Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3 - Revision history

Vaelis at 20:59, 23 April 2012

2012-04-23T20:59:25Z

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	=== Translator's Notes ===		=== Translator's Notes ===
	;<span id=vestri>[[Zero_no_Tsukaima:~~Volume1_Chapter3~~#back_to_vestri\|↑]]</span> Vestri		;<span id=vestri>[[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Story1_Chapter3#back_to_vestri\|↑]]</span> Vestri
	:[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vestri Vestri] is a dwarf in Norse mythology representing West.		:[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vestri Vestri] is a dwarf in Norse mythology representing West.

Vaelis: moved Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter3 to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3

2012-04-21T12:01:37Z

moved Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter3 to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter3

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Vaelis: adding the translator's note

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			=== Translator's Notes ===
			;<span id=vestri>[[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume1_Chapter3#back_to_vestri\|↑]]</span> Vestri
			:[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vestri Vestri] is a dwarf in Norse mythology representing West.

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Onizuka-gto: zeroNT Talk:Komgvol01editchpter03 moved to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter3: Public release

2006-12-25T03:33:42Z

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Da~Mike: /* Pg 70 */

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	(4) 'And it should be so too, because stuffed inside this library is the history of everything ever since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.' -> 'And it should be, because packed inside this library is the history of everything since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.'		(4) 'And it should be so too, because stuffed inside this library is the history of everything ever since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.' -> 'And it should be, because packed inside this library is the history of everything since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.'
	[This sentence ~~was~~ a little ~~convoluted~~. I believe my changes alleviated it a little but I think it still needs re-working.]		[This sentence seemed a little erroneous to me. I believe my changes alleviated it a little but I think it still needs re-working.]

Da~Mike: changelog

2006-09-06T20:28:52Z

changelog

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(1) 'His nickname is "Colbert of Flame Snake". He is a mage who specializes in magics from the "Fire" system.' -> 'His nickname is "Colbert the Flame Snake". He is a mage who specializes in the elemental magic of "Fire".'
[I changed his 'rune name" accordingly based on how "Zero no Louise" becomes "Louise the Zero". I also re-worded the second sentence, though it may be less accurate now.]

(2) 'Colbert has been concerned about the commoner young man who was called out by Louise during the "Spring Familiar Summoning" a few days ago.' -> 'Colbert has been concerned about the young male commoner who was summoned by Louise during the...'
[I didn't like the sound of"commoner young man" so I replaced it with something that sounds a little more fluid.]

(3) 'So, he has closed himself off inside the library ever since last night, looking through books.' -> '..., poring through books.'
["Looking through books" seemed a bit too casual compared to "poring through books"]

(4) 'And it should be so too, because stuffed inside this library is the history of everything ever since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.' -> 'And it should be, because packed inside this library is the history of everything since Founder Brimir first built a new world in Halkeginia.'
[This sentence was a little convoluted. I believe my changes alleviated it a little but I think it still needs re-working.]

(5) [The inconsistency with tenses is somewhat frustrating to me... I'll let the rest of you sort this problem out.]

--[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 21:28, 6 September 2006 (GMT)