Shurabara!:Volume 1 Prologue - Revision history

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	Her voice was soft, but voiced in a meticulous, clear manner.		Her voice was soft, but voiced in a meticulous, clear manner.

	~~“Wh…What~~?”		“W-what?”

	Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.		Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.
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	“Could you be ~~my…~~ boyfriend?”		“Could you be my b-boyfriend?”

	“Of course!”		“Of course!”

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	“Err, err… haha…”		“Err, err… haha…”

	Crap. This ~~was~~ a serious situation.		''Crap. This is a serious situation.''

	So as not to hurt the feelings of the girls, Kazuhiro usually used words with caution.		So as not to hurt the feelings of the girls, Kazuhiro usually used words with caution.

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	Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.		Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.

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	“Could you be my… boyfriend?”		“Could you be my… boyfriend?”
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	However, this only lasted an instant.		However, this only lasted an instant.

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	The wind of May blew toward him with the delicate fragrance of the nature. The classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.		The wind of May blew toward him with the delicate fragrance of the nature. The classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.

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	Most of the requests were similar to the situation just now, including matters like "I want to know how he feels about me" and "I hope you can be a match-maker".		Most of the requests were similar to the situation just now, including matters like "I want to know how he feels about me" and "I hope you can be a match-maker".

	There ~~are~~ thirteen couples, twenty-six people, in this school, all of which were made possible by the help of Kazuhiro.		There were thirteen couples, twenty-six people, in this school, all of which were made possible by the help of Kazuhiro.

	It was almost as if he was "the male friend who helps the protagonist in getting a girlfriend" kind of character in a Galgame.		It was almost as if he was "the male friend who helps the protagonist in getting a girlfriend" kind of character in a Galgame.
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	Kazuhiro could not speak out his true desires in front of girls. He could only roll around on the lawn and shout out loudly in frustration.		Kazuhiro could not speak out his true desires in front of girls. He could only roll around on the lawn and shout out loudly in frustration.

	Nobody would find out about his strange behavior anyways. Though, rolling on the lawn without restraint really ~~makes~~ him look like a dangerous individual.		Nobody would find out about his strange behavior anyways. Though, rolling on the lawn without restraint really made him look like a dangerous individual.

	No, ~~that’s not~~ right.		No, that wasn't right.

	The “no” in last sentence wasn’t negating the fact that “this person looks dangerous”.		The “no” in last sentence wasn’t negating the fact that “this person looks dangerous”.
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	Instead, the “no” was referring to the fact that “nobody will see” this incident.		Instead, the “no” was referring to the fact that “nobody will see” this incident.

	However, hiding under the shade of the tree, a person ~~happens~~ to be staring at Kazuhiro’s strange behavior.		However, hiding under the shade of the tree, a person happened to be staring at Kazuhiro’s strange behavior.

	“Gaaaooo!”		“Gaaaooo!”
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	“Err, err… haha…”		“Err, err… haha…”

	Crap. This is a serious situation.		Crap. This was a serious situation.

	So as not to hurt the feelings of the girls, Kazuhiro usually used words with caution.		So as not to hurt the feelings of the girls, Kazuhiro usually used words with caution.
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	Her clear voice resounded in Kazuhiro’s ears.		Her clear voice resounded in Kazuhiro’s ears.

	Now that Kazuhiro thought about it. Even though he is in the same class as Saotome, he seldom heard her voice.		Now that Kazuhiro thought about it. Even though he was in the same class as Saotome, he seldom heard her voice.

	“I’m not referring to your rolling on the lawn just now. I have been looking at you ever since you tried so hard for Miki…well that’s not correct… even before that, I have been taking special notice of Mr. Yagimoto… Kazuhiro-kun.”		“I’m not referring to your rolling on the lawn just now. I have been looking at you ever since you tried so hard for Miki…well that’s not correct… even before that, I have been taking special notice of Mr. Yagimoto… Kazuhiro-kun.”

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	However, hiding under the shade of the tree, a person happens to be staring at Kazuhiro’s strange behavior.		However, hiding under the shade of the tree, a person happens to be staring at Kazuhiro’s strange behavior.

