Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter7 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 7 - Valentia Holy Festival==		==Chapter 7: Valentia Holy Festival==
	=== Part 1 ===		=== Part 1 ===
	It was evening. The plaza of Academy Town was bustling with crowds of people.		It was evening. The plaza of Academy Town was bustling with crowds of people.

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	"Her blade dance was a blade dance more noble than anyone's. If that was not the case, it would be impossible for her to satisfy the Elemental Lords, and above all, why do you think the girls, who were watching her at that venue, are now still attracted to her."		"Her blade dance was a blade dance more noble than anyone's. If that was not the case, it would be impossible for her to satisfy the Elemental Lords, and above all, why do you think the girls, who were watching her at that venue, are now still attracted to her?"

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Chapter 7 - Valentia Holy Festival

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	In its path, there was a small girl who was petrified.		In its path, there was a small girl who was petrified.

	It was probably the first she had seen a rampaging spirit, so it seemed that she got scared and her feet wouldn't move.		It was probably the first time she had seen a rampaging spirit, so it seemed that she got scared and her feet wouldn't move.

	The spirit released a loud roar and charged.		The spirit released a loud roar and charged.

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	"But, your injury—"		"But, your injury—"

	"The affinity between your elemental waffe and this guy is too ~~uncompatible~~. Only I can do this."		"The affinity between your elemental waffe and this guy is too incompatible. Only I can do this."

	Presented with an irrefutable truth, Ellis vexingly bit her lips		Presented with an irrefutable truth, Ellis vexingly bit her lips

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	What would happen if he released this beast onto them would be plainly obvious.		What would happen if he released this beast onto them would be plainly obvious.

	Discerning that attribute attacks ~~was~~ ineffective, Ellis landed behind Kamito and went on guiding people to take refuge. It was a Sylphid Knights Captain-like calm and reasonable decision.		Discerning that attribute attacks were ineffective, Ellis landed behind Kamito and went on guiding people to take refuge. It was a Sylphid Knights Captain-like calm and reasonable decision.

	The demon mirror spirit started to howl wildly.		The demon mirror spirit started to howl wildly.
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	A spray of red blood danced out.		A spray of red blood danced out.

	The strong attack ~~gouge~~ the side of Kamito's abdomen.		The strong attack gouged the side of Kamito's abdomen.

	"Gwah!"		"Gwah!"
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	There were buildings of the plaza that were destroyed in every way possible by the bombardment.		There were buildings of the plaza that were destroyed in every way possible by the bombardment.

	The fragments of rubble, which was smashed up, were merciless raining onto the crowd that had not ~~flee~~.		The fragments of rubble, which was smashed up, were merciless raining onto the crowd that had not fled.

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	Her reddish-brown pupils harboured strong will.		Her reddish-brown pupils harboured strong will.

	"I want to show Aneue it, the way of the knight I believe in. Although I am still ~~inexperience~~ now, I am thinking of wanting to seize the thing that lies beyond power someday. For that reason, I'm participating in the Blade Dance."		"I want to show Aneue it, the way of the knight I believe in. Although I am still inexperienced now, I am thinking of wanting to seize the thing that lies beyond power someday. For that reason, I'm participating in the Blade Dance."

	For the sake of the way of the knight I believe in—<!--just leave this like this for now-->		For the sake of the way of the knight I believe in—<!--just leave this like this for now-->

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	"Ah, there might be an elementalist somewhere but that thing has completely lost control."		"Ah, there might be an elementalist somewhere but that thing has completely lost control."

	As expected of being used ~~with~~ these sort of situations, Ellis was very calm.		As expected of being used to these sort of situations, Ellis was very calm.

