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2012-12-15T19:43:52Z

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210.186.148.54: /* ME5: Salvia */

2012-11-08T03:14:42Z

ME5: Salvia

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	It was already past eight, being a weekday, there were lines of people walking on the road outside of the station. But the bicycle that both were riding on headed in the opposite direction from the flow. Suguha felt the people they passed were smiling at the siblings, she buried her face behind Kazuto's back and quietly said,		It was already past eight, being a weekday, there were lines of people walking on the road outside of the station. But the bicycle that both were riding on headed in the opposite direction from the flow. Suguha felt the people they passed were smiling at the siblings, she buried her face behind Kazuto's back and quietly said,

	"T..This is embarrassing, Onii-chan! How much further are we~~'re~~ going?"		"T..This is embarrassing, Onii-chan! How much further are we going?"

	"Won't be too far...... probably......"		"Won't be too far...... probably......"

BeginnerXP: added missing periods.

2012-08-10T09:10:39Z

added missing periods.

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	"It's an Adonis, red chichibu type."		"It's an Adonis, red chichibu type."

	"Hmm...... So it blooms in this season"		"Hmm...... So it blooms in this season."

	On hearing Suguha's answer, Kazuto poked a petal of the adonis while deep in thought.		On hearing Suguha's answer, Kazuto poked a petal of the adonis while deep in thought.
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	He stood still but his eyes suddenly went wide open.		He stood still but his eyes suddenly went wide open.

	"......? What is it, Onii-chan"		"......? What is it, Onii-chan."

	"No......that's right......come to think of it......"		"No......that's right......come to think of it......"
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	Suguha looked up worriedly at the Kazuto's face, who muttered words she couldn't understand. Suddenly, he closed the distance between them while looking into her eyes. Suguha's heart fluttered, trying to hide her hot cheeks, she hastily jumped a step backward.		Suguha looked up worriedly at the Kazuto's face, who muttered words she couldn't understand. Suddenly, he closed the distance between them while looking into her eyes. Suguha's heart fluttered, trying to hide her hot cheeks, she hastily jumped a step backward.

	"W..What? Don't surprise me like that"		"W..What? Don't surprise me like that."

	"......Sugu, do you have time now?"		"......Sugu, do you have time now?"
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	"Eh? ......There's no class today, so it's alright, but why......?"		"Eh? ......There's no class today, so it's alright, but why......?"

	"Well then, let's go out for a bit"		"Well then, let's go out for a bit."

	Kazuto grabbed Suguha's arm, who was still unable to grasp the situation, and walked quickly toward the eaves of the main building.		Kazuto grabbed Suguha's arm, who was still unable to grasp the situation, and walked quickly toward the eaves of the main building.
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	"W..Wait, where are we going?"		"W..Wait, where are we going?"

	"Don't ask yet, just sit on the pannier rack"		"Don't ask yet, just sit on the pannier rack."

	He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.		He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.
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	The ladies eyes widened a little when she saw the siblings, she then immediately smiled while approaching them and said,		The ladies eyes widened a little when she saw the siblings, she then immediately smiled while approaching them and said,

	"Good morning"		"Good morning."

	"Ah.. G..Good morning"		"Ah.. G..Good morning."

	The siblings hastily returned greetings.		The siblings hastily returned greetings.
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	"Well then, feel free to visit anytime. In spring there will be a lot more blooming."		"Well then, feel free to visit anytime. In spring there will be a lot more blooming."

	"OK, now we must be going"		"OK, now we must be going."

	Kazuto bowed his head again to the lady who began to sprinkle water with the watering can, then began walking.		Kazuto bowed his head again to the lady who began to sprinkle water with the watering can, then began walking.
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	"Well, Sugu, let's go back."		"Well, Sugu, let's go back."

	"O..Ok. ......Good bye"		"O..Ok. ......Good bye."

