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<p></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 05:11, 29 November 2014</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l4">Line 4:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 4:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><br></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 17:36, 22 February 2013 (CST)</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>--[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 17:36, 22 February 2013 (CST)</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">*(v5c6) Her destructive «Death Gaze» – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the flying craft's militarized spirits.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">::-From context I would have guessed this line to be something closer to "Against the destructive Death Gaze – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the militarized spirit attacking the flying craft.")  Not that my guess is necessarily accurate, but the current feels like a mistranslation (and editing this discussion page, I see Drowzycow agreed something is off). --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">*(v5c6) Kamito was powerful, so powerful that he left his same-age counterparts at the Institutional school in the dust.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">::-The majority of this translator's use of Institutional School have referred to the Instructional School, but there was one that didn't seem to be that.  This use could go one of two ways as I see it (Instructional School, or possibly referring to the academy) so I wasn't sure what to do. --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 23:11, 28 November 2014 (CST)</ins></div></td></tr> </table>

Cthaeh http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Seirei_Tsukai_no_Blade_Dance:Volume5_Chapter6&diff=228086&oldid=prev 2013-02-22T23:36:47Z

<p>A line needs a TLC/changing</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div><br /> Her destructive &lt;Death Gaze&gt; – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the flying craft&#039;s military spirits.<br /> : This line needs changing (Her destructive &lt;Death Gaze&gt; makes not much sense where it appears, &lt;Death Gaze&gt; doesn&#039;t belong to Claire or Leonora, I suggest &#039;&#039;&#039;The destruction of &lt;Death Gaze&gt; by her Nidhogg..&#039;&#039;&#039;<br /> <br /> --[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 17:36, 22 February 2013 (CST)</div>

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