Toaru Majutsu no Index:GT Volume2 Chapter2 - Revision history

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2022-08-25T09:22:22Z

Part 2

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	The branch branched out several times to spread out like a large hand. It was no thicker than a little finger. It did have a scattering of solid green leaves, but Mikoto could not quite place what kind of tree it was from.		The branch branched out several times to spread out like a large hand. It was no thicker than a little finger. It did have a scattering of solid green leaves, but Mikoto could not quite place what kind of tree it was from.

	Mikoto ~~help~~ her breath, but for some reason, Anna Sprengel puffed out her cheeks from within. She slowly let out the breath she had been holding in and it took the form of a sigh.		Mikoto held her breath, but for some reason, Anna Sprengel puffed out her cheeks from within. She slowly let out the breath she had been holding in and it took the form of a sigh.

	“''Damn, that’s a dud.''”		“''Damn, that’s a dud.''”

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2020-11-02T11:18:30Z

Between the Lines 2

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	He questioned himself.		He questioned himself.

	At the very least, he knew nothing would improve if he simply waited around here. If he did not do something while he could still move, he would rapidly run out options.		At the very least, he knew nothing would improve if he simply waited around here. If he did not do something while he could still move, he would rapidly run out of options.

	But where was he supposed to go and what was he supposed to do there?		But where was he supposed to go and what was he supposed to do there?

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	But that did not mean she had overcome her own lack of ability there.		But that did not mean she had overcome her own lack of ability there.

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	If she had followed the proper movements found in textbooks, she would have been killed instantly. And Anna would have looked bored throughout. Or if the suit had optimized her movements based on combat data from martial arts masters, Anna would have snorted with laughter. She would have called that high-tech solution just another way of seeking the prestige of her predecessors.		If she had followed the proper movements found in textbooks, she would have been killed instantly. And Anna would have looked bored throughout. Or if the suit had optimized her movements based on combat data from martial arts masters, Anna would have snorted with laughter. She would have called that high-tech solution just another way of seeking the prestige of her predecessors.
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	“''Aiwass,''” bluntly whispered the little girl lazily covering her nudity with a thin cloth.		“''Aiwass,''” bluntly whispered the little girl lazily covering her nudity with a thin cloth.

	[[Image:~~GT_Index_v02_BW5~~.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:GT_Index_v02_178-179.jpg\|thumb]]

	Was that its name? Mikoto was not even sure her ears had heard it correctly. If she analyzed the high frequencies and low frequencies with an auditory device, she might find it was pronounced entirely differently.		Was that its name? Mikoto was not even sure her ears had heard it correctly. If she analyzed the high frequencies and low frequencies with an auditory device, she might find it was pronounced entirely differently.

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2020-07-14T04:01:17Z

Part 11

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	That hospital was located there.		That hospital was located there.

	(Now, then. I wonder if those innocent little heroes were aware what it means to worry about someone else’s life. It means you believe your own life is not at risk and that isn’t your time to go.)		(Now, then. I wonder if those innocent little heroes were aware what it means to worry about someone else’s life. It means you believe your own life is not at risk and that it isn’t your time to go.)

	Anna Sprengel followed her phone’s navigation while she spoke aloud.		Anna Sprengel followed her phone’s navigation while she spoke aloud.

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2020-07-13T21:30:52Z

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162.238.158.199 at 03:49, 13 July 2020

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	There was no answer to be found here.		There was no answer to be found here.

	Of course there wasn’t when no one ~~understand~~ the mechanism known as magic.		Of course there wasn’t when no one understood the mechanism known as magic.

	Their minds clung to speculation to escape the fear of not knowing and that groundless information inspired new hatred.		Their minds clung to speculation to escape the fear of not knowing and that groundless information inspired new hatred.
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	The air was scorched and no one was moving.		The air was scorched and no one was moving.

	This was the sinister atmosphere of a battle’s aftermath, where ~~event~~ the corpses were abandoned.		This was the sinister atmosphere of a battle’s aftermath, where even the corpses were abandoned.

	And amid it all…		And amid it all…

162.238.158.199 at 03:05, 13 July 2020

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	Whether it came to searching her possessions or running scans at the hospital, their best bet was to knock her out and capture her.		Whether it came to searching her possessions or running scans at the hospital, their best bet was to knock her out and capture her.

	“Now, then,” said the barely-dressed little girl named Anna Sprengel. “''I gave you plenty of time, so I assume it has ~~now~~ spread to every part of his body yet. But if you’re still making me wait, perhaps I should speed things along.''”		“Now, then,” said the barely-dressed little girl named Anna Sprengel. “''I gave you plenty of time, so I assume it has not spread to every part of his body yet. But if you’re still making me wait, perhaps I should speed things along.''”

	Misaka Mikoto had seen Anna yesterday and the night before that. She had not noticed it at the time, but she had some clear differences from the other elementary schoolers who were busy using their phones to pursue the limited-edition Santa-costume Android Demon Lord (a hyper ultra miracle heroine who had destroyed three other worlds before arriving on earth and was actually just lonely). There was something about the aura surrounding the girl, the shadows lurking in her eyes, and the smile on her lips. There was something out of place there that felt far older than Mikoto or Shokuhou. Mikoto could not shake the feeling that she was looking at a cheaply faked ghost photo or something.		Misaka Mikoto had seen Anna yesterday and the night before that. She had not noticed it at the time, but she had some clear differences from the other elementary schoolers who were busy using their phones to pursue the limited-edition Santa-costume Android Demon Lord (a hyper ultra miracle heroine who had destroyed three other worlds before arriving on earth and was actually just lonely). There was something about the aura surrounding the girl, the shadows lurking in her eyes, and the smile on her lips. There was something out of place there that felt far older than Mikoto or Shokuhou. Mikoto could not shake the feeling that she was looking at a cheaply faked ghost photo or something.
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	Shokuhou’s throat trembled at the sudden explosion.		Shokuhou’s throat trembled at the sudden explosion.

	A powerful explosion and shockwave erupted around Anna Sprengel, sending smashed plastic and concrete into the air as a fine dust. Invisible but thick walls rushed out in every direction, forcibly tearing the inchworm and snowman from the ground as they tried to attack the honey-blonde girl. It was the same principle as a ship’s sail or an umbrella during a typhoon. Shokuhou had fallen to the ground while the monsters had their large bodies raised, so ~~they~~ blast affected them differently.		A powerful explosion and shockwave erupted around Anna Sprengel, sending smashed plastic and concrete into the air as a fine dust. Invisible but thick walls rushed out in every direction, forcibly tearing the inchworm and snowman from the ground as they tried to attack the honey-blonde girl. It was the same principle as a ship’s sail or an umbrella during a typhoon. Shokuhou had fallen to the ground while the monsters had their large bodies raised, so the blast affected them differently.

	“Oh, my.” Anna laughed from a short distance away while holding the thin red cloth to her chest. “You finally found the courage, did you? Good girl. You seemed to be arguing before, but does she actually mean a lot to you?”		“Oh, my.” Anna laughed from a short distance away while holding the thin red cloth to her chest. “You finally found the courage, did you? Good girl. You seemed to be arguing before, but does she actually mean a lot to you?”

Js06 at 02:42, 13 July 2020

2020-07-13T02:42:54Z

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