Toaru Majutsu no Index:GT Volume3 Chapter4 - Revision history

162.238.158.199: /* Part 4 */

2020-12-27T15:38:32Z

Part 4

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	She trailed off.		She trailed off.

	She had seen something out of the corner of her eye, but not the artificial ghost this time. A unified set of colors could be seen peeking ~~out of~~ at them from a gap in the door to one of the freight train’s containers.		She had seen something out of the corner of her eye, but not the artificial ghost this time. A unified set of colors could be seen peeking at them from a gap in the door to one of the freight train’s containers.

	''They were small children wearing gym clothes and some kind of device. There were more than just ten or twenty of them.		''They were small children wearing gym clothes and some kind of device. There were more than just ten or twenty of them.

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2020-11-23T18:38:01Z

Between the Lines 4

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	He did not speak a word.		He did not speak a word.

	One thing had been proven here. His small dream would never come true		One thing had been proven here. His small dream would never come true.

	Not as long as she was here.		Not as long as she was here.

SNovah: /* Between the Lines 4 */

2020-11-23T18:16:23Z

Between the Lines 4

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	A solid clink echoed through the cold air.		A solid clink echoed through the cold air.

	The girl who looked only 10 had flicked a gold coin into the air and then caught it in her hand.		The girl who looked only ten had flicked a gold coin into the air and then caught it in her hand.

	“The Coin of Nicholas.”		“The Coin of Nicholas.”

SNovah: /* Part 18 */ Mostly minor fixes; Hamazura's "justice" line is a bit weird, but I can't figure out a better way to do it without a partial rewrite of the sentence

2020-11-23T17:58:51Z

Part 18: Mostly minor fixes; Hamazura's "justice" line is a bit weird, but I can't figure out a better way to do it without a partial rewrite of the sentence

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	The revolver’s muzzle rose. His cold voice contained a hint of blatant scorn. Like he refused to accept that this man was unharmed after making Ladybird suffer so.		The revolver’s muzzle rose. His cold voice contained a hint of blatant scorn. Like he refused to accept that this man was unharmed after making Ladybird suffer so.

	“You will pay for what you did to ''that girl''. I can’t think of any reason why I should forgive you. I doubt I ever could. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t stand on the side of justice. But if I don’t do this here, the justice I couldn’t be will die. I might be dumb, but I can tell that much.”		“You will pay for what you did to ''that girl''. I can’t think of any reason why I should forgive you. I doubt I ever could. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t stand on the side of justice. But if I don’t do this here, the justice I couldn’t have will die. I might be dumb, but I can tell that much.”

	Yes.		Yes.
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	This conversation was meaningless.		This conversation was meaningless.

	Would the boy normally have said so much on reflex? Set a record, Kihara Killer, center of the dark ~~side – Kihara~~ Hasuu’s wording was meant to give his opponent a big head. Was there any ~~way – any~~ way at ~~all – to~~ turn the tables on the boy? The old man was racking his brains the entire time he was buying time. It could be anything. As one who bore the name Kihara, he was willing to break all forms of ethics and standards if need be.		Would the boy normally have said so much on reflex? Set a record, Kihara Killer, center of the dark side—Kihara Hasuu’s wording was meant to give his opponent a big head. Was there any way—any way at all—to turn the tables on the boy? The old man was racking his brains the entire time he was buying time. It could be anything. As one who bore the name Kihara, he was willing to break all forms of ethics and standards if need be.

	Then he saw it. He noticed something out of ~~place – a~~ gold shine on the cold concrete ground.		Then he saw it. He noticed something out of place—a gold shine on the cold concrete ground.

	It was a Coin of Nicholas.		It was a Coin of Nicholas.
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	A bullet flew from Hamazura Shiage’s handgun.		A bullet flew from Hamazura Shiage’s handgun.

	Yes, there were more ways for a gun to malfunction than for the bullet to jam or ~~even to~~ explode inside, blowing up the gun and the wielder’s hand along with it.		Yes, there were more ways for a gun to malfunction than for the bullet to jam or explode inside, blowing up the gun and the wielder’s hand along with it.

