http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3AOda_Nobuna_no_Yabou%3AVolume1_Chapter1 2026-05-02T01:00:46Z Revision history for this page on the wiki MediaWiki 1.43.1 http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Oda_Nobuna_no_Yabou:Volume1_Chapter1&diff=297884&oldid=prev 2013-10-29T04:36:03Z

<p>A few questions about this translation...</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>A few things that I didn&#039;t feel comfortable trying to edit on my own:<br /> - Around line 791-ish, Nobuna uses the word &quot;pet,&quot; but later (line 819-ish) she expresses confusion at Yoshiharu&#039;s use of the same word. My guess is that the nuance between &quot;petto&quot; (in katakana) and whatever the Japanese word for pet is (haven&#039;t learned that one yet, :D) was lost in translation. Perhaps add a tl note? Otherwise, it definitely doesn&#039;t read correctly as is.<br /> - At line 895-ish, it doesn&#039;t seem like Yoshiharu is the one who actually &quot;barked.&quot; Isn&#039;t he saying that in his head? Or is he actually saying this to Nobuna?<br /> - A small consistency thing that kind of bugs me is that ellipses and dashes tend to vary in style and length quite a bit (formatted ellipses combined with periods, 3-5 length dashes, etc.). Are these differences intentional? If not, I think it&#039;d be a good idea to pick a style for each and use it throughout the whole series.<br /> <br /> I think that&#039;s pretty much it, thanks! <br /> <br /> Also, it&#039;d probably be good to check some of the more involved edits I made (as noted in my edit summary). These are spots that didn&#039;t make much sense when read in English (due to issues with syntax, structure, or phrasing), so I made greater changes. I&#039;m fairly confident I didn&#039;t change the meaning, but they could be stylistically different than what the translators and editors might want.<br /> <br /> [[User:Mr Retro|Mr Retro]] ([[User talk:Mr Retro|talk]]) 23:36, 28 October 2013 (CDT)</div>

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