	“Gaaaooo!”		“Gaaaooo!”

	Kazuhiro jumped up in shock, and immediately tidied himself while sitting down properly.		Kazuhiro jumped up in shock, and immediately tidied himself while sitting down properly.
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	Her voice was soft, but voiced in a meticulous, clear manner.		Her voice was soft, but voiced in a meticulous, clear manner.

	“Wh…What?”		“Wh…What?”

	Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.		Kazuhiro’s anticipation grew rapidly. He felt as if he might explode.

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	The wind of May blew towards me with the delicate fragrance of the green trees; the classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.		The wind of May blew towards me with the delicate fragrance of the green trees; the classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.

	~~Head lowering~~ in shyness, ~~a red-faced~~ girl, gazed at the ~~youth’s~~ gentle smiling face.		With her head lowered in shyness, the girl with flushed cheeks gazed at the boy’s gentle smiling face.

	“Err… Yagimoto-kun.”		“Err… Yagimoto-kun.”
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	From the cherry-red lips came a clear bell-like voice.		From the cherry-red lips came a clear bell-like voice.

	“I, to be able to meet ~~Yagimoto-kun, I’m glad!~~”		“I'm glad I was able to be able to meet you...”

	When the young girl raised her head, a pair of moist pupils was revealed.		When the young girl raised her head, a pair of moist pupils was revealed.

	The ~~youth~~ looked at the girl with tenderness and love.		The boy looked at the girl with tenderness and love.

	~~“Because…”~~		“After all…”

	Step by step. The young girl approached.		Step by step. The young girl approached.

	~~“Because thanks~~ to you, I’m going out with Takeshi-kun.”		“Thanks to you, I’m going out with Takeshi-kun!”

	Yet the young girl did not notice, the youth’s smile was slowly convulsing.		Yet the young girl did not notice, the youth’s smile was slowly convulsing.

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	“Wu…wahhhh <nowiki>~~~</nowiki>		“Wu…wahhhh <nowiki>~~~</nowiki>
	ah! Why is it this kind of development again!”		Ah! Why is it this kind of development again?”

	The youth scratched his head, shouting while stomping on the ground hysterically.		The youth scratched his head, shouting while stomping on the ground hysterically.
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	That kind of truthful words definitely must not be told in front of a girl, Kazuhiro regretted that till he rolled on a grass patch.		That kind of truthful words definitely must not be told in front of a girl, Kazuhiro regretted that till he rolled on a grass patch.

	~~It’s~~ best if nobody saw it, as long there ~~isn’t~~ a dangerous big-mouth.		Its best if nobody saw it, as long there isn't a dangerous big-mouth.

	That’s logically wrong.		That’s logically wrong.
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	She wore large-frame glasses that are rare in this era, her hair was also only tied up simply in a leather band.		She wore large-frame glasses that are rare in this era, her hair was also only tied up simply in a leather band.

	Including class, there are a total of nineteen girls in the school who love to wear glasses, all of them believe that wearing glasses makes it in contrast to ~~themselves~~, and can accentuate their cuteness.		Including class, there are a total of nineteen girls in the school who love to wear glasses, all of them believe that wearing glasses makes it in contrast to them, and can accentuate their cuteness.

	And among them, only Saotome uses vintage-style glasses.		And among them, only Saotome uses vintage-style glasses.
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	Kazuhiro asked, and Saotome opened her cherry-coloured lips and said with certainty,		Kazuhiro asked, and Saotome opened her cherry-coloured lips and said with certainty,

	“Everything, has been seen.”		“Everything has been seen.”

	The extremely clear voice resounded beside the ear.		The extremely clear voice resounded beside the ear.
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	Her silky white hands clasped together in front of her chest.		Her silky white hands clasped together in front of her chest.

	Her soft but serious voice, resounded clearly in her vocal cords.		Her soft but serious voice resounded clearly in her vocal cords.

	“Wh…What?”		“Wh…What?”
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	“Of course!”		“Of course!”

	I replied without hesitation. I couldn’t even resist shouting “Long live!”.		I replied without hesitation. I couldn’t even resist shouting “Long live!”

