This title is too long!:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Boberto1210: /* ‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her */ "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sleep?" to "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?"

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‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her: "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sleep?" to "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?"

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	"'Do Androids Dream of Electric ~~Sleep~~?' The Japanese version uses the direct translation, and the English title is this long. There are also some titles that are really long in movies, so I think the trend of titles being so long they're sentences don't simply appear in light novels."		"'Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?' The Japanese version uses the direct translation, and the English title is this long. There are also some titles that are really long in movies, so I think the trend of titles being so long they're sentences don't simply appear in light novels."

	"Hmm...then, sensei, will you use that kind of title?"		"Hmm...then, sensei, will you use that kind of title?"

Boberto1210: /* ‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her */ Corrected a typo "id" to "did"

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‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her: Corrected a typo "id" to "did"

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	There's still no seat in the one seated in front of us, but there's finally a young woman seated at the right side of the aisle, near the window.		There's still no seat in the one seated in front of us, but there's finally a young woman seated at the right side of the aisle, near the window.

	In that case, we couldn't converse as we normally id.		In that case, we couldn't converse as we normally did.

	And once I wondered that, the woman immediately put on her earphones to listen to music, and closed her eyes.		And once I wondered that, the woman immediately put on her earphones to listen to music, and closed her eyes.

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Chocolatkey: /* ‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her */

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‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her

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	I'll increase the name of lines.		I'll increase the name of lines.

	“Eh? Why do you do that/”		“Eh? Why do you do that?”

	“Because the priority is 'readability'.		“Because the priority is 'readability'.

SweetPepper: /* ‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her */

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‎Chapter 4 - May 1, I taught her

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	May had arrived.		May had arrived.

	The first week was commonly dubbed as 'Golden Week', but this day and the ~~following~~ day were still normal days. I had to attend classes ~~on this day,~~ and to visit the After Record ~~the the following day~~.		The first week was commonly dubbed as 'Golden Week', but this day and the day after were still normal days. I had to attend classes today and visit the After Record tomorrow.

	After school, I changed from my uniform into plain clothes, and got on the same Limited Express train as usual.		After school, I changed from my uniform into plain clothes, and got on the same Limited Express train as usual.
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	She let out a slightly perturbed voice.		She let out a slightly perturbed voice.

	There's another classmate who's definitely never around on Friday here, but it seemed that classmate wasn't being noticed in any way. My presence so small it's shocking, and only in this situation did it help me out here.		There's another classmate who's definitely never around on Friday here, but it seemed that classmate wasn't being noticed in any way. My presence is so small it's shocking, and only in this situation did it help me out here.

	But I was still worried if I would end up distracting her. I missed the opportunity to leave while pondering if I should quickly leave my seat.		But I was still worried if I would end up distracting her. I missed the opportunity to leave while pondering if I should quickly leave my seat.

JFerg at 06:18, 15 August 2015

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Teh Ping at 10:45, 11 August 2015

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	“How?”		“How?”

	“I'll add new characters to cook up the atmosphere. In contrast, if I can't finish with the ~~characterisation~~, I'll think of reducing the number of characters. There are few female characters, so I need to change the gender for a few characters. The twist that 'this certain person's actually female' is always king, so I include this very often. Before then, when writing halfway through, I'll have thoughts of 'eh? It's probably more interesting to change this guy into a girl', and so I change what was supposed to be a guy into a girl.”		“I'll add new characters to cook up the atmosphere. In contrast, if I can't finish with the characterization, I'll think of reducing the number of characters. There are few female characters, so I need to change the gender for a few characters. The twist that 'this certain person's actually female' is always king, so I include this very often. Before then, when writing halfway through, I'll have thoughts of 'eh? It's probably more interesting to change this guy into a girl', and so I change what was supposed to be a guy into a girl.”

	“...”		“...”
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	The name Миг was what I found when I was flipping through the book. It sounded cute, so I memorized it.		The name Миг was what I found when I was flipping through the book. It sounded cute, so I memorized it.

	Readers would often mention this name in their review, but I want to say, the name ~~меек~~ wasn't meant to imitate that famous voice synthesis software cum popular character.		Readers would often mention this name in their review, but I want to say, the name Миг wasn't meant to imitate that famous voice synthesis software cum popular character.

	“Then what does the name mean in Russian?”		“Then what does the name mean in Russian?”
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	Nitadori asked. It's not commonly heard, so I guess it's not strange for her not to know.		Nitadori asked. It's not commonly heard, so I guess it's not strange for her not to know.