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	Suguha jumped into Kazuto's chest, who had faltered due to sudden panicking. Both hands wrapped around his back, she embraced him with all her strength. Before long, she felt Kazuto caress her head gently. Cheeks still pressed on to Kazuto's chest, she whispered quietly while the sweetness was still lingering in her mouth,		Suguha jumped into Kazuto's chest, who had faltered due to sudden panicking. Both hands wrapped around his back, she embraced him with all her strength. Before long, she felt Kazuto caress her head gently. Cheeks still pressed on to Kazuto's chest, she whispered quietly while the sweetness was still lingering in her mouth,

	"I love you.....Onii-chan"		"I love you.....Onii-chan."

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86.8.170.209: /* ME5: Salvia */

2012-08-10T01:09:29Z

ME5: Salvia

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	"I'm at my limit already~"		"I'm at my limit already~"

	Glancing at the side of Kazuto's face who ~~leaked~~ the complaints in a miserable voice, Suguha tried not to laugh and raised her voice,		Glancing at the side of Kazuto's face who breathed the complaints in a miserable voice, Suguha tried not to laugh and raised her voice,

	"Not yet! Only 20 more!"		"Not yet! Only 20 more!"
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	"Salvia...... what kind of flower is that?"		"Salvia...... what kind of flower is that?"

	Finishing the watering, Suguha showered the remaining water in the can at the base of black pine, then answered with a surprised voice,		Finishing the watering, Suguha showered the remaining water in the can at the base of a black pine, then answered with a surprised voice,

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	"Wait...... now I remember......"		"Wait...... now I remember......"

	~~The~~ grin floated onto Kazuto's face.		A grin floated onto Kazuto's face.

	"The one mother was angry at wasn't me but you, Sugu. I think she said 'Didn't we agree no more than 3 per day?'"		"The one mother was angry at wasn't me but you, Sugu. I think she said 'Didn't we agree no more than 3 per day?'"
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	"No......that's right......come to think of it......"		"No......that's right......come to think of it......"

	Suguha looked up worriedly at the Kazuto's face, who muttered words she couldn't understand. Suddenly, he closed the distance between them while looking into her eyes. Suguha's heart ~~throbbed~~, trying to hide her hot cheeks, she hastily jumped a step backward.		Suguha looked up worriedly at the Kazuto's face, who muttered words she couldn't understand. Suddenly, he closed the distance between them while looking into her eyes. Suguha's heart fluttered, trying to hide her hot cheeks, she hastily jumped a step backward.

	"W..What? Don't surprise me like that"		"W..What? Don't surprise me like that"
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	"W..Wait, where are we going?"		"W..Wait, where are we going?"

	"Don't ask yet, just sit on the ~~back seat~~"		"Don't ask yet, just sit on the pannier rack"

	He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.		He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.
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	"They use cooler looking jerseys for that! ......It really can't be helped then..."		"They use cooler looking jerseys for that! ......It really can't be helped then..."

	After saying her point, she sat down on the rear carrier of MTB with her arms wrapped around Kazuto's waist and clung on tightly. She began to worry that he would hear the sound of her heart which was currently beating like an alarm bell.		After saying her point, she sat down on the rear carrier of the MTB with her arms wrapped around Kazuto's waist and clung on tightly. She began to worry that he would hear the sound of her heart which was currently beating like an alarm bell.

	"Hold on tight!"		"Hold on tight!"
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	"Probably―!?"		"Probably―!?"

	The bicycle went on steadily until the outskirts of the residential area, even though the rear carrier was made of metal, sitting was comfortable because the MTB's ~~tire~~ was ~~attached to~~ a thick suspension.		The bicycle went on steadily until the outskirts of the residential area, even though the rear carrier was made of metal, sitting was comfortable because the MTB's wheel was supported by a thick suspension.

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	"......? Is this the house of your acquaintance?"		"......? Is this the house of your acquaintance?"

