Shissou Suru Shishunki no Parabellum:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	The name of the <PVF> Hasegawa Shiho uses is 68 Caliber Brilliant Catharsis. It is a ranged rifle with a sleek design, reminiscent of the long lance of a knight.		The name of the <PVF> Hasegawa Shiho uses is 68 Caliber Brilliant Catharsis. It is a ranged rifle with a sleek design, reminiscent of the long lance of a knight.

	Shiho returned to the park and reunited with Goro and Kousuke. Goro held his handgun at ~~the~~ ready, Kousuke his heavy machine gun.		Shiho returned to the park and reunited with Goro and Kousuke. Goro held his handgun at ready, Kousuke with his heavy machine gun.

	For a <Parabellum>, in a two on one fight, their <Element> can be two, even three times the strength.		For a <Parabellum>, in a two on one fight, their <Element> can be two, even three times the strength.
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	==Translator's notes and references==		==Translator's notes and references==
	<references/>		<references/>

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	“...”		“...”

	He opened his eyelids.		He opened his eyelids.

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	It no longer hurt.		It no longer hurt.

	His brain functioned as normal ~~as well~~.		His brain functioned as normal too.

	''Did something change?''		''Did something change?''
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	A large firearm was there.		A large firearm was there.

	A combination bow and rifle, an unusual <PVF>.		A combination of bow and rifle, an unusual <PVF>.

	Amazing.		Amazing.

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	As if it was a bad dream.		As if it was a bad dream.

	No, perhaps it really was a nightmare. Itto recently felt a strange sense of neurosis from his continuous bad luck. It would hardly be strange		No, perhaps it really was a nightmare. Itto recently felt a strange sense of neurosis from his continuous bad luck. It would hardly be strange to see a nightmare.
	to see a nightmare.

	''So it's fine.''		''So it's fine.''
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	Misfortune awaited him. That much was obvious.		Misfortune awaited him. That much was obvious.

	Itto lived a trivial and free life. If he jumped into such abnormal circumstances, he would ~~ensure~~ a continuous life of fear and suffering.		Itto lived a trivial and free life. If he jumped into such abnormal circumstances, he would have to endure a continuous life of fear and suffering.

	''--- Run away, Itto.''		''--- Run away, Itto.''
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	He recalled Shiho's expression as she suffered from injury.		He recalled Shiho's expression as she suffered from injury.

	''And then they divorced.		''And then they divorced.''
	''
	Ah---		Ah---

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	''--- You said something unnecessary.''		''--- You said something unnecessary.''

	In Shiho's eyes, Sasaki was reflected like a little Rabbit who would not mind, even if a girl was killed in front of him. Shiho's words were the largest humiliation Itto had ever received in his short life.		In Shiho's eyes, Sasaki was reflected like a little Rabbit who would not mind even if a girl was killed in front of him. Shiho's words were the largest humiliation Itto had ever received in his short life.

	Besides, Itto wanted [The Worst Assassination Tool].		Besides, Itto wanted [The Worst Assassination Tool].

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2012-11-17T06:53:45Z

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	Shiho, in a small voice, responded.		Shiho, in a small voice, responded.

	“[Psycho Ballistic Firearms], alias [P.V.F.]<ref>The B and V is much interchangeable in Japanese language. In this case, the author decided to keep the full name in B for the meaning; but in its abbreviate as a V for coolness.</ref>. Translating it into Japanese... it would be ‘Firearms of Mental Bullet’…I guess? Although I ~~say~~ that, I'm not quite sure myself...”		“[Psycho Ballistic Firearms], alias [P.V.F.]<ref>The B and V is much interchangeable in Japanese language. In this case, the author decided to keep the full name in B for the meaning; but in its abbreviate as a V for coolness.</ref>. Translating it into Japanese... it would be ‘Firearms of Mental Bullet’…I guess? Although I am saying that, I'm not quite sure myself...”

	“... In other ~~word~~?”		“... In other words?”

	“In other ~~word~~, a human's mind forms a weapon. The bullets are also created through our mental will.”		“In other words, a human's mind forms a weapon. The bullets are also created through our mental will.”

	“…Huh?”		“…Huh?”
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	“Those who can use [P.V.F.] are called <Parabellum>.”		“Those who can use [P.V.F.] are called <Parabellum>.”

	“That’s the first time I ever heard such things…….”		“That’s the first time I ever heard of such things…….”

	“Well, we <Parabellum> try to hide our powers. Beside….”		“Well, we <Parabellum> try to hide our powers. Beside….”
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	“<Parabellum> have only been present in recent years. In truth, no one really knows what the situation is.”		“<Parabellum> have only been present in recent years. In truth, no one really knows what the situation is.”

	Itto was surprised. A special ability born only recently, such a dangerous power was used to fight.		Itto was surprised. A special ability born only recently, and such a dangerous power was used to fight.

	“I'll give you more details later. There are others who can give you better explanations.”		“I'll give you more details later. There are others who can give you better explanations.”
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	Itto asked.		Itto asked.

	“That, well, I don't know, either...”		“That, well, I don't know either...”

	“What?”		“What?”

	“The <Parabellum> from the high school in the next town... They have misunderstood something. They said 'Our companion was attacked by the <Flight> from Kido High', but we haven't done anything.		“The <Parabellum> from the high school in the next town... They must have misunderstood something. They said 'Our companion was attacked by the <Flight> from Kido High', but we haven't done anything."

	Again, word he ~~doesn~~'t understand.		Again, word he didn't understand.