	She had already armed her elemental waffe «Ray Hawk» in her hand.		She had already armed her elemental waffe «Ray Hawk» in her hand.
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	It was a frenzied high level spirit. It might be a threat to ordinary elementalists, but for Kamito who was titled the Strongest Blade Dancer, it was not an opponent that would give him a hard fight.		It was a frenzied high level spirit. It might be a threat to ordinary elementalists, but for Kamito who was titled the Strongest Blade Dancer, it was not an opponent that would give him a hard fight.

	However, the problem was the fact that the crowd, ~~which was~~ late in getting away, was there in his surroundings.		However, the problem was the fact that the crowd, whom were late in getting away, was there in his surroundings.

	What would happen if he released this beast ~~into~~ them would be plainly obvious.		What would happen if he released this beast onto them would be plainly obvious.

	Discerning that attribute attacks was ineffective, Ellis landed behind Kamito and went on guiding people to take refuge. It was a Sylphid Knights Captain-like calm and reasonable decision.		Discerning that attribute attacks was ineffective, Ellis landed behind Kamito and went on guiding people to take refuge. It was a Sylphid Knights Captain-like calm and reasonable decision.
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	Without driving enough divine power into it and controlling it, most of its power couldn't be manifested.		Without driving enough divine power into it and controlling it, most of its power couldn't be manifested.

	With the current state ~~of Kamito~~, he could only bet on that one strike.		With the Kamito's current state, he could only bet on that one strike.

	The demonic mirror spirit raised its tusk, and charged again.		The demonic mirror spirit raised its tusk, and charged again.
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	Claire quickly turned her face away, holding up a strong front.		Claire quickly turned her face away, holding up a strong front.

	But, even her uniform was torn everywhere, and her limbs were full ~~with~~ injuries.		But, even her uniform was torn everywhere, and her limbs were full of injuries.

	"Putting that aside, Ellis, where's the Sylphid Knights reinforcements?"		"Putting that aside, Ellis, where's the Sylphid Knights reinforcements?"
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	"They should already be on their way. However, it's just that the ones policing this area were Kamito and I... amongst this crowd, it will take time for them to come from the other areas."		"They should already be on their way. However, it's just that the ones policing this area were Kamito and I... amongst this crowd, it will take time for them to come from the other areas."

	Ellis bit her lips and looked down. As the battle strength of the Sylphid Knights ~~was~~ almost cut by half, they couldn't help but disperse their security forces.		Ellis bit her lips and looked down. As the battle strength of the Sylphid Knights were almost cut by half, they couldn't help but disperse their security forces.

	Releasing a loud roar that shook the earth, the fallen demonic mirror spirit got up.		Releasing a loud roar that shook the earth, the fallen demonic mirror spirit got up.
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	Claire nervously groaned.		Claire nervously groaned.

	There were still large groups of people, who failed to escaped outside the plaza. Waiting leisurely for the reinforcement from the Sylphid ~~Knight~~ and the Academy would only end up in irreparable results.		There were still large groups of people, who failed to escaped outside the plaza. Waiting leisurely for the reinforcement from the Sylphid Knights and the Academy would only end up in irreparable results.

	"I could probably at least stall for time?"		"I could probably at least stall for time?"

	"Apologies, Claire Rouge, lend me your strength until reinforcements arrive."		"Apologies, Claire Rouge, lend me your strength until reinforcements arrive."

	Respectively clenching their own elemental waffen, Claire and Ellis confronted the two spirits.		Respectively clenching their own elemental waffen, Claire and Ellis confronted the two spirits.
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	With his faint consciousness, Kamito dragged his feet forward with wobbly footsteps and approached Velsaria.		With his faint consciousness, Kamito dragged his feet forward with wobbly footsteps and approached Velsaria.

	It was unacceptable that she spouted out such words without even knowing Ellis feelings.		It was unacceptable that she spouted out such words without even knowing Ellis' feelings.

	It was the fact that the one who spouted such words was the knight that Ellis had once admired.		It was the fact that the one who spouted such words was the knight that Ellis had once admired.
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	== Translator's Notes and Reference ==		== Translator's Notes and Reference ==
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