	“Reviewers means that they check ~~whethere~~ there's a mistake in the work. That's what they do.”		“Reviewers means that they check whether there's a mistake in the work. That's what they do.”

	“Oo...”		“Oo...”
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	“Wow. This job's tough—I see. So that's why the original manuscript has to be handed for a professional check.”		“Wow. This job's tough—I see. So that's why the original manuscript has to be handed for a professional check.”

	“That's the case. On a side note, the term required is review, but some authors can understand if you ~~usse~~ the term proofread.”		“That's the case. On a side note, the term required is review, but some authors can understand if you use the term proofread.”



	When I debuted, I too didn't ~~lknow~~ the difference between review and proofread, and of course, I couldn't differentiate between the two.		When I debuted, I too didn't know the difference between review and proofread, and of course, I couldn't differentiate between the two.

	In the following explanation, there'll be certain professional terms. For experienced authors and editors, those might be common ~~terminologiees~~, but they might be foreign to most ordinary people. In other words, most people who just became authors won't be familiar with those terms.		In the following explanation, there'll be certain professional terms. For experienced authors and editors, those might be common terminologies, but they might be foreign to most ordinary people. In other words, most people who just became authors won't be familiar with those terms.

	“Erm...what does that mean?”		“Erm...what does that mean?”
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	I don't know who said it, but someone from somewhere once said,		I don't know who said it, but someone from somewhere once said,

	“It's really crammed and packed inside, like the ~~oards~~ of an old Galley ship haha.”		“It's really crammed and packed inside, like the oars of an old Galley ship haha.”

	Anyway, that's what happened.		Anyway, that's what happened.
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	I divert my topic back to the process.		I divert my topic back to the process.

	“I have to do two things. First is to hand the ~~manuscipts~~ with my red marks to the editor-in-charge, and second, to check through the first review the reviewers did.”		“I have to do two things. First is to hand the manuscripts with my red marks to the editor-in-charge, and second, to check through the first review the reviewers did.”

	Nitadori titled her head, asking,		Nitadori titled her head, asking,
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	I stood up to show her the real thing, turned my body around, and reached for the rack.		I stood up to show her the real thing, turned my body around, and reached for the rack.

	There's a pen pouch attached outside the bag, and I had two of them stuffed in there; one of them's a ~~soare~~. I took a pen, sat down, and handed it to Nitadori.		There's a pen pouch attached outside the bag, and I had two of them stuffed in there; one of them's a spare. I took a pen, sat down, and handed it to Nitadori.

	“Oh, so this is your good partner, sensei? Looks classy!”		“Oh, so this is your good partner, sensei? Looks classy!”
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	There are all kinds of patterns, and most of them are basically photos of pet, things, or illustrations.		There are all kinds of patterns, and most of them are basically photos of pet, things, or illustrations.

	For illustrations, some might get the novel illustrator to do one for the author, or that the author may ask an ~~acquiantance~~ to chip in.		For illustrations, some might get the novel illustrator to do one for the author, or that the author may ask an acquaintance to chip in.

	There are those who have artistic ability, and draw their own illustration.		There are those who have artistic ability, and draw their own illustration.
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	“It's really tough having to write this...why do I have to change the content for every volume...no, it's not that there's a need to change, but everyone just seem to do this...”		“It's really tough having to write this...why do I have to change the content for every volume...no, it's not that there's a need to change, but everyone just seem to do this...”

	And I ended up in full ~~gumbling~~ mode.		And I ended up in full grumbling mode.

	I really don't want anyone else seeing this 'author complaining to a girl younger than he is'.		I really don't want anyone else seeing this 'author complaining to a girl younger than he is'.

Teh Ping at 13:04, 10 August 2015

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	“What shall I talk about today?”		“What shall I talk about today?”

	I then turn to the seat on the right to ask. Even I too was a little surprised that I ~~gave~~ up on initiating the topic so easily.		I then turn to the seat on the right to ask. Even I too was a little surprised that I ended up initiating the topic so easily.

	Nitadori immediately answered,		Nitadori immediately answered,

Teh Ping at 12:16, 10 August 2015

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	Who exactly was Nitadori?		Who exactly was Nitadori?

	Her relatives live in ~~Nitadori~~, and she coincidentally takes the same ride as me because she wants to know about an author, and thought of all the questions to ask me. Was it all a lie?		Her relatives live in Japan, and she coincidentally takes the same ride as me because she wants to know about an author, and thought of all the questions to ask me. Was it all a lie?

	Perhaps—		Perhaps—

Teh Ping at 17:16, 9 August 2015

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