Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume02 Chapter5 - Revision history

Zzhk: Undo revision 300158 by Deathmailrock (talk) the note is intended for alternative language translators who may want to keep "shopping" as a foreign word

2013-11-09T18:49:43Z

Undo revision 300158 by Deathmailrock (talk) the note is intended for alternative language translators who may want to keep "shopping" as a foreign word

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	"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"		"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"

	"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me..."		"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me as well..."

	Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.		Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.
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	Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.		Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.

	Hence, Hisui and his companions took advantage of ~~it and fabricated~~ a story about ~~her being~~ kidnapped ~~with~~ Hisui ~~discovering~~ it by chance and ~~preventing~~ a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.		Hence, Hisui and his companions took advantage of her amnesia to fabricate a story about how she was kidnapped but fortunately, Hisui discovered it by chance and prevented a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.

	Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.		Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.
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	"What is that?"		"What is that?"

	"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<~~ref>The Chinese~~ has ~~血拼 which is a phonetic transliteration of~~ "shopping" so the ~~original JP probably has some kind of~~ loanword ~~or pun~~ (~~unfortunately JP sources have not been located~~)~~</ref~~>		"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<!--JP has "shopping" transliterated in hiragana(しょっぴんぐ) instead of the usual katakana loanword(ショッピング), presumably to indicate Rushella's unfamiliarity-->

	"So you even learned a new word like that......"		"So you even learned a new word like that......"

Deathmailrock at 16:26, 9 November 2013

2013-11-09T16:26:11Z

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	"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"		"Yeah right, like I'd want to hear that from the girl doing the naked shirt look! You must be doing it on purpose!?"

	"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me ~~a well~~..."		"I wear this because it's comfortable! You're wearing that because you intend to do something to that guy......? Or to me..."

	Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.		Halfway through, Rushella finally realized what was being done to her.
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	Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.		Because her memories after being bitten became unclear, Reina herself had virtually forgotten all of what happened.

	Hence Hisui and his companions took advantage of it and fabricated a story about her being kidnapped ~~but luckily~~ Hisui ~~discovered~~ it by chance and ~~prevented~~ a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.		Hence, Hisui and his companions took advantage of it and fabricated a story about her being kidnapped with Hisui discovering it by chance and preventing a tragedy -- That was the plausible story they told Reina without mentioning the word "vampire" at all.

	Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.		Kidnapped and then drugged unconscious, thus explaining the fuzzy memories -- this explanation seemed to have been accepted, so Reina was still none the wiser.
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	"What is that?"		"What is that?"

	"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<~~!--the~~ Chinese has 血拼 which is a phonetic transliteration of "shopping" so the original JP probably has some kind of loanword or pun (unfortunately JP sources have not been located)-->		"I-It's... I'm back from 'shopping'!"<ref>The Chinese has 血拼 which is a phonetic transliteration of "shopping" so the original JP probably has some kind of loanword or pun (unfortunately JP sources have not been located)</ref>

	"So you even learned a new word like that......"		"So you even learned a new word like that......"

Scr.zero at 06:12, 7 September 2013

2013-09-07T06:12:07Z

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	A vampire's greatest weakness.		A vampire's greatest weakness.

	An fashionable ornament would be harmless but the one held in Reina's hand was different.		A fashionable ornament would be harmless but the one held in Reina's hand was different.

	This one had been blessed and sanctified, infused with her faith and extremely threatening to a vampire.		This one had been blessed and sanctified, infused with her faith and extremely threatening to a vampire.

Zzhk at 11:20, 12 June 2013

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	"I hope you can stay by her side to assist her. The enemy must be caught alive, otherwise there would be no point. Now that Kujou-san is unavailable, someone has to act in support for her."		"I hope you can stay by her side to assist her. The enemy must be caught alive, otherwise there would be no point. Now that Kujou-san is unavailable, someone has to act in support for her."

	"No problem. I'll rely on you to update me on the situation, ~~Eru~~-chan."		"No problem. I'll rely on you to update me on the situation, Eruru-chan."

