Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Rxls at 14:48, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 1: Team Battle==		==Chapter 1 - Team Battle==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Rxls: Undo revision 535671 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:23:13Z

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Masterupc: punctuation, grammar

2018-02-25T02:22:06Z

punctuation, grammar

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Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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AngelicMasterMind: /* Part 3 */

2014-10-31T18:42:44Z

Part 3

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	(I'll stun her in one strike—)		(I'll stun her in one strike—)

	He nimbly evaded<!--It was empty before, I randomly added "evaded".-->her attack and aimed the handle of the sword at her stomach—		He nimbly evaded<!--It was empty before, I randomly added "evaded".--> her attack and aimed the handle of the sword at her stomach—

	At that moment, an intense flash blinded him.		At that moment, an intense flash blinded him.

Hiro Hayase at 19:30, 22 July 2014

2014-07-22T19:30:03Z

Hiro Hayase: typo

2014-07-21T22:43:36Z

typo

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	The fallen Claire released countless fireballs from her hand.		The fallen Claire released countless fireballs from her hand.

	However, the armor type elemental waffe plunged right ~~trough~~ the barrage of flames.		However, the armor type elemental waffe plunged right through the barrage of flames.

	"Ha, the flame attribute isn't effective against the carapace spirit. Didn't you learn that during the lecture?"		"Ha, the flame attribute isn't effective against the carapace spirit. Didn't you learn that during the lecture?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 369908 by 07n156 (talk) images are positioned according to their placement in the original text

2014-07-16T01:17:50Z

Undo revision 369908 by 07n156 (talk) images are positioned according to their placement in the original text

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	<nowiki></nowiki>Bam! The bathroom door was slammed opened and there—		<nowiki></nowiki>Bam! The bathroom door was slammed opened and there—

07n156: /* Chapter 1: Team Battle */

2014-07-15T23:53:51Z

Chapter 1: Team Battle

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	<nowiki></nowiki>Bam! The bathroom door was slammed opened and there—		<nowiki></nowiki>Bam! The bathroom door was slammed opened and there—

Chaotic Run: Typo + Missing word random edit

2014-07-07T11:36:19Z

Typo + Missing word random edit

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	She looked downwards with a red face and Kamito let her down with a relieved sigh.		She looked downwards with a red face and Kamito let her down with a relieved sigh.

	The carapace elementalist had already disappeared. It seemed that, because Claire was defeated in the recent attack, she was waiting for another chance for a surprise assault. As ~~opossed~~ to her outward appearance, she was the cautious type.		The carapace elementalist had already disappeared. It seemed that, because Claire was defeated in the recent attack, she was waiting for another chance for a surprise assault. As opposed to her outward appearance, she was the cautious type.

	From deep within the forest, Scarlet, who was supposed to be chasing the thunder elementalist, returned.		From deep within the forest, Scarlet, who was supposed to be chasing the thunder elementalist, returned.
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	"However, it's strange that they aren't coming to chase us. I know that they're being cautious but— still."		"However, it's strange that they aren't coming to chase us. I know that they're being cautious but— still."

	"That's right. From the ~~begining~~, that thunder elementalist's movement could only be seen as stalling for time."		"That's right. From the beginning, that thunder elementalist's movement could only be seen as stalling for time."

	Astral Zero's forest was quieting down.		Astral Zero's forest was quieting down.
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	Raven Class's homeroom teacher and this match's inspector, Freya Grandol.		Raven Class's homeroom teacher and this match's inspector, Freya Grandol.

	Thanks to her contracted spirit's ability, she was able to travel ~~trough~~ shadows—		Thanks to her contracted spirit's ability, she was able to travel through shadows—

	"Is that alright? To appear in the middle of the match."		"Is that alright? To appear in the middle of the match."
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	From the top of the gigantic scaffolding, she faced their side and thrust the cane with a snap.		From the top of the gigantic scaffolding, she faced their side and thrust the cane with a snap.

	"Wh...what's going on, that girl ... when did she ~~managed~~ to make a shrine that big!?"		"Wh...what's going on, that girl ... when did she manage to make a shrine that big!?"

	"We were preparing it from the last night to have it ready for today's match."		"We were preparing it from the last night to have it ready for today's match."

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	"As expected of a team of the cunning Wolverine Class."		"As expected of a team of the cunning Wolverine Class."

	"It's not that they're particularly cunning or anything, considering their fellow spirits' compatibility, it was a obvious strategy."		"It's not that they're particularly cunning or anything, considering their fellow spirits' compatibility, it was an obvious strategy."

	Kamito said with a shrug and Claire sullenly shut her mouth.		Kamito said with a shrug and Claire sullenly shut her mouth.
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	He glared at Claire beside him with scorn; in response she quickly averted her eyes.		He glared at Claire beside him with scorn; in response she quickly averted her eyes.

	"In the first place,though, I think it is strange to have a five-to-two match ."		"In the first place, though, I think it is strange to have a five-to-two match ."

	Despite the fact they only had two people; the team they were facing had five people. They had already defeated two, but the sniper thunder elementalist, the hand-to-hand-fighting type carapace elementalist and then the last person, who had yet to show herself, were remaining.		Despite the fact they only had two people; the team they were facing had five people. They had already defeated two, but the sniper thunder elementalist, the hand-to-hand-fighting type carapace elementalist and then the last person, who had yet to show herself, were remaining.
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	The ground was violently shaking. The flames of the torches, lighting the area surrounding the shrine, were thunderously burning up.		The ground was violently shaking. The flames of the torches, lighting the area surrounding the shrine, were thunderously burning up.

	...He felt tremendous pressure. What that girl was trying to use was an outrageously ~~powerfull~~ spirit. It was likely that it roughly matched the giant military spirit they fought the other day.		...He felt tremendous pressure. What that girl was trying to use was an outrageously powerful spirit. It was likely that it roughly matched the giant military spirit they fought the other day.

	"—I won't let you. Scarlet!"		"—I won't let you. Scarlet!"
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	As an elementalist, Claire was a genius.		As an elementalist, Claire was a genius.

	Although the compatibility of hers and ~~carapice~~ spirit worked against her, in a one-on-one battle, she would not lose.		Although the compatibility of hers and carapace spirit worked against her, in a one-on-one battle, she would not lose.

	There was a considerable distance till the shrine, but with Kamito's speed, he should make it in time.		There was a considerable distance till the shrine, but with Kamito's speed, he should make it in time.
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	(I'll stun her in one strike—)		(I'll stun her in one strike—)

	He nimbly her attack and aimed the handle of the sword at her stomach—		He nimbly evaded<!--It was empty before, I randomly added "evaded".-->her attack and aimed the handle of the sword at her stomach—

	At that moment, an intense flash blinded him.		At that moment, an intense flash blinded him.