	This day has finally come. It must be the prize given to me by God for continuing the role of “good guy”!		This day has finally come. It must be the prize given to me by God for continuing the role of “good guy”!

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	The wind of May blew towards me with the delicate fragrance of the green trees; the classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.		The wind of May blew towards him with the delicate fragrance of the green trees; the classroom after school was filled with a tender sensation.

	With her head lowered in shyness, the girl with flushed cheeks gazed at the boy’s gentle smiling face.		With her head lowered in shyness, the girl with flushed cheeks gazed at the boy’s gentle smiling face.
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	“Err… Yagimoto-kun.”		“Err… Yagimoto-kun.”

	From ~~the~~ cherry-red lips came a clear bell-like voice.		From her cherry-red lips came a clear bell-like voice.

	“I'm glad I was able to be able to meet you...”		“I'm glad I was able to be able to meet you...”

	When the young girl raised her head, a pair of moist pupils ~~was~~ revealed.		When the young girl raised her head, a pair of moist pupils were revealed.

	The boy looked at the girl with tenderness and love.		The boy looked at the girl with tenderness and love.
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	Yet the young girl did not notice, the youth’s smile was slowly convulsing.		Yet the young girl did not notice, the youth’s smile was slowly convulsing.

	“Ahaha… ~~This is~~ what I’m supposed to do. After all, Miki-chan and I are friends.”		“Ahaha… That's what I’m supposed to do. After all, Miki-chan and I are friends.”

	“I’m also glad that I ~~can become~~ friends with a good person like Yagimoto-kun. Thanks☆”		“I’m also glad that I'm friends with a good person like Yagimoto-kun. Thanks☆”

	After the two waved hands, Miki lifted her skirt and left.		After the two waved hands, Miki lifted her skirt and left.
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	Ah! Why is it this kind of development again?”		Ah! Why is it this kind of development again?”

	The youth scratched his head, shouting while stomping on the ground hysterically.		The youth scratched his head, shouting while stomping his foot on the ground hysterically.

	The tree leaf ~~just now~~ flew to his leg.		The tree leaf flew on to his leg.

	Yagimoto Kazuhiro of Year Two Class Three is a good person.		Yagimoto Kazuhiro of Year Two Class Three is a good person.
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	Although looking as if he had no interest in these, he was actually using a wretched gaze to observe, and did not forget to joke.		Although looking as if he had no interest in these, he was actually using a wretched gaze to observe, and did not forget to joke.

	When requested by someone he of course accepted with a smile.		When requested by someone, he of course accepted with a smile.

	Has a normal appearance, but very concerned about personal hygiene.		Has a normal appearance, but very concerned about personal hygiene.
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	Come to think of it, his neighbour-cum-childhood-friend and junior colleague will also say "I need help" occasionally, but they never uttered a word about that kind of thing.		Come to think of it, his neighbour-cum-childhood-friend and junior colleague will also say "I need help" occasionally, but they never uttered a word about that kind of thing.

	“Aaaaaaaah! Really want! ~~Really~~ want a girlfriend!"		“Aaaaaaaah! Really want! I really want a girlfriend!"

	Although it was his own doing, when he found out about it, he was already a “good guy” and “good same-gender friend”.		Although it was his own doing, when he found out about it, he was already a “good guy” and “good same-gender friend”.

	That kind of ~~truthful words~~ definitely ~~must~~ not be ~~told~~ in front of a girl, Kazuhiro regretted that till he rolled on a grass patch.		That kind of truth must definitely not be said in front of a girl, Kazuhiro regretted that till he rolled on a grass patch.

	~~Its~~ best if nobody saw it, ~~as long there isn't~~ a dangerous big-mouth.		It's best if nobody saw it, especially a dangerous big-mouth.

	That’s logically wrong.		That’s logically wrong.
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	Instead he was referring to the “somebody saw it” presupposition.		Instead he was referring to the “somebody saw it” presupposition.

	The image of him rolling and shouting, had been seen by ~~the~~ motionless shadow under the tree shade.		The image of him rolling and shouting, had been seen by a motionless shadow under the tree shade.

