Toaru Majutsu no Index:KuroyoruSS - Revision history

Js06 at 05:19, 15 December 2024

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Rxls: Undo revision 571894 by Ac (talk)

2021-08-11T16:45:00Z

Undo revision 571894 by Ac (talk)

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	“That’s the first thing that comes to mind when you see me? No one can accuse you of not being honest about your desires, I guess.”		“That’s the first thing that comes to mind when you see me? No one can accuse you of not being honest about your desires, I guess.”

	She frowned over it, but she honestly did not really care		She frowned over it, but she honestly did not really care.

	She would find it plenty creepy if one of her arms was taken away from her and some strange guy was licking all over it. Especially if he was using the name Kuroyoru Umidori when referring to the arm. But on the other hand, she would not care at all if an identical component was treated in the same way and called Tanaka. That would be a stranger’s arm, not one of the ones meant to be inserted in her slots. Just like a clone created from her DNA would be a complete stranger. She had no interest in what anyone would do to them since they were not a part of her. That wicked girl did not have enough empathy to feel any pain in her chest when she saw a nail driven into a straw doll.		She would find it plenty creepy if one of her arms was taken away from her and some strange guy was licking all over it. Especially if he was using the name Kuroyoru Umidori when referring to the arm. But on the other hand, she would not care at all if an identical component was treated in the same way and called Tanaka. That would be a stranger’s arm, not one of the ones meant to be inserted in her slots. Just like a clone created from her DNA would be a complete stranger. She had no interest in what anyone would do to them since they were not a part of her. That wicked girl did not have enough empathy to feel any pain in her chest when she saw a nail driven into a straw doll.
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	“It’s so benevolent I think I’m gonna cry.”		“It’s so benevolent I think I’m gonna cry.”



			The TV news and newspapers had nothing to say about it.

	Even the online news sites were only talking about how aquarium-born otters could not break open shells.		Even the online news sites were only talking about how aquarium-born otters could not break open shells.

Ac: /* Genesis Testament – A Certain Magical Index SS */

2021-08-11T15:38:29Z

Genesis Testament – A Certain Magical Index SS

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	“That’s the first thing that comes to mind when you see me? No one can accuse you of not being honest about your desires, I guess.”		“That’s the first thing that comes to mind when you see me? No one can accuse you of not being honest about your desires, I guess.”

	She frowned over it, but she honestly did not really care.		She frowned over it, but she honestly did not really care

	She would find it plenty creepy if one of her arms was taken away from her and some strange guy was licking all over it. Especially if he was using the name Kuroyoru Umidori when referring to the arm. But on the other hand, she would not care at all if an identical component was treated in the same way and called Tanaka. That would be a stranger’s arm, not one of the ones meant to be inserted in her slots. Just like a clone created from her DNA would be a complete stranger. She had no interest in what anyone would do to them since they were not a part of her. That wicked girl did not have enough empathy to feel any pain in her chest when she saw a nail driven into a straw doll.		She would find it plenty creepy if one of her arms was taken away from her and some strange guy was licking all over it. Especially if he was using the name Kuroyoru Umidori when referring to the arm. But on the other hand, she would not care at all if an identical component was treated in the same way and called Tanaka. That would be a stranger’s arm, not one of the ones meant to be inserted in her slots. Just like a clone created from her DNA would be a complete stranger. She had no interest in what anyone would do to them since they were not a part of her. That wicked girl did not have enough empathy to feel any pain in her chest when she saw a nail driven into a straw doll.
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	“It’s so benevolent I think I’m gonna cry.”		“It’s so benevolent I think I’m gonna cry.”



	~~The TV news and newspapers had nothing to say about it.~~

	Even the online news sites were only talking about how aquarium-born otters could not break open shells.		Even the online news sites were only talking about how aquarium-born otters could not break open shells.

SNovah: /* Genesis Testament – A Certain Magical Index SS */ Basic edits, fixes, proofing, etc.

2020-05-22T17:52:58Z

Genesis Testament – A Certain Magical Index SS: Basic edits, fixes, proofing, etc.

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	It was no different from someone cutting away a healthy part of their body and replacing it with a high-quality device that would give them some new ability. In the modern age, people were slaves to their tools and anyone who could not use those tools was branded incompetent and eliminated. The people disgusted by cyborgs failed to realize they were much the same when viewed from the right angle. Just like so many people who supposedly abhor killing also support the death penalty.		It was no different from someone cutting away a healthy part of their body and replacing it with a high-quality device that would give them some new ability. In the modern age, people were slaves to their tools and anyone who could not use those tools was branded incompetent and eliminated. The people disgusted by cyborgs failed to realize they were much the same when viewed from the right angle. Just like so many people who supposedly abhor killing also support the death penalty.

	Everyone hid their real face behind makeup and enlarged their eyes on the photos uploaded to social media. The human sense of self had already ~~groan~~ too bloated to fit within the single body people were born with, yet society still refused to accept plastic surgery for idols or liposuction.		Everyone hid their real face behind makeup and enlarged their eyes on the photos uploaded to social media. The human sense of self had already grown too bloated to fit within the single body people were born with, yet society still refused to accept plastic surgery for idols or liposuction.

	What people did and what they said was diverging more and more.		What people did and what they said was diverging more and more.
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	“By the way, Hamazura, what did you order?”		“By the way, Hamazura, what did you order?”

	“Vienna coffee and fish & chips.”		“Vienna coffee and fish and chips.”

	“You’re getting your European countries jumbled together there. Also, I doubt you’ll ever receive it. If you’re hungry, I recommend going elsewhere.”		“You’re getting your European countries jumbled together there. Also, I doubt you’ll ever receive it. If you’re hungry, I recommend going elsewhere.”
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	''Of course, all this talk about good and evil is probably thanks to those thought processes implanted in my mind,'' analyzed Kuroyoru.		''Of course, all this talk about good and evil is probably thanks to those thought processes implanted in my mind,'' analyzed Kuroyoru.

	She meant the Dark ~~Mary~~ Project.		She meant the Dark May Project.

	To increase the effectiveness of their powers, a portion of Academy City’s #1’s thoughts were implanted in a number of espers’ minds. Kuroyoru Umidori was one of the successes.		To increase the effectiveness of their powers, a portion of Academy City’s #1’s thoughts were implanted in a number of espers’ minds. Kuroyoru Umidori was one of the successes.
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	She did not care at all about going somewhere fashionable when eating out. She had just finished a job, so she simply wanted somewhere she could sit down and fill her stomach. That was why she chose a burger chain.		She did not care at all about going somewhere fashionable when eating out. She had just finished a job, so she simply wanted somewhere she could sit down and fill her stomach. That was why she chose a burger chain.

	“Hold on. If you say I attract bad people, does that mean you’re here walking with me because ~~you’re-”~~		“Hold on. If you say I attract bad people, does that mean you’re here walking with me because you’re—”

	“Not a word more.”		“Not a word more.”
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	Kuroyoru Umidori looked skeptical, but the harmless sound continued before she could say anything more.		Kuroyoru Umidori looked skeptical, but the harmless sound continued before she could say anything more.

	“By the way, you should really avoid removing the phone from your ear. Once it moves more than ~~10cm~~ away, it might just explode in a gruesome sort of way.”		“By the way, you should really avoid removing the phone from your ear. Once it moves more than ten centimeters away, it might just explode in a gruesome sort of way.”

	“…”		“…”
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	A dry bang slammed into Kuroyoru’s eardrums.		A dry bang slammed into Kuroyoru’s eardrums.

	As threatened, the mobile device blew up as soon as it moved ~~10cm~~ away from her face. For a normal person, the shockwave alone would have not just ruptured their eardrum but shattered their skull.		As threatened, the mobile device blew up as soon as it moved ten centimeters away from her face. For a normal person, the shockwave alone would have not just ruptured their eardrum but shattered their skull.

	(The lithium ion battery, huh? Well, that might be enough to kill your average person.)		(The lithium ion battery, huh? Well, that might be enough to kill your average person.)
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	The pile of machinery burying Kuroyoru Umidori was blown away in an instant, but she had not used her Bomber Lance. The wreckage had obviously been exposed to fiery heat and it was left twisted, bent, and broken. Shards had stabbed into the ceiling overhead and they did not fall back down.		The pile of machinery burying Kuroyoru Umidori was blown away in an instant, but she had not used her Bomber Lance. The wreckage had obviously been exposed to fiery heat and it was left twisted, bent, and broken. Shards had stabbed into the ceiling overhead and they did not fall back down.

	~~“What…was~~ that?”		“What… was that?”

	“That’s the thing.”		“That’s the thing.”

Entei08: wrong kanji

2020-05-13T14:46:00Z

wrong kanji

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	In other words…		In other words…

	“An ~~evolution~~ of life support devices, huh?”		“An incarnation of life support devices, huh?”

	“This would have been perfect if I were just a good person with no real desires.”		“This would have been perfect if I were just a good person with no real desires.”

Entei08 at 13:15, 11 May 2020

2020-05-11T13:15:03Z

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	If you were not sensitive to a dangerous shift in the atmosphere, you could never survive in the city’s criminal underworld.		If you were not sensitive to a dangerous shift in the atmosphere, you could never survive in the city’s criminal underworld.

	Academy City was a unique city where 80% of the population were students, but right now there was an unusual number of people out and about even for the daytime. A young man was asking office workers for donations and a childcare worker was pushing a wagon full of kindergartners. Since the man was out here now seeking donations for the development of medical equipment, this must have been a very busy time of day. Some students only cared about their class credits and attendance record, ~~so they~~ would opt for remote learning even in Academy City where almost every student was forced to live in the dorms.		Academy City was a unique city where 80% of the population were students, but right now there was an unusual number of people out and about even for the daytime. A young man was asking office workers for donations and a childcare worker was pushing a wagon full of kindergartners. Since the man was out here now seeking donations for the development of medical equipment, this must have been a very busy time of day. Some students only cared about their class credits and attendance record, some would opt for remote learning even when they came all the way to Academy City where almost every student was forced to live in the dorms. Though they were all schools, it seems there were many varieties to them.

	The piercing boy walked right past the sketchy donation box – he likely thought it was a scam rather than simply not being interested – and short Kuroyoru asked him a question.		The piercing boy walked right past the sketchy donation box – he likely thought it was a scam rather than simply not being interested – and short Kuroyoru asked him a question.

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