be~~ futile.		But with a naked girl only in knee-socks on top of him, whatever explanations given were futile.

	"You... You! What the hell are you doing?"		"You... You! What the hell are you doing?"
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	"Well ... No... See..."		"Well ... No... See..."

	As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds ~~can~~ be heard from the corridor.		As Kamito struggled for words, other sounds could be heard from the corridor.

	"My lady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"		"My lady if you don't hurry, Miss Claire will be the first!"
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	Ellis conjured up «Ray Hawk»; Rinslet called out «Ice Longbow».		Ellis conjured up «Ray Hawk»; Rinslet called out «Ice Longbow».

	Last, an inexplicable ~~fry~~ pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.		Last, an inexplicable frying pan was in Carol's hand out of nowhere.

	"Kamito, what last words do you have to say?"		"Kamito, what last words do you have to say?"

KuroiHikari at 09:58, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T09:58:34Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 09:58, 23 February 2013
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	After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a blade dance in such a state.		After all, he was still in a physical condition where he had to lie down and rest, so it was no wonder that he collapsed when performing a blade dance in such a state.

	''Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.''		(Oh... I really can't do it the same as old times.)

	Kamito smiled bitterly at the wrist wrapped in bandages.		Kamito smiled bitterly at the wrist wrapped in bandages.