Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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Rxls at 18:54, 30 July 2017

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	==Until your Sadness becomes Nil==		==Chapter 4: Until your Sadness becomes Nil==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	But she couldn't say it. Because Mio was even more shaken in front of the collapsed Basara than Yuki.		But she couldn't say it. Because Mio was even more shaken in front of the collapsed Basara than Yuki.

	Gravely flustered and agitated, she was still worried over Basara. I'm sorry, I'm sorry… She repeated numerous times while crying. Yuki ended up hearing that grief-stricken scream. That was the reason she left Basara's treatment for now to them when Maria showed up. And then she saw how Mio tried to fight alone and gave up on it again for Basara's sake.		Gravely flustered and agitated, she was still worried over Basara. I'm sorry, I'm sorry… She haf repeated numerous times while crying. Yuki ended up hearing that grief-stricken scream. That was the reason she left Basara's treatment for now to them when Maria showed up. And then she saw how Mio tried to fight alone and gave up on it again for Basara's sake.

	Yuki got the feeling that she understood a bit now why Basara tried to protect Mio.		Yuki got the feeling that she understood a bit now why Basara tried to protect Mio.
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	She raised a screaming shriek and at the same time, a red surge was set free in Mio's heart.		She raised a screaming shriek and at the same time, a red surge was set free in Mio's heart.


	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

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	"Basara should have told you… about why I'm here."		"Basara should have told you… about why I'm here."

	"Yeah, he certainly told me."		"Yeah, he certainly told me." said Mio.

	said Mio.

	"About who you are--- and your relation to him."		"About who you are--- and your relation to him."
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	"…That's not true. If you properly knew him, you wouldn't drag him into battles to begin with."		"…That's not true. If you properly knew him, you wouldn't drag him into battles to begin with."

	Because, said Yuki.		"Because," said Yuki.

	"He can't fight like in the past anymore… actually, it should be painful for him to even wield a sword."		"He can't fight like in the past anymore… actually, it should be painful for him to even wield a sword."
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	These words from Yuki		These words from Yuki,

	"…..Eh?"		"…..Eh?"

	~~made~~ Mio asked back dumbfounded. For a moment, she didn't comprehend what Yuki had said.		Mio asked back dumbfounded. For a moment, she didn't comprehend what Yuki had said.

	---It was the reason why Basara was chased out of the Hero village.		---It was the reason why Basara was chased out of the Hero village.
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	"Why"--- mumbled Mio.		"Why"--- mumbled Mio.

	"Isn't it obvious. For your sake…"		"Isn't it obvious. For your sake…" said the white mask while smiling.

	said the white mask while smiling.

	"The power of the previous Devil Lord sleeping inside you--- even if it isn't fully awakened, it's leaking strong power surges and attracts low class Stray Devils by it. If any of these low class devils were to harm a human, your existence would be the reason for it. Naturally, the Hero Tribe would deem you harmful then and change you from an observation target to a termination one."		"The power of the previous Devil Lord sleeping inside you--- even if it isn't fully awakened, it's leaking strong power surges and attracts low class Stray Devils by it. If any of these low class devils were to harm a human, your existence would be the reason for it. Naturally, the Hero Tribe would deem you harmful then and change you from an observation target to a termination one."
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	Even so, Toujou Basara clenched his teeth--- and kicked the floor for a forward leap.		Even so, Toujou Basara clenched his teeth--- and kicked the floor for a forward leap.



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	"I see… At the rooftop, the enemy…"		"I see… At the rooftop, the enemy…"

	"I am sorry… If I had only arrived a bit earlier."		"I am sorry… If I had only arrived a bit earlier." Maria said apologetic.

	Maria said apologetic.

	"I took the bandages from the infirmary and gave you first aid on the spot, but it would attract attention at school, so I carried you here."		"I took the bandages from the infirmary and gave you first aid on the spot, but it would attract attention at school, so I carried you here."
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	That he was home with Maria by his side meant that Yuki pulled back for now? A look at the clock revealed that it was already half past three in the night. Apparently he was sleeping for around seven hours.		That he was home with Maria by his side meant that Yuki pulled back for now? A look at the clock revealed that it was already half past three in the night. Apparently he was sleeping for around seven hours.

	"Uhm---"		"Uhm---" said Maria.

	said Maria.

