Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter6 - Revision history

Zzhk at 00:41, 15 May 2018

2018-05-15T00:41:25Z

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	(...Kamito, even if it would cause you to resent me, hate me.)		(...Kamito, even if it would cause you to resent me, hate me.)

	Even		Even if it would cause her great suffering.

	What Restia recalled in her mind was the promise he had made in his youth.		What Restia recalled in her mind was the promise he had made in his youth.

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:34:04Z

reformatting + consistency

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Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2013-06-28T23:33:45Z

Part 2

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	Within the blink of an eye, Claire had closed in before Ayla, then--		Within the blink of an eye, Claire had closed in before Ayla, then--

	"--Turn in charcoal!"		"--Turn into charcoal!"

	Mercilessly, she swung down the fiery whip.		Mercilessly, she swung down the fiery whip.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-04-22T09:26:07Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	Luminaris continued to display a surprised expression.		Luminaris continued to display a surprised expression.

	She looked like she was not aware of Restia as Kamito's contracted spirit, and she even believed firmly that the commander of «Team Inferno» was the real Ren Ashbell.		She looked like she was not aware of Restia being Kamito's contracted spirit, and she even believed firmly that the commander of «Team Inferno» was the real Ren Ashbell.

	Claire's gaze stopped on the demon sword of darkness in her hand.		Claire's gaze stopped on the demon sword of darkness in her hand.

Zzhk: /* Part 7 */

2013-03-15T10:01:06Z

Part 7

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	Sat a girl dressed in the Theocracy's military uniform.		Sat a girl dressed in the Theocracy's military uniform.

	Innocent eyes of pure blue. ~~Gray~~ hair tied into twintails on the sides of her head.		Innocent eyes of pure blue. Ash-gray hair tied into twintails on the sides of her head.

	"Muir..."		"Muir..."

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2013-03-14T17:10:24Z

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	Dark light lit up in her dusk-colored eyes.		Dark light lit up in her dusk-colored eyes.

	(...Kamito, even if would cause you to resent me, hate me.)		(...Kamito, even if it would cause you to resent me, hate me.)

	Even		Even
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	"...!"		"...!"

	Claire brought awareness back to the enemy at hand and readied Flametongue.		Claire brought her awareness back to the enemy at hand and readied Flametongue.

	Now was not the time to think too much. Kamito's true identity can be pondered later.		Now was not the time to think too much. Kamito's true identity can be pondered later.
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	The sight of the red-haired girl appearing out of the crimson flames--		The sight of the red-haired girl appearing out of the crimson flames--

	Made Claire even forget pain in her bleeding right hand--		Made Claire even forget the pain in her bleeding right hand--

	"It's Scarlet...?"		"It's Scarlet...?"
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	"Amazing..."		"Amazing..."

	Seeing the blade dance ~~performing~~ before her eyes, Claire could not help but exclaim in admiration.		Seeing the blade dance being performed before her eyes, Claire could not help but exclaim in admiration.

	Scarlet's movements far surpassed her speed in hell cat form.		Scarlet's movements far surpassed her speed in hell cat form.
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	Kamito could not help but smile wryly.		Kamito could not help but smile wryly.

	"This is totally fine for me. In past missions, there were times when I~~'ve gone~~ days without sleep."		"This is totally fine for me. In past missions, there were times when I went days without sleep."

	"Missions?"		"Missions?"

	"Uh yeah... It was back during the days at the «Instructional ~~School~~."		"Uh yeah... It was back during the days at the «Instructional School»."

	"...Sorry. I have made you remember unpleasant memories."		"...Sorry. I have made you remember unpleasant memories."

Nukie: /* Part 2 */

2013-03-14T16:59:11Z

Part 2

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	Hiding in the ruins, Claire turned her towards the demon sword of darkness resting against the wall.		Hiding in the ruins, Claire turned her head towards the demon sword of darkness resting against the wall.

	The demon sword, which had remained silent all this time, seemed to be murmuring something.		The demon sword, which had remained silent all this time, seemed to be murmuring something.

Zzhk: Created page with "==Chapter 6 - Scarlet Valkyrie== ===Part 1=== Amidst endless darkness, even blacker than night-- The demon sword of darkness gradually regained consciousness. Here was a m..."

2013-03-14T13:34:53Z

Created page with "==Chapter 6 - Scarlet Valkyrie== ===Part 1=== Amidst endless darkness, even blacker than night-- The demon sword of darkness gradually regained consciousness. Here was a m..."

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