	"Very well... I will continue researching and see if there are other solutions."		"Very well... I will continue researching and see if there are other solutions."

Chancs at 12:59, 11 June 2013

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	"If you have something to say, say it; something you want to do, do it. Don't beat around the bush. Whoever I stare at, the target will always do my bidding obediently!"		"If you have something to say, say it; something you want to do, do it. Don't beat around the bush. Whoever I stare at, the target will always do my bidding obediently!"

	That's clearly using your "~~Magic~~ Eyes," right? ...This was supposed to be Hisui's customary retort.		That's clearly using your "Mystic Eyes," right? ...This was supposed to be Hisui's customary retort.

	But the past familiar dialogue did not appear, causing Rushella to look around her, thinking of Hisui.		But the past familiar dialogue did not appear, causing Rushella to look around her, thinking of Hisui.
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	Rushella finally broke free from the potion's restraints and wielded her favorite short sword.		Rushella finally broke free from the potion's restraints and wielded her favorite short sword.

	Then she activated her "~~magic~~ eyes."		Then she activated her "mystic eyes."

	Crimson light penetrated the "Witch," placing her under absolute command.		Crimson light penetrated the "Witch," placing her under absolute command.
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	"......"		"......"

	"Also -- When using the '~~magic~~ eyes,' you must disrupt the target's concentration first. No matter how much mental strength she had, so long as you take her by surprise, even your power can render her powerless."		"Also -- When using the 'mystic eyes,' you must disrupt the target's concentration first. No matter how much mental strength she had, so long as you take her by surprise, even your power can render her powerless."

	"...I know."		"...I know."

Zzhk at 13:30, 8 February 2013

2013-02-08T13:30:16Z

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	"Eh, you're interested in that too!?"		"Eh, you're interested in that too!?"

	"Of course not! Lesbians belong to the domain of female vampires, okay!? Besides, why aren't you in your own room, Hi-kun!? You made my plans all go to waste!"<ref>'''Lesbians... female vampires''': a reference to the famous gothic novella ~~featuring a~~ female vampire ~~named Carmilla~~ who preys on young women. Predates Bram Stoker's '''Dracula'''.[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carmilla]</ref>		"Of course not! Lesbians belong to the domain of female vampires, okay!? Besides, why aren't you in your own room, Hi-kun!? You made my plans all go to waste!"<ref>'''Lesbians... female vampires''': a reference to the famous gothic novella ''Carmilla'' which features the eponymous female vampire who preys on young women. Predates Bram Stoker's ''Dracula''.[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carmilla]</ref>

	"That's right, you should be obediently sleeping in your room!!"		"That's right, you should be obediently sleeping in your room!!"

Endo: changing life to blood

2013-02-08T11:34:19Z

changing life to blood

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	She was the original intended target of the curse. But Hisui suffered as a result of protecting her.		She was the original intended target of the curse. But Hisui suffered as a result of protecting her.

	"Nonstop bleeding. No matter how we try to staunch the wound, the blood continues to flow. This is most likely a curse meant for taking care of vampires. A mere poison cannot defeat a vampire but by making wounds bleed nonstop, a vampire can be weakened continuously. For a vampire, ~~life~~ is the source of life and the root of one's power. Even though large scale blood loss will not lead to death, a vampire will still be immobilized. Then seizing the opportunity, a death blow can be applied -- this is probably the witch's plan?"		"Nonstop bleeding. No matter how we try to staunch the wound, the blood continues to flow. This is most likely a curse meant for taking care of vampires. A mere poison cannot defeat a vampire but by making wounds bleed nonstop, a vampire can be weakened continuously. For a vampire, blood is the source of life and the root of one's power. Even though large scale blood loss will not lead to death, a vampire will still be immobilized. Then seizing the opportunity, a death blow can be applied -- this is probably the witch's plan?"

	"Since it targets a vampire... What happens when it's used on a human?"		"Since it targets a vampire... What happens when it's used on a human?"

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2013-02-08T08:17:10Z

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