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	==~~Volume 2~~ Chapter 5 - May 8, I was touched by her==		==Chapter 5 - May 8, I was touched by her==

	I'm a High School Boy and a Bestselling Light Novel author, strangled by my female classmate who is my junior and a voice actress.		I'm a High School Boy and a Bestselling Light Novel author, strangled by my female classmate who is my junior and a voice actress.

Chocolatkey: /* Volume 2 Chapter 5 - May 8, I was touched by her */ some language and punctuation improvements

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Volume 2 Chapter 5 - May 8, I was touched by her: some language and punctuation improvements

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	This pretty glasses girl who sits behind me in class, who sat beside me in the train the day prior, and ~~loved~~ horse sashimi--		This pretty glasses girl who sits behind me in class, who sat beside me in the train the day prior, and loves horse sashimi--

	Had the script in hand, facing the thick soundproof glass, standing in front of the microphone.		Had the script in hand, facing the thick soundproof glass, standing in front of the microphone.
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	Well, I did write the relationship between Pluto and Meek (This has to do with the fact that Pluto's actually female) as a beautiful relationship between master and servant.		Well, I did write the relationship between Pluto and Meek (This has to do with the fact that Pluto's actually female) as a beautiful relationship between master and servant.

	Pluto's personality was that of cruelty and lack of mercy. She viewed all subordinates as equal, ~~no matter~~ homunculus or ~~humans~~.		Pluto's personality was that of cruelty and lack of mercy. She viewed all subordinates as equal, be they homunculus or human.

	In other words, she would call out to her subordinates however she wanted, and they would do their best to fulfill her orders.		In other words, she would call out to her subordinates however she wanted, and they would do their best to fulfill her orders.
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	Leaving aside the number of reprints--		Leaving aside the number of reprints--

	I'll talk about the first printing of m volumes,		I'll talk about the first printing of volumes.

	"The first volume of 'Vice Versa', the initial number of copies was 27,000."		"The first volume of 'Vice Versa', the initial number of copies was 27,000."

	"Is that...a lot? Little, or?"		"Is that...a lot? Little, right?"

	Nitadori asked. It's a question to be expected.		Nitadori asked. It's a question to be expected.
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	"I found 5 cases of them…"		"I found 5 cases of them…"

	During the first print of the first volume of 'Vice Versa', I found 5 instances of ~~erros till this point~~.		During the first print of the first volume of 'Vice Versa', I found 5 instances of errors.

	There was one case when I missed out a period.		There was one case when I missed out a period.
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	しんはしのむなぐらをつかんだが、しは、だまつてしんをにらみかえすだけだつた。		しんはしのむなぐらをつかんだが、しは、だまつてしんをにらみかえすだけだつた。

	~~Change-->~~Shin grabbed Sin by the collar, but Sin merely looked back at Shin silently.		Change→ Shin grabbed Sin by the collar, but Sin merely looked back at Shin silently.

Teh Ping at 03:31, 22 March 2016

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Teh Ping at 03:39, 21 March 2016

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Teh Ping at 10:07, 20 March 2016

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Teh Ping at 03:28, 15 March 2016

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Teh Ping at 03:24, 15 March 2016

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 I didn't remember exactly when Nitadori's hand stopped shaking.
 The shaking of a script couldn't be recorded, so she probably regained her composure before the recording began.
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 From here on, Meek let out a long spiel of words.

Teh Ping at 03:23, 15 March 2016

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Teh Ping at 03:22, 15 March 2016

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