	"''I did as you said, but''--- do you really not need to go to the hospital?"		"''I did as you said, but''--- do you really not need to go to the hospital?"
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	Mio fixed her glare wordless onto the white mask. When he left the rooftop, he had said "Depending your choice, you can end all of this at once". Naruse Mio perfectly understood the meaning behind these words. There, just as if he was reading her mind,		Mio fixed her glare wordless onto the white mask. When he left the rooftop, he had said "Depending your choice, you can end all of this at once". Naruse Mio perfectly understood the meaning behind these words. There, just as if he was reading her mind,

	"Hee… You're more honest than I thought. But, I believe this is the correct choice."		"Hee… You're more honest than I thought. But, I believe this is the correct choice." The white mask said.

	The white mask said.

	"If you were to keep fighting, it would claim more victims. But if you were the only victim, everything would come to an end."		"If you were to keep fighting, it would claim more victims. But if you were the only victim, everything would come to an end."
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	"My barrier, how…"		"My barrier, how…"

	"It won't break with one strike. ''Therefore I continued until it did…'' that's all."		"It won't break with one strike. ''Therefore I continued until it did…'' that's all." said Yuki.

	said Yuki.

	"Wait… You accurately kept attacking the same spot…?"		"Wait… You accurately kept attacking the same spot…?"
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	Right afterwards. Along with a roaring sound, the ground trembled. Yuki, tumbled on the ground, looked. The place where she was at a moment ago--- The ground of the forest was completely hollowed out by an explosion.		Right afterwards. Along with a roaring sound, the ground trembled. Yuki, tumbled on the ground, looked. The place where she was at a moment ago--- The ground of the forest was completely hollowed out by an explosion.

	"Hee, you dodged that…"		"Hee, you dodged that…" The white mask said in admiration. And then,

	The white mask said in admiration. And then,

	"Then--- how about this?"		"Then--- how about this?"
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	Nonaka Yuki looked. At the huge sphere of darkness that the white mask created over his head.		Nonaka Yuki looked. At the huge sphere of darkness that the white mask created over his head.


	At this rate, Yuki would die--- Thinking so, Mio acted quickly.		At this rate, Yuki would die--- Thinking so, Mio acted quickly.
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	And then he shouted.		And then he shouted.

	"---MARIA!" "Roger!"		"---MARIA!"

			"Roger!"

	A young girl jumped up from behind Basara. Her small body was swinging it's right fist.		A young girl jumped up from behind Basara. Her small body was swinging it's right fist.
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	While looking close to tears, Mio nodded. Over and over again. And then,		While looking close to tears, Mio nodded. Over and over again. And then,

	"Please--- save me, Brother."		"Please--- save me, Brother." Mio said.

	~~Mio said.~~ She certainly said it. Therefore, Basara nodded with "Yeah".		She certainly said it. Therefore, Basara nodded with "Yeah".

	"Just you wait. I'll erase it now. Your pain, your sadness, all of it--- I'll make it Nil."		"Just you wait. I'll erase it now. Your pain, your sadness, all of it--- I'll make it Nil."

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	"But--- Depending on your choice, you can end all of this at once."		"But--- Depending on your choice, you can end all of this at once."


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===
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	"Obviously I'm going too--- I don't want to be a pathetic older brother that sleeps while his little sister is in danger."		"Obviously I'm going too--- I don't want to be a pathetic older brother that sleeps while his little sister is in danger."


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	Faster than the wind--- A boy got in between the sphere and Yuki.		Faster than the wind--- A boy got in between the sphere and Yuki.



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	She raised a screaming shriek and at the same time, a red surge was set free in Mio's heart.		She raised a screaming shriek and at the same time, a red surge was set free in Mio's heart.


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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

RS at 22:11, 10 April 2016

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	Around the time when Basara engaged the enemy--- Naruse Mio had already left the infirmary.		Around the time when Basara engaged the enemy--- Naruse Mio had already left the infirmary.
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	A smiling voice came at them from a different direction.		A smiling voice came at them from a different direction.


	Toujou Basara looked. Apart from the rooftop they were on--- there was someone standing still.		Toujou Basara looked. Apart from the rooftop they were on--- there was someone standing still.
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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===


	---In the past, when he was at the Hero Village.		---In the past, when he was at the Hero Village.
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	"If being a Hero prevents me from protecting Basara--- Then I'll quit being a Hero as well."		"If being a Hero prevents me from protecting Basara--- Then I'll quit being a Hero as well."

	Saying so, he left the village together with Basara.		Saying so, he left the village together with Basara.