	“I’ll go!”		“I’ll go!”
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	Kazuhiro jumped up in shock after hearing that voice, and tidied himself.		Kazuhiro jumped up in shock after hearing that voice, and tidied himself.

	The one ~~that~~ saw it was Hoshikawa Saotome.		The one who saw it was Hoshikawa Saotome.

	This girl is also a well-known person in the school – as the most ordinary.		This girl is also a well-known person in the school – as the most ordinary.

	She wore large-frame glasses that are rare in this era, her hair was ~~also~~ only tied up simply in a leather band.		She wore large-frame glasses that are rare in this era, her hair was only tied up simply in a leather band.

	Including class, there are a total of nineteen girls in the school who love to wear glasses, all of them believe that wearing glasses makes ~~it in~~ contrast to them, and can accentuate their cuteness.		Including class, there are a total of nineteen girls in the school who love to wear glasses, all of them believe that wearing glasses makes a contrast with them, and can accentuate their cuteness.

	And among them, only Saotome uses vintage-style glasses.		And among them, only Saotome uses vintage-style glasses.
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	Crap. This is a serious situation.		Crap. This is a serious situation.

	So as not to hurt the feelings of girls, he usually uses words with caution ~~that~~ will not be hated, this is the origin of Kazuhiro's image. He did this because the girls’ gossiping rate is simply too shocking.		So as not to hurt the feelings of girls, he usually uses words with caution for which he will not be hated, this is the origin of Kazuhiro's image. He did this because the girls’ gossiping rate is simply too shocking.

	Once that strange behaviour just now and his truthful words are revealed to the public, Kazuhiro’s image in the class would be directly switched ~~between~~ “good guy” ~~and~~ “hypocritical and endless-desire pervert”.		Once that strange behaviour just now and his truthful words are revealed to the public, Kazuhiro’s image in the class would be directly switched from “good guy” to “hypocritical and endless-desire pervert”.

	~~Evaluation~~ would plummet. It can be compared to a failure in nose-diving through the atmosphere, causing combustion in the stratosphere then falling to the earth, the intense turbulence would then lead to an explosion in which sparks flew, and at the end vanish without a trace.		His evaluation would plummet. It can be compared to a failure in nose-diving through the atmosphere, causing combustion in the stratosphere then falling to the earth, the intense turbulence would then lead to an explosion in which sparks flew, and at the end vanish without a trace.

	“…Saw it?”		“…Saw it?”
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	The extremely clear voice resounded beside the ear.		The extremely clear voice resounded beside the ear.

	Now that it’s mentioned, although she was a classmate, ~~however~~ it seemed that Saotome's voice was never heard.		Now that it’s mentioned, although she was a classmate, it seemed that Saotome's voice was never heard.

	“I’m not referring to your rolling just now, instead I saw Miki trying so hard that…mmhmm… Even so, since the beginning I’ve been staring at Yoshimoto-kun – Kazuhiro-kun.”		“I’m not referring to your rolling just now, instead I saw Miki trying so hard that…mmhmm… Even so, since the beginning I’ve been staring at Yoshimoto-kun – Kazuhiro-kun.”
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	Under the thick lenses seemed to be – two beautiful pupils.		Under the thick lenses seemed to be – two beautiful pupils.

	~~Pair~~ of moist eyes ~~was~~ complemented by elongated eyebrows, as she stared at Kazuhiro.		A pair of moist eyes were complemented by elongated eyebrows, as she stared at Kazuhiro.

	I never thought that glasses would give such a strong impression to someone. Tender face, firm nose, complementing lips, large eyes, showed a perfect appearance.		I never thought that glasses would give such a strong impression to someone. Tender face, firm nose, complementing lips, large eyes, showed a perfect appearance.

	Not just in the class, even in the whole school she was ~~regarded as~~ the most beautiful girl.		Not just in the class, even in the whole school she was the most beautiful girl.

	“Take off glasses and become a beauty” such a tale actually exists in real life!		“Take off glasses and become a beauty” such a tale actually exists in real life!
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	Endless thanks wouldn’t even be able to show my extreme happiness.		Endless thanks wouldn’t even be able to show my extreme happiness.

	And in a snap of a finger.		And in the snap of a finger.

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