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<p>potential edits</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>A few lines that I&#039;m not confident enough I would change correctly. --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 23:37, 4 November 2015 (UTC)<br /> <br /> *Furthermore, neither Hazumi nor Minadzuki were present at Haneda&#039;s offshore.<br /> ::-I don&#039;t think &quot;offshore&quot; has an official definition as a noun, as it is used here, so I would have changed to &quot;present offshore of Haneda&quot; if there weren&#039;t other possible revisions with different meanings that could fit.<br /> *And on the right shoulder—was a green head of a dragon&#039;s.<br /> ::-same comment regarding possesive use as previous chapter</div>

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