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Drowzycow at 14:55, 11 November 2012
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RikiNutcase at 13:15, 11 November 2012
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Chancs at 11:14, 11 November 2012
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RikiNutcase at 08:56, 11 November 2012
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RikiNutcase
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Monsterbandage at 07:14, 11 November 2012
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Monsterbandage
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Monsterbandage at 07:10, 11 November 2012
2012-11-11T07:10:38Z
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Monsterbandage
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Monsterbandage
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RikiNutcase at 03:17, 8 November 2012
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>I would say not sleeping over an issue could be described as "torment" and a sign of suffering but anyways running with '''She seemed to be troubled as she continued her words.''' which probabily still isn't quite right.--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 21:14, 7 November 2012 (CST)</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>I would say not sleeping over an issue could be described as "torment" and a sign of suffering but anyways running with '''She seemed to be troubled as she continued her words.''' which probabily still isn't quite right.--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 21:14, 7 November 2012 (CST)</div></td></tr>
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RikiNutcase
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<tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">I would say not sleeping over an issue could be described as "torment" and a sign of suffering but anyways running with '''She seemed to be troubled as she continued her words.''' which probabily still isn't quite right.--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 21:14, 7 November 2012 (CST)</ins></div></td></tr>
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Drowzycow