http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3ALeviathan%3AVolume_3_Chapter_1Talk:Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 1 - Revision history2026-05-07T09:42:50ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.43.1http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Leviathan:Volume_3_Chapter_1&diff=470131&oldid=prevCthaeh: potential edits2015-11-04T23:37:12Z<p>potential edits</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>A few lines that I'm not confident enough I would change correctly. --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 23:37, 4 November 2015 (UTC)<br />
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*This was the heartmetal of an elite dragon's—no, a great dragon king's.<br />
::-Felt like it should be "of an elite dragon—no, of a great dragon king." But I can think of a few instances where I might use the possesive like that, even though it felt off here (I think I'm not used to seeing it applied with the possesor being a generalized noun), so I was hesitant to change it.<br />
*I can't believe I saw stuff along the likes of cosmetic surgery and injecting Botox...<br />
::-The phrase "along the likes of" felt like it should be "along the lines of," however I see the current phrasing is actually used (a few million google hits), so maybe it's me that just hasn't been exposed to it.<br />
*Compared to curry, his specialty is 'imitation Japanese food.'<br />
::- Felt like this should be "Rather than curry, his specialty is..."</div>Cthaeh