This title is too long!:Volume1 Chapter1 - Revision history

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Part 3

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	“Ahh, I guess...”		“Ahh, I guess...”

	With that, my real name will be revealed to everyone who only knows of my pen name. It's not a particularly damaging thing to me, but it's really improper for Nitadori. She probably doesn't intend to say that we're classmates, I guess.”		With that, my real name will be revealed to everyone who only knows of my pen name. It's not a particularly damaging thing to me, but it's really improper for Nitadori. She probably doesn't intend to say that we're classmates, I guess.

	“It's fine. I'll pay attention to the situation. I promise that I won't call you sensei at school, and I definitely won't reveal your real identity. I swear.”		“It's fine. I'll pay attention to the situation. I promise that I won't call you sensei at school, and I definitely won't reveal your real identity. I swear.”

Rxls at 05:56, 16 June 2017

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	==~~‎Volume 1 Chapter~~ 1 - April 10, I met her==		==‎Chapter 1 - April 10, I met her==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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2016-12-21T13:51:39Z

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	She was being very attentive no matter whether she was at the chair furthest from the microphone, or during the short scenes she had, never relaxing a little as she gave a serious look.		She was being very attentive no matter whether she was at the chair furthest from the microphone, or during the short scenes she had, never relaxing a little as she gave a serious look.

	Her expression was as sharp as a blade, like a 'real Japanese sword'		Her expression was as sharp as a blade, like a 'real Japanese sword'.

	Luckily, I didn't have a chance to talk to her. I didn't know how I was supposed to converse with her during that situation.		Luckily, I didn't have a chance to talk to her. I didn't know how I was supposed to converse with her during that situation.

Sir Trollface: /* Part 3 */ Added missing period

2016-12-21T13:44:19Z

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	Right, it's almost impossible to think of any other possibilities.		Right, it's almost impossible to think of any other possibilities.

	I guess it was too long spending two minutes thinking about this		I guess it was too long spending two minutes thinking about this.

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2016-12-21T13:35:26Z

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	I'm a professional author.		I'm a professional author.

	I wrote a novel titled 'Vice Versa'--		I wrote a novel titled 'Vice Versa'—

	Currently, it's lined in the Pocket Book (Bunko) section of the bookstore.		Currently, it's lined in the Pocket Book (Bunko) section of the bookstore.
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	In the end, there is still not a single person able to give a clear definition for light novels.		In the end, there is still not a single person able to give a clear definition for light novels.

	I feel that most of us, including ~~me--~~		I feel that most of us, including me—

	Are already calling it 'light novels', or a portmanteau 'ranobe', a term that is defined incompletely, and will continue on like this.		Are already calling it 'light novels', or a portmanteau 'ranobe', a term that is defined incompletely, and will continue on like this.

Sir Trollface: /* Part 2 */ Added a missing period

2016-12-21T13:15:49Z

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	From the town where I live in, this train ride allows me to reach the metropolis in about 3 hours. I was seated at the last row of the free seating carriage car, at the left side, leaning by the window.		From the town where I live in, this train ride allows me to reach the metropolis in about 3 hours. I was seated at the last row of the free seating carriage car, at the left side, leaning by the window.

	It's the evening, and the train carriage is still empty after having left the station, so there shouldn't be a need for anyone to sit beside me. Even if the reason of wanting to sit at the back row is 'my luggage's too big for the rack', or 'I want to adjust my reclining chair', there is still the right side of the aisle that's empty		It's the evening, and the train carriage is still empty after having left the station, so there shouldn't be a need for anyone to sit beside me. Even if the reason of wanting to sit at the back row is 'my luggage's too big for the rack', or 'I want to adjust my reclining chair', there is still the right side of the aisle that's empty.

	That's why I was surprised to hear the meaning of those words, despite not knowing who it was. I lift my head up from the printouts of the drafts, and when I found it to be Nitadori, who's seated behind me every day, I was further taken aback.		That's why I was surprised to hear the meaning of those words, despite not knowing who it was. I lift my head up from the printouts of the drafts, and when I found it to be Nitadori, who's seated behind me every day, I was further taken aback.

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2016-11-10T18:24:51Z

Part 2

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	“Ah, no...it's nothing, Miss Nitadori.”		“Ah, no...it's nothing, Miss Nitadori.”

	“Adding a 'Miss'? ~~Eve~~ though you're older?”		“Adding a 'Miss'? Even though you're older?”

	“...”		“...”

