Talk:Tokyo Ravens:Volume10 Chapter1 - Revision history

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2014-11-19T08:46:38Z

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	During the first half of the chapter, the word disciple is used without quotes, but later on, and even in the following chapters, it is use with quotes as 'disciples'. Is there a reason or just coincidence? [[User:Nick Halden\|Nick Halden]] ([[User talk:Nick Halden\|talk]]) 05:04, 28 June 2014 (CDT)		During the first half of the chapter, the word disciple is used without quotes, but later on, and even in the following chapters, it is use with quotes as 'disciples'. Is there a reason or just coincidence? [[User:Nick Halden\|Nick Halden]] ([[User talk:Nick Halden\|talk]]) 05:04, 28 June 2014 (CDT)

			:"for a moment, closing his eyes"

			Is that a figure of speech or should it be eye, since one of his eyes isnt working? --[[User:Darklor\|Darklor]] ([[User talk:Darklor\|talk]]) 02:46, 19 November 2014 (CST)

Nick Halden at 10:04, 28 June 2014

2014-06-28T10:04:01Z

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	So the Onmyou Agency's scope of management couldn't reach the 'depths' of the magic community, and just formed various different networks on the so-called 'surface'. Seishuku Temple that was known as the dark temple was one of the representative hubs of this network.		So the Onmyou Agency's scope of management couldn't reach the 'depths' of the magic community, and just formed various different networks on the so-called 'surface'. Seishuku Temple that was known as the dark temple was one of the representative hubs of this network.
	''Seishuku temple is part of the exterior network with Onmyou Agency?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 18:56, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		''Seishuku temple is part of the exterior network with Onmyou Agency?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 18:56, 21 June 2014 (CDT)


			During the first half of the chapter, the word disciple is used without quotes, but later on, and even in the following chapters, it is use with quotes as 'disciples'. Is there a reason or just coincidence? [[User:Nick Halden\|Nick Halden]] ([[User talk:Nick Halden\|talk]]) 05:04, 28 June 2014 (CDT)

Scribblicious at 23:56, 21 June 2014

2014-06-21T23:56:25Z

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	:Accidental redundancy. The Chinese text only mentions the fallen leaves; there's no second set. --[[User:Hiyono\|Hiyono]] ([[User talk:Hiyono\|talk]]) 14:16, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		:Accidental redundancy. The Chinese text only mentions the fallen leaves; there's no second set. --[[User:Hiyono\|Hiyono]] ([[User talk:Hiyono\|talk]]) 14:16, 21 June 2014 (CDT)
	::Yeah. I rewrote that sentence a couple times and probably forgot to delete a part. [[User:Lygophile\|Lygophile]] ([[User talk:Lygophile\|talk]]) 18:09, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		::Yeah. I rewrote that sentence a couple times and probably forgot to delete a part. [[User:Lygophile\|Lygophile]] ([[User talk:Lygophile\|talk]]) 18:09, 21 June 2014 (CDT)

			So the Onmyou Agency's scope of management couldn't reach the 'depths' of the magic community, and just formed various different networks on the so-called 'surface'. Seishuku Temple that was known as the dark temple was one of the representative hubs of this network.
			''Seishuku temple is part of the exterior network with Onmyou Agency?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 18:56, 21 June 2014 (CDT)

Lygophile at 23:09, 21 June 2014

2014-06-21T23:09:20Z

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	''Is the second set of leaves fresh leaves?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 13:57, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		''Is the second set of leaves fresh leaves?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 13:57, 21 June 2014 (CDT)
	:Accidental redundancy. The Chinese text only mentions the fallen leaves; there's no second set. --[[User:Hiyono\|Hiyono]] ([[User talk:Hiyono\|talk]]) 14:16, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		:Accidental redundancy. The Chinese text only mentions the fallen leaves; there's no second set. --[[User:Hiyono\|Hiyono]] ([[User talk:Hiyono\|talk]]) 14:16, 21 June 2014 (CDT)
			::Yeah. I rewrote that sentence a couple times and probably forgot to delete a part. [[User:Lygophile\|Lygophile]] ([[User talk:Lygophile\|talk]]) 18:09, 21 June 2014 (CDT)

Hiyono at 19:16, 21 June 2014

2014-06-21T19:16:17Z

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	Akino first dug a shallow hole in the ground. After putting the sweet potatoes in, she put fallen leaves on top of it, then put a bunch of leaves on top of it, then lit them and covered them with ash.		Akino first dug a shallow hole in the ground. After putting the sweet potatoes in, she put fallen leaves on top of it, then put a bunch of leaves on top of it, then lit them and covered them with ash.
	''Is the second set of leaves fresh leaves?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 13:57, 21 June 2014 (CDT)		''Is the second set of leaves fresh leaves?'' [[User:Scribblicious\|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious\|talk]]) 13:57, 21 June 2014 (CDT)
			:Accidental redundancy. The Chinese text only mentions the fallen leaves; there's no second set. --[[User:Hiyono\|Hiyono]] ([[User talk:Hiyono\|talk]]) 14:16, 21 June 2014 (CDT)

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Akino first dug a shallow hole in the ground. After putting the sweet potatoes in, she put fallen leaves on top of it, then put a bunch of leaves on top of it, then lit them and covered them with ash.
''Is the second set of leaves fresh leaves?'' [[User:Scribblicious|Scribblicious]] ([[User talk:Scribblicious|talk]]) 13:57, 21 June 2014 (CDT)