Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

JonJon at 02:42, 4 January 2007

2007-01-04T02:42:45Z

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	=== "Then, see you!" ===		=== "Then, see you!" ===

	I don't have a copy of the original text in front of me, but I'm assuming that Asahina says something to the effect of ~~「じゃ、また！」or「じゃね！」which~~ although would translate more directly into a "Then, ... (see you; later; again; etc.) it seems that because the meaning is the same as a "See you later" that is more commonly used in English than "Then, see you!" it should be changed to something more appropriate.		I don't have a copy of the original text in front of me, but I'm assuming that Asahina says something to the effect of 「じゃあ、また！」or「じゃあね！」which although would translate more directly into a "Then, ... (see you; later; again; etc.) it seems that because the meaning is the same as a "See you later" that is more commonly used in English than "Then, see you!" it should be changed to something more appropriate.

	--[[User:JonJon\|JonJon]] 17:58, 3 January 2007 (PST)		--[[User:JonJon\|JonJon]] 17:58, 3 January 2007 (PST)

JonJon: /* References & Translator's Notes */

2007-01-04T01:58:41Z

References & Translator's Notes

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	--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)		--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)

			=== "Then, see you!" ===

			I don't have a copy of the original text in front of me, but I'm assuming that Asahina says something to the effect of 「じゃ、また！」or「じゃね！」which although would translate more directly into a "Then, ... (see you; later; again; etc.) it seems that because the meaning is the same as a "See you later" that is more commonly used in English than "Then, see you!" it should be changed to something more appropriate.

			--[[User:JonJon\|JonJon]] 17:58, 3 January 2007 (PST)

Da~Mike at 19:46, 16 August 2006

2006-08-16T19:46:00Z

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	The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=~~239~~ Miscellaneous translation notes]'''		The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=36 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''

Da~Mike at 21:06, 8 August 2006

2006-08-08T21:06:23Z

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	The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion~~, please click here to view it~~: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''		The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. Please click on the following link to view the original discussion: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''

Da~Mike at 19:21, 8 August 2006

2006-08-08T19:21:05Z

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	--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]		--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]


	=== "I can't take it anymore!" ===		=== "I can't take it anymore!" ===
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	--[[User:Da~Mike\|Da~Mike]] 21:58, 9 May 2006 (GMT)		--[[User:Da~Mike\|Da~Mike]] 21:58, 9 May 2006 (GMT)


	=== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ===		=== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ===

Da~Mike at 19:19, 8 August 2006

2006-08-08T19:19:56Z

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	The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion, please click here to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''		The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion, please click here to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''

Da~Mike: minor restructuring

2006-08-08T19:17:32Z

minor restructuring

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	== References & Translator's Notes ==		== References & Translator's Notes ==

	The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion ~~page~~, please click here to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''		The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion, please click here to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''


	=== "No comment" vs. "Classified Information" ===		=== "No comment" vs. "Classified Information" ===

	Kinny Riddle's Lines:<br>		Kinny Riddle's Lines:<br>
	"Just how old are you really?"<br>		"Just how old are you really?"<br>
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	=== "I can't take it anymore!" ===		=== "I can't take it anymore!" ===

	The actual line is 「やれやれ」, which is more like the "Oh boy" sort of response. If there was anything like this before, again, it needs to be fixed.		The actual line is 「やれやれ」, which is more like the "Oh boy" sort of response. If there was anything like this before, again, it needs to be fixed.

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	=== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ===		=== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ===

	The actual line is 「すまん、今起きたとこなんだ」, which is "Sorry, I just woke up just now!"		The actual line is 「すまん、今起きたとこなんだ」, which is "Sorry, I just woke up just now!"

	--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)		--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)

Da~Mike: ch 4 discussion overhaul

2006-08-07T20:39:39Z

ch 4 discussion overhaul

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	~~The chapters are getting shorter, aren~~'~~t they.~~		== References & Translator's Notes ==

	--[~~[User~~:~~Thelastguardian\|Thelastguardian]~~] ~~01:41, 22 April 2006 (PDT)~~		The following notes have been rearranged into this new format. To view the original discussion page, please click here to view it: '''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=239 Miscellaneous translation notes]'''

	== "No comment" vs. "Classified Information" ~~(velocity7)~~ ==
			=== "No comment" vs. "Classified Information" ===
	Kinny Riddle's Lines:<br>		Kinny Riddle's Lines:<br>
	"Just how old are you really?"<br>		"Just how old are you really?"<br>
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	For that matter, anytime Mikuru says "No comment", it's actually "classified information". I kind of picked up that this was not exactly the right line, after seeing episode 5 of the anime, so I did an OCR on the raw scans I have.<br>		For that matter, anytime Mikuru says "No comment", it's actually "classified information". I kind of picked up that this was not exactly the right line, after seeing episode 5 of the anime, so I did an OCR on the raw scans I have.<br>

	== "I can't take it anymore!" ~~(velocity7)~~ ==		--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]


			=== "I can't take it anymore!" ===
	The actual line is 「やれやれ」, which is more like the "Oh boy" sort of response. If there was anything like this before, again, it needs to be fixed.		The actual line is 「やれやれ」, which is more like the "Oh boy" sort of response. If there was anything like this before, again, it needs to be fixed.

			--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]


	~~-'''Edit'''~~
	I would interpret 「やれやれ」 to be one of the following:		I would interpret 「やれやれ」 to be one of the following:
	* "Oh great..."		* "Oh great..."
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	--[[User:Da~Mike\|Da~Mike]] 21:58, 9 May 2006 (GMT)		--[[User:Da~Mike\|Da~Mike]] 21:58, 9 May 2006 (GMT)

	== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ~~(velocity7)~~ ==
			=== "Sorry, I'm on my way!" ===
	The actual line is 「すまん、今起きたとこなんだ」, which is "Sorry, I just woke up just now!"		The actual line is 「すまん、今起きたとこなんだ」, which is "Sorry, I just woke up just now!"

	~~== Miscellaneous (velocity7) ==~~
	~~There were some undocumented changes I also made, which are mostly stylistic and from what I could tell fit the novel text ordering a lot. The Japanese novel, that is.~~

	--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)		--[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]] 17:49, 5 May 2006 (EDT)

	~~== English Grammar Changes ==~~

	~~'''In the end, me and Nagato were grouped together, while the other three were in another group.'''~~

	~~-this should be "Nagato and I" because the pronoun is before the verb, indicating it should be in the nominative case.~~

74.237.113.192: English Grammar Changes

2006-06-12T17:28:41Z

English Grammar Changes

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			== English Grammar Changes ==

			'''In the end, me and Nagato were grouped together, while the other three were in another group.'''

			-this should be "Nagato and I" because the pronoun is before the verb, indicating it should be in the nominative case.

Da~Mike: /* "I can't take it anymore!" (velocity7) */ definition error

2006-05-09T21:03:32Z

"I can't take it anymore!" (velocity7): definition error

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	* "Oh bugger..." (British colloquial)		* "Oh bugger..." (British colloquial)

	Basically, I think 「やれやれ」tends to be used ~~as a form of expressing exasperation,~~ like a verbal sigh.		Basically, I think 「やれやれ」tends to be used like a verbal sigh.

	"Oh boy...", like you suggested above, fits in fine as well.		"Oh boy...", like you suggested above, fits in fine as well.