	Suguha stood next to him, the house exterior was built with tiles of red bricks, palisade painted in white enclosed a large garden which was covered in color of dried straw. There was a small child who was waiting for its parents on a red tricycle.		Suguha stood next to him, the house exterior was built with tiles of red bricks and a palisade painted in white enclosed a large garden which was covered in a color of dried straw. There was a small child who was waiting for its parents on a red tricycle.

	Suguha looked up to Kazuto's face, wanting to ask her question again, but eventually, he shook his head slowly.		Suguha looked up to Kazuto's face, wanting to ask her question again, but eventually, he shook his head slowly.
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	When Suguha tilted her head, the back door of the big house opened. A young lady wearing an apron came out, her long hair was tied in a pony tail, in her hands was a shiny tin watering can.		When Suguha tilted her head, the back door of the big house opened. A young lady wearing an apron came out, her long hair was tied in a pony tail, in her hands was a shiny tin watering can.

	The ~~lady expanded her~~ eyes a little when she saw the siblings, she then immediately smiled while approaching them and said,		The ladies eyes widened a little when she saw the siblings, she then immediately smiled while approaching them and said,

	"Good morning"		"Good morning"
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	"Y..Yes"		"Y..Yes"

	"Is there anything I could help?"		"Is there anything I could help with?"

	"Er..Erm... well......."		"Er..Erm... well......."
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	Kazuto hesitated for a bit, then timidly said,		Kazuto hesitated for a bit, then timidly said,

	"......The one who sowed ~~these~~ Salvia was me, ......seven years ago......"		"......The one who sowed the Salvia was me, ......seven years ago......"

	"E..Eh!?"		"E..Eh!?"
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	"Is that so, then these flowers must have been waiting for you. Ah......wait a moment."		"Is that so, then these flowers must have been waiting for you. Ah......wait a moment."

	The lady ~~hunched~~ to put the watering can down, then walked quickly into the house. In a short while the figure reappeared with a small shovel in her right hand, she lowered the white plastic pot in her left hand to the ground.		The lady bent over to put the watering can down, then walked quickly into the house. In a short while the figure reappeared with a small shovel in her right hand, she lowered the white plastic pot in her left hand to the ground.

	While Suguha and Kazuto were watching, the lady dug the shovel into one corner of the Blue Salvia bunch and carefully pulled three stumps out, then put them into the flowerpot. She brought a vinyl bag from her apron pocket and put the flowerpot into it. With a smiling face and both hands holding the bag, she offered it to Kazuto.		While Suguha and Kazuto were watching, the lady dug the shovel into one corner of the Blue Salvia bunch and carefully pulled three stumps out, then put them into the flowerpot. She brought a vinyl bag from her apron pocket and put the flowerpot into it. With a smiling face and both hands holding the bag, she offered it to Kazuto.
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	"OK, now we must be going"		"OK, now we must be going"

	Kazuto bowed his head again to the lady who began to ~~scatter~~ water with the watering can, then began walking.		Kazuto bowed his head again to the lady who began to sprinkle water with the watering can, then began walking.

	"Well, Sugu, let's go back."		"Well, Sugu, let's go back."

Vaelis at 07:42, 14 July 2012

2012-07-14T07:42:55Z

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	===Salvia===		===ME5: Salvia===
	'''''January 2025'''''		'''''January 2025'''''

Vaelis: moved Sword Art Online:Salvia to Sword Art Online:ME5

2012-07-14T07:42:23Z

moved Sword Art Online:Salvia to Sword Art Online:ME5

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Vaelis at 07:29, 7 July 2012

2012-07-07T07:29:52Z

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Zero2001: Update.

2012-07-06T21:14:54Z

Update.

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	He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.		He pulled out his mountain bike and removed the number lock attached to it.

	"Eh―, I'm still in this outfit, ~~it’s~~ a bit......"		"Eh―, I'm still in this outfit, it's a bit......"

