Silver Cross and Draculea:Volume04 Chapter4 - Revision history

Oppaidragonz: /* Part 1 */

2016-05-16T14:12:25Z

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	Within a moment, Rushella's face was dyed red.		Within a moment, Rushella's face was dyed red.

	However Hisui ~~did~~'t notice that, and continued to stare at Rushella's breasts in amazement.		However Hisui didn't notice that, and continued to stare at Rushella's breasts in amazement.

	"Ehh, How could I reproduce..... such a realistic sensation? So I was extremely sexually frustrated."		"Ehh, How could I reproduce..... such a realistic sensation? So I was extremely sexually frustrated."

184.146.220.152 at 01:24, 14 March 2014

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	"...Hmph."		"...Hmph."

	Rushella scoffed unhappily, ~~scowling~~ and ~~continuing~~ to eat her food.		Rushella scoffed unhappily, scowled and continued to eat her food.

	Meat was supposed to be her favorite and the taste did not seem bad. Even greatly displeased, she still shoved food into her mouth.		Meat was supposed to be her favorite and the taste did not seem bad. Even greatly displeased, she still shoved food into her mouth.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Cohabitation */

2013-12-27T03:17:33Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Cohabitation

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135.0.65.238: /* Part 3 */

2013-12-25T11:42:08Z

Part 3

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	There was another rumor--Under the color of night, a boy was roaming the streets with a cross-shaped white package carried on his back.		There was another rumor--Under the color of night, a boy was roaming the streets with a cross-shaped white package carried on his back.

	He did not do anything special, simply frequenting shops and convenience ~~stroes~~ then shaking his head in loneliness.		He did not do anything special, simply frequenting shops and convenience stores then shaking his head in loneliness.

	Only one ramen shopkeeper had seen him before, together with a woman who seemed to be his relative. When he saw the boy standing outside his shop, the shopkeeper made conversation with him.		Only one ramen shopkeeper had seen him before, together with a woman who seemed to be his relative. When he saw the boy standing outside his shop, the shopkeeper made conversation with him.
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MageSlayer: /* Chapter 4 - Crimson Cohabitation */

2013-12-25T02:55:26Z

Chapter 4 - Crimson Cohabitation

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MageSlayer: /* Part 3 */

2013-12-25T02:49:50Z

Part 3

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Kouen no Ten: Guy's there are few typos in there, get in gear. However consult me before make any major changes to any sentence.

2013-12-05T12:56:30Z

Guy's there are few typos in there, get in gear. However consult me before make any major changes to any sentence.

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	Rushella'a stiffened face eventually changes, and with it her tone returns to the normal arrogant one.		Rushella'a stiffened face eventually changes, and with it her tone returns to the normal arrogant one.

	"Have it your way. If he was man will become a slave that easily, then I won't ~~any~~ face ~~any~~ trouble too. Hey Hisui, come here. Kneel beneath me, and lick my feet!"		"Have it your way. If he was man will become a slave that easily, then I won't face anymore trouble too. Hey Hisui, come here. Kneel beneath me, and lick my feet!"

	Rushella conveyed pridefully while she sat on the desk and crossed her long legs.		Rushella conveyed pridefully while she sat on the desk and crossed her long legs.

	She lit the crimson light in her pupil. Even though she said it in ~~completly~~ commanding tone, but from the start she didn't believe Hisui would just obey.		She lit the crimson light in her pupil. Even though she said it in a completely commanding tone, but from the start she didn't believe Hisui would just obey.

	It will just end with "Who would do that" comeback. Yes, Rushella did not doubt that.		It will just end with "Who would do that" comeback. Yes, Rushella did not doubt that.
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	Upon Kirika's inquiry, Mei murmured while looking at Rushella.		Upon Kirika's inquiry, Mei murmured while looking at Rushella.

	"For the time being..... I will take over."		"For the time being..... I will take over."



	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

Deathmailrock at 03:52, 5 December 2013

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	Strongly even though she had small stature, Hisui was not able to oppose.		Strongly even though she had small stature, Hisui was not able to oppose.

	"Or rather, who are you? I thought others, well excluding ~~Gosht~~-san, that everyone were high school students, but why is a middle school student? Or perhaps for worse even elementary school student geboh"		"Or rather, who are you? I thought others, well excluding Ghost-san, that everyone were high school students, but why is a middle school student? Or perhaps for worse even elementary school student geboh"

	Before he could say it, Hisui was hit with a powerful body-blow, and was dragged along while he had cuff coming out from his mouth.		Before he could say it, Hisui was hit with a powerful body-blow, and was dragged along while he had cuff coming out from his mouth.

Kouen no Ten: Part two completed.

2013-12-04T23:44:41Z

Part two completed.

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	Since Hisui clearly became a vampire, Rushella's words could easily be put off as a bluff.		Since Hisui clearly became a vampire, Rushella's words could easily be put off as a bluff.