	And then--- Five years passed since then.		And then--- Five years passed since then.
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	===Part 3===		===Part 3===


	Leaving the room and house, Mio headed for that park on the hill.		Leaving the room and house, Mio headed for that park on the hill.
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	"…Good."		"…Good."

	Inside the mixed forest, Mio used a magic to keep humans away just in case and cast down her eyes after a deep breath. Preparations to wait for the enemy were done.		Inside the mixed forest, Mio used a magic to keep humans away just in case and cast down her eyes after a deep breath. Preparations to wait for the enemy were done.

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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===


	The wind howled in the distant. A wind that brought with it a low and heavy ring like a coming storm.		The wind howled in the distant. A wind that brought with it a low and heavy ring like a coming storm.
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	With a grim voice, Naruse Mio stated her last request.		With a grim voice, Naruse Mio stated her last request.


	"Please--- hurry up and kill me…"		"Please--- hurry up and kill me…"


	It certainly would solve the problem. The fastest solution.		It certainly would solve the problem. The fastest solution.
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	But, precisely because of that, it was conveyed.		But, precisely because of that, it was conveyed.


	It reached her.		It reached her.
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	---Right afterwards, Basara's world turned snow-white.		---Right afterwards, Basara's world turned snow-white.
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	Toujou Basara mumbled quietly.		Toujou Basara mumbled quietly.


	"---Let's go home."		"---Let's go home."

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	Thus, the Hero Tribe didn't plan to intervene actively.		Thus, the Hero Tribe didn't plan to intervene actively.

	Yuki, an observer, had no objections to that either. She only felt resentment towards Mio, who disturbed Basara peaceful lifestyle, and wouldn't have really minded if she sacrifices herself.		Yuki, an observer, had no objections to that either. She only felt resentment towards Mio, who disturbed Basara's peaceful lifestyle, and wouldn't have really minded if she sacrifices herself.

	''…But.''		''…But.''
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	Right afterwards. Along with a roaring sound, the ground trembled. Yuki, tumbled on the ground, looked. The place where she was at a moment ago--- The ground of the forest was completely ~~hollow~~ out by an explosion.		Right afterwards. Along with a roaring sound, the ground trembled. Yuki, tumbled on the ground, looked. The place where she was at a moment ago--- The ground of the forest was completely hollowed out by an explosion.

	"Hee, you dodged that…"		"Hee, you dodged that…"
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	"---Nonaka!"		"---Nonaka!"

	Mio's scream sounded distant. But, Yuki couldn't respond. Her body ~~wobblingly~~ inclined forward.		Mio's scream sounded distant. But, Yuki couldn't respond. Her body wobbly inclined forward.

	"---…!"		"---…!"

	Even so, she thrust her spirit sword into the ground and refused ~~at least~~ to collapse.		Even so, she thrust her spirit sword into the ground and refused to collapse.

	Yes, not yet. She could still fight. Because her life was saved by him--- by Basara.		Yes, not yet. She could still fight. Because her life was saved by him--- by Basara.
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	"No… STOOOOOOOP---!"		"No… STOOOOOOOP---!"

	Mio shouted at once. But the white mask ignored her. And the sphere of darkness ~~heading~~ for Yuki, as well as the cruel reality ignored her too. No matter how much Mio shouted, she couldn't help Yuki.		Mio shouted at once. But the white mask ignored her. And the sphere of darkness headed for Yuki, as well as the cruel reality ignored her too. No matter how much Mio shouted, she couldn't help Yuki.

	Therefore, Yuki's death was inevitable--- ''Or it was supposed to be''.		Therefore, Yuki's death was inevitable--- ''Or it was supposed to be''.
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	Toujou Basara arrived at the battle in the moment when the white mask released the huge sphere of darkness.		Toujou Basara arrived at the battle at the moment when the white mask released the huge sphere of darkness.

	Basara, standing protective in front of Yuki, was immediately pressed for a decision.		Basara, standing protective in front of Yuki, was immediately pressed for a decision.
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	"I was worried… So worried… Waaaaaah."		"I was worried… So worried… Waaaaaah."

	~~Looked~~ like she was really worried. Maria sobbed, like all the worry she had desperately suppressed suddenly exploded. Mio's surprise changed into gratitude before long. She finally realized what she should say first. Therefore she shifted her gaze down to Maria at her waist.		Looking like she was really worried. Maria sobbed, like all the worry she had desperately suppressed suddenly exploded. Mio's surprise changed into gratitude before long. She finally realized what she should say first. Therefore she shifted her gaze down to Maria at her waist.