	“What is <Flight>?”		“What is <Flight>?”
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	“Since the bullet is made of human will,”		“Since the bullet is made of human will,”

	Shiho ~~explains~~:		Shiho explained:

	"It will hurt [only] the human mind and nerves. Even if someone becomes disabled, no evidence will remain. Ozuma says the [P.V.F] could be the worst assassination tool ever."		"It will hurt [only] the human mind and nerves. Even if someone becomes disabled, no evidence will remain. Ozuma says the [P.V.F] could be the worst assassination tool ever."
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	“You and I have only just met. There's no need for you to worry about a girl you don't know disappearing from school, right? It's fine to forget, so run away.”		“You and I have only just met. There's no need for you to worry about a girl you don't know disappearing from school, right? It's fine to forget, so run away.”

	Leaving those words behind, Shiho jumped from the bushes. To let Itto escape, she planned to play the decoy without his permission. In the grass in the words surrounding a park, Itto was left alone.		Leaving those words behind, Shiho jumped from the bushes. To let Itto escape, she planned to play the decoy without his permission. In the grass in the woods<!-- I have changed it to this from "words" but can you check again for the corect one? --Chancs --> surrounding a park, Itto was left alone.

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	The two boys and Shiho; they ~~create~~ their guns with their right arm and created a [Magazine] with their left hand ~~around~~ the same time. Though it seemed like a magic trick, there was no secret mechanism. They ~~slam~~ their gigantic magazine ~~from~~ their left hand into their right arm gargantuan gun’s receiver. Without wasting a single moment they ~~pull~~ the slide on top of the barrel assembly. The first bullet from the cartridge was loaded into the chamber as they pulled the slide. They could now fire at will.
	As soon as her gun was fully deployed, Shiho’s power and movements ~~are~~ enhanced. She ~~lifts~~ Itto with her left hand and ~~kicks~~ the bench at the two attackers before backing away.		The two boys and Shiho; they created their guns with their right arm and created a [Magazine] with their left hand at the same time. Though it seemed like a magic trick, there was no secret mechanism. They slammed their gigantic magazine in their left hand into their right arm gargantuan gun’s receiver. Without wasting a single moment they pulled the slide on top of the barrel assembly. The first bullet from the cartridge was loaded into the chamber as they pulled the slide. They could now fire at will.

			As soon as her gun was fully deployed, Shiho’s power and movements enhanced. She lifted Itto with her left hand and kicked the bench at the two attackers before backing away.

	“!”		“!”

	The bench ~~flies~~ weightlessly and strongly at the two attackers. Let alone a girl, this act was impossible for any human. Upon deploying the firearm on her right arm (though the principle is still not understood), Hasegawa Shiho's strength was boosted. That weapon on her arm must have increased her strength.		The bench flew weightlessly and strongly at the two attackers. Let alone a girl, this act was impossible for any human. Upon deploying the firearm on her right arm (though the principle is still not understood), Hasegawa Shiho's strength was boosted. That weapon on her arm must have increased her strength.

	The two men fired at the bench flying high-~~speeds~~ toward them and turned it to a beehive. With a loud roar, the bench was demolished in a single moment. While debris blocked their vision, Shiho moved further away while shooting, an impact several times more intense than a roller coaster hitting Itto as they moved. Using high speed movements, Shiho jumped into the wooded area, hiding in the bushes.		The two men fired at the bench flying at high-speed toward them and turned it to a beehive. With a loud roar, the bench was demolished in a single moment. While debris blocked their vision, Shiho moved further away while shooting, an impact several times more intense than a roller coaster hitting Itto as they moved. Using high speed movements, Shiho jumped into the wooded area, hiding in the bushes.

	Everything happened in an instant.		Everything happened in an instant.

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2012-11-16T11:33:11Z

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	Shiho, in a small voice, responded.		Shiho, in a small voice, responded.

	“[Psycho Ballistic Firearms], alias [P.V.F.]. Translating it into Japanese... it would be ‘Firearms of Mental Bullet’…I guess? Although I say that, I'm not quite sure myself...”		“[Psycho Ballistic Firearms], alias [P.V.F.]<ref>The B and V is much interchangeable in Japanese language. In this case, the author decided to keep the full name in B for the meaning; but in its abbreviate as a V for coolness.</ref>. Translating it into Japanese... it would be ‘Firearms of Mental Bullet’…I guess? Although I say that, I'm not quite sure myself...”

	“... In other word?”		“... In other word?”
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	His heart palpated, rapidly accelerating.		His heart palpated, rapidly accelerating.

	==~~= 4 =~~==		<noinclude>
			==Translator's notes and references==
			<references/>

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	“What is <Flight>?”		“What is <Flight>?”

			“A group of <Parabellum>.”

	Firearms produced by the human mind---		Firearms produced by the human mind---

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Ero-kun at 04:56, 28 October 2012

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	The bench flies weightlessly and strongly at the two attackers. Let alone a girl, this act was impossible for any human. Upon deploying the firearm on her right arm (though the principle is still not understood), Hasegawa Shiho's strength was boosted. That weapon on her arm must have increased her strength.		The bench flies weightlessly and strongly at the two attackers. Let alone a girl, this act was impossible for any human. Upon deploying the firearm on her right arm (though the principle is still not understood), Hasegawa Shiho's strength was boosted. That weapon on her arm must have increased her strength.

	The two men fired at the bench flying high-speeds toward them and turned it to a beehive. With a loud roar, the bench was demolished in a single moment. While debris blocked their vision, Shiho moved further away while shooting, an impact several times more intense than a roller coaster hitting Itto as they moved. Using high speed movements, Shiho jumped into the wooded area, hiding in the bushes		The two men fired at the bench flying high-speeds toward them and turned it to a beehive. With a loud roar, the bench was demolished in a single moment. While debris blocked their vision, Shiho moved further away while shooting, an impact several times more intense than a roller coaster hitting Itto as they moved. Using high speed movements, Shiho jumped into the wooded area, hiding in the bushes.

	Everything happened in instant.		Everything happened in instant.