			However, Rushella had an grim expression, and like her, she won't let out the words to deny the trust (they had) in Hisui.

			Only her, Eruru alone spoke with coolness.

			"Then, try to test him. Did he really sink into becoming your slave or not?"

			"What do......you want me to do?"

			"A very simple thing. Please command him. A command that he will absolutely not follow normally. He who is your servant now, after becoming a vampire by having his blood sucked. He should obey your orders. Of course, with his willpower and extent of his progress as a vampire, resistances is possible to certain degree, but he should not be able to oposse if we include your, a {Shinso} mystic eyes. So how about testing it out."

			Eruru conveyed with a provocative tone.

			Rushella'a stiffened face eventually changes, and with it her tone returns to the normal arrogant one.

			"Have it your way. If he was man will become a slave that easily, then I won't any face any trouble too. Hey Hisui, come here. Kneel beneath me, and lick my feet!"

			Rushella conveyed pridefully while she sat on the desk and crossed her long legs.

			She lit the crimson light in her pupil. Even though she said it in completly commanding tone, but from the start she didn't believe Hisui would just obey.

			It will just end with "Who would do that" comeback. Yes, Rushella did not doubt that.

			Excluding Eruru, other girls were hoping for that too.

			Even so..

			Hisui easily kneeled with hollow pupils.

			He indubitably looked up at Rushella who sitting in a high place, as if he was looking at his master. With his tongue he started to towards those legs...

			"St... Stop it!!"

			Rushella restrained him, and clattered her legs. With that vigorous momentum, Hisui's was kicked, and he unsightly fell backwards.

			"It hurts........... Huh, what was I doing?"

			Hisui, after regaining his sanity, blinked in surprise while caressing the area around his nose.

			He noticed Rushella hugging herself while trembling continuously, but did not understand the reason entirely. Same with Mei, and the others who were looking at him with speechless faces.

			"With this its all clear. The present Kujou-kun is a victim of a complete vampire. I will take him into my custody."

			Just like that, Eruru took Hisui by his hand, and lead him outside the classroom.

			For a instant, Rushella extended her hand, but gave up immediately, and lowered her hand powerlessly.

			"Hey Eruru-chan, where are you going!?"

			"For now I will take him to my home. It will become troublesome even if I explain the situation to the Supernatural Investigations Section, having said that, it just won't do if I just neglect this. Either way, as he is now, he won't be able to keep up with high school classes, and for me it wasn't necessary in the first place. I am leaving early, well then."

			Eruru dragged Hisui just like that towards the staff room after answering Mei's question indifferently.

			Strongly even though she had small stature, Hisui was not able to oppose.

			"Or rather, who are you? I thought others, well excluding Gosht-san, that everyone were high school students, but why is a middle school student? Or perhaps for worse even elementary school student geboh"

			Before he could say it, Hisui was hit with a powerful body-blow, and was dragged along while he had cuff coming out from his mouth.

			The remaining three excluding Rushella, looked at each other, started to plan what to do from here on.

			"What do we do?"

			Upon Kirika's inquiry, Mei murmured while looking at Rushella.

			"For the time being..... I will take over."



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Kouen no Ten: /* Part 2 */ Very professionally done DK, keep at it.

2013-12-03T05:28:18Z

Part 2: Very professionally done DK, keep at it.

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	Kirika refused firmly.		Kirika refused firmly.

	~~Fundamentally she~~ was ~~a good person, but~~ for Touko who ~~has~~ continuously brought about troubling rumors recently within the school grounds~~, it was just plainly harsh~~. ~~'''(Editor: TLC please, not quite sure what the "it~~ was ~~just plainly harsh" means~~. ~~It doesn't really make sense)'''~~		It was simply cruel for Touko who had continuously brought about troubling rumors recently within the school grounds. Though fundamentally she was a good person.

	"However, just losing the confiscated item seems to have developed into a serious matter. As predicted, someone took advantage of the ruckus and snatched it......?"		"However, just losing the confiscated item seems to have developed into a serious matter. As predicted, someone took advantage of the ruckus and snatched it......?"
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	Clenching her fist, she stated with a compelling tone.		Clenching her fist, she stated with a compelling tone.

	"As I thought.... This is some kind of mistake!! Even until now, wasn't he just fine the whole time!! Even when he was sucked by other vampires, he was completely fine.....~~Eeven~~ my mystic eyes didn't work at all. As if that kind of guy would become my blood relative with utter ease!!!"		"As I thought.... This is some kind of mistake!! Even until now, wasn't he just fine the whole time!! Even when he was sucked by other vampires, he was completely fine.....Even my mystic eyes didn't work at all. As if that kind of guy would become my blood relative with utter ease!!!"

	Those words, they could be taken as trust.		Those words, they could be taken as trust.