	"Sorry… I'm sorry…"		"Sorry… I'm sorry…"
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	"…Looks like you're okay."		"…Looks like you're okay."

	Mio heard Basara's relieved voice. So she raised her head with "Yes".		Mio heard Basara's relieved voice. So she raised her head with a "Yes".

	Her expression froze up.		Her expression froze up.
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	Yuki, standing apart, raised a mad scream.		Yuki, standing apart, raised a mad scream.

	The red of blood spread over Basara's clothes on ~~the~~ back. Therefore,		The red blood spread over Basara's clothes on his back. Therefore,

	"A, Aw…"		"A, Aw…"
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	''…Good…''		''…Good…''

	There was a ray of hope in the worst situation. With that, the situation might still somehow be saved. With no sign of the enemy, it must have retreated for good now.		There was a ray of hope in the worst situation. With that, the situation might still somehow be saved. With no sign of the enemy, they must have retreated for good now.

	Or ~~it was~~ destroyed. Either way, it should be safe to assume that there was no more danger from them.		Or they were destroyed. Either way, it should be safe to assume that there was no more danger from them.

	"Calm down… I'm fine… Everything is over… Okay?"		"Calm down… I'm fine… Everything is over… Okay?"
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	---Naturally, as Mio was the source of it, the singularity would disappear if Mio were to be erased.		---Naturally, as Mio was the source of it, the singularity would disappear if Mio were to be erased.

	It certainly wouldn't cause the destruction of the world, but even so the vicinity ~~space~~ would get completely wiped out. Most likely it couldn't be prevented that part of the town within the radius of several kilometre ~~would~~ get erased.		It certainly wouldn't cause the destruction of the world, but even so the vicinity would get completely wiped out. Most likely it couldn't be prevented that part of the town within the radius of several kilometre could get erased.

	However--- that was only Basara's guess. The mass of energy from the rampage was an unknown quantity. It might cause even less causalities, or even more. Thereupon,		However--- that was only Basara's guess. The mass of energy from the rampage was an unknown quantity. It might cause even less causalities, or even more. Thereupon,
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	---Right afterwards, Basara's world ~~turn~~ snow-white.		---Right afterwards, Basara's world turned snow-white.

	He didn't know if it was from activating <Banishing Shift> or from being swallowed up by the black hole. He didn't even know if his eyes were closed or open.		He didn't know if it was from activating <Banishing Shift> or from being swallowed up by the black hole. He didn't even know if his eyes were closed or open.

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	When Mio raised an aggrieved scream, something moved in the corner of her vision--- right next to her.		When Mio raised an aggrieved scream, something moved in the corner of her vision--- right next to her.

	It most likely Yuki, who defeated the "Shadow" that cut Basara.		It was most likely Yuki, who defeated the "Shadow" that cut Basara.

	"…Unforgivable… How dare you!"		"…Unforgivable… How dare you!"

	Yuki ~~draw~~ her spirit sword and swung it down at empty space.		Yuki drew her spirit sword and swung it down at empty space.

	"Hoh… That's quite some power."		"Hoh… That's quite some power."
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	Toujou Basara already had a promising future at a young age.		Toujou Basara already had a promising future at a young age.

	He was the only son of Jin, the Hero of the Great War, and as he inherited his father's talent, his strength surpassed that of the other boys and girls his age. Moreover, the reason a lot of people set their hopes on him was that Basara could use a special skill that no one else could imitate.		He was the only son of Jin, the Hero of the Great War, and as he inherited his father's talent, his strength surpassed that of the other boys and girls his age. Moreover, the reason a lot of people had set their hopes on him was that Basara could use a special skill that no one else could imitate.

	<Banishing Shift>. That skill, which could only be unleashed as a counter of an opponent's attack, could repel or disperse any kind of attack, physical or magical.		<Banishing Shift>. That skill, which could only be unleashed as a counter of an opponent's attack, could repel or disperse any kind of attack, physical or magical.
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	---But, these happy days suddenly came to an end one day.		---But, these happy days suddenly came to an end one day.