Teh Ping at 08:59, 2 November 2016

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	And once I said this, Nitadori nodded,		And once I said this, Nitadori nodded,

	“Right right! I think this is the case too! It's hard at 10A, right? If the Shinkansen's (bullet train) available, we could have made it in time if we leave early.”		“Right right! I think this is the case too! It's hard at 10A, right? If the Shinkansen's (bullet train) still available, we could have made it in time if we leave early.”

	The 10A Nitadori spoke of is the simplified term of the after record that begins at 10am (though I only knew of this recently).		The 10A Nitadori spoke of is the simplified term of the after record that begins at 10am (though I only knew of this recently).

Teh Ping: /* ‎Volume 1 Chapter 1 - April 10, I met her */

2016-11-02T08:54:51Z

‎Volume 1 Chapter 1 - April 10, I met her

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	This classmate of mine called Nitadori adjusted her sights moderately as she continued to chatter about her pet dog Gonsuke. It is clear that everyone in class is paying attention to the cute episodes.		This classmate of mine called Nitadori adjusted her sights moderately as she continued to chatter about her pet dog Gonsuke. It is clear that everyone in class is paying attention to the cute episodes.

	If it it were me, I probably won't end up doing such stupid miscues. I wondered as I heard her words. We're seated rather close, so Nitadori wasn't looking at me. If she's looking at me, I probably will be looking away.		If it were me, I probably won't end up doing such stupid miscues. I wondered as I heard her words. We're seated rather close, so Nitadori wasn't looking at me. If she's looking at me, I probably will be looking away.

	Nitadori ended her proud introduction of her dog at the opportune time, and then said that anyone who wished to see the photos could check out her smartphone. This really is a wonderful appeal.		Nitadori ended her proud introduction of her dog at the opportune time, and then said that anyone who wished to see the photos could check out her smartphone. This really is a wonderful appeal.
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	“...”		“...”

	I ~~remain~~ silent as I ~~stare~~ blankly at this taller girl standing on the aisle.		I remained silent as I stared blankly at this taller girl standing on the aisle.

	Naturally, Nitadori's not dressed in a uniform, and I'm not really sure of the details, but I could clearly see that it's a posh looking one-piece dress.		Naturally, Nitadori's not dressed in a uniform, and I'm not really sure of the details, but I could clearly see that it's a posh looking one-piece dress.
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	“No...erm, is 'Nitadori' fine?”		“No...erm, is 'Nitadori' fine?”

	And then, I pretended to remain as calm as possible while conversing with her ~~normal~~. I wondered how many years it had been since I talked to a girl of a similar age, but having realized that I may need a long time to derive that answer, I gave up.		And then, I pretended to remain as calm as possible while conversing with her normally. I wondered how many years it had been since I talked to a girl of a similar age, but having realized that I may need a long time to derive that answer, I gave up.

	“Of course. Can I sit beside you then?”		“Of course. Can I sit beside you then?”

	At that time, I had my backpack on the seat beside me. Inside it were my favorite laptop, books, change of clothes.		At that time, I had my backpack on the seat beside me. Inside it were my favorite laptop, books and a change of clothes.

	My backpack was wide open inside, so while reaching out to zip it with one arm, I blurted my honest opinion,		My backpack was wide open inside, so while reaching out to zip it with one arm, I blurted my honest opinion,
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	I too was worried if my classmates would shun me if I tried to approach them, and never did so in the end. The gap of a year was too large for me, who's already ineffectual at communicating.		I too was worried if my classmates would shun me if I tried to approach them, and never did so in the end. The gap of a year was too large for me, who's already ineffectual at communicating.

	I felt It is merciless of me to be saying 'there are still other seats' to a person wanting to sit beside me. While pondering that it was expected of her to be angry, I awaited her answer.		I felt it is merciless of me to be saying 'there are still other seats' to a person wanting to sit beside me. While pondering that it was expected of her to be angry, I awaited her answer.

	“I want to talk with you.”		“I want to talk with you.”
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	Nitadori tied her long hair to the back of her neck in a polite manner, and let it drape from her right shoulder to her chest, quickly sitting down beside me.		Nitadori tied her long hair to the back of her neck in a polite manner, and let it drape from her right shoulder to her chest, quickly sitting down beside me.

	She turned to the left, and with our shoulders practically touching each other, she ~~stare~~ at me right in the eyes, and answered my question with a hushed voice,		She turned to the left, and with our shoulders practically touching each other, she stared at me right in the eyes, and answered my question with a hushed voice,

	“I want to talk about work.”		“I want to talk about work.”
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	“...”		“...”

	“I seem to be mistaken about something. Sorry.		“I seem to be mistaken about something. Sorry."

