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	"Hey—you said that you ~~don't~~ wanted a little sister, right?."		"Hey—you said that you wanted a little sister, right?."

	The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.		The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.

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	"Hey—you said that you wanted a little sister, right?."		"Hey—you said that you don't wanted a little sister, right?."

	The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.		The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.

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	The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.		The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.

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	Maria, sitting diagonally opposite to him, faced him and laughed with an 'Ehehe'. She looked very young for a girl only one year younger than Basara and Mio and in her third year of middle school. Her cuteness stimulated a boy's protective instincts gravely.		Maria, sitting diagonally opposite to him, faced him and laughed with an 'Ehehe'. She looked very young for a girl only one year younger than Basara and Mio and in her third year of middle school. Her cuteness stimulated a boy's protective instincts gravely.

	~~"As a boy of your age, I was worried about what to do when you were a guy sharp like a knife."~~

	"I was worried about what to do when meeting a boy of your age, as you could have been sharp as a knife."		"I was worried about what to do when meeting a boy of your age, as you could have been sharp as a knife."

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	The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.		The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.

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	The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.		The night of a certain day near the middle of summer vacation.

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	==The ~~day~~ he got a ~~little sister~~==		==Prologue: The Day he got a Little Sister==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
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	==Translator ~~notes~~ and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
	<References/>		<References/>

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	In the opened room—stood a girl.		In the opened room—stood a girl.

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	"Mmg!?"		"Mmg!?"

	Basara narrowly managed to quell the scream and made a sigh of relief for now.		Basara narrowly managed to quell the scream and made a sigh of relief for now.

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	Upon that—as Basara's explanation worked, the girl relaxed her body soon enough.		Upon that—as Basara's explanation worked, the girl relaxed her body soon enough.

	"Ehm...I take it that you understand now?"		"Ehm...I take it that you understand now?"

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	Jin had come to the toilet at some point in time.		Jin had come to the toilet at some point in time.

	"Dad…" "Jin-san…"		"Dad…"

			"Jin-san…"

	Basara and the girl called out to Jin at the same time, then looked at each other with an, ""Eh?"".		Basara and the girl called out to Jin at the same time, then looked at each other with an, ""Eh?"".
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	"Issues might arise, but--- let's become happy together."		"Issues might arise, but--- let's become happy together."


	Therefore--- even though prospects for a grim future hang somewhat in the air, it still felt peaceful.		Therefore--- even though prospects for a grim future hang somewhat in the air, it still felt peaceful.

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	"I wasn't really talking about fiction. Though the perverted stuff was certainly a joke."		"I wasn't really talking about fiction. Though the perverted stuff was certainly a joke."

	Jin ~~forwarded~~ the bottle with pickled vegetables by sliding it over the table.		Jin passed the bottle with pickled vegetables by sliding it over the table.

	"Well, in short, what I want to say is: Do you like or hate a little sister?"		"Well, in short, what I want to say is: Do you like or hate a little sister?"