	A certain young man from the village, who complained that the already retreated Devils should be tracked down and killed, was fed up with the elders, who wouldn't give their approval, and all by himself… resorted to forcible means. He drew the powerful magical sword Brynhildr that was sealing a S Rank Evil Spirit in the recesses of the mountains near the village.		A certain young man from the village, who complained that the already retreated Devils should be tracked down and killed, was fed up with the elders, who wouldn't give their approval, and all by himself… resorted to forcible means. He drew the powerful magical sword Brynhildr that was sealing an S Rank Evil Spirit in the recesses of the mountains near the village.

	Devils were supposed to be tracked down and killed. Needless to say, the young man was confident in his own power. Everyone else ~~acknowledge~~ it too. Jin excluded, he was undoubtedly the number one. So he intended to defeat the released Evil Spirit with the magic sword Brynhildr.		Devils were supposed to be tracked down and killed. Needless to say, the young man was confident in his own power. Everyone else acknowledged it too. Jin excluded, he was undoubtedly the number one. So he intended to defeat the released Evil Spirit with the magic sword Brynhildr.

	However--- it didn't turn out like that. The Evil Spirit took over the young man's mind and body.		However--- it didn't turn out like that. The Evil Spirit took over the young man's mind and body.
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	Regardless of the fact that Basara no longer could use <Banishing Shift> due to the shock from the incident.		Regardless of the fact that Basara no longer could use <Banishing Shift> due to the shock from the incident.

	But--- Basara didn't really care. Basara himself couldn't bear the burden of having erased his precious friend and became like an empty shell. However--- Jin, returning to the village, stood up for Basara. Others too, like one of the elders or Yuki's Nonaka Family, eagerly took Basara under their wings. And then a conclusion was made. Basara was stripped ~~off~~ his Hero qualifications and chased out of the Village along with his utilized magic sword Brynhildr. And Jin should go with him to oversee that his ability wouldn't go out of control again.		But--- Basara didn't really care. Basara himself couldn't bear the burden of having erased his precious friend and became like an empty shell. However--- Jin, returning to the village, stood up for Basara. Others too, like one of the elders or Yuki's Nonaka Family, eagerly took Basara under their wings. And then a conclusion was made. Basara was stripped of his Hero qualifications and chased out of the Village along with his utilized magic sword Brynhildr. And Jin should go with him to oversee that his ability wouldn't go out of control again.

	Basara obediently obeyed that decision. But Jin gave a straightforward objection.		Basara obediently obeyed that decision. But Jin gave a straightforward objection.
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	"Good… Do you know me?"		"Good… Do you know me?"

	On a look, a young girl was peeking ~~at up~~ relieved.		On a look, a young girl was peeking relieved.
	"Mar, ia…?"		"Mar, ia…?"

	"Yes. Please rest assured. We ~~are~~ at home. In your room, Basara-san."		"Yes. Please rest assured. We're at home. In your room, Basara-san."

	"My---"		"My---"
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	Basara frowned on his mental blank--- and then remembered.		Basara frowned on his mental blank--- and then remembered.

	Suddenly a dull pain ~~run~~ through his torso and he scowled.		Suddenly a dull pain ran through his torso and he scowled.

	"I see… At the rooftop, the enemy…"		"I see… At the rooftop, the enemy…"

Onizays: /* Part 1 */

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	''…Damn, if only Maria were here…''		''…Damn, if only Maria were here…''

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	Unlike Basara's speed or Yuki's skills, Maria's power could break the white mask's barrier with a direct attack. However, it would still take a bit of time until she came here. Basara and Yuki could buy some time while Mio attacked with powerful magic, but should the enemy be a magic type, his barrier wouldn't break from Mio's magic. Then, they would be in a stalemate.		Unlike Basara's speed or Yuki's skills, Maria's power could break the white mask's barrier with a direct attack. However, it would still take a bit of time until she came here. Basara and Yuki could buy some time while Mio attacked with powerful magic, but should the enemy be a magic type, his barrier wouldn't break from Mio's magic. Then, they would be in a stalemate.

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	"Well," said the white mask.		"Well," said the white mask.

	"To prevent that from happening, that boy and your retainer Succubus have been desperately patrolling the city and hunting low class ~~Stay~~ Devils in the past few days… They worked quite hard, really."		"To prevent that from happening, that boy and your retainer Succubus have been desperately patrolling the city and hunting low class Stray Devils in the past few days… They worked quite hard, really."

	"Th- Then the reason Maria didn't come to pick us up at school was also the patrol…?"		"Th- Then the reason Maria didn't come to pick us up at school was also the patrol…?"