	I stare at Nitadori, who looked to be a little disappointed.		I stare at Nitadori, who looked to be a little disappointed.
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	“Wh-why...ho-ho-how...?”		“Wh-why...ho-ho-how...?”

	I ~~stare~~ right into Nitadori's eyes as I barely eke out these words, and the rest ended up as gibberish.		I stared right into Nitadori's eyes as I barely eke out these words, and the rest ended up as gibberish.

	I actually wanted to say,		I actually wanted to say,
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	“I see...”		“I see...”

	After staring at the back for two minutes, I let out these words,		After staring at the back of the seat in front of me for two minutes, I let out these words,

	“So that's what it means by 'our work'."		“So that's what it means by 'our work'."
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	I slowly turn my face to Nitadori.		I slowly turn my face to Nitadori.

	And so, I ~~stare~~ at Nitadori, the bespectacled girl—		And so, I stared at Nitadori, the bespectacled girl—

	Giving me a victorious smile.		Giving me a victorious smile.
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	The company 'ASCII Media Works' (Used to be called 'Media Works') established the company 'Dengeki Bunko' in 1993. That was before I was born.		The company 'ASCII Media Works' (Used to be called 'Media Works') established the company 'Dengeki Bunko' in 1993. That was before I was born.

	Strictly speaking, the company 'ASCII Media Works' no longer exists,, for it is bought and absorbed into the mega corporation Kadokawa Group. The name sticks however because the name 'Brand Company' is too vague to define a purpose, so with this nostalgic feeling, I continue to use the term 'ASCII Media Works'.		Strictly speaking, the company 'ASCII Media Works' no longer exists, for it is bought and absorbed into the mega corporation Kadokawa Group. The name sticks however because the name 'Brand Company' is too vague to define a purpose, so with this nostalgic feeling, I continue to use the term 'ASCII Media Works'.

	In over 20 years of history, Dengeki Bunko has published big-selling works from my colleagues.		In over 20 years of history, Dengeki Bunko has published big-selling works from my colleagues.
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	The annual Dengeki Novel Prize deadline was April 10th (In other words, this day).		The annual Dengeki Novel Prize deadline was April 10th (In other words, this day).

	It was the previous day 3 years ago, April 9th, right after the new school semester started		It was the previous day 3 years ago, April 9th, right after the new school semester started.

	I submitted the long novel I wrote to the post office on the day right before the deadline.		I submitted the long novel I wrote to the post office on the day right before the deadline.
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	And once I said this, Nitadori nodded,		And once I said this, Nitadori nodded,

	“Right right! I think this is the case too! It's hard at 10A, right? If the Shinkansen's ( bullet train ) ~~around~~, we could have made it in time if we leave early.”		“Right right! I think this is the case too! It's hard at 10A, right? If the Shinkansen's (bullet train) available, we could have made it in time if we leave early.”

	The 10A Nitadori spoke of is the simplified term of the after record that begins at 10am (though I only knew of this recently).		The 10A Nitadori spoke of is the simplified term of the after record that begins at 10am (though I only knew of this recently).

	This is the earliest time slot possible, but many of the voice actors are nocturnal ~~folk~~, so this seems to be tough for them, and really unmotivating as a result.		This is the earliest time slot possible, but many of the voice actors are nocturnal folks, so this seems to be tough for them, and really unmotivating as a result.

	“It's true. But I—”		“It's true. But I—”
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	The scenery back then was really great.		The scenery back then was really great.

	Looking down at the white dome roof, I could see the theme park beside it and the streets that continued on. I could see Mount Tsukuba far away, and ~~the~~ the lighting decorations which would only appear at that time were really pretty.		Looking down at the white dome roof, I could see the theme park beside it and the streets that continued on. I could see Mount Tsukuba far away, and the lighting decorations which would only appear at that time were really pretty.

	I can also see the tallest electrical tower from the glass elevators facing the east, standing tall as if it is the resting place of a final boss in a roleplaying game.		I can also see the tallest electrical tower from the glass elevators facing the east, standing tall as if it is the resting place of a final boss in a roleplaying game.
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	It was at a certain recording studio in Japan.		It was at a certain recording studio in Japan.

	The editor-in-charge and I entered the control room at 9.~~40am~~, and by then, Nitadori was already inside.		The editor-in-charge and I entered the control room at 9.40 A.M., and by then, Nitadori was already inside.

	She was dressed in plain clothes that were easy to move it. I heard that voice actors would choose to wear clothes that would not make much sounds if possible.		She was dressed in plain clothes that were easy to move it. I heard that voice actors would choose to wear clothes that would not make much sounds if possible.