	Suguha complained while looking down at her green school jersey, but Kazuto just smiled and said,		Suguha complained while looking down at her green school jersey, but Kazuto just smiled and said,
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BeginnerXP: remove refs, replace n-dash with m-dash

2012-05-21T03:18:37Z

remove refs, replace n-dash with m-dash

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	===Salvia===		===Salvia===
	'''''January 2025'''''~~<ref>The event in this story took place before the start of story in volume 3 Fairy Dance.</ref>~~		'''''January 2025'''''

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	"Not yet! Only 20 more!"		"Not yet! Only 20 more!"

	Two people continued swinging their shinai~~<ref>A weapon used for practice and competition in kendo representing a Japanese sword.</ref>~~ in the harsh cold weather of the morning. For Kazuto, swinging 300 times every morning is still very tough. Despite saying 'Can't~' or 'I'm dying~' every few minutes, he still continued until the end. His willpower is what Suguha always looked up to.		Two people continued swinging their shinai in the harsh cold weather of the morning. For Kazuto, swinging 300 times every morning is still very tough. Despite saying 'Can't~' or 'I'm dying~' every few minutes, he still continued until the end. His willpower is what Suguha always looked up to.

	"298, ......299, ......OK, finish~"		"298, ......299, ......OK, finish~"
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	"N..Nectar!? Did I really do such a survivor-like thing......?"		"N..Nectar!? Did I really do such a survivor-like thing......?"

	"~~Ah――~~ you already forgot about it. I was sad my share was gone too."		"Ah—— you already forgot about it. I was sad my share was gone too."

	"......My share?"		"......My share?"
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	"Hmm, I can't remember the taste......"		"Hmm, I can't remember the taste......"

	Kazuto aimlessly glanced at the space in front of him while searching through the bottom of his ~~memories――~~		Kazuto aimlessly glanced at the space in front of him while searching through the bottom of his memories——

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	"I don't understand, we came all the way to this place just to look for a vacant lot―?"		"I don't understand, we came all the way to this place just to look for a vacant lot―?"

	After self-concluding, he turned back, Kazuto shrugged and started walking to the bicycle. Suguha watched his back and when she was about to follow ~~him――~~		After self-concluding, he turned back, Kazuto shrugged and started walking to the bicycle. Suguha watched his back and when she was about to follow him——

	"Ah......"		"Ah......"
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	A bright blue scene had filled her vision.		A bright blue scene had filled her vision.

	One corner of the lawn was enclosed with bricks, it was a small flower bed. In the middle was cold resistant plants spread with deep green leaves, and hidden within ―― there was a dense short grass with a large amount of blooming small blue flowers.		One corner of the lawn was enclosed with bricks, it was a small flower bed. In the middle was cold resistant plants spread with deep green leaves, and hidden within —— there was a dense short grass with a large amount of blooming small blue flowers.

	"......It's the Salvia."		"......It's the Salvia."
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	Suguha's eyes opened wide, she shyly averted her gaze from Kazuto's face. Her chest felt tight with the various emotions that had overflown within her heart.		Suguha's eyes opened wide, she shyly averted her gaze from Kazuto's face. Her chest felt tight with the various emotions that had overflown within her heart.

	Stretching out her right hand, she gently pulled a Salvia flower which peeped out from the bag's opening. She received the droplet that came off from its base with the tip of her tongue. It was faint, but the vivid sweetness quickly spread inside her mouth ―― At that moment, Suguha felt the flow of the many years of time she spent with Kazuto breeze through her. Before she realized it, two streaks of tears had already flowed passed her cheeks and dropped to her feet.		Stretching out her right hand, she gently pulled a Salvia flower which peeped out from the bag's opening. She received the droplet that came off from its base with the tip of her tongue. It was faint, but the vivid sweetness quickly spread inside her mouth —— At that moment, Suguha felt the flow of the many years of time she spent with Kazuto breeze through her. Before she realized it, two streaks of tears had already flowed passed her cheeks and dropped to her feet.

	"O..Oi, don't suddenly cry......"		"O..Oi, don't suddenly cry......"
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	"I love you.....Onii-chan"		"I love you.....Onii-chan"


	~~===Translator's Notes & References===~~


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