	It could also fire the bullet without the trigger being pulled.		It could also fire the bullet without the trigger being pulled.
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	The old man looked down.		The old man looked down.

	He could not believe that he had been hit in the gut, rupturing his stomach of all things. More than the bleeding, his own vomit contaminated his body where a single germ could ultimately be fatal. He collapsed, suffered for more than 5 full minutes, and finally passed away. Stomach acid was primarily composed of hydrochloric acid. What did it feel like to be placed on the surgical table, have your gut cut open, and have a bunch of that dumped inside? All without anesthetic, of course.		He could not believe that he had been hit in the gut, rupturing his stomach of all things. More than the bleeding, his own vomit contaminated his body where a single germ could ultimately be fatal. He collapsed, suffered for more than five full minutes, and finally passed away. Stomach acid was primarily composed of hydrochloric acid. What did it feel like to be placed on the surgical table, have your gut cut open, and have a bunch of that dumped inside? All without anesthetic, of course.

	The old man had lost his life to his own prayer.		The old man had lost his life to his own prayer.

SNovah: /* Part 16 */

2020-11-23T17:48:52Z

Part 16

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	When did she notice something was wrong?		When did she notice something was wrong?

	The gym clothes had been on a figure small enough to easily lift up in her arms. That much was true. But what was with that weight? Would a child of around 10 really weigh more than ~~200kg~~?		The gym clothes had been on a figure small enough to easily lift up in her arms. That much was true. But what was with that weight? Would a child of around ten really weigh more than 200 kilograms?

	“It can’t be!?”		“It can’t be!?”

SNovah: /* Part 14 */

2020-11-23T17:44:27Z

Part 14

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	That was a devastating delay.		That was a devastating delay.

	The storm of lead hit her and she tumbled along the ground. 9mm was not enough to destroy her bones or ~~muscles – the~~ problem was her speed. The impact from the side easily knocked her off balance and she broke through two or three concrete columns along the way.		The storm of lead hit her and she tumbled along the ground. A 9mm round was not enough to destroy her bones or muscles—the problem was her speed. The impact from the side easily knocked her off balance and she broke through two or three concrete columns along the way.

	But what was this?		But what was this?

SNovah: /* Part 13 */

2020-11-23T17:39:49Z

Part 13

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	Dry gunshots expanded through the enclosed space.		Dry gunshots expanded through the enclosed space.

	This time, the shots actually hit the android whose back was turned to him. The “mouth” on her back quickly closed before she had even withdrawn the extraction organ that resembled the thin wing of an insect or a giant scalpel, but that was all that happened. ~~This~~ did not seem to do any real damage to her.		This time, the shots actually hit the android whose back was turned to him. The “mouth” on her back quickly closed before she had even withdrawn the extraction organ that resembled the thin wing of an insect or a giant scalpel, but that was all that happened. It did not seem to do any real damage to her.

	She used one arm to tear away the exposed power line wrapped around her like a serpent, freeing herself. At this rate, the forklifts protecting the children would not last long.		She used one arm to tear away the exposed power line wrapped around her like a serpent, freeing herself. At this rate, the forklifts protecting the children would not last long.
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	And while he said that, Hamazura made sure to check his phone where the kids could not see. The screen was dead and Aneri was not responding. He doubted her program had been taken out, but without a device to receive her instructions, he had lost the support AI’s help.		And while he said that, Hamazura made sure to check his phone where the kids could not see. The screen was dead and Aneri was not responding. He doubted her program had been taken out, but without a device to receive her instructions, he had lost the support AI’s help.

	It really would be 1-on-1 from here on.		It really would be one-on-one from here on.

	But he did not need to let that show on his face.		But he did not need to let that show on his face.

