Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter7 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:37:23Z

reformatting + consistency

2013-08-21T18:04:46Z

Undo revision 280549 by 112.207.40.198 (talk) Est isn't a girl?

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	"...Get down!"		"...Get down!"

	In a hurry, Kamito wrapped his arms around the ~~two~~ girls and jumped, pushing them all to the ground. Although it was not too effective, at least it was better than being bathed in flames.		In a hurry, Kamito wrapped his arms around the three girls and jumped, pushing them all to the ground. Although it was not too effective, at least it was better than being bathed in flames.

	"Freezing fangs of ice, go forth and pierce -- «Freezing Arrow»!"		"Freezing fangs of ice, go forth and pierce -- «Freezing Arrow»!"

2013-08-21T11:42:02Z

not three only two, miur and ellis

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	"...Get down!"		"...Get down!"

	In a hurry, Kamito wrapped his arms around the ~~three~~ girls and jumped, pushing them all to the ground. Although it was not too effective, at least it was better than being bathed in flames.		In a hurry, Kamito wrapped his arms around the two girls and jumped, pushing them all to the ground. Although it was not too effective, at least it was better than being bathed in flames.

	"Freezing fangs of ice, go forth and pierce -- «Freezing Arrow»!"		"Freezing fangs of ice, go forth and pierce -- «Freezing Arrow»!"

2013-07-19T00:23:13Z

Undo revision 270372 by 99.19.93.10 (talk) Use the terminology guidelines, okay?

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	In the next instant.		In the next instant.

	"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form -- ~~«Violet Flash»~~!"		"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form -- «Purple Lightning»!"

	Kamito unleashed a sword technique for localized destruction, exploding at «Valaraukar»'s ankle.		Kamito unleashed a sword technique for localized destruction, exploding at «Valaraukar»'s ankle.

2013-07-19T00:20:46Z

Part 1

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	In the next instant.		In the next instant.

	"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form -- ~~«Purple Lightning»~~!"		"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form -- «Violet Flash»!"

	Kamito unleashed a sword technique for localized destruction, exploding at «Valaraukar»'s ankle.		Kamito unleashed a sword technique for localized destruction, exploding at «Valaraukar»'s ankle.

2013-04-22T12:42:56Z

some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	Jumping into the air, Kamito swallowed hard.		Jumping into the air, Kamito swallowed hard.

	The ground was split apart as if it had suffered an earthquake as well as scorched and burned tragically.		The ground was split apart as if it had suffered an earthquake as well as becoming scorched and burned tragically.

	Although there were similarities, the demon flame spirit's whip was closer to a blunt weapon like a club compared to Claire's «Flametongue» which included the traits of a slashing weapon.		Although there were similarities, the demon flame spirit's whip was closer to a blunt weapon like a club compared to Claire's «Flametongue» which included the traits of a slashing weapon.
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	Kamito's arm was sandwiched between her supple breasts.		Kamito's arm was sandwiched between her supple breasts.

	...Despite the kind of situation currently, Kamito could not help but feel his heart racing.		...Despite the kind of situation they were in currently, Kamito could not help but feel his heart racing.

	--At this time.		--At this time.

2013-04-20T07:34:41Z

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	Boom -- !		Boom -- !

	An intense cyclone instantly began to blow, shooting ~~the~~ the spear out from the ground with explosive force.		An intense cyclone instantly began to blow, shooting the spear out from the ground with explosive force.

	Standing upon the spear shaft, Kamito flew high into the sky. Then the instant «Ray Hawk» flew above «Valaraukar»'s head, Kamito leaped from the spear.		Standing upon the spear shaft, Kamito flew high into the sky. Then the instant «Ray Hawk» flew above «Valaraukar»'s head, Kamito leaped from the spear.
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	But it was enough.		But it was enough.

	The decisive opportunity created by the two ~~girl~~ was definitely not going to be wasted.		The decisive opportunity created by the two girls was definitely not going to be wasted.

	Kamito took a flying leap and landed on the giant body of «Valaraukar» that was akin to lava.		Kamito took a flying leap and landed on the giant body of «Valaraukar» that was akin to lava.

2013-03-16T00:35:59Z

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	After all, contamination resulted from mere contact and severely depleted divine power.		After all, contamination resulted from mere contact and severely depleted divine power.

	Even if a break in the encirclement ~~was~~ opened up for an instant, it was still quite hard to find their way when the density of spirits ~~were~~ so high.		Even if a break in the encirclement could be opened up for an instant, it was still quite hard to find their way when the density of spirits was so high.

	In their current state with Muir ~~powerless~~, Kamito did not dare do anything rashly.		In their current state with Muir incapacitated, Kamito did not dare do anything rashly.

	...Come to think of it, flying in the air ~~was~~ even more dangerous.		...Come to think of it, flying in the air would be even more dangerous.

	If one were to be dragged into that darkness, there would be no coming back alive.		If one were to be dragged into that darkness, there would be no coming back alive.
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	"W-What!? W-Why are you suddenly staring at me like that...!"		"W-What!? W-Why are you suddenly staring at me like that...!"

	"I ~~will~~ entrust Muir to you. I will go defeat that demon flame spirit."		"I entrust Muir to you. I will go defeat that demon flame spirit."

	"Wha..."		"Wha..."

2013-03-15T17:53:53Z

Part 4

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	After all, contamination resulted from mere contact and severely depleted divine power.		After all, contamination resulted from mere contact and severely depleted divine power.

	Even if a break in the encirclement was opened up for an instant, it was ~~till~~ quite hard to find their way when the density of spirits were so high.		Even if a break in the encirclement was opened up for an instant, it was still quite hard to find their way when the density of spirits were so high.

	In their current state with Muir powerless, Kamito did not dare do anything rashly.		In their current state with Muir powerless, Kamito did not dare do anything rashly.

2013-03-15T15:43:00Z

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	"Where on earth did she appear from!?"		"Where on earth did she appear from!?"

	The surrounding area was supposed to be heavily surrounded by ~~swarming«Forsaken~~ Spirits».		The surrounding area was supposed to be heavily surrounded by swarming «Forsaken Spirits».

	"Hmph, I was thinking I could finally leave those underground ruins, only to discover a sea of flames after getting out, and even got chased by these inexplicable spirits, I've had enough of all this!"		"Hmph, I was thinking I could finally leave those underground ruins, only to discover a sea of flames after getting out, and even got chased by these inexplicable spirits, I've had enough of all this!"