Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume2 April 30 - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron at 16:40, 30 March 2012

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	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
			:I don't know if it's that important of an event to justify capitalization. Don't have anything to say against Declaration of War though. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 11:40, 30 March 2012 (CDT)

	== Resolute ==		== Resolute ==

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	I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").		I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
			:Sounds good to me, feel free to make such changes. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 11:40, 30 March 2012 (CDT)
	== Mail ==		== Mail ==

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	Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.		Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
			:Yeah, it's indeed an email / text message. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 11:40, 30 March 2012 (CDT)

Mane at 02:53, 27 March 2012

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	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
	== Resolute ==		== Resolute ==

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	I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").		I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
	== Mail ==		== Mail ==

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	Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.		Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.
	--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)		--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:53, 26 March 2012 (CDT)

Mane at 02:48, 27 March 2012

2012-03-27T02:48:45Z

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	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).
			--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
	== Resolute ==		== Resolute ==

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	I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").		I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").
			--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)
	== Mail ==		== Mail ==

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	Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.		Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.
			--[[User:Mane\|Mane]] 21:48, 26 March 2012 (CDT)

Mane: /* Mail */ new section

2012-03-27T02:47:11Z

Mail: new section

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	I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").		I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").

			== Mail ==

			<i>"I received a mail late at night yesterday."</i>

			Does she mean email or text message. Since this is a phone, I am inclined to think text message. Mail is insufficient, since that word, in plain English, implies something one physically receives from the postal service.

Mane at 02:13, 27 March 2012

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	== War Proclamation ==		== War Proclamation ==

	«War Proclamation»		<i>«War Proclamation»</i>

	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).
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	== Resolute ==		== Resolute ==

	<u>I have yet to get used to her resolute personality and stunning looks</u>.		<i>I have yet to get used to her resolute personality and stunning looks</i>.

	I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").		I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").

Mane: /* Resolute */ new section

2012-03-27T02:12:40Z

Resolute: new section

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	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).

			== Resolute ==

			<u>I have yet to get used to her resolute personality and stunning looks</u>.

			I think the synonyms unyielding or unwavering might be better adjectives than resolute (or firm, which was used in "April 7- Announcement").

Mane at 02:04, 27 March 2012

2012-03-27T02:04:39Z

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	«War Proclamation»		«War Proclamation»

	Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).		Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 8, cl. 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).

Mane: /* War Proclamation */ new section

2012-03-27T02:03:01Z

War Proclamation: new section

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	"The date of the mail is March 30. In other words, 02:23 this morning." at april 30??? I'm confused.		"The date of the mail is March 30. In other words, 02:23 this morning." at april 30??? I'm confused.
	:That happens when you try to translate when you haven't slept enough recently. Thanks [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 09:06, 27 February 2010 (UTC)		:That happens when you try to translate when you haven't slept enough recently. Thanks [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 09:06, 27 February 2010 (UTC)

			== War Proclamation ==

			«War Proclamation»

			Since this is an event they specifically refer to, I capitalized the word. But I was wondering if it should not be «Declaration of War» instead. War is declared rather than proclaimed in the United States. U.S. C<small>ONST</small>. art. I, § 11 ("The Congress shall have Power . . . To <i>declare</i> War . . ." (emphasis added)).

EusthEnoptEron: /* "Timestamps"? */

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"Timestamps"?

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	"The date of the mail is March 30. In other words, 02:23 this morning." at april 30??? I'm confused.		"The date of the mail is March 30. In other words, 02:23 this morning." at april 30??? I'm confused.
			:That happens when you try to translate when you haven't slept enough recently. Thanks [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 09:06, 27 February 2010 (UTC)

125.161.217.167 at 03:32, 27 February 2010

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	:You're right. It doesn't influence the story, but it's written in the same pattern as at the previous day. Thanks :D [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 00:03, 27 February 2010 (UTC)		:You're right. It doesn't influence the story, but it's written in the same pattern as at the previous day. Thanks :D [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 00:03, 27 February 2010 (UTC)

			"The date of the mail is March 30. In other words, 02:23 this morning." at april 30??? I'm confused.