Js06 at 03:20, 21 November 2020

2020-11-21T03:20:07Z

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SNovah: /* Part 12 */

2020-11-20T21:05:21Z

Part 12

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	text> @I have not spoken much with any other than @Sensei, but @I know that is because @androids cannot be made public yet. But @I love the @humans that @I see from a distance.		text> @I have not spoken much with any other than @Sensei, but @I know that is because @androids cannot be made public yet. But @I love the @humans that @I see from a distance.

	text> @I will build a path to a brighter future for ~~them – a~~ path to a happier ~~world – so~~ @I cannot allow someone to destroy all that just because they do not understand. So I will not let anyone interfere. Anyone who claims it is right to harm @people cannot be allowed to trample on the future @I can bring them.		text> @I will build a path to a brighter future for them—a path to a happier world—so @I cannot allow someone to destroy all that just because they do not understand. So I will not let anyone interfere. Anyone who claims it is right to harm @people cannot be allowed to trample on the future @I can bring them.

	text> So…		text> So…

SNovah: /* Part 11 */

2020-11-20T21:04:15Z

Part 11

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	A column of reinforced concrete was sliced through as easily as tofu or thin paper.		A column of reinforced concrete was sliced through as easily as tofu or thin paper.

	Not horizontally or ~~diagonally – vertically~~ and all the way through. After kicking from column to column to gain height, she had apparently dropped down like lightning. She had a human form, but she could perform superhuman movements.		Not horizontally or diagonally—vertically and all the way through. After kicking from column to column to gain height, she had apparently dropped down like lightning. She had a human form, but she could perform superhuman movements.

	Hamazura Shiage had tried to jump to the side just beforehand, but he ended up tumbling into a roll.		Hamazura Shiage had tried to jump to the side just beforehand, but he ended up tumbling into a roll.
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	Ladybird was not an android with esper powers. She was as harmful as they came. She was a machine that would devour people’s brains when necessary. In Hamazura’s opinion, that meant she did not fit the definition of an android.		Ladybird was not an android with esper powers. She was as harmful as they came. She was a machine that would devour people’s brains when necessary. In Hamazura’s opinion, that meant she did not fit the definition of an android.

	“This is a completely different approach from the Rensa model of esper cyborg. Instead of a cyborg made by ''giving a brain a body'', Ladybird-kun ''is a body given a brain.''” Hasuu sounded like he was introducing his favorite grandchild. “Cellulose nanofiber is a carbon material gathering attention for its use in making wires and bulletproof materials, but the point is we can create delicate wires even thinner than the cranial nerves. But unlike a biological brain, leaving them in their active state causes them to automatically replicate and they will try to forcibly fold themselves up for space if they run out room in the skull. The cerebrum’s frontal lobe is especially troublesome. So ''a foreign object'' must be introduced to constantly provide just the right amount of damage to ensure the brain remains the size I want it. Her power changes each time a new ''foreign object'' is introduced, but that is due to the change in the rejection and damage pattern. You can think of that as a simple idiosyncrasy.”		“This is a completely different approach from the Rensa model of esper cyborg. Instead of a cyborg made by ''giving a brain a body'', Ladybird-kun ''is a body given a brain.''” Hasuu sounded like he was introducing his favorite grandchild. “Cellulose nanofiber is a carbon material gathering attention for its use in making wires and bulletproof materials, but the point is we can create delicate wires even thinner than the cranial nerves. But unlike a biological brain, leaving them in their active state causes them to automatically replicate and they will try to forcibly fold themselves up for space if they run out of room in the skull. The cerebrum’s frontal lobe is especially troublesome. So ''a foreign object'' must be introduced to constantly provide just the right amount of damage to ensure the brain remains the size I want it. Her power changes each time a new ''foreign object'' is introduced, but that is due to the change in the rejection and damage pattern. You can think of that as a simple idiosyncrasy.”

	“Sen…sei?”		“Sen…sei?”
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	“Sensei…but you said this research would help. You said the spread of androids would mean no more human specimens were needed for the esper development.”		“Sensei…but you said this research would help. You said the spread of androids would mean no more human specimens were needed for the esper development.”

	“The ~~ladybird – another~~ name for the ~~ladybug – might~~ look humorous, but it is in fact a ravenous carnivore. You have heard that they are good to have around because they eat aphids, haven’t you?”		“The ladybird—another name for the ladybug—might look humorous, but it is in fact a ravenous carnivore. You have heard that they are good to have around because they eat aphids, haven’t you?”

	“Gh…kh.”		“Gh…kh.”