Talk:Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Gulcasa766 at 23:30, 21 September 2013

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	Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01\|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01\|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01\|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01\|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

	I think the period should be changed to a comma to help clarify this problem. Yurie was slower as Tooru was already able to make up a sports drink for her to help relieve her fatigue. [[User:Gulcasa766\|Gulcasa766]] ([[User talk:Gulcasa766\|talk]]) 21 September 2013		I think the period should be changed to a comma to help clarify this problem. Yurie was slower as Tooru was already able to make up a sports drink for her to help relieve her fatigue. Also to explain, Tooru narrates this section so when he says 'my goal' it basically means 'my time', so the sentence can be thought of as "Slower then my time by 21 minutes, Yurie finished running 10 rounds or the 10 kilometers. It's another way to write the sentence but I don't see a need to change goal to time. [[User:Gulcasa766\|Gulcasa766]] ([[User talk:Gulcasa766\|talk]]) 21 September 2013

Gulcasa766 at 18:49, 21 September 2013

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	Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01\|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01\|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01\|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01\|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

			I think the period should be changed to a comma to help clarify this problem. Yurie was slower as Tooru was already able to make up a sports drink for her to help relieve her fatigue. [[User:Gulcasa766\|Gulcasa766]] ([[User talk:Gulcasa766\|talk]]) 21 September 2013

Asmodeus01 at 20:24, 20 September 2013

2013-09-20T20:24:44Z

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	Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

	Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.		Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01\|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01\|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

Asmodeus01 at 20:15, 20 September 2013

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	Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

	Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster by Yurie by 21 minutes.		Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.

Asmodeus01 at 20:13, 20 September 2013

2013-09-20T20:13:05Z

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	Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)

	Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster by Yurie by 21 minutes.		Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster by Yurie by 21 minutes.

Asmodeus01 at 20:12, 20 September 2013

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	Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)		Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana\|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana\|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)
			Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster by Yurie by 21 minutes.

Bilagaana: Created page with "Slower than my goal by 21 minutes. Yurie finished running ten rounds. Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --~~~~"

2013-09-20T20:07:41Z

Created page with "Slower than my goal by 21 minutes. Yurie finished running ten rounds. Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --~~~~"

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Slower than my goal by 21 minutes. Yurie